PAGEPAGE4UNIT1Wishyouwerehere寫一封介紹家鄉(xiāng)的電子郵件本單元的寫作項(xiàng)目是寫一封介紹家鄉(xiāng)的電子郵件，屬于書信的寫作范疇。[基本框架]開頭(thebeginning)——引出寫郵件的目的主體(thebody)——詳細(xì)介紹你的家鄉(xiāng)結(jié)尾(theending)——發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)[常用詞塊]1．belocated/situatedin/on...坐落在……2．coveranareaof...占地……3．hasalargepopulation人口眾多4．datebacktotheTangDynasty追溯到唐朝5．hasmanyplacesofinterest有很多名勝6．isfamousforitsbeautifulWestLake因美麗的西湖而聞名[常用語(yǔ)句]★精彩開頭1．IamsogladtoknowthatyouwillcometoTibetforavisit.NowletmeintroducesomethingaboutTibetforyou.我很高興知道你會(huì)來(lái)西藏參觀?，F(xiàn)在讓我簡(jiǎn)要介紹一下西藏。2．I'mpleasedthatyou'recomingtotourinChina.我很高興你要來(lái)中國(guó)觀光?！镎募丫?．ItislocatedinthesouthwestofChina.Ithasapopulationofabout2.8million，coveringanareaofmorethan1.2millionsquarekilometers.它位于中國(guó)的西南部。約有280萬(wàn)人口，占地面積達(dá)120多萬(wàn)平方公里。2．YibinisanimportanttransportationcenterofSichuanProvince，withhigh-speedrail，expressways，waterwaysandairlinesconvenientlyavailabletothecity.宜賓是四川省重要的交通樞紐，高鐵、高速公路、水路和航空交通都十分便利。★余味結(jié)尾1．Lookingforwardtoseeingyou.Ibelievewe'llhaveagoodday.很期待見到你。我相信我們會(huì)有美好的一天。2．Providedyoucanvisitmyschoolsomeday，Iwillshowyouaroundit.假如有一天你能參觀我的學(xué)校，我就帶你參觀一下。假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Sarah打算暑期來(lái)北京旅游，發(fā)郵件向你詢問(wèn)改建后的前門大街的情況。請(qǐng)你回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．簡(jiǎn)況：長(zhǎng)800余米、600多年歷史、300余家商鋪；2．位置：天安門廣場(chǎng)南面；3．交通：公共汽車17、69、59等路，地鐵2號(hào)線；4．特色：步行街、鐺鐺車、茶館、劇院等。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：步行街pedestrianstreet；鐺鐺車trolleycar；地鐵subwayDearSarah，ThankyouforyourletteraskingabouttherebuiltofQianmenStreet.Hereissomethingaboutit.I'msureyou'lllikeit.Yours，LiHua[學(xué)生習(xí)作]DearSarah，ThankyouforyourletteraskingabouttherebuiltofQianmenStreet.Hereissomethingaboutit.QianmenStreetisafamousstreetofover600yearsold.Onthis800-metrestreet，therearemorethan300shops.AsthestreetisinthecenterofBeijing，justonthesouthofTian'anmenSquare，it'sveryconvenienttogettherebybus.YoumaytakebusesNo.11，69or59！SubwayLine2hasastoptheretoo.QianmenStreetisapedestrianstreet，butithastrolleycarstotakeyounotonlytotheshops，butalsotothetheatersandteahouseswhereyoucanexperienceatrueChinesewayoflife.I'msureyou'lllikeit.Yours，LiHua點(diǎn)評(píng)：1.本文能夠概括介紹前門大街的情況。2.有兩次關(guān)于介詞on的錯(cuò)誤使用。3.個(gè)別句式有錯(cuò)誤。如：...ithastrolleycarstotakeyou...[升格作文]DearSarah，ThankyouforyourletteraskingabouttherebuiltofQianmenStreet.Hereissomethingaboutit.QianmenStreetisafamousstreet，datingbacktoover600yearsago.Therearemorethan300shopsalongthis800-metrestreet.JusttothesouthofTian'anmenSquare，it'sveryconvenienttogettherebybus.YoumaytakebusesNo.11，69or59！SubwayLine2hasastoptheretoo.QianmenStreetisapedestrianstreet，butyoucantaketrolleycarstotheshops，thetheatersandteahouseswhereyoucanexperienceatrulyChinesewayoflife.I'msureyou'lllikeit.Yours，LiHua假定你是李華，你的朋友Jack要來(lái)你的家鄉(xiāng)參觀。請(qǐng)給他寫封郵件表示歡迎并簡(jiǎn)要介紹你的家鄉(xiāng)，內(nèi)容包括：1．自然環(huán)境；2．人文環(huán)境(交通、生活等)；3．表示歡迎。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！緟⒖挤段摹緿earJack，I'mverygladtohearthatyouaregoingtopayavisittomyhometown.YibinislocatedinthesouthofSichuanProvince，intheintersectionofJinshaRiver，MinRiverandYangtzeRiver.Itisabeautifulcitywithgreenwaterandgreenhillsallaroundit.YibinisanimportanttransportationcenterofSichuanProvince，withhigh-speedrail，expressways，waterwaysandairlinesconvenientlyavailablet