Welcometomyclass!Welcometomylecture!By:HuangXuelin

短文改錯(cuò)

題型解讀及解題技巧ErrorsCorrectionBy:HuangXuelin

LearningAims〔學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)〕：1.Mastertheprinciplesandskillsoferrorscorrection.2.Gettoknowthetypesoferrors.AndFocusonthehotspotsintheexamination.

1.Gothroughthewholepassagetogetageneralidea.(瀏覽全文，掌握大意〕2.Readthepassagesentencebysentenceandfindthemistakes.〔分句閱讀，逐行找錯(cuò)〕3.Readthepassageforthethirdtime,checktheanswersandcorrectthedifficultones.〔檢查核對(duì)，攻克難點(diǎn)〕.I.Stepsofcorrectingacomposition〔短改步驟〕:Aftershopping,MotherandIwenttoarestaurantforlunch.InoticeMotherlookingatanearbytableoccupybyanelderlywomanandyoungcouple.Theyatesilently,anditwasclearlythatthingswerenotgoingwell.Asweleft,Motherstoppedontheirtable,“Excuseme〞shesaid,putherarmaroundtheunhappyoldwoman.“Youremindmesomanyofmymother.MayIhugyou?〞Thewomansmiledhappilyassheacceptedtoit.Afterweleft,Isaid,“Thatwasveryniceofyou,mother.SoIdidn’tthinkshelookedlikeGrandma.〞“Neitherdidme.〞SaidMothercheerfully.Mumgavewarmnesstosomeoneunhappy.II.Principles改錯(cuò)原那么：1.一處只改動(dòng)一詞2.句子原意不變eg:Idon’tlikeEnglish,soIpracticeiteveryday.Usually,Ifeeltiredandbored.3.添加、刪減一般只有一處4.三不改：標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)；字母大小寫(xiě)；不改變句子原意。but71）錯(cuò)詞2）多詞3）缺詞更正刪除補(bǔ)漏III.設(shè)錯(cuò)方式：8短文改錯(cuò)〔共10小題;每題1分，總分值10分〕文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)〔^〕，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線〔\〕劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者〔從第11處起〕不計(jì)分。IV.短文改錯(cuò)格式及要求： Aftershopping,MotherandIwenttoarestaurantforlunch.InoticeMotherlookingatanearbytableoccupybyanelderlywomanandyoungcouple.Theyatesilently,anditwasclearlythatthingswerenotgoingwell.Asweleft,Motherstoppedontheirtable,“Excuseme〞shesaid,putherarmaroundtheunhappyoldwoman.︿noticedoccupiedaclearbyputting “YouremindmesomanyofmyMother.MayIhugyou?〞Thewomansmiledhappilyassheacceptedtoit.Afterweleft,Isaid,“Thatwasveryniceofyou,mother.SoIdidn’tthinkshelookedlikeGrandma.〞“Neitherdidme.〞SaidMothercheerfully.muchButIAftershopping,MotherandIwenttoarestaurantforlunch.InoticeMotherlookingatanearbytableoccupybyanelderlywomanandyoungcouple.Theyatesilently,anditwasclearlythatthingswerenotgoingwell.Asweleft,Motherstoppedontheirtable,“Excuseme〞shesaid,putherarmaroundtheunhappyoldwoman.“YouremindmesomanyofmyMother.MayIhugyou?〞Thewomansmiledhappilyassheacceptedtoit.Afterweleft,Isaid,“Thatwasveryniceofyou,mother.SoIdidn’tthinkshelookedlikeGrandma.〞“Neitherdidme.〞SaidMothercheerfully.＼︿UnnecessarywordWrongwordMissingwordV.錯(cuò)誤類(lèi)型的歸納:近幾年短文改錯(cuò)的設(shè)疑方式年份內(nèi)容名詞動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞主謂一致形容詞和副詞代詞冠詞介詞連詞2013年1111111122014年1211111112015年121111111

Aftershopping,MotherandIwenttoarestaurantforlunch.InoticeMotherlookingatanearbytableoccupybyanelderlywomanandyoungcouple.Theyatesilently,anditwasclearlythatthingswerenotgoingwell.︿noticedoccupiedaclear動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞冠詞形容詞∕副詞 Asweleft,Motherstoppedontheirtable,“Excuseme〞shesaid,putherarmaroundtheunhappyoldwoman.“YouremindmesomanyofmyMother.MayIhugyou?〞Thewomansmiledhappilyassheacceptedtoit.muchputtingby介詞非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形容詞介詞 Afterweleft,Isaid,“Thatwasveryniceofyou,mother.SoIdidn’tthinkshelookedlikeGrandma.〞“Neitherdidme.〞SaidMothercheerfully.IBut連詞代詞VI短文改錯(cuò)口訣：2.語(yǔ)態(tài)(主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)和被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài))1.時(shí)態(tài)

(上下文時(shí)態(tài)要一致)一.動(dòng)詞形

3.正確選用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞(現(xiàn)在分詞,過(guò)去分詞,不定式)4.注意固定動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)運(yùn)用錯(cuò)誤(usedto/beusedto)此考點(diǎn)歸納的是除動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)與非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞之外的動(dòng)詞考點(diǎn)，它包括被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)、情態(tài)動(dòng)詞、動(dòng)詞形式的變化、動(dòng)詞用法辨析、動(dòng)詞be的誤加與漏用等。Practice1.Sometimes,wetalkedtoeachotherverywellinclass…2.Hardlyhadthedoctorgonetobedwhenthereisaknockonthedoor.talkwas3.Playfootballmakesusgrowuptallandstrong.4.Heisusedtogetupearlytotakephysicalexercise.〔習(xí)慣了….)5.Shelikeditverymuchandreadsittotheclass.Playinggettingread二、名詞數(shù)

1.

名詞單、復(fù)數(shù)形式誤用注意可數(shù)名詞與不可數(shù)名詞3.注意可數(shù)名詞前冠詞(a,an,the)正確用法

progress,furniture,weather,fun,news,information,advice

短文改錯(cuò)的名詞考點(diǎn)主要涉及名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)問(wèn)題，即在該用復(fù)數(shù)的地方誤用其單數(shù)，或在該用單數(shù)的地方誤用其復(fù)數(shù)。211.…sothatI’llgetgoodmarksinallmysubject.

2.Hecollectedsomeinformationsaboutcomputers.

3.HehasmadeagreatprogressinEnglishlately.

絕對(duì)不可數(shù)名詞subjectsinformation22

短文改錯(cuò)對(duì)形容詞與副詞的考查主要涉及形容詞和副詞比較等級(jí)的誤用(尤其是在本身已是比較級(jí)的詞前誤加more)、形容詞與副詞的混用(如修飾動(dòng)詞時(shí)誤用形容詞或修飾名詞時(shí)誤用副詞)等，另外，用作表語(yǔ)時(shí)該用形容詞的卻誤用了名詞、簡(jiǎn)短副詞(如in,down等)的誤加與漏用、涉及形容詞搭配的as…as結(jié)構(gòu)、how與what的混用等也是?？嫉目键c(diǎn)。三、還要注意形和副還要注意形和副1.Heaskedangryifwehadfinishedthework.2.Yes,itisclearlythatyourlifeinyourcountryisquitedifferentfrommine.3.Whathesaidsoundedwonderfully.4.Hisfatherlooksmuchmorehappiertoday.angrily

clear

修飾名詞作定語(yǔ)表語(yǔ)修飾動(dòng)詞,形容詞,副詞,作狀語(yǔ)wonderful24Afteranhourorsowebegantofeelveryfrightening.Charlessaid,“AssoonasIseearealtallbuilding,Iwanttoclimbit.LastSunday,policecarshurrytothetallerbuildinginNewYork.Asaresult,peopleinthemodernworldgenerallylivemuchmorelongerthanpeopleinthepast.Forinstance,onenightheplayedstrongandloudlymusictillfouro’clockinthemorning.frightenedreallytallestloudIstillremembergoingthereearlyandfeltanxiousaboutthenewworld.2.Youshouldnotlettheyoungchildrentogoswimming.feeling

這是考查最多的錯(cuò)誤形式之一。主要有現(xiàn)在分詞、過(guò)去分詞，動(dòng)名詞和不定式錯(cuò)誤。例如：四、非謂語(yǔ)，細(xì)區(qū)分26Wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories.SoonIbegantoenjoytalktomyselfonpaperasIwaslearningtoexpressmyselfinsimpleEnglish.visitedtalking1.TheSmithsdidhisbesttomakemefeelathome.

2.IwaslearningtoexpressmeinsimpleEnglish.

3.IalwaysthoughtinChineseandtriedtotranslate

anythingintoEnglish.

4.Hefounddifficulttolearnmathwell.

theirmyself(一）人稱(chēng)代詞要一致(性/數(shù)/格)(二）指示代詞(this,that單數(shù)，those,these復(fù)數(shù))(三)不定代詞誤用(someone,something,anyone,anything等)(四)it作形主、形賓或指代時(shí)有無(wú)缺漏(make,find,think)

everything∨it五、代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟六、習(xí)慣用法要記住

makeagreatprogressinthedangersuchmanypeople

catchasightof

so主要考查習(xí)慣搭配方面的根底知識(shí)，其錯(cuò)誤表現(xiàn)形式主要有三種：多詞、少詞和搭配錯(cuò)誤。例如：29七、冠詞、連詞常光臨

短文改錯(cuò)對(duì)冠詞的考查主要涉及冠詞的誤加和漏用，有時(shí)也考查不定冠詞與定冠詞以及零冠詞的用法區(qū)別(包括a與an的區(qū)別)。其中，涉及最多的是，當(dāng)一個(gè)單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞表示泛指時(shí)，其前漏用不定冠詞；另外，冠詞在一些習(xí)語(yǔ)中的用法也是一個(gè)重要考點(diǎn).

冠詞→定冠詞，不定冠詞，零冠詞。1.Iamhonestandactivestudent.

2.Wemaybeonefamilyandliveunderasameroof.

3.

Suddenly,IcaughtasightofmyEnglishteacher.

4.Whatafunitistogoswimminginsummer.

an∨the31連詞常光臨:(1)Wetriedtofixitandtherewasnothingwecoulddo.(2)ItoldMother,Father,Sister,allmyfriendsherewhatagreattimeIhad.(3)ItisaveryimportantexambutIcan’taffordtofailit.(4)Shewassmilingbutnoddingatme.

短文改錯(cuò)對(duì)并列連詞的考查主要涉及and,but,or,so等幾個(gè)表示并列、轉(zhuǎn)折、選擇、因果等關(guān)系的詞語(yǔ)。嚴(yán)格說(shuō)來(lái)，這類(lèi)錯(cuò)誤主要屬于行文邏輯的錯(cuò)誤。butandandand八.句子成分須分析

1.Whatisknowntoallthatnothingisimpossible.2.Nothingisimpossible,＿＿＿＿＿isknowntoall.3.＿＿＿isknowntoallthatnothingisimpossible.︿iswhich∕asIt不同的句子成分要用不同的詞類(lèi)；不同的語(yǔ)境要選擇不同的詞語(yǔ)。只有對(duì)句子結(jié)構(gòu)和成分作細(xì)致的分析，才能找出用詞不當(dāng)?shù)腻e(cuò)誤。例如：33(1)IhaverealizedthattheimportanceoflearningEnglish.(2)Heisthemanhiscarwasstolen.(3)That’sthehotelwhichwewerestayinglastsummer.(3)That’sthepalacewherewevisitedlastsummer.(4)Isuddenlywokeupinmid-night.AnditwasalongtimeIgottosleepagain.whosewherewhich/thatbeforeInternationalcooperationsare

gettingmoreandmore,theabilityofspeakingshouldbe

strengthened.進(jìn)階練習(xí)：Twoyearsbefore,ItraveledtoBrazilandIrentedforacar.Unfortunate,Ihadanaccidentandhitanothercar,andIneededtostayinahospitalforatleasttwoweek.Icalledmyparents,soIdidnottellthemwhathadhappened.IknewthattheywillbeworriedaboutmyselfbecauseIwassofartheraway,andthatmymotherwouldnotsleepifsheknew.Therefore,ItoldtheminterestedstoriesandhowIwasenjoyingBrazil.Asaresult,nobodyknewtruth.Istillthinkthatitwastherightthingtodo.Practice：Thispassageisabout______A.TheauthortraveledtoBrazil.B.Acaraccident.C.TheauthordidnottellhisfamiliestheaccidentwhichhappenedinBrazil.CTwoyearsbefore,ItraveledtoBrazilandIrentedforacar.Unfortunate,Ihadanaccidentandhitanothercar,andIneededtostayinahospitalforatleasttwoweek.Icalledmyparents,soIdidnottellthemwhathadhappened.IknewthattheywillbeworriedaboutmyselfbecauseIwassofartheraway,andthatmymotherwouldnotsleepifsheknew.Therefore,ItoldtheminterestedstoriesandhowIwasenjoyingBrazil.Asaresult,nobodyknewtruth.Istillthinkthatitwastherightthingtodo.

︿agoUnfortunatelyweeksbutwouldmefarinterestingthe短文改錯(cuò)口訣：Iwanttosaythat…Itisclearthateveryonecanmakemistakes.Butwhatmakesusdepressedmostisthatwecannotavoidmakingthesamemistakes.Sowemakeprogressinstudypractisingmore.Withusprogressing,wewillrarelymakethesamemistakes.Thankyouforyourattendance!Bye-bye…42

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