Writingstrategybreakthrough寫(xiě)作策略突破

WuximiddlescoolJialingIntroductiontoaplaceBytheendoftheclass,Iwillbeableto:1）findoutthestepswhilewritingacomposition2）identifydifferenttypesofsentencepatternandlearnhowtowriteadvancedsentences.3)Tolearntowriteanintroductiontoacity/town.Learningobjectives學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)1.審題弄清體裁（說(shuō)明文、應(yīng)用文、記敘文、議論文）并確定時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)。2.謀篇布局首段：寫(xiě)作目的、引入話(huà)題正文：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)尾段：首尾呼應(yīng)，表達(dá)感謝、希望、祝愿等Stage1writingguidance寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)

coordinatingconjunction并列連詞invertedsentence倒裝句非謂語(yǔ)non-finiteverbtransitionalword過(guò)渡詞

強(qiáng)調(diào)句emphaticsentence從句subordinateclause漂亮的書(shū)寫(xiě)beautifulhandwriting歡迎來(lái)重慶旅游假設(shè)你是一名導(dǎo)游，正在向游客們介紹重慶，請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇詞數(shù)不少于100的導(dǎo)游詞.Typicalexamplewriting寫(xiě)作典例----welcometoChongqing1.HowmanyplacesofinterestinChongqingcanyouthinkof?2.HowmanykindsoffoodinChongqingcanyouthinkof?Lead-inPlay—玩在重慶Chaotianmenport朝天門(mén)碼頭Jiefangbei

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Ciqikou磁器口古鎮(zhèn)

DazuStoneCarvings大足石刻千手觀音–Thousand-handGuanyin長(zhǎng)江三峽—ThreeGorges火鍋—hotpotFood--吃在重慶Hot

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Rice

Noodles

酸辣粉Chongqingsmallnoodles

重慶小面hotspicydip—麻辣燙Snacks—小吃夜景--Nightview美女—TheBeauty

WelcometoChongqing有……的歷史占……的面積有…..人口位于.....have/with

ahistoryofcoveranareaof

A．phrases重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)Stage2Preparationforwritinghasapopulationof

belocated/situated/liein／near／on追溯到名勝

歷史遺跡文物

dateback（to）datefromculturalrelicshistoricalsitesStage3Preparationforwritingplacesofinterest

旅游勝地，風(fēng)景名勝區(qū)風(fēng)景區(qū)，名勝，景點(diǎn)

對(duì)…高度評(píng)價(jià)來(lái)自國(guó)內(nèi)外thinkhighlyoftouristattractionfromhomeandabroadscenicspotStage3Preparationforwriting此外,而且不但…而且總之就...而言notonly…butalsoinaddition/besides/furthermore/moreover/what'smoreinaword/inconclusiontosumup/allinallasfaras....concernedinone'sopinionB.Translateandcompare(1)Chongqingisabeautifulcity.(2)It’slocatedinthesouthwestofChina(3)ItissituatedontheupperreachesofYangtzeRiver。

1.重慶是一座美麗的城市，地處中國(guó)西南部，位于長(zhǎng)江上游。Chongqingisabeautifulcity,whichislocatedinthesouthwestofChinaandsituatedontheupperreachesofYangtzeRiver定語(yǔ)從句attibutiveclauseStage3Preparationforwriting2.重慶占地82403平方公里，共有人口3144．23萬(wàn)人，具有3000多年的悠久歷史（1）Chongqingcoversanareaofmorethan82403squarekilometers（2）ithasapopulationof31.44million.（3）Ithasahistoryof3000yearsDatingbackmorethan3000years,Chongqingcoversanareaofmorethan82403squarekilometersandhasapopulationof31.44million非謂語(yǔ)Non-finiteverbV-ing形式作狀語(yǔ)Coordinatingconjunction并列連詞Stage3PreparationforwritingB.Translateandcompare3.它也有許多名勝古跡，例如三峽大壩、朝天門(mén)、磁器口、大足石刻等Italsohasmanyplacesofinterest,suchasThreeGorges，Chaotianmen,Ciqikou,Dazustonecarvingsandsoon.Transitionalword過(guò)渡詞Besides,italsohasalargenumberofplacesofinterest,suchasThreeGorges，Chaotianmen,Ciqikou,Dazustonecarvingsandsoon.Stage3PreparationforwritingB.Translateandcompareadvancedvocabulary高級(jí)詞匯4.你可以參觀美麗的三峽、你還可以欣賞許多歷史文化遺產(chǎn)，如朝天門(mén)、磁器口、大足石刻等，（1）YoucanvisitbeautifulThreeGorges（2）Youcanalsovisitmanyhistoricalsites,suchasChaotianmen,CiqikouandDazustonecarvingsandsoon.Invertedsentence倒裝句N(xiāo)otonlycanyoupayavisittoThreeGorgesbutyoucanalsoappreciateagoodmanybreathtakingculturalrelicsandmanyhistoricalsites,suchasCiqikouandThecarvingworkB.TranslateandcompareStage3Preparationforwriting

ThesebeautifulsightsmakeChongqingfamous5.這些美麗的風(fēng)景使得重慶聞名遐邇ItisthesebeautifulsightsthatmakeChongqingfamous

Emphaticsentence強(qiáng)調(diào)句Stage3PreparationforwritingB.TranslateandcompareWelcometo_____andIamgreatlyhonoredtobeyourguide.地點(diǎn)lies______,itcoversanareaof____andhasapopulationof______..

Besides,itisalsoafascinatingplaceofinterest.Notonlycanyoupayavisitto_______butyoucanalsoappreciate_______,fromwhichyouwilllearnmoreabout_________I’msureyou'llhavealotoffunwhenyoustayhere.Stage4Writingmodel

寫(xiě)作模板

WelcometoChongqingandIamgreatlyhonoredtobeyourguide.LetmeintroduceChongqingtoyou.

LocatedinthesouthwestofChinaandontheYangtzeRiver,Chongqingisabeautifulcity.Situatedalongahillylandscape,itisalsoknownasthe“CityofHills”.Datingbackmorethan3000years,Itisahistoriccity

withanareaofmorethan82403squarekilometersandapopulationof31.44million.范文model

Besides,itisalsoafascinatingplaceofinterest.NotonlycanyoupayavisittoThreeGorgesbutyoucanalsoappreciateagoodmanybreathtaking（激動(dòng)人心的）

culturalrelicsandbeautifulhistoricalsites,suchasCiqikouandDazustonecarvings,whereyoucanlearnmuchaboutexcellentChineseItraditionalculture.ItisthesebeautifulsightsthatmakeChongqingfamousWhat’smore,InChongqing，youcanenjoythespecialsnacksTheHotPotandTheHotandSourRiceNoodles.Visitorsfromdifferentpartsoftheworldthinkhighlyofthemwhenitcomestothem.Itisnowonderthateveryyearanincreasingnumberofpeoplecometovisitit.OnceyoucometoChina,Chongqingisascenicspotyoucan’tmiss.

Intheend,Ihopeallofyouwillenjoyyourselveshere_______________________________________________Stage5writingtask（groupwork）IntroduceourhometownWuxiontheexercisesheet.（寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于美麗的巫溪的作文）

WelcometoWuxiandIamgreatlyhonoredtobeyourguide.LetmeintroduceWuxitoyou.

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