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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文AMovetoaNewLifeIwasshockedwhenmyparentstoldmeweweremovingfromBatonRouge,Louisana,toNewYork.First,IcomplainedaboutnotbeingabletomakenewfriendsandnotknowinganythingaboutNewYork.Mymomsaid,“You’llmakenewfriends,andit’snotlikeyouknowanythingaboutBatonRougeanyway.Iprotested,“ButIdon’twanttoleaveLouisiana.Theweatherisperfecthere!”Mymomshotmeadisapprovinglookandsaid,“You’llgetusedtotheweatherinNewYork.”Irememberthinkingaboutrunningawayandjoiningacircussomewhere,butthenIrememberedthatcircusanimalssmellreallybad,andIwouldmissmyparents.SoIwanderedaroundthehousepickpickinguprandomthings,likemybaseballandglove,andthrowingthemintoacardboardbox.Ifeltlikeabig,heavyraincloudIwashangingovermyhead.Withinthreedays,allthefurnitureweweretakingetakingwithuswaspackedintoamovingvan(小型貨車).Oderthingswerereadytobesoldfornowherenearwhatwepaidforthem.Littlebylittleouryardsaledecreaseduntilnooneevenlookedatthewell-worncoffeetable,chewed-upplastictoys,andslightlydamagedcoffeecups—allofwhichIhadmyteethonatonetimeoranotherThenextdaywasMonday,andwegotupearlytobeatthetraffic.I’llspareyouthedetailsofhowboringitwastositinavanandwatcheachtreeasitpassedbyonlytoseeanothertreegettingcloseruntilitasopassedby.Halfwaythere,westoppedatamotel(汽車旅館)tospendthenight.Thistime,noonecouldsleepbecauseofthesmellcomingfromtheheaterintheroom.BythetimewefinallymadeittoNewYork,itwasthemiddleofthenight,andmyheadwasalreadydrooping(低垂)ontomyshoulder.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。WhenIwokeup,Ididn’tfindasmog-filledcityasexpected.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________AsIgotusedtothisnewsetting,IrealizedthatIdidn’thavetobeafraidofchange____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:作者得知全家要從路易斯安那州的巴吞魯日搬到紐約后十分震驚,抱怨連連。在打包好家具并處理完舊物后,一家人踏上旅途,途中在汽車旅館過夜,飽受異味困擾,最終在半夜抵達(dá)紐約,而作者也疲憊不堪。

伏筆與回應(yīng):伏筆:作者對(duì)紐約的諸多擔(dān)憂和抱怨,如擔(dān)心交不到新朋友、不適應(yīng)天氣等,為后文他發(fā)現(xiàn)紐約的美好并改變想法埋下伏筆。續(xù)寫中他看到紐約不同的一面后逐漸適應(yīng)并喜歡上這里。伏筆:對(duì)搬家過程中無(wú)聊旅途和汽車旅館糟糕體驗(yàn)的描寫,與后文到達(dá)紐約后的新發(fā)現(xiàn)形成對(duì)比,突出變化。續(xù)寫中紐約的新氣象讓作者忘卻旅途的疲憊與不適。伏筆:作者在搬家前收拾物品時(shí)的消極情緒,預(yù)示他對(duì)搬家的抵觸,而后續(xù)的轉(zhuǎn)變更能體現(xiàn)其成長(zhǎng)。續(xù)寫中他從抗拒到接受,心態(tài)有了很大轉(zhuǎn)變。伏筆:提到舊物被低價(jià)出售,暗示過去生活的結(jié)束,為在紐約開啟新生活做鋪墊。續(xù)寫中他在紐約開啟全新的生活篇章,與舊生活告別。伏筆:作者在旅途中的疲憊不堪,為他醒來(lái)后看到紐約景象時(shí)的精神一振做襯托。續(xù)寫中他被紐約的美景喚醒活力,對(duì)新環(huán)境充滿好奇與期待。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn):第一段:描寫作者醒來(lái)后看到的紐約景象,如干凈的街道、美麗的公園或獨(dú)特的建筑等,與他之前的預(yù)期形成反差,讓他開始對(duì)這個(gè)城市產(chǎn)生好奇與好感。第二段:講述作者在逐漸適應(yīng)紐約的過程中,意識(shí)到自己可以積極面對(duì)變化,比如主動(dòng)去探索周邊、結(jié)識(shí)新朋友等,他開始期待在紐約的新生活,體現(xiàn)勇于接受改變的主題。情感線:從得知搬家時(shí)的震驚、抱怨與抵觸,到旅途中的疲憊與消極,再到醒來(lái)看到紐約后的驚喜與好奇,最后適應(yīng)過程中的釋然與期待。故事線:作者因家庭搬家而不滿,經(jīng)歷旅途波折后到達(dá)紐約,醒來(lái)看到不一樣的紐約景象并逐漸適應(yīng)新生活。主旨升華句:“Changeistheonlyconstantinlife.”(變化是生活中唯一不變的。)“Theonlywaytomakesenseoutofchangeistoplungeintoit,movewithit,andjointhedance.”(理解變化的唯一途徑是投身其中,隨它而動(dòng),與之共舞。)“Lifeisaseriesofnaturalandspontaneouschanges.Don'tresistthem-thatonlycreatessorrow.Letrealitybereality.Letthingsflownaturallyforwardinwhateverwaytheylike.”(生活是一系列自然且自發(fā)的變化。不要抗拒它們——那只會(huì)帶來(lái)悲傷。讓現(xiàn)實(shí)成為現(xiàn)實(shí)。讓事物以它們喜歡的任何方式自然地向前發(fā)展。)“Inthemidstofchange,weoftenfindourgreatestopportunities.”(在變化之中,我們常常能找到最大的機(jī)遇。)“Changeyourthoughtsandyouchangeyourworld.”(改變你的想法,你就改變了你的世界。)寫作示范一:

WhenIwokeup,Ididn’tfindasmog-filledcityasexpected.Instead,Isawabeautifulparkrightacrossthestreetfromournewhome.Thetreeswerelushandgreen,andtherewerecolorfulflowersbloomingeverywhere.Theairwascrispandfresh,carryingafaintscentofbloomingblossoms.Isteppedoutsideandheardthecheerfulchirpingofbirds.Therewerepeoplejoggingandwalkingtheirdogs,andeveryoneseemedsofriendly.Istartedtofeelaglimmerofexcitementaboutthisnewplace.

AsIgotusedtothisnewsetting,IrealizedthatIdidn’thavetobeafraidofchange.Idecidedtoexploretheneighborhood.Ifoundalocallibrarywithavastcollectionofbooksandafriendlylibrarian.Ialsometsomekidsplayingbasketballinanearbycourt.Theyinvitedmetojointhem,andImademyfirstnewfriends.Ibegantounderstandthatchangecouldbringnewandwonderfulexperiences.IlookedforwardtoalltheadventuresthatawaitedmeinNewYork.寫作示范二:

WhenIwokeup,Ididn’tfindasmog-filledcityasexpected.Thesunwasshiningbrightly,andIcouldseeaclearblueskyabove.Thereweretall,modernbuildingswithuniquearchitecturesthatcaughtmyeye.Thestreetswerecleanandlinedwithallkindsofinterestingshopsandcafes.Inoticedasmallrivernearbywithducksswimminggracefully.Thecityseemedfulloflifeandenergy.Iwasinstantlycaptivatedbyitscharm.

AsIgotusedtothisnewsetting,IrealizedthatIdidn’thavetobeafraidofchange.Istartedtotrynewthings.IwenttoalocaltheaterandwatchedaBroadwayshow,whichwasanamazingexperience.Ialsojoinedacommunityclubandmetpeoplewhosharedmyinterests.IfoundthatIcouldcreateagreatlifehere.IstoppeddwellingonthepastandembracedtheopportunitiesthatNewYorkhadtooffer.Iwasreadytowriteanewchapterofmylifeinthisvibrantcity.參考答案WhenIwokeup,Ididn’tfindasmog-filledcityasexpected.Instead,IwasmetwithaclearskyandthesoftsoundsofmorninginNewYork.Thecityseemedtobewakingupwithagentlehum,notthechaoticrushIhadimagined.Icouldseepeoplewalkingtheirdogs,joggersinthepark,andthefirstlightofdayreflect

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