系列四不可不背的寫作素材

I.應(yīng)用文寫作高分表達(dá)

一、詞匯升級

1.WhenIwasinvitedtothestagetoreceivetheaward,Iexpressedmythankstomyteacher.

一WhenIwasinvitedtothestagetoreceivetheaward,Iconveyedmyappreciationtomy

teacher.

2.Wewillorganizeallkindsofactivities,includingperformancesontraditionalChinesemusical

instruments,folkdancesandChinesemartialarts.

一Wewillorganizearangeof/avarietyofactivities,includingperformancesontraditional

Chinesemusicalinstruments,folkdancesaswellasChinesemartialarts.

3.1fllbeathirty-minuteride.Uponarrival,we'llfirstvisitafarm,wherewecanfeedchickensand

pickstrawberries.

一It'llbeathirty-minuteride.Uponarrival,we'llfirstpayavisitto/dropinatafarm,wherewe

canfeedchickensandpickstrawberries.

4.1fgiventhepreciousopportunity,IwilltrytopresentthecharmofChineseculture.

一Ifgiventhepreciousopportunity,IwillsparenoefforttopresentthecharmofChineseculture.

5.I'mwritingtotellyousomethingabouthowwearrangethenextclass.

一I'mwritingtoinformyouofsomethingabouthowwearrangethenextclass.

6.ProfessorGreenisaproductivepoet,whoseworksareverypopular.

-^?ProfessorGreenisaproductivepoet,whoseworksenjoygreatpopularity.

7.Mostimportantly,outgoingandenthusiastic,Ilikebeingavolunteer,providingservice.

一Mostimportantly,outgoingandenthusiastic,Iamkeenonbeingavolunteer,providing

service.

8.1wouldliketocongratulateyouonyourwinningthefirstprizeintheChineseSpeech

Competition.

一Iwouldliketoexpress/conveymycongratulationstoyouonyourwinningthefirstprizeinthe

ChineseSpeechCompetition.

9.rdappreciateit/begratefulifyoucouldletmeknowwhenyouarefreeinadvance.

一I'dappreciateit/begratefulifyoucouldletmeknowwhenyouareavailableinadvance.

10.KnowingthatyoulikeChinesepaper-cutting,Iamveryhappytoinviteyoutotakepartinthe

onlinelecturegivenbymyartteacherMr.Wang.

—KnowingthatyouarefoodofChinesepaper-cutting,Iammorethandelightedtoinviteyouto

getengagedintheonlinelecturedeliveredbymyartteacherMr.Wang.

11.Besides,essayscontributedshouldbelimitedwithin500wordsandwritteninEnglishonly.

一Besides,essayscontributedaresupposedtobelimitedwithin500wordsandwritteninEnglish

only.

12.Busywithmyassignments,Ican'tgoshoppingwithMotherthismorning.

―Occupiedwithmyassignments,Ican'tgoshoppingwithMotherthismorning.

13.Theoldmandonatedalotofmoneytotheschool.makingthestudentsreturntotheir

classroom.

一Theoldmandonatedalotofmoneytotheschool,enablingth。studentstoreturntotheir

classroom.

二、句式升級

1.被動要比主動好

①LastSaturday,weheldspringploughingandplantingpracticeintheschool'slaborpractice

base.

一LastSaturday,springploughingandplantingpracticewasheldintheschool'slaborpractice

base.

②YoumustsubmityourpaintingstoStudents9UnionbeforeNovember10.

—YourpaintingsmustbesubmittedtoStudents5UnionbeforeNovember10.

2.倒裝要比正常妙

⑴“only+介詞短語/副詞/狀語從句”位于句首引起的部分倒裝

③Wecanimproveourefficiencyandmakeourschoollifemeaningfulonlyinthisway.

一0nlyinthiswaycanweimproveourefficiencyandmakeourschoollifemeaningful.

@YoucanhaveabetterunderstandingofitonlywhenyoucometoChinatoexperiencethe

SpringFestivalbyyourself.

一OnlywhenyoucometoChinatoexperiencetheSpringFestivalbyyourselfcanyouhavea

betterunderstandingofit.

(2)notonly...butalso...“不但...而且...”結(jié)構(gòu)中,notonly位于句首引起的部分倒裝

?Throughthisactivity,wenotonlyrealizedthevalueoflabor,butwealsolearnedtorespectall

laborers.

一Throughthisactivity,notonlydidwerealizethevalueoflabor,butwealsolearnedtorespect

alllaborers.

⑥Thisthemeactivityisnotonlyofgreatbenefittoourmentalhealthbutitalsoenrichesour

schoollife.

—Notonlyisthisthemeactivityofgreatbenefittoourmentalhealthbutitalsoenrichesour

schoollife.

(3)notuntil...“直到...才”結(jié)構(gòu)中,notuntil位于句首引起的倒裝，本句式還可以用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型

⑦Iwasn'tawareoftheimportanceofteamworkuntilIwaschosenmonitor.

—NotuntilIwaschosenmonitorwasIawareoftheimportanceofteamwork.

一ItwasnotuntilIwaschosenmonitorthatIwasawareoftheimportanceofteamwork］強(qiáng)調(diào)句

型)

(4)so/such...that...“如此...以至于...“結(jié)構(gòu)中,so/such...位于句首引起的倒裝

?WastingfoodissodisappointingthatI'dliketogivesomeadviceonreducingfoodwaste.

一SodisappointingiswastingfoodthatFdliketogivesomeadviceonreducingfoodwaste.

@Theactivitywassomeaningfulthateveryonewaseagertohaveanotherchance.

—Someaningfulwastheactivitythateveryonewaseagertohaveanotherchance.

(5)as/though“盡管”引起的倒裝句:M/./兒+as/though+主語+謂語,...

?Though/AlthoughIwastiredandsweaty,Ifoundthistriprewarding.

一Tiredandsweatyas/thoughIwas」foundthistriprewarding.

1IThough/Althoughwewereexhausted,weenjoyedourselvescheeringandjumping.

—Exhaustedas/thoughwewere,weenjoyedourselvescheeringandjumping.

(6)否定副詞hardly.nor,never等引導(dǎo)的倒裝句

121couldhardlyholdbackmyexcitementwhenIknewIgotthefirstprize.

—HardlycouldIholdbackmyexcitementwhenIknewIgotthefirstprize.

⑺完全倒裝

13Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,thenewscamethere.

—Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.

14Thetwinswentupstairs,carryingthebreakfasttheyhadmade.

—Upstairswentthetwins,carryingthebreakfasttheyhadmade.

3.強(qiáng)調(diào)結(jié)構(gòu)不可少

強(qiáng)調(diào)句型的結(jié)構(gòu):Itis/was+被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+that/who...；強(qiáng)調(diào)謂語動詞用do/does/did

151turnedonthegascookerundertheguidanceofmymother.

一ItwasundertheguidanceofmymotherthatIturnedonthegascooker.

16Wecanimproveourefficiencyandmakeourschoollifemeaningfulonlyinthisway.

一Itisonlyinthiswaythatwecanimproveourefficiencyandmakeourschoollifemeaningful.

171hopewecouldhaveameaningfulandenjoyableexperience.

一Idohopewecouldhaveameaningfulandenjoyableexperience.

181shouldappreciatetheirselflessandunconditionallove.

一ItistheirselflessandunconditionallovethatIshouldappreciate.

4.言簡意明非謂語

恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用非謂語動詞，不僅能夠使句式多樣、句子靈活多變，而且讀起來結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、言簡意

明。

⑴現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語

19Moreover,Englishwillserveasawindowtotheworld.ltwillallowmetogainaglobalview

towardslife,understandpeoplefromdifferentculturesandmakemorefriends.

一Moreover,Englishwillserveasawindowtotheworld,allowingmetogainaglobalview

towardslife,understandpeoplefromdifferentculturesandmakemorefriends.

⑵過去分詞作狀語

20Wewerebathedinsunshine,andeveryonesangandlaughedwhilepicking,exhaustedbut

fulfilled.

一Bathedinsunshine,everyonesangandlaughedwhilepicking,exhaustedbutfulfilled.

⑶不定式作狀語

21Ourschoolintendedtoenrichthestudents5lifeandstimulateourinterestinlearningEnglish,so

itwillholdalectureonEnglishliteratureat2pmnextFridayinthelecturehall.

一Toenrichthestudents'lifbandstimulateourinterestinlearningEnglish,ourschoolwillholda

lectureonEnglishliteratureat2pmnextFridayinthelecturehall.

22Ourschoolaimstoraisetheawarenessofcaringforthedisadvantagedgroups,soitisto

organizeacharitydonationat5:30pmnextThursdayinthegym,andappealstousstudentsto

participate.

—Toraisetheawarenessofcaringforthedisadvantagedgroups,ourschoolistoorganizea

charitydonationat5:30pmnextThursdayinthegym,andappealstousstudentsto

participate.（不定式作狀語）

—Aimingtoraisetheawarenessofcaringforthedisadvantagedgroups,ourschoolistoorganize

acharitydonationat5:30pmnextThursdayinthegym,andappealstousstudentstoparticipate.

（現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）

—Aimedatraisingtheawarenessofcaringforthedisadvantagedgroups,ourschoolistoorganize

acharitydonationat5:30pmnextThursdayinthegym,andappealstousstudentsto

participate.（過去分詞作狀語）

5.意蘊(yùn)深長復(fù)合句

⑴用定語從句升級句子

23Becauseofyourhelpandinstructions,ImademuchprogressinmybothspokenEnglishand

writtenEnglishanditgavememuchconfidence.

一Becauseofyourhelpandinstructions,ImademuchprogressinmybothspokenEnglishand

writtenEnglish,whichgavememuchconfidence.

24Theactivitybeganwithalecturebyalocalbotanist.Hetaughtusaboutthedifferent

characteristicsandusesofvariousplantspecies.

一Theactivitybeganwithalecturebyalocalbotanist,whotaughtusaboutthedifferent

characteristicsandusesofvariousplantspecies.

⑵用定語從句增加細(xì)節(jié)

25Thefiguresshowthatstudentsarewastingsomuchfood.

一Thefiguresshowthatstudentsarewastingsomuchfood,whichwillhaveabadeffectonthe

蛔h（這將對地球產(chǎn)生不良影響）.

26Besides,wehavealotofsports,suchasfootball,basketballandswimming.

一Besides,wehavealotofsports,suchasfootball,basketballandswimming,whichcanarouse

ourinterests,broadenourhorizonsandenrichourafter-schoollife（能夠激發(fā)我們的興趣，開闊我

們的視野，并且豐富我們的課外生活）.

(3)用as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句拓展句子

27Itisknowntousthattreesareverysignificanttotheenvironmentandhumans.

—Asisknowntous,treesareverysignificanttotheenvironmentandhumans.

⑷用同位語從句升級句子

28EveryoneagreesthatprotectingtheMarineecologicalenvironmentisthefocusofattention.

—NoonecandenythefactthatprotectingtheMarineecologicalenvironmentisthefocusof

attention.

n.應(yīng)用文寫作熱考體裁和話題

1感謝信(生活技能云端展)

假定你是學(xué)生會主席李華,學(xué)生會舉辦的首屆生活技能云端展示活動(WorkCreatesaBetter

Life)得到了外教Patrick的大力支持?；顒右呀?jīng)圓滿結(jié)束，請你給他寫一封感謝信。內(nèi)容包括:

1.表示感謝2外教的幫助;3.活動的反響。

注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右。

DearPatrick,

Yours,

LiHua

【參考范文】

DealPatrick,

IamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourkindhelpintheactivityWorkCreatesa

BetterLife（不定式短語作狀語），whichhasturnedouttobeanamazingsuccess（非限制性定語

從句）.

Itissoniceofyoutohaveofferedusavarietyofpresentationskillsandcreativesuggestions

onourshow.Itwasunderyourprofessionalguidancethattheparticipantsshowedtheirskillsof

cooking,gardening,etc（弓雖調(diào)句型）.Theirimpressiveperformancesdefinitelyfueledtheirpassion

fordailylifeskills.Whatismostimportantisthatthisactivityhelpedstudentsreceivewide

admirationandgaintheirtremendousconfidence（主語從句;表語從句）.

Manythanksfbryourtimeandsupport.

Yours,

LiHua

2邀請信(邀請職業(yè)規(guī)劃師約稿)

假定你是李華，是你校英文報增設(shè)的“職業(yè)規(guī)劃”(CareerPlanning)欄目的負(fù)責(zé)人,請給職

業(yè)規(guī)劃師David寫一封郵件向他約稿，內(nèi)容包括：

1.欄目介紹2稿件內(nèi)容3稿件長度:約800詞;4.交稿日期:6月2日前。

注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearDavid,

Yours,

LiHua

【參考范文】

DearDavid,

How'severythinggoing?Ifeelhighlyhonoredtoinviteyoutowriteanarticleforour

schooFsEnglishnewspaper.

CareerPlanningisanewlyaddedcolumndesignedtohelpusgetabetterunderstandingof

thejobmarket（過去分詞短語作定語）.Thearticleyouwrite（省略關(guān)系詞的定語從句）is

designedtodealwithwhatqualitiesweshouldpossess（賓語從句）tosatisfytherequirementsof

differentjobs.Inaddition,Ihopeyoucanoffersometipsonhowwecangetwell-preparedforour

futurecareer.About800wordswouldbefine.Anditcan'tbebetterifyoucansubmityourarticle

beforeJune2（it作形式主語）.

Lookingforwardtoyourwordsofwisdom.

Yours,

LiHua

3演講稿（創(chuàng)建文明城市）

假定你所在的城市正在創(chuàng)建全國文明城市，請寫一篇演講稿，呼吁全體同學(xué)行動起來，為

創(chuàng)建文明城市作出自己的貢獻(xiàn)。內(nèi)容包括：

1.創(chuàng)建文明城市的內(nèi)容與意義；

2.呼吁同學(xué)們從身邊小事做起（不少于兩點(diǎn)）。

參考詞匯:文明城市civilizedcity

注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右。

【參考范文】

Boysandgirls,

Ashasbeenpromotedbyourschool（3E限制J性定語從句），wearetobuildacivilizedcity,in

whichcaseourcitycanbecleanerandmorecompetitive（非限制性定語從句），andallthe

residentswillbebetteroff.

Oncampus,weshouldpickuplitterwhilewewalkaround,orhelpotherswhennecessary

（省略句）.Athome,wecanpersuadeourparentstoquitsmokingandgetalongwellwith

neighbors.Inaddition,thecoresocialistvaluesoughttobeputintopractice,whichIthinkis

essentialforustobuildacivilizedcity（非限制性定語從句）.

Thankyouforyourlisteningtomyspeech.

4征稿啟事（最美家鄉(xiāng)）

假定你是校英文報。出僅）的負(fù)責(zé)人，你報將舉行“最美家鄉(xiāng)”圖文征集活動,請寫一

份征稿啟事，內(nèi)容包括：

1.稿件要求2獎勵辦法。

注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右。

【參考范文】

WiththedevelopmentofChina,yourhometownhastakenonanewlook.Toshowthebeauty

ofyourhometown（不定式短語作狀語），SchoolDailyisexpectingfantasticworksbyindividuals

fromJun.luntilOct.1,2024.

Workscanbesubmittedintheformsofphotosandtexts.Wewillhave20winnerstobe

awarded.Besidesawards,participantswillgetachancetoseetheirworksfeaturedontheschool

website（"see+賓語+賓補(bǔ)”結(jié)構(gòu);不定式短語作定語）.Ifyouareinterested,youcansubmityour

worksbye-mail.

Welcometoparticipateintheactivity.

5開幕辭（孝敬父母）

假如你是校學(xué)生會主席李華，你校將舉行以“孝敬父母”為主題的系列活動，請為這次活動

寫一篇開幕辭。內(nèi)容包括：

1.活動目的；

2.活動內(nèi)容；

3.預(yù)?；顒訄A滿成功。

注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右。

參考詞匯:孝敬showfilialrespectfor；對父母的孝心filialaffectionforparents

【參考范文】

Dearteachersandfellowstudents,

Ifeelprivilegedtogiveyouabriefintroductiontotheactivitywhosethemeis"showingfilial

respectforourparents^^（定語從句）heldinourschool（過去分詞短語作定語）.

Asweallknow,filialaffectionforparentsishighlystressedinChinesetraditional

education.Todeepenourunderstandingofit（不定式短語作狀語），wearegatheredheretodayto

attendtheactivity.Asscheduled（省略句），theactivityconsistsoffourparts,athemedspeech,

shortdramaperformances,aphotoshow,andapaintingexhibition,thespecifictimeofwhichhas

beenlistedonthenoticeboard（非限制性定語從句）.

Idohopewecouldhaveameaningfulandenjoyableexperience（強(qiáng)調(diào);省略that的賓語從

句）.Thankyouforyourattendance.

6投稿（最受學(xué)生喜愛的書）

你校英文報正在舉辦以“PopularBooksAmongStudents”為主題的征文活動。請你根據(jù)圖

表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：

1.讀書狀況描述;

2.簡單評論；

3.你的建議。

注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右。

PopularBooksAmongStudents

【參考范文】

PopularBooksAmongStudents

Accordingtothesurveyconductedinourschool,43%ofthestudentsprefertoreadscience

books,followedbycomics,whichaccountfor26%（3E限制」性定語從句）.Meanwhile,18%ofthe

studentsenjoyreadingsportsandmusicbookswhileonly13%liketoreadclassics.Inthe

informationage,itisencouragingtosee（it作形式主語）somanystudentsreadingregularly.The

preferenceforbooksaboutscienceindicatesthatteenagers5awarenessofscienceisontherise（賓

語從句）.

Inmyview,Ihopethatourschoolwillorganizebookclubsorreadinggroups,wherestudents

candiscussandsharetheirthoughts（賓語從句;非限制性定語從句）.Itcanarousetheircuriosity

andcriticalthinkingandenhancetheirsocialskills.

7求助信（幫助潤色稿件）

假定你是李華，你為校英語網(wǎng)站LanguageLearning77Ps欄目寫了一篇文章。請你給外教

MrSmith寫封郵件請他幫忙修改潤色。內(nèi)容包括：

1.介紹稿件；

2.請求指導(dǎo)。

注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右。

DearMrSmith,

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【參考范文】

DearMrSmith,

I'mLiHua.FmwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavourwithanarticlewhichIwrotefor

LanguageLearningTips（定語從句）,apopularcolumnofourschool?sEnglishwebsite（同位語）.

ThearticletitledBodyLanguageinDifferentCulturesincludestwoparts,thefirstofwhich

coverstheimportanceofbodylanguageindailycommunication俳限制性定語從句）.Theother

partprovidesseveralbodygesturesindifferentcultures.Wouldyoupleasesparesometimetolook

throughthearticleattachedtothee-mail（過去分詞短語作定語）andpolishit?

I'dappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldgivemeahand（it作形式賓語）.Lookingforwardto

yourearlyreply.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

8活動介紹（我?guī)透改缸黾覄?wù)）

五一勞動節(jié)快到了，學(xué)校開展了“幫父母做家務(wù)”的活動。請你為校報英文專欄寫一篇短

文，介紹該活動的情況，要點(diǎn)包括：

1.活動目的；

2.活動內(nèi)容；

3.你的感受。

注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右。

【參考范文】

HelpingParentsDoHousework

WiththeapproachoftheMayDayInternationalLaborDay,ourschoollaunchedanactivity

of“HelpingParentsDoHousework”,aimingtocultivateasenseofresponsibilityandgratitude

（現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語）instudents.

Theactivityinvolvedstudentstakingonvariouschoressuchascleaning,cooking,and

laundry,thusgivingparentssomewell-deservedrest（現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語）.Throughoutthe

week,studentswereencouragedtosharetheirexperiencesandinsightsinclass,promoting

discussionandreflection（現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語）.

Personally,Ifindthisactivitybotheducationalandrewarding（"find+賓語+賓補(bǔ)''結(jié)構(gòu)）.Ithas

taughtmetheimportanceofcontributingtothefamilyandhasdeepenedmyappreciationformy

parents5dailyefforts.

9建議信（如何與寄宿家庭相處）

假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Mike即將到中國留學(xué)并在一個當(dāng)?shù)丶彝ダ锞幼?。他寫信?/p>

問如何與寄宿家庭相處,請你據(jù)此回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.很高興他將來中國；

2.你的建議；

3.期待他的留學(xué)成功。

注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearMike,

Howiseverythinggoing?________________________________________________________

Yours,

LiHua

【參考范文】

DearMike,

Howiseverythinggoing?IamhappythatyouaregoingtostudyinChina（賓語從句）.You

askedmeabouthowtogetalongwithyourChinesehostfamily.

Infact,Chinesearefriendlyandeasy-going,soyoudon'thavetoworry.Iamsureyouwillbe

familiarwithyourhostfamilymemberssoon（省略that的賓語從句）.Besides,Chinesearehelpful

andkindly.Wearealwaysreadytoofferhelp.Sodon'thesitatetoaskforhelpwheneveryouarein

trouble（時間狀語從句）.AsforChineseholidaytraditions,you'dbettersearchforsome

knowledgeontheInternetbeforeyourarrival.

Hopingyou'llhaveanunforgettableandenjoyablelearningexperiencehereinChina（省略

that的賓語從句）.

Yours,

LiHua

10推薦信（最喜愛的電影）

假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Ross在郵件中提到他對中國電影很感興趣。請推薦一部你

最喜愛的影片，內(nèi)容包括：

1.你的推薦；

2.你的理由。

注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右。

【參考范文】

DearRoss,

KnowingthatyouareinterestedinChinesefilms（現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語;賓語從句），Iam

morethanexcitedbecauseIamfairlyafilmlovermyself.

Irecommendawell-knownChinesefilmtitledMonkeyKingtoyou,whichtellsthefairytale

ofSunWukong（非限制性定語從句），theMonkeyKing.IttellsthestoryofSunWukong,whois

notafraidofpower（非限制性定語從句），fightingagainstthedragonpalaceandtheheaven,and

bravelyfightingwiththeheavensoldiersandtheheavengenerals（現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語）.

Watchingthisfilm（現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語），youwillbedeeplymovedbythecourageand

spiritofthemaincharacterSunWukong.ThafswhyImakethisrecommendation（表語從句）.1

amlookingforwardtoyourviewofthisfilm.

Yours,

LiHua

11建議信（“中文日”慶?；顒樱?/p>

假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Hans來信請你為他負(fù)責(zé)策劃的4月20日“中文日”班級慶

?；顒犹峤ㄗh。請你回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.來信收悉2提出活動建議；3.望錄制和分享。

注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右。

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearHans,

Yours,

LiHua

【參考范文】

DearHans,

I'mmorethandelightedtohearyouwillholdanactivityon“theChineseLanguage

Day".Herearesometips（倒裝）tomakeitamazingandeducational.

Firstly,engagingaudienceinentertainingactivities（動名詞短語作主語）isthekey.ltcan

startwithChinesecalligraphyshowdemonstratingthebeautyofChinesecharacters.Secondly,

whynotholdaChinesespeechcontesttohighlighttheunmatchedcharmofthiselegantlanguage?

Afterthat,itcouldbewrappedupwith“Jasmine”,atraditionalChinesesong,whichwillcertainly

impresstheaudience（非限制性定語從句）.

IamconvincedthatthiswillbeafeastofcultureandIsincerelyhopeyoucouldrecordthis

unforgettableshowandshareyourachievementwithme（賓語從句）！

Yours,

LiHua

12道歉信（校園生活）

假定你是李華，上周你班外教MrGreen布置了一份作業(yè)，截止時間是本周五，但是你因故

不能如期提交。請你給MrGreen寫一封信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.表示歉意；

2.解釋原因；

3.請求延期提交作業(yè)。

注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【參考范文】

DearMrGreen,

I'mwritingtoapologizeforbeingunabletosubmitthehomeworkgivenbyyoulastweek,

whichisduethisFriday（非限制性定語從句）.

Owingtotheinfectionofabadcold,Ihavebeenfeelingunwellthesedays.Achingallover

withapersistenthighfever（現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語），Ihavetobeconfinedtobedalldaylong.Asa

consequence,itwouldbedifficultformetofinishtheassignmentontime.Iwonderifyoucan

allowmetopostponethesubmissiontimeuntilnextFriday（賓語從句）.

Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldtakemyrequestintoconsideration（it作形式賓

in）.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

13報道（體育運(yùn)動）

假定你是李華，是學(xué)校英語報記者，你們學(xué)校近期舉行了一次校體育運(yùn)動會。請寫一篇短

文，報道此次校運(yùn)會。內(nèi)容包括：

1.活動簡介；

2.你的感受。

注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

【參考范文】

Lastweek,asportsmeetingwasheldbyourschoolinthestadium,whichwassoexcitingthat

itimpressedmedeeply（非限制性定語從句;結(jié)果狀語從句）.Allthestudentsgotactively

involvedinitandthewholeschoolwasaliveandfulloffreshness.Theplaygroundwascrowded

withaudiences.Everyathletemadegreateffortstowin,andthestudentswhostoodbytherunway

（定語從句）letoutthemostencouragingslogan.ExhaustedAVomoutaswewere（倒裝），we

enjoyedourselvescheeringandjumping.

Thisactivitywasofgreatsignificance.Notonlycouldithelpussensethefunofexercise,but

alsoitcultivatedtheawarenessofteamwork（倒裝），anddeepenedourfriendship.

14博客（家務(wù)我在行）

假設(shè)你是李華，最近參與了學(xué)校舉辦的“家務(wù)我在行”活動。請寫一篇博客文章，分享如下

內(nèi)容：

1.活動目的;

2.活動內(nèi)容；

3.活動感受。

注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右。

AGoodHandatHousework

【參考范文】

AGoodHandatHousework

Toraisetheawarenessofstudents9tidinessandfamilyresponsibility（不定式短語作狀語）,

anactivitynamed"AGoodHandatHousework''（過去分詞短語作定語）washeld.Inresponseto

theactivitysponsoredbyourschool（過去分詞短語作定語），Icarriedoutmyhouseworkplan

lastweekend,rangingfromtidyinguproomstocookingmeals（現(xiàn)在分詞短語作定語）.

Earlyinthemorning,Iremovedunwanteditemsandcleanedthehouseuntilitwasspotless

（時間狀語從句）.Atalmosteleven,Ipreparedalunch,friedrice,forwhichmyparentspraisedme

（非限制性定語從句）.TiredasIwas（倒裝），Ifeltsoproud.

Throughtheinvolvementinthehouseholdchores,notonlyhaveIestablishedasenseof

familyresponsibility（隹（I裝），butalsoIhavefullyunderstoodthatdoinghouseworkisofgreat

meaning.

15圖畫類作文（孩子做家務(wù)是否應(yīng)該得到報酬）

某英語網(wǎng)站正在開展以“ShouldChildrenBePaidtoDoHousework?”為題的討論。請你根

據(jù)下圖跟帖，內(nèi)容包括:

1.圖片描述2簡單評論。

注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右。

ShouldChildrenBePaidtoDoHousework?

【參考范文】

ShouldChildrenBePaidtoDoHousework?

Thereisnodoubtthatthispicturehasremindedmeofaphenomenonthatcannotbeignored

anylonger（therebe句型;定語從句）:Alotofchildrenneedtobepaidtodohousework.

Frommypointofview,childrenshouldnotbemisledtobelievethateverythingalwayshasa

return（賓語從句）.Instead,measuresshouldbetakentoencouragethemtochangetheirmindthat

houseworkitselfcanbethereward.Doinghouseworkisnotonlyawaytoshowtheirlovetotheir

families,butalsohelpsthemtobecomeresponsiblepersonsinthefuture（固定句型）.

in.讀后續(xù)寫精彩語段

人與自我篇

1個人成長類

作者從沉迷于虛擬世界逐步轉(zhuǎn)向?qū)ＷF(xiàn)實(shí)生活的過程,并在參與很多現(xiàn)實(shí)生活的活動中,

收獲了很多。

ThenIlookedatthewordsonthepieceofpapertapedtomylaptop,lostinthought.I

realizedafunnyfact.Iplantedandharvestedvirtualcropsforhourseverydaywhileleavingthe

reallandoutsidethewindowuntouched（省略句）.Thiswasneitherameaningfullifenoran

activitythatmirroredmyhighestintentions.HowcouldIbasemyhappinessonunrealgoals?

Inspired（過去分詞作狀語），Idecidedtostopplayingfarmgamesandfocusonreallife.Tobegin

with,Ifarmedthelandinourbackyardactively.

Farmingthereallandwasonlythebeginning,andIstartedtodomoretoenrichmyleallife.I

walkedmydoginthepark,spentmoretimewithmyfamily,climbedmountainswithmyfriends

andattendedvariousclasses（動作鏈）.Thesewereactivitiesthatallowedmetomakebetteruseof

mysparetimeanddeveloppositiveattitude.ThesentenceIhadcopiedfromthatpost（省略關(guān)系

詞的定語從句）becameamirrorIusedtoexaminehowIshouldspendmytimeandenergy（省略

關(guān)系詞的定語從句;賓語從句），enablingmetoliveahealthierandricherlife（現(xiàn)在分詞短語作

狀語）.

2勵志理想類

作者從小夢想在電視上表演，在父親的幫助和鼓勵下，作者被多倫多瑞爾森學(xué)院的廣播

電視藝術(shù)專業(yè)錄取。最終作者憑借努力和勇敢,贏得了上電視的機(jī)會，感悟到是爸爸的愛支持

著自己成為一名出色的演員。

WhenIarrivedatthestation,Iwentdirectintotheauditionandbeganmyshortperformancn.

Ifinishedmyperformancerelativelysmoothlythoughpalmsweresweating（狀語從句）.Neverin

mywildestdreamdidIimagine（倒裝）thatIwasindeed