讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)試題呈現(xiàn)：AFortunateEscape

Max,BenandIwerewalkinghometogetherwhileIbitintothebrownbeefburgerIhadgrabbedfromashopnearby.“Truthordare,Ben?”Maxquestioned.Itwasagameweusuallyplayedtoamuseourselvesonthelengthy,boringjourneyhome.Benwantedadare.“Well,Ben,Idareyoutocarrymybagallthewayhome!”Maxcommanded.AsBenpulledtheheavybaguphisshoulderandadjustedthebagbelts,henoticedthatMax’bagwaspartlyopen.Whenhequicklyturneditaround,anobjectflewoutofthebag,andoverthefenceofourneighbor'shouse.“Oh,no,”Maxshouted,“IthinkthatwasmyEnglishhomework!”Stretchinghishandoutandtryingtocrawl(爬)underthefencetogetthepaper,Benfoundthatitwasjustoutofreach.“Well,IguessI’llhavetoclimboverthefencetogetit,”Bencomplained.Hewasbarelyabletoclimbup,usingsmallgapsinthewoodenfenceashandholds,asthefencewasnearlyastallashim,andlowenoughforsomethingtobethrownoverit.(他只能用木籬笆上的小縫作為支撐點(diǎn)勉強(qiáng)爬上去，因?yàn)榛h笆幾乎和他一樣高，矮得可以扔?xùn)|西過(guò)去）Slidingdownthefence,Bengrabbedthevaluedpieceofpaper,complainingaboutinjuredself-respect.Justthen,aloudandterrifyingbarkcuthiswordsshort.“Woof,woof!”O(jiān)urneighbor,Mr.Mason,ownedaGermanShepherd

(德國(guó)牧羊犬),knownforitsfierceness,whichguardedthehouse.Itwassomethingwehadoverlooked（忽視）,toofocusedongettingbackMax’shomework.Ben’slegstrembledUncontrollably（不由自主地發(fā)抖）andhisfaceturnedadeathlywhiteastheGermanShepherdadvanced（前進(jìn)）

slowlyonhimlikeawolfapproachingitstarget（接近目標(biāo)）.MaxandIstaredatit,frozenwithfear.Benbackedupagainstthefence,attemptingtoclimbup,butaloudbarkstoppedhiminhistracks.IdesperatelysearchedmymindforasilverofanideaabouthowIcouldassistBen.ShouldIclimbupthefenceandhelpBen?OrcouldIdosomethingtodistractthedog?

(348words)注釋：Truthordare:

真心話大冒險(xiǎn)。一種聚會(huì)游戲，參與者需要在回答一個(gè)真心話問(wèn)題（關(guān)于自己的真實(shí)想法或經(jīng)歷）和完成一個(gè)冒險(xiǎn)任務(wù)（通常是具有挑戰(zhàn)性或?qū)擂涡缘男袨椋┲g做出選擇。（一框）Paragraph1

Searchingtheroadforstones,myeyeslandeduponabrownobject._________（二框）Paragraph2

Afterwards,thethreeofusmadeourwayhomeagain._______________文章分析：文章講述的事情是：三個(gè)小男孩在回家路上遇到鄰家牧羊犬的襲擊危險(xiǎn)。事情起因是:放學(xué)路上Max,Ben和“我”三個(gè)人玩“真心話大冒險(xiǎn)”，Ben選擇富有挑戰(zhàn)性的任務(wù)，結(jié)果就被Max要求去背他那重重的書(shū)包。Ben在背書(shū)包的過(guò)程中，因?yàn)镸ax的包沒(méi)關(guān)上，導(dǎo)致Max的作業(yè)紙飛出來(lái)，越過(guò)柵欄掉到鄰居的院子里。Ben在柵欄下試圖爬著夠著作業(yè)紙，可是夠不著。于是，Ben只有翻過(guò)柵欄撿作業(yè)。誰(shuí)知：撿到作業(yè)紙后，鄰居家的狗突然跑出來(lái)向他逼近，讓Ben不敢爬過(guò)來(lái)。“我”思考要如何幫助他。文章在此處戛然而止。給出兩個(gè)續(xù)斷首句分別是：續(xù)段一：在路上尋找石頭時(shí)，我注意到一個(gè)棕色的物體。續(xù)斷二：之后，我們?nèi)擞痔ど匣丶业穆贰Ｗ⒁猓哼@里給出續(xù)段一首句中出現(xiàn)了brownobject。這個(gè)棕色的物體是什么呢？事實(shí)上，這剛好是對(duì)原文伏筆（第一句話中Ibitintothebrownbeefburger）的照應(yīng)。明確這種“照應(yīng)伏筆”，我們自然能夠合理推出情節(jié)：用這棕色的beefburger引開(kāi)狗?；谶@種分析，配上“互動(dòng)思維”的加持，我們可以分析如下：主題主題是控制情節(jié)走向的幕后統(tǒng)帥！文章主題：同學(xué)之間相互幫助。

經(jīng)歷有驚無(wú)險(xiǎn)的有趣事情。大家高興。伏筆伏筆助立主題，伏筆促進(jìn)情節(jié)。（

原文開(kāi)頭有伏筆：Ibitintothebrownbeefburger；給定首句是照應(yīng)：Myeyeslandeduponabrownobject.續(xù)段一己己互動(dòng)（我的想法）我的想法：用牛肉漢堡包引開(kāi)牧羊犬。我的行動(dòng)：將漢堡包扔向牧羊犬。主配互動(dòng)我扔漢堡包，牧羊犬追尋漢堡包。導(dǎo)致結(jié)果：Ben

逃脫。銜接句Ben

逃離牧羊犬，重返我們之列。續(xù)段二一輪主配互動(dòng)Ben的致謝，Max的后悔與致謝，我的回應(yīng)。二輪主配互動(dòng)（快到家時(shí)）Ben說(shuō)：“我要每天帶上漢堡包，它會(huì)帶來(lái)好運(yùn)氣。”

我們的回應(yīng)：大笑起來(lái)。Para1：Searchingtheroadforstones,myeyeslandeduponabrownobject.(1)NosoonerhadIcaughtsightofthatthananideaflashedthroughmymind.(2)“It’sbeefburgerIdropped.

Whynotuseittoattracttheshepherd.”Avoicewhisperedinmyears.(3)SoonIpickeditupandthrewittotheshepherd.(4)Whatcamenext,asIexpected,wasthattheanimalapproachedtheburger,payinglittleattentiontotheboyinfront.(5)Andthis,therefore,provided

Benwithenoughtimetoclimbupandreturnedtoasafeplacewithus.

Para2:

Afterwards,thethreeofusmadeourwayhomeagain.(1)“Thankyou,David.SocleverareyouthatIcanavoidbeingattackedbytheshepherd.”Bensaidtome,voicefilledwithgratitude.(2)“Yes,youareclever.AndIthankyoutoo.IshouldnothavegivenBensotoughawork.”Maxadded,asmilespreadingacrosshisface.(3)“It’smypleasure,mybrothers.”Ireplied,overwhelmedwithexcitement.(4)Aswetalked,laughterwasintheair.(5)Itw