試卷第=page11頁(yè)，共=sectionpages33頁(yè)試卷第=page11頁(yè)，共=sectionpages33頁(yè)Unit1Friends單元話題滿分范文必背1．（23-24八年級(jí)上·江蘇無(wú)錫·階段練習(xí)）假如你是Tom，你有一個(gè)筆友名叫Simon，請(qǐng)以“MypenfriendSimon”為題向全校師生介紹他的情況。概況Simon是一所男女混合學(xué)校的八年級(jí)學(xué)生，校BuddyClub成員之一外貌個(gè)高腿長(zhǎng)，有一雙笑瞇瞇的眼睛個(gè)性友好，樂于助人，……（舉1例）興趣對(duì)DIY很著迷，每周六去上DIY的課程，關(guān)于DIY知道的很多夢(mèng)想做一名社會(huì)工作者，……要求：1.文章條理清晰，語(yǔ)言連貫，必須包含以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯。2.詞數(shù)80詞左右（給出部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。3.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。MypenfriendSimonI’mTom.IhaveapenfriendnamedSimon.Today,I’dliketosaysomethingaboutSimon.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MypenpalSimonI’mTom.IhaveapenpalnamedSimon.Today,I’dliketosaysomethingaboutSimon.Simonisagrade8studentatamixedschool.HeisamemberoftheschoolBuddyClub.Hehaslonglegs,andherunsveryfast.Hehasapairofsmilingeyes.Heisfriendly.Andheisreadytohelpothers.Healwayshelpshisclassmatescleantheclassroom.Hisfriendslikehimverymuch.HeiscrazyaboutDIY.HehasDIYcourseseverySaturday.HeknowsalotaboutDIY.Hewantstobeasocialworkerwhenhegrowsup.Andhewantstohelpthechildreninpoorareasgotoschool.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生要注意不要遺漏表格提示中的概況、外貌、個(gè)性、興趣和夢(mèng)想等信息。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹Tom的概況、外貌和個(gè)性；第二步，介紹Tom的興趣和夢(mèng)想。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①bereadytodo準(zhǔn)備好做……②becrazyabout著迷于[高分句型]①Hewantstobeasocialworkerwhenhegrowsup.（when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）2．（22-23八年級(jí)上·江蘇南通·階段練習(xí)）假如你叫李芬，你的美國(guó)筆友Mary想在中國(guó)結(jié)交更多的朋友，你通過電子郵件，把你最好的朋友王悅介紹給她，王悅情況見下表：姓名王悅年齡15外貌方臉，明亮而微笑的眼睛，筆直長(zhǎng)發(fā)?？雌饋聿桓?，比我苗條得多。個(gè)性誠(chéng)實(shí)（替朋友保守秘密，從不說人壞話）慷慨（舉一例說明）樂于助人（舉一例說明）愛好喜歡看外國(guó)電影，法語(yǔ)說得好，擅長(zhǎng)打棒球理想長(zhǎng)大后想成為一名社會(huì)工作者，這樣她可以聽取人們的心聲，并幫助他們解決問題。要求：1.表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；2.必須包括所有信息，可進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)：80左右（開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；DearMary，

Howareyou?I’mwritingtointroducemybestfriendWangYuetoyou.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Ihopeyoucanmakefriendswithherassoonasyoucan.Ibelieveyoucanbebestfriends.Yours,LiFen【答案】例文：DearMary，Howareyou?I’mwritingtointroducemybestfriendWangYuetoyou.WangYueis15yearsold.Shehasasquareface,brightandsmilingeyesandlongstraighthair.Sheismuchslimmerthanme.Sheishonest.Shecankeepsecretsandneversayabadwordaboutothers.It’sgenerousofhertoshareeverythingwithothers.Also,sheishelpful.Shealwaysgivesherseattothepeopleinneedonthebus.WangYuelikeswatchingforeignfilms.ShespeaksFrenchwellandsheisgoodatplayingbaseball.Shehopesshecanhavemorefreetimeforafter-schoolactivitiesinheridealschool.Andthereisabiglibrarywithalotofbooksinheridealschool.Shewantstobeasocialworkerwhenshegrowsup.Thenshecanlistentoothersandhelppeoplewiththeirproblems.Ihopeyoucanmakefriendswithherassoonasyoucan.Ibelieveyoucanbebestfriends.Yours,LiFen【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一封電子郵件。給Mary介紹自己的好朋友王悅，需要介紹她的相關(guān)信息，具體的內(nèi)容要包含所給的提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱以第三人稱為主。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，中間介紹她的年齡、外貌、個(gè)性、愛好和理想。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無(wú)語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。3．（22-23八年級(jí)上·江蘇鹽城·階段練習(xí)）青少年雜志決定舉行一次以“我最好的朋友”為題的英語(yǔ)征文比賽。假如你最好的朋友是Daniel，請(qǐng)結(jié)合以下要點(diǎn)，寫一篇短文介紹你最好的朋友。MybestfriendIntroduction1.age2.grade3.looksPersonalities1.helpful2.generous3.…Hobbies1.DIY2.travelling3.…注意：（1）表達(dá)中必須包含所給要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（2）詞數(shù)80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）表達(dá)中請(qǐng)勿出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的班級(jí)及姓名。MybestfriendDanielismybestfriend.【答案】例文：MybestfriendDanielismybestfriend.Heis13yearsold.HeisinGradeEight.Hehasshortbrownhairandroundface.Hehasbrightandsmilingeyes.Heisveryhandsome.HeissohelpfulthatheoftenhelpswithmypoorEnglishafterschool.Heisalsogenerous,too.Everyyearhedonateshispocketmoneytothecharities.Inhisfreetime,heiscrazyaboutDIY.Helikestomakeandrepairthings.Heenjoystravellingbecausehecanvisitmanyplacesofinterestsandlearnalotaboutdifferentcultures.Hisdreamistobeasocialworkerinthefuturebecausehewantstohelpothersinneed.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本篇材料作文要求介紹自己最好的朋友。內(nèi)容要從他的個(gè)人情況介紹、性格和愛好三個(gè)方面描寫，同時(shí)要包含表格所給的要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)，先要認(rèn)真閱讀題目要求，確定人稱使用第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。文章的題材為記敘文，要緊扣主題，內(nèi)容要涵蓋表格所給要點(diǎn)并做到語(yǔ)句通順連貫。寫完后要檢查人稱、時(shí)態(tài)是否一致，是否有拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用，短語(yǔ)和句式的使用是否得當(dāng)。4．（22-23八年級(jí)上·江蘇宿遷·階段練習(xí)）假設(shè)您有一個(gè)朋友叫Daniel，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫一篇文章，介紹一下他的情況。外貌班上最高的男生；方臉；帶著小圓眼鏡；總是面帶笑容，看上去很友好性格樂于助人，他經(jīng)?！?；幽默，經(jīng)常……學(xué)校生活學(xué)校每天8點(diǎn)開始，4點(diǎn)結(jié)束；每天一小時(shí)的家庭作業(yè)；最喜歡的學(xué)科……，因?yàn)椤?；各種各樣的課外活動(dòng)和俱樂部，學(xué)生可打籃球、唱歌……未來計(jì)劃……要求：1.短文應(yīng)包括表格中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫。2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、學(xué)校名和地名。3.詞數(shù)90左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。MyfriendDanielIhaveawonderfulfriendnamedDaniel.I’dliketotellyousomethingabouthim.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyfriendDanielIhaveawonderfulfriendnamedDaniel.I’dliketotellyousomethingabouthim.Heisthetallestboyinhisclass.Hehasasquarefacewithsmallroundglasses.Healwayswearsasmileonhisfacewhichmakeshimlookkindandpatient.Everyonelikeshimbecauseheishelpful.Heoftengiveshisseattoothersinneedonthebus.Heisalsohumorousandisalwaysgoodattellingjokeswhichmakeuslaugh.Now,hestudiesinamiddleschool.Theschoolstartsat8:00amandendsat4:00pmeveryday.Hespends1houronthehomeworkeveryday.HisfavoritesubjectisMathsbecausehethinksMathscanmakehimsmart.Healsotakespartinallkindsofactivitiesandclubsafterschool.Hecanplaybasketball,singandplaychesswithfriends.Healsohashisownfutureplan.Heplanstotravelaroundtheworldandtasteallkindsofdeliciousfoodoneday.【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫一篇介紹你的好朋友Daniel的短文，要求包含表格所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)信息。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：此作文時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，采用第三人稱。此作文可采用3段式格式，第一段：介紹Daniel的外貌和性格；第二段：介紹Daniel的學(xué)校生活；第三段：Daniel的未來計(jì)劃。5．（22-23八年級(jí)上·江蘇泰州·階段練習(xí)）請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示，以Mybestfriend為題寫一篇短文介紹你的好朋友Daniel。特點(diǎn)圓臉，瘦高個(gè)兒；很幽默，經(jīng)常講笑話讓我們開懷大笑。品行愿意和朋友分享東西；對(duì)人友善；時(shí)刻準(zhǔn)備幫助別人。愛好喜歡閱讀，每天看英文報(bào)刊雜志。喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，每周二和四下午放學(xué)后和同學(xué)們一起打棒球。喜歡旅行，希望每周進(jìn)行一次學(xué)校旅行。未來計(jì)劃長(zhǎng)大想當(dāng)……要求：1、表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫。2、短文必須包括所有的信息，省略號(hào)部分適當(dāng)發(fā)揮1-2句。3、詞數(shù)100詞左右。MyfriendDanielIhaveawonderfulfriendnamedDaniel.I’dliketotellyousomethingabouthim.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MybestfriendIhaveawonderfulfriendnamedDaniel.I’dliketotellyousomethingabouthim.Heistallandthinandhasaroundface.Hehasagoodsenseofhumorandoftentellsusfunnyjokestomakeuslaugh.Heisgenerousandalwayswillingtosharewhathehaswithothers.Heisalsokind.Heisreadytohelppeopleinneedanytime.Hehasmanyhobbies.HelovesreadingandhereadsEnglishnewspapersandmagazineseveryday.Helikesdoingsportstoo.EveryTuesdayandThursdayafternoon,heplaysbaseballwithhisclassmatesafterschool.Healsoenjoystravellingandhehopesthathecangoonaschooltripeveryweek.

Hewantstobecomeasocialworkerwhenhegrowsup,becausehewouldliketohelpmorepeople.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于人物介類作文，寫作時(shí)應(yīng)承接開頭，按照所給提示，分四段分別介紹他的特點(diǎn)、品行、愛好和未來計(jì)劃。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)主要使用第三人稱來對(duì)朋友進(jìn)行介紹，時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，按照表格提示，先描述人物外貌特征、性格特征和品質(zhì)，再介紹他的興趣愛好以及長(zhǎng)大后的愿望。寫作時(shí)語(yǔ)法上注意主謂一致，語(yǔ)言上注意條理清晰。提示所給內(nèi)容較詳細(xì)，寫作時(shí)按要點(diǎn)翻譯，在保證語(yǔ)句通順的同時(shí)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮即可。6．（22-23八年級(jí)上·江蘇鹽城·階段練習(xí)）假設(shè)你有一名叫Daniel的好朋友。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息以“MyBestFriend”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇介紹他的短文。要點(diǎn)：Looksasquareface,smalleyes,shorthair,strongPersonalityfriendly,generous,share…with…,patient…Hisidealschool10a.m.～3p.m.,choosesubjectstostudy,lovecomputersHobbiestravelling,

...;reading,

...Futureplantobeasocialworker,

要求：1.詞數(shù)：80個(gè)左右；2.條理清楚、語(yǔ)句連貫；3.內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點(diǎn)，并在適當(dāng)?shù)胤秸归_合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyBestFriendMybestfriendisDaniel.Heis13yearsold.HestudiesinSunshineMiddleSchool.HeisinClass1,Grade8.Hehasasquareface,smalleyesandshorthair.Heisstrong.Heisfriendlyandgenerous.Helovessharingeverythingwithme.Heispatientwithothers.Wealllikehim.Hisidealschoolisthathecanhaveclassfrom10a.m.to3p.m.onweekdays.

Hecanchoosesubjectstostudyandhelovescomputers.Helikestraveling,swimming,singingandreading.HeiscrazyaboutDIY.Helikesanimals.Hewantstobeasocialworkerwhenhegrowsup.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于材料作文。題目要求是請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)提供的信息以“MyBestFriend”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文介紹你的好朋友Daniel。2.寫法指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要是第三人稱；寫作中，要包含介紹朋友的幾個(gè)方面：姓名、外貌、性格、愛好、理想的學(xué)校、未來的打算；文章要緊扣題目要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容要完整，條理要清楚，語(yǔ)句要連貫，表述要準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言的表述要符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。7．（22-23八年級(jí)上·江蘇揚(yáng)州·階段練習(xí)）張莉的筆友Nora將要在揚(yáng)州讀書，想要向Nora介紹她的朋友和自己的學(xué)校，讓她開心地在這里上學(xué)。要點(diǎn)：1.朋友的外貌、愛好和品質(zhì)……2.學(xué)校的課程、時(shí)間安排、課外活動(dòng)……要求：1.內(nèi)容必須包含所有要點(diǎn)，并且進(jìn)行適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充；2.內(nèi)容完整，字跡工整，字?jǐn)?shù)不少于100詞；3.文中不允許出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名、班名和人名；_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearNora,IamverygladtoknowthatyouwillcometoYangzhoutostudy.I’dliketointroducesomethingaboutmybestfriendandschoollifetoyou.Tomismybestfriend.Heistall.Andhewearsapairofsmallroundglasses.Helikesfootballbest.Heishonest,kindandhelpful.Healwaysgiveshisseattosomeoneinneedonthebus.Ourschoolbeginsat8amandfinishesat4pm.Wehavesevensubjects.Ittakesusanhourtodoourhomeworkeveryday.Ourschoolhasmanyclubs,andtheschoollifeiscolorful.Ihopeyouwillcomeheresoon.Yours,ZhangLi【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文。要求向Nora寫信介紹自己的朋友和學(xué)校生活。注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第一和第三人稱來介紹，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題；第二段介紹朋友的外貌、愛好和品質(zhì)以及學(xué)校的課程、時(shí)間安排、課外活動(dòng)；第三段收尾。要保證語(yǔ)言連貫，無(wú)語(yǔ)法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。8．（22-23八年級(jí)上·江蘇揚(yáng)州·階段練習(xí)）《青少年》雜志正舉辦以“Mybestfriend”為題的英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)。假如你是Millie，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表所提示的要點(diǎn)，用英語(yǔ)為該雜志寫一篇短文，介紹你的好友Amy。基本情況苗條，大而明亮的眼睛，一所混合學(xué)校的八年級(jí)學(xué)生。優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)1、和善禮貌，在公交車上樂意讓座給有需要的人。2、認(rèn)真傾聽我們的問題，并提供幫助。興趣愛好1、喜歡旅游，經(jīng)常參觀名勝，了解不同文化。2、對(duì)DIY很著迷，曾經(jīng)……個(gè)人愿望成為……，因?yàn)椤⒁?1.必須包含所給要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.請(qǐng)勿出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名及姓名。MybestfriendAmyisoneofmybestfriends.Sheis________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MybestfriendAmyisoneofmybestfriends.Sheisslimwithbigandbrighteyes.SheisaGrade8studentinamixedmiddleschool.Sheisverykindandpolitetoothers.Sheisalwayswillingtogiveupherseattosomeoneinneedonthebus.Shelikeslisteningtoourquestionsandsheisreadytoofferushelp.Shelikestravelling.Sheoftenvisitsplacesofinterest,enjoysnaturalbeautyandunderstandslocalculture.Inaddition,sheiscrazyaboutDIYandenjoysmakingnewthings.SheoncewonthefirstprizeinaDIYcompetition.Whenshegrowsup,shewantstobeasocialworker,forshewantstohelpmorepeopleintrouble.Ihopeherdreamcancometrue.【詳解】題干解讀：本文是一篇話題作文，題目為“Mybestfriend”；要求包含表格所給要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作指導(dǎo)：本文是介紹朋友的情況，人稱要用第三人稱；時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；寫作時(shí)，要按照題目要求對(duì)她的長(zhǎng)相、品質(zhì)、愛好和愿望進(jìn)行逐一描述，做到內(nèi)容全面、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、無(wú)語(yǔ)法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。9．（22-23八年級(jí)上·江蘇鹽城·階段練習(xí)）根據(jù)表格提示，以“MyBestFriend”為題，寫一篇短文。NameNancySchoolNo.1MiddleSchoolGrade8Appearance方臉，扎著馬尾辮，有雙笑瞇瞇的眼睛，臉上總是帶著微笑Personality善良，樂于助人...；有幽默感Schoollife男女混合的學(xué)校，學(xué)校每天8點(diǎn)開始，5點(diǎn)結(jié)束學(xué)校需要穿校服，但是不需要戴領(lǐng)帶學(xué)習(xí)語(yǔ)文、數(shù)學(xué)、英語(yǔ)、物理等課程有時(shí)間參加各種各樣的課外活動(dòng)和俱樂部，每月進(jìn)行一次學(xué)校組織的旅行Futureplan….注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右。開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)；2.內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點(diǎn)；3.條理清楚、語(yǔ)句連續(xù)；

4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名等信息。MyBestFriendEveryonehasgoodfriends____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MyBestFriendEveryonehasgoodfriends.IwanttointroducemybestfriendNancytoyou.Shehasasquarefacewithaponytail.Shehassmilingeyesandalwayshasasmileonherface.sheisnotonlykindbutalsohelpful.Furthermore,shehasagoodsenseofhumor.Herschoolisamixedschoolwhichstartsat8a.m.andendsat5p.m.everyday.Thestudentsneedtowearuniforms,buttheydon’tneedtowearties.ShestudiesChinese,math,English,physicsandothercoursesatschool.Shealsoparticipatesinvariousafter-s