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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Itwascoldoutside.Itseemedasifasnowstormwasapproaching.Aseveningfell,thewindpickedupitspace,howlingthroughthestreetslikeawoundedbeastseekingsolace(安慰)indestruction.Thenthesnowstarted.Asusual,TomandIworkedovertimeinthecompany.Afterfinishingthework,wewerereadytogohometogether.Thesnowwascomingdownevenharder.Withinminutes,Iwasinawhiteout.AftergivingTomaride,strugglingtonavigatetheicypath,Itookashortcut(近路)soastogethomeearlier.Thewindhowledandwhipped(吹打)theflakesofsnowintoafrenzy(瘋狂),makingitimpossibletoseemorethanafewfeetahead.Thecarwasfrozenandgettingcoveredwithsnow,so
Isloweddownandrolleddownmydriver'ssidewindow,thinkingIcouldbetterfollowtheroadedgeandkeepastraightline.Butinfact,IhadnocluewhereIwas.Istoppedandkeptthecarrunningtostaywarm.Icalled911.Unfortunately,theoperatortoldmethattheweatherwastoobadtodomeafavorandaskedmetowaitoutthestormforthenight.Thecallleftmeinatotalpanic.“Breathe,”
Itoldmyself,attemptingtokeepcalm.Tomknewwhathadhappenedtome.“Maybeyoucouldaskforhelponlineandtheremustbesomepeoplelivingnearbyyourlocationandtheycanshowyoutherightdirection.”Hetoldmeonthephone.IpostedmylocationonlineandexplainedwhatIwasgoingthrough,wishingforanyonetocometomyrescue.注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。Withinminutes,responsesstartedfloodingin.
ThenIsawabigfigure(人影)inthedark.
文章大意文章講述了作者在一場(chǎng)暴風(fēng)雪中被困的驚險(xiǎn)經(jīng)歷。在寒冷的夜晚,作者和同事Tom加班后一起回家,但由于暴風(fēng)雪的加劇,作者決定抄近路,結(jié)果迷失了方向。在嘗試尋求幫助無(wú)果后,作者在網(wǎng)上發(fā)帖求助,并得到了許多人的回應(yīng)。其中,一位名叫Sarah的當(dāng)?shù)鼐用窈鸵晃挥薪?jīng)驗(yàn)的卡車(chē)司機(jī)Mike伸出了援手。Sarah冒著風(fēng)雪前來(lái)引導(dǎo),而Mike則駕駛卡車(chē)帶領(lǐng)作者安全回家。這次經(jīng)歷讓作者深刻體會(huì)到了在困境中社區(qū)的力量和陌生人的善意,也認(rèn)識(shí)到了在緊急情況下保持冷靜的重要性。作者對(duì)那些在危難時(shí)刻給予幫助的人充滿(mǎn)了感激之情,并承諾將來(lái)也要幫助他人。在原文中,有幾處伏筆為續(xù)寫(xiě)部分做了鋪墊:1.暴風(fēng)雪的描述:文章開(kāi)頭描述了暴風(fēng)雪即將來(lái)臨的情景,為作者迷路和尋求幫助的情節(jié)埋下了伏筆。2.作者和Tom加班:提到作者和Tom加班,暗示了他們可能會(huì)在惡劣天氣中回家,增加了故事的緊張感。3.作者決定抄近路:作者選擇抄近路以便早點(diǎn)回家,這為之后迷路的情節(jié)埋下了伏筆。4.天氣狀況惡化:作者描述了天氣狀況的惡化,這為作者感到恐慌和尋求幫助的情節(jié)做了鋪墊。在續(xù)寫(xiě)中,這些伏筆得到了回應(yīng):1.網(wǎng)上求助:由于迷路,作者在網(wǎng)上發(fā)帖求助,這是對(duì)之前惡劣天氣和迷路伏筆的直接回應(yīng)。2.Sarah的回應(yīng):Sarah的回應(yīng)和出現(xiàn)是對(duì)作者在網(wǎng)上求助的回應(yīng),解決了作者的困境。3.Mike的引導(dǎo):Mike的引導(dǎo)和幫助是對(duì)作者在惡劣天氣中迷路的情節(jié)的回應(yīng),最終幫助作者安全回家。4.作者的反思和承諾:文章結(jié)尾作者的反思和承諾是對(duì)整個(gè)經(jīng)歷的總結(jié),也是對(duì)之前伏筆的回應(yīng),表明作者從這次經(jīng)歷中學(xué)到了重要的教訓(xùn)。這些伏筆和回應(yīng)共同構(gòu)建了一個(gè)完整的故事,展示了作者在困境中如何得到他人的幫助,并從中學(xué)到寶貴的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。主旨升華句1.Theordealinthesnowstormhastaughtmethateveninthebleakestofcircumstances,thekindnessofstrangerscanbeabeaconofhope.2.I'velearnedthatcommunityandconnectionarenotjustabstractconcepts,butlifelinesinourdarkesthours.3.Thisexperiencehasshownmethateverychallengewefacecanbeanopportunitytogrowandtoappreciatethesupportofothers.4.Theincidenthasinstilledinmeadeepersenseofempathyandacommitmenttobeasourceofhelpforthoseinneed.5.Throughthisharrowingjourney,I'vecometounderstandthatthetruemeasureofhumanityliesinourwillingnesstoreachouttooneanotherintimesofcrisis.參考答案Withinminutes,responsesstartedfloodingin.Somepeopleofferedwordsofencouragement,tellingmetostaystrongandthateverythingwouldbeokay.Otherssharedtheirownexperiencesofbeingstuckinsimilarsituationsandhowtheymanagedtogetthroughit.Afewevensuggestedpracticalsolutions,likestayinginthecarandwaitingforthesnowtostoportryingtofindanearbyshelter.Ifeltasenseofwarmthandhopeamidstthecoldanddarkness.ThenIsawabigfigureinthedark.Asthefigureapproached,Irealizeditwasamanwearingathickcoatandcarryingashovel.Heintroducedhimselfasaneighborwholivednearbyandhadseenmypost.Withouthesitation,hestartedclearingthesnowaroundmycarandhelpingmepushitoutofthesnowdrift.Withhishelp,Iwasfinallyabletogetbackontheroadanddrivehomesafely.IwasextremelygratefulforhiskindnessandthesupportIreceivedfromtheonlinecommunity.下水文1Withinminutes,responsesstartedfloodingin.Peoplefromalloverwereofferingadviceandencouragement.SomesuggestedIstayinthecarwiththeenginerunningforheat,whileothersprovidedtipsonhowtonavigatethroughasnowstorm.Themessagesofsupportwereheartwarming,andIfeltaglimmerofhopeamidstthechaos.Oneparticularmessagestoodout—alocalresidentnamedSarahsaidsherecognizedtheareafrommydescriptionandwasonherwaytohelp.ThenIsawabigfigureinthedark.Asthefigureapproached,IrolleddownthewindowtofindSarah,bundledupinathickcoatandarmedwithaflashlight.Shehadbravedthestormtoguidemehome.Withherhelp,wemanagedtoslowlymakeourwaythroughthetreacherousconditions.Sarah'spresencewasabeaconofhopeinthebleakwinternight,andherkindnesswasatestamenttothepowerofcommunityandhumanconnection.Whenwefinallyreachedmyhouse,Iwasoverwhelmedwithgratitude.Thewarmthofmyhomewasastarkcontrasttothebitingcoldoutside,andIknewIhadbeenincrediblyfortunatetohavefoundsuchageneroussoulwillingtocometomyaid.下水文2Withinminutes,responsesstartedfloodingin.Thescreenofmyphonelitupwithcommentsandmessages,astarkcontrasttotheicydarknessoutside.Strangerswereofferingadvice,sharingtheirownstoriesofbeingstranded,andsomeevenofferedtocomeoutandhelp.Itwasahumblingreminderthateveninthemostisolatingofconditions,wearenevertrulyalone.AmongthemessageswasonefromanexperiencedtruckdrivernamedMike,whohaddealtwithsuchweatherconditionsbeforeandwasconfidenthecouldguidemetosafety.ThenIsawabigfigureinthedark.Asilhouetteemergedthroughtheswirlingsnow,andasitgotcloser,Irecognizedthebrightsafetyvestandthef
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