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UnitTask2拓展寫作Postwriting一、審題：時態(tài)（一般現(xiàn)在時/一般將來時）

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要求：內(nèi)容涵蓋所有的要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯，只有極個別不影響交際的語言錯誤。第二檔：5-6分

要求：內(nèi)容涵蓋所有的要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)清楚，意思連貫，符合邏輯，但有少量語言錯誤。第三檔：3-4分

要求：內(nèi)容涵蓋大部分要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)較為清楚、連貫，基本符合邏輯，但有一些語言錯誤。第四檔：1-2分

要求：內(nèi)容涵蓋部分要點(diǎn)，能寫出一兩句正確句子，但整體表達(dá)不太連貫，語言錯誤較多。第五檔：0分

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