【題文】假如你是李華前在英國(guó)一所學(xué)校交流學(xué)習(xí)的老師請(qǐng)你就中國(guó)飲食給同學(xué)們做口頭交流。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如:中國(guó)人對(duì)飲食的理解；經(jīng)典中國(guó)美食推薦。注意詞數(shù)100左；可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hello,everyone!I’mLianexchangestudentfromChina.youareinterestedChinesefood,I’mverygladtotellyousomethingForChinese,eatingonlyawayofsurvivingbutrevealsattitudetowardsHavingagoodmeal,tastyhealthy,meanshappiness.AndI’dliketodeliciousChinesetoyou.Thefirstispot,whichoriginatesfromSichuan.eatinghotpot,youcanputeverythingyouintheboilingwaterinoven.veryspicybutdelicious.AndthenextisItisakindofricewrappedleaves.AndIprefersweetZongzi.That’sall.HopethiscanhelpyoubetterunderstandChinesefood.【解析】【分析】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文求生介紹一下中國(guó)飲食括國(guó)人對(duì)飲食的理解和介紹一些美食?！驹斀獾诓綄忬w：用文時(shí)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。結(jié)：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說(shuō)，把支持句作為分說(shuō)，并以這種方式安排所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容。要：中國(guó)人對(duì)飲食的理解；經(jīng)中國(guó)美食推。第步列綱（點(diǎn)組）Exchangestudent;Chinesefood;attitudetastyhealthy;recommend;hotpot,;originatesfrom;Zongzi;bewrappedin;bambooleaves第步連成I’mHua,exchangestudentChina.eatingisnotawayofsurvivingbutrevealsattitudetowardsHavingagoodmeal,tastyhealthy,meanshappiness.IlikerecommendsomedeliciousChinesefoodtoThefirstishotpot,originatesfromSichuan.spicydelicious.isakindoffoodbywrappedinbambooleaves.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。第步連成（接）表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序FirstofFirstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系Whatismore,Besides,Furthermore,additionAswellnotonly…but(also),including,表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系However,contrary,but,從句)Inspiteof+n/doing,On…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…表果關(guān)系Because,So,Therefore,Asresult連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰，第步潤(rùn)修【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了一些主從復(fù)合句，如Thefirstishotpot,originatesfromSichuan.這話運(yùn)用了which引定語(yǔ)從句用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)如KnowingyouareinterestedChinesefood,I’mverygladtotellyousomethingabout用