高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)姐妹守護海灘的環(huán)保行動1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文MelatiandIsabeldeeplylovetheirhomeontheisland,surroundedbytropicalrainforests,greenfields,andavastocean.Enjoyingaswimattheirlocalbeachwasonceadailypleasureforthem.ButwhenMelatiwasfifteen,andIsabeljustten,thesistersstartedtolosetheirenthusiasmforswimminginthewatersneartheirborne.Moreoftenthannot,plasticbagswouldbearoundthemastheyswamandsomewerescatteredonthebeach.Theygotreallyupsetaboutthat.4續(xù)寫原文Melatididn’tthinkmuchaboutituntilonedayherteachergavealessononsomeworldheroes.Eachofthosepeoplehadsparkedmovementsofpositivechangesintheworld.Theybelievedintheimpacttheycouldhaveandtheydidinspiremorepeopletodosomethingmeaningful.Afterschool,Melatiwalkedhomeslowlyinsilence,concernedaboutthevastamountofplasticrubbishonthebeach.Theheroescrossedhermind.Iftheycoulddoit,wecoulddoittoo,shethought.Theidealitherup.Shecouldn’twaittosharewhatshethoughtwithIsabelandquickenedherpace.5續(xù)寫原文“Somanyplasticbagsaround!Thebeachisdirtyandmessy!It’ssoterrible!Wehavelostthecleanandbeautifulbeach.Can’twedosomethingtogetitback?”Melatisaidheartily.Isabelfeltabitpuzzledatwhattodo,butshealsohadastrongdesiretodosomething.Picturingabeachasfascinatingasbeforeinmind,thepairjumpedwithjoy.Theytalkedalot,anxioustoknowhowDadandMomwouldrespondtotheirideas.Thatnightwhenthefamilysatbythedinnertable,thesisterseagerlygottheirideasacross.WhileMomandDadlistenedtothegirlscarefully,theireyesshone.“Howamazingthatwouldbe!Wearesoproudofyou!”Dadexclaimed.Momcameup,gavethemathumbupandhuggedthesisters.6段首句Paragraph1：MelatiandIsabeldecidedtomakeapositiveimpactstraightaway.Paragraph2：Onemonthlater,Melatireceivedacallfromthelocalnewspaper.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9拉蒂和伊莎貝爾姐妹熱愛家鄉(xiāng)島嶼，原本常享受在當(dāng)?shù)睾┯斡尽５S著海灘塑料垃圾增多，她們失去游泳熱情。老師講世界英雄事跡后，梅拉蒂受啟發(fā)，和伊莎貝爾決定為恢復(fù)海灘干凈美麗做點事。與父母分享想法后得到支持，為后續(xù)姐妹倆采取實際行動奠定基礎(chǔ)。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:

MelatiandIsabeldecidedtomakeapositiveimpactstraightaway.梅拉蒂和伊莎貝爾決定立即采取積極行動。她們首先在社區(qū)發(fā)出倡議，召集鄰居和朋友們一起參與海灘清潔活動?；顒赢?dāng)天，大家?guī)е?、手套等工具來到海灘。姐妹倆以身作則，不怕臟不怕累，認(rèn)真地?fù)炱鹈恳黄Ｍ瑫r，她們還向人們宣傳減少使用塑料制品的重要性，倡導(dǎo)大家養(yǎng)成環(huán)保的生活習(xí)慣。盡管過程中遇到一些不理解的聲音，但她們始終沒有放棄，用實際行動感染著身邊的每一個人。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Onemonthlater,Melatireceivedacallfromthelocalnewspaper.一個月后，梅拉蒂接到了當(dāng)?shù)貓蠹埖碾娫?。原來，報紙關(guān)注到了她們的環(huán)保行動，并決定進行報道。這篇報道一經(jīng)刊發(fā)，引起了社會的廣泛關(guān)注。越來越多的人受到鼓舞，加入到保護海灘的行列中來。海灘的環(huán)境得到了明顯改善，曾經(jīng)臟亂的景象逐漸消失，又恢復(fù)了往日的美麗。姐妹倆看到自己的努力有了成果，心中充滿了成就感，也更加堅定了繼續(xù)為環(huán)保事業(yè)貢獻力量的決心。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)MelatiandIsabeldecidedtomakeapositiveimpactstraightaway.Theyfirstinitiatedaninitiativeinthecommunity,callingonneighborsandfriendstojointhebeachclean-upactivity.Onthedayoftheevent,everyonearrivedatthebeachequippedwithgarbagebags,gloves,andothertools.Thesistersledbyexample,notafraidofgettingdirtyortired,andcarefullypickedupeverypieceofgarbage.Meanwhile,theyalsopublicizedtheimportanceofreducingtheuseofplasticproducts,advocatingforeveryonetodevelopenvironmentally-friendlylivinghabits.Althoughtheyencounteredsomevoicesofmisunderstandingduringtheprocess,theynevergaveupandinspiredeveryonearoundthemwiththeiractions.14范文呈現(xiàn)Onemonthlater,Melatireceivedacallfromthelocalnewspaper.Itturnedoutthatthenewspaperhadnoticedtheirenvironmentalprotectionactionsanddecidedtoreportonthem.Oncethereportwaspublished,itattractedwidespreadattentionfromsociety.Moreandmorepeoplewereinspiredandjoinedtheranksofprotectingthebeach.Thebeachenvironmenthasbeensignificantlyimproved,andtheoncedirtyandmessyscenehasgraduallydisappeared,restoringitsformerbeauty.Seeingtheresultsoftheirefforts,thesisterswerefilledwithasenseofachievementandbecameevenmoredeterminedtocontinuecontributingtotheenvironmentalprotectioncause.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)MelatiandIsabel,drivenbyanunwaveringdetermination,resolvedtoeffectanimmediatepositivechange.Launchinganimpassionedappealwithintheircommunity,theysuccessfullyralliedneighborsandfriendstopartakeinthebeachclean-upcampaign.Whenthedayofactionarrived,thevolunteersconvergedontheshore,armedwithgarbagebags,gloves,andasharedsenseofpurpose.Leadingbyexample,thesistersfearlesslyplungedintothetask,meticulouslycollectingeveryfragmentofplasticwaste.Simultaneously,theyengagedinearnestconversationswithonlookers,underscoringtheurgentneedtoreduceplasticconsumptionandespousingtheadoptionofsustainablehabits.Despitefacingoccasionalresistanceandskepticism,theirresolveremainedunshaken,andtheirunwaveringcommitmentservedasapowerfulcatalystforchange.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Amonthelapsed,andMelati'sphonerangwithanunexpectedcallfromthelocalnewspaper.Ittranspiredthattheirtirelesseffortshadnotgoneunnoticed,andthenewspaperhaddecidedtofeaturetheirstory.Oncepublished,thearticlereverberatedthroughoutthecommunity,ignitingawaveofpublicint