讀后續(xù)寫語言描寫之“各種各樣的說”讀后續(xù)寫素材之如何表達(dá)“說”（1）素材積累

必備單詞

第1類：輕聲說whisper（低聲說出)

常指耳語、竊竊私語。

murmur/Mutter

(喃喃自語)

多指別人不易聽到的低語。gossip

小聲地悄悄地傳開,八卦

moan/plain/grumble抱怨著說mumble/grunt咕噥fort

安慰說

第2類：大聲說call

喊叫

cry

叫喊shout

呼喊

scream驚嚇地尖叫yell

喊叫著說

roar咆哮growl

低沉的怒吼

exclaim

驚叫第3類：建議說advise/propose/suggest/offer/remend建議

argue認(rèn)為

caution/warn

警告

第4類：權(quán)威說announce/declare宣布

claim/state聲稱

order命令第5類：?jiǎn)柵c答ask/inquire/enquire

詢問

reply/answer/respond

回答第6類：結(jié)巴地說stammer/stutter/stumble

結(jié)結(jié)巴巴地說

其他“說”add補(bǔ)充說道=continue繼續(xù)說道；retort反駁道；explain解釋道；state陳述道；protest抗議道；sob哭訴道；agree同意地說；fort安慰道；promise承諾道；assure保證道；insist堅(jiān)持說；repeatv.

重復(fù)地說；gasp

氣喘吁吁地說；chorus

齊聲說；groan

呻吟著說高級(jí)詞塊withasmile笑著

withabsolutecertainty_斬釘截鐵地withfalseenthusiasm_故作熱情地

withgreatseriousness_特別嚴(yán)肅地withsuddenresolution_突然堅(jiān)決地

speakwithpassion_充滿激情地說inalowtone/voice_低聲地

inasoft/gentle/mildtone用溫柔的語氣說inasoftvoice以溫柔的口吻

inanexcited/angryvoice以興奮/生氣的口吻inawhisper低聲說

insurprise驚奇地throughgrittedteeth咬牙切齒地

mutterbetweenteeth_低聲含糊地說roarwithlaughter大笑著說

letoutascreamofhorror_

發(fā)出恐懼的尖叫wordsoffort_安慰的話

utteracryofjoy/grief發(fā)出快樂/悲痛的叫聲

句子賞析1.Hearingthis,thetreesmiledwithrelief,

adding:

“Mydyingtrunkistherightoneforyou.Pleaseehereandhaveaseat.”

groaned

withpain

andopenedhiseyes,

“What’sthematter,son?”moistenedhislipsand

shouted

inacrackedvoice,

“Help!Help!I’mdownhere.”hewasseatedatthetableinJordanian’stavern,he

started

toexplain

“theaffair”.

aviolenteffortsheconqueredhergriefand

replied

inacalmvoice,

“Ben

stammeredout

anapology

tome.”greetedJamesand

inquired,

“Areyoureadyforourfieldtrip?”

Jamesdidn’t

respond.pickeduptheballonelasttimeand

grumbled

endlesslywithchildrenaboutthesuddenball,

“Pleasejustetogetthedamnball.”youngmancametothepolicestation,surroundedbyagroupofjournalists,

declaring

thathehadspottedthemurderer.9.

“Hi,Landy.I’msorryaboutthespaghettithing.”

Catherine

murmured

anapology,herfacereddening.10.

“Here,Mum!Here!”

Reuben

exclaimed

inahighpitchedvoice

asherantoherside.

11.Next,heturnedtoMikeand

yelled,“Givemearock!”12.ThenAshley

continued,“Well,let’sgoandsee!”13.She

admitted,“I’myoursecretfriendandI’msorryaboutthegift.”14.“Nobodycouldunderstandme!”

Andy

sobbed,buryinghisfaceinhishands.15.Shetiptoedintotheroomand

whispered

tome,

“IlookedateveryplantandIknowIgotthebestone!”

素材運(yùn)用運(yùn)用晨讀表格中的必備單詞/高級(jí)詞塊，把下面的語篇補(bǔ)充完整。Thatnightthebosscamehometohis14yearoldson.Thefather

1.

(興奮地告訴兒子)

thathewasgivenablueribbonby

hismanager，whichmadehimsurprised.Hesaid,“It'samazing

that

2.

(他解釋道)

howheadmiredme,thinkingmeacreative

genius.”Theboy

3.

(低聲含糊地說著什么)

,asifhe

hadheardnothing.“AsIwasdrivinghome,IthoughtIshould

honoryouwiththeblueribbon,”thefatherraisedhisvoiceina

certaintone.“MydaysarereallybusyandIdon'tpayalotofattention

toyou,”

4.

(爸爸繼續(xù)道).“Ireallyshouldn'thaveignored

you.”5.

(爸爸嘆著氣說)

andputtheribbonintheboy'sboyhuggedhisfatherandstartedsobbing(啜泣).“You

reallymakeadifferencetome,whichisfromthebottomofmy

heart,”

6.

(爸爸說著鼓勵(lì)的話).Theboyraisedhis

headand

7.

(喃喃地說了聲謝謝)

withtearsinhiseyes，“Dad,I

wastheboywhogaveyourmanageraribbon.”KEYS:hissoninanexcitedvoice2.

heexplainedsomethingbetweenhisteeththefatherfathersighed6.thefather

spokewordsoffortathankyou（2）在對(duì)話標(biāo)簽中加入語氣，嗓音，情感以及伴隨動(dòng)作，讓你的描寫更生動(dòng)傳神。

對(duì)話標(biāo)簽＋語氣（tone）①ina/an+形容詞+tone

②inatoneof+名詞例句：①“YoumustbeAnnie,”he

said

inafriendlytone.②“Iwouldloveto.”

said

Emily

inapleasanttone.③“Idon'twantto.”

said

Emily

inatoneofimpatience.④“NoIdidn't.”

he

said

inalowtone

.

對(duì)話標(biāo)簽＋嗓音（voice）ina/an+形容詞+voice例句：①“Ididn’tmeanto,”she

murmured

inalowvoice.②“Idon'tknowwhatyoumean,”

said

Fran

inaquaveringvoice.③He

called

out

inaloudvoice

.④Thewomanatthedesk

greeted

him

inaboredvoice.

對(duì)話標(biāo)簽＋介詞短語/副詞介詞短語in:insurprise/shock/sorrow/horror/angerwith:withdelight/excitement/embarrassment/pride/caution/care/patience/certainty副詞

firmly/excitedly/seriously/sincerely/slowly/regretfully

例句：①“We’renotintrouble!”I

shouted

withjoy.②“Ihateyou!”she

screamed

inanger.③“Isittrue?”he

whispered

withastonishment.④“I'vebeenwaitingforyou,”she

said

withasmile.⑤“Getoverherethisinstant!”David

called

fiercely.⑥

“Itisn’tfair!”he

exclaimed

angrily.⑦

“Youaremyhero!”Kylie

said

affectionately.⑧

“Ifeellikeyou'reabandoningme.”she

responded

bitterly.

對(duì)話標(biāo)簽＋伴隨動(dòng)作①“Nobodycouldunderstandme!”Andy

sobbed,

buryinghisfaceinhishands.②Thefarmer

pickedup

thedog,

kneltdownand

said

inasoftvoice,“It’syoursnow.”③Withherheaddown/Withtearsinhereyes,she

said,“Sorry.”④“Hi,Landy.I’msorryaboutthespaghettithing.”Catherine

murmured

anapology,

herfacereddening.⑤“Look!”Rose

pointedout

thewindowand

cried

ingreatexcitement.⑥“Wanttotryoneon?”I

said,

touchingMarina'shand.⑦I

openedmywindow

and

shouted

across.“Iknowwe'vemetbefore,butIcan’trememberwhere.”⑧Thewomaninthecar

jumpedout,

screaming,“Youidiot!Whydidn'tyoulookwhereyouweregoing?”素材運(yùn)用運(yùn)用晨讀表格中的四個(gè)對(duì)話描寫技巧，把下面的語篇補(bǔ)充完整。（2021

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1

卷）Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfather

appeared.Atthesightofthemessandthekids'gloomyfaces,heimmediatelyrealizedwhattheywereupto."Needanyhelp?”

1

（爸爸微笑地看著雙胞胎，溫柔地問）,whofelt

discouragedatbeingfoundscrewingthingsup.Jeff

2

（結(jié)巴地說出）

theirfailedplan,

3

（他羞紅了臉）.

"That'sagreatidea.MayIjoinyou?"Atthisthetwinscheeredup

androlleduptheirsleevestocleanthestovebeforetheylearned

tofrythebreadfollowingtheirfather'sinstructions.Sooncamethe

delicioussmellofFrenchtoastandchickenporridge,atwhichthe

twinsfeltagreatsenseofachievement.Witheverythingsettled,fatherleftthekitchen,4

（承諾道）tokeeptheirsecret.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmother

upinconfusion,motherwasgreetedwiththekids'

smilingeyesandhappygiggles.Beforeshecouldrealizewhatwas

goingon,thetwinspresentedthebreakfasttray,5

（大聲喊道）,"Happy

Mother'sDay!”

6

（驚訝地盯著精心準(zhǔn)備的食物，媽媽飽含深情地說）,

"Thankyou，darling.That'sthebiggestsurpriseI'veeverhad!”

Itwasthenthatfatherentered,

7

（回應(yīng)）

mother“Thatmustbethebestbreakfastever!”Mother

bitintoapieceoftoast，noddingherheadapprovinglywithgreat

satisfaction.Exchangingglances,fatherandthetwinsbeamed

brightlywithpleasure.KEYS:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfather

appeared.Atthesightofthemessandthekids'gloomyfaces,heimmediatelyrealizedwhattheywereupto."Needanyhelp?”

fathergentlyinquired,smilinglylookingatthetwins,whofelt

discouragedatbeingfoundscrewingthingsup.Jeff

stammered

out

theirfailedplan,hisfaceflushingwithembarrassment."That'sagreatidea.MayIjoinyou?"Atthisthetwinscheeredup

androlleduptheirsleevestocleanthestovebeforetheylearned

tofrythebreadfollowingtheirfather'sinstructions.Sooncamethe

deli