續(xù)寫題目及思路講解與小海豹的相遇Para.1

Itwassocutelikealovelysofttoy.海豹長(zhǎng)著(cover)雪白的皮毛(fur)，兩只水汪汪的眼睛閃閃發(fā)光(glitter)。Thesealwascoveredwithsnow-whitefur,withtwowateryeyesglittering.Ithadwateryeyesandlookedatmelikeachild,whichmademedesperatelywanttokeepitsecretly.它有一雙水汪汪的眼睛，像個(gè)孩子一樣看著我，這讓我非常想把它藏起來。Para.2WecalledAnimalProtectionStation,andaworkercameover.1.worker做了什么？2.小海豹離開后我的心理活動(dòng)？3.我的感悟？釣魚經(jīng)歷??

Inmychildhood,undertheinfluenceofmyelderbrotherandmypeersintheneighborhood,Itriedanumberofoutdooractivities.Ofcourse,Iwasnotsotakenbyallofthem,whetherIwasdoingthemforthefirsttimeorcontinuously.However,fatehaditsownplansinstore.Youneverknowwhenanoutdooractivitywillchangemylife.

Thenameofthisactivityis"fishing".Abouttenyearsago,Ididn'treallyliketheideaofsittingonthebankofalakeorriver,spendinglonghoursunderthesun'sultravioletrays,whichcancausesunburnsandskindamage,andanxiouslyanticipating

somefishtobekindtotakemybait（誘餌）.Infact,Iusedtothinkofthisoutdoor

activityassomekindof"hide-and-seek-game"thatispopularwithmostyoungkids,exceptthatitwasmuchharderbecauseIcouldseemy"prey獵物"onlyaftercatchingit.

However,allthatchangedwhenIpaidavisittomyauntinthecountrysideduringasummerholiday.Iwasfinallyconvincedbyoneofmycousinstoaccompanyhimtoanearbylakeinordertodosomefishingpracticewithhim.Infact,heevenassuredmethatfishwouldeatmybaits.SoIagreedandwenttothelakeexpectingtocatchsomefish.Beforethrowingmyfishinglineintothewater,mycousindidsometricksattachingsomesortoffoodtomyfishingpole.

Learningtofishinariverorlakecanbechallengingforthebeginnerslikeme.

Theactofdroppingalineiseasy,butbeingasuccessfulfisherishard.That'swhytheycallitfishingbutnotcatching.Butwithpracticeandpatience,itcanbecomeeasierovertime.Patienceisessentialinlakefishing.Itmaytakesometimetofindtheright

spotorlure（魚餌）thatwillattractfish.

Mycousinhadtorepeatedlyremindmetokeeppatient.---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Whenwefinallyleftthelake,Ihadcaughtthreefish!--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Mycousinhadtorepeatedlyremindmetokeeppatient.-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------與釣魚動(dòng)作表達(dá)：1.找到一個(gè)合適的地點(diǎn)后，在我堂哥的指導(dǎo)下，我握緊魚竿，把魚線拋進(jìn)水里，靜靜等魚兒吃我的魚餌。Afterfindingasuitablespot,undertheguidanceofmycousin,Iheldthefishingpoletightly,threw/castthemyfishinglineintothewaterandwaitedforthefishtobitemybait/lure.2.我正要放棄這時(shí)突然我感覺到我的桿子被猛拉jerk了一下。3.一陣激動(dòng)涌上心頭，我把釣竿從水里拉出來，釣到了我的第一條魚！Asurgeofthrillsweepingoverme,IpulledthefishingpoleoutofwaterandIcaughtmyfirstfish!IwasabouttogiveupwhensuddenlyIfeltajerkofmypole.Mycousinhadtorepeatedlyremindmetokeeppatient.-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Hetaughtmehowtoadjustmypolebasedonthemovementsofthefishandhowtodeterminethebesttimetoliftthepolewhenafishwasonthehook.(準(zhǔn)備工作)Underhisguidance,Icalmeddowngradually,stayingfocusedtowaitpatiently.Thensuddenly,Ifeltajerkofmypole.Asurgeofthrillsweepingoverme,IpulledthefishingpoleoutofwaterandIcaughtmyfirstfish!

(上魚)SoexcitedwasIthatIevengaveajumpintheair.Itwasasmallone,butitwasamilestoneforme!

(感受)Whenwefinallyleftthelake,Ihadcaughtthreefish!---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------感受主題快樂

興奮

激動(dòng)。。。。。。有耐心敢于嘗試Whenwefinallyleftthelake,Ihadcaughtthreefish!Thrilledandfulfilled,Iskippedallthewayhomewithmycousin,tellinghimitwasapitythatIhadbeenmissingoutonsomuchbyavoidingthissimpleoutdooractivitybefore.

Sincethen,Ihavebecomeapassionatefishermanandlovespendingtimeoutdoors,appreciatingthesimplepleasureoflife.

Fishinghastaughtmetobepatientandpersistentandmostimportantly,ithasalsotaughtmealessonthatweshouldnotmissoutontheseopportunitiesjustbecausetheyaresimpleorjustwedonotknowhowtodothemwell.Whenwefinallyleftthelake,Ihadcaughtthreefish!

Thrilledandfulfilled,Iskippedallthewayhomewithmycousin,tellinghimitwasapitythatIhadbeenmissingoutonsomuchbyavoidingthissimpleoutdooractivitybefore.

Fishinghastaughtmetobepatientandpersistentandmostimportantly,ithasalsotaughtmealessonthatweshouldnotmissoutontheseopportunitiesjustbecausetheyaresimpleorjustwedonotknowhowtodothemwell.Sincethen,Ihavebecomeapassionatefishermanandlovespendingtimeoutdoors,appreciatingthesimplepleasureoflife.(感受)(啟示)(我的改變)

依據(jù)？釣魚經(jīng)歷

??

Inmychildhood,undertheinfluenceofmyelderbrotherandmypeersintheneighborhood,Itriedanumberofoutdooractivities.Ofcourse,Iwasnotsotakenbyallofthem,whetherIwasdoingthemforthefirsttimeorcontinuously.However,