讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的短文?！癕om,please,”Annabeggedeagerly.“Please,letmedoitbymyself!”Shehadnevermadecookiesbyherselfbefore,butattheageofnine,shefeltcapableofhandlingmanythings.Herfriendshadbeenbakingcupcakesforayear.Yet,itseemedherparentshadlittlefaithinher.“Annaisgoingtomakecookies?Alone?”herbrother,Carl,askedwithalaugh.“Thatisgoingtobedisaster!”CarlusedbigwordstoactsmarterthanAnna.Havingabigbrothercouldbeannoying.Admittedly,Annaalwaysappearedclumsy.Butthatwasbeforesheturnednine.Shethoughtherparentsshouldrealizeshewoulddobetternow.Atherwords,aflashofuncertaintycrossedherparents’faces.Wouldtheyagree?Holdingherbreath,shehadwaitedforwhatseemedlikeages.Surprisingly,Momnodded,saying,“Okay,butpleasebecareful,andremembertotakealookatthecookbookfirst.”Fueledbydetermination,Annaracedtothekitchen.Witheachstep,therewasasenseofpurposeandconfidencegrowingwithinher.ShehadalreadydoneitwithMomamilliontimesbefore.Puttingthecookbookaside,shegotdowntobakingcookiesfrommemory,breakingeggs,droppingacoldstickofbutter,addingsaltandthen…um…yes,mixingitwell!Usingamixerwaseasy.Sheturnedonthemixeratthemediumspeed—andwhoa.Whoa.Whoa!Buttersplattered(飛濺)everywhere,makingthekitcheninamess.Collectingherself,sheturnedbacktothemixingbowlandstartedagain.Thistimewithsofterbutter.Annaplacedroundedspoonfulsofmixtureontothecookiepanandputitintotheoven(烤爐).Withinafewminutes,afantasticsmellfilledthekitchenthesmellofcookiesuccess!Shewasgoingtosilenceallthosedoubts.Nomoreeyerollingfromherbigbrother.Nomore“You’retooyoung,Anna”fromherparents.Shebelievedshewasgrownupandmatureenoughtobereliedon.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。ThemomentAnnapulledthepanoutoftheoven,Carlsteppedintothekitchen._________________________________________________________________Nowshedecidedtohaveanothertry,carefullyfollowingthecookbook._________________________________________________________________安娜烤餅干故事續(xù)寫續(xù)寫分析（兩段）?第一段分析：第一段以“卡爾走進廚房”為切入點，通過“sneered”“roared”等詞匯生動刻畫卡爾嘲笑的神態(tài)與語言，與安娜“beamedwithpride”的驕傲形成強烈反差，瞬間將情節(jié)推向矛盾沖突的高潮。“Anna’sheartsank...tearswelledupinhereyes”細膩描寫安娜從滿懷期待到信心崩潰的心理變化過程，不僅展現(xiàn)出她脆弱的一面，也為下文再次嘗試埋下伏筆，同時進一步強化了她渴望被認可卻遭遇挫折的情感張力，使讀者能深刻感受到她的失落，推動故事朝著轉(zhuǎn)折方向發(fā)展。?第二段分析：第二段圍繞安娜再次嘗試展開，“measuredeachingredientprecisely”“softenedthebutter...mixedthebatterslowly”等細節(jié)描寫，突出她吸取教訓(xùn)后嚴謹認真的態(tài)度，與第一次制作時的莽撞形成鮮明對比?！癟hefamilygathered...praisedtheirdelicioustaste”通過家人的正面反饋，從側(cè)面烘托出安娜此次嘗試的成功，圓滿解決前文的矛盾。結(jié)尾“Annagrinned...notjustindependent”以安娜的感悟點明主題，將烤餅干的經(jīng)歷升華為對成長內(nèi)涵的思考，使故事在情感和思想層面都得到升華，讓讀者在感受故事趣味性的同時，收獲關(guān)于成長的啟示。?翻譯全文?安娜剛把烤盤從烤箱里拿出來，卡爾就走進了廚房?！白屛铱纯次覀冃『姹簬煹慕茏?，”他冷笑著，從她肩頭探過頭來。安娜驕傲地笑著，向他展示著金黃色的餅干。但卡爾的笑聲擊碎了她的喜悅?！八鼈兛雌饋砀袷^，哪像餅干！”他嚷道，指著那些又厚又凹凸不平的餅干。安娜的心一沉。她咬了一口，餅干外皮硬邦邦的，里面還是黏糊糊的面團。她的信心瞬間崩塌，淚水在眼眶里打轉(zhuǎn)?，F(xiàn)在，她決定再試一次，認真照著食譜做。她精確地稱量每一種食材，把黃油軟化到合適的程度，然后按照說明慢慢攪拌面糊。攪拌機平穩(wěn)地嗡嗡作響，沒有出現(xiàn)任何飛濺。她把新的面糊放進烤箱，設(shè)定好時間，目不轉(zhuǎn)睛地盯著。終于，定時器響了。這次，餅干形狀完美圓潤，泛著誘人的金黃色光澤。全家人都聚在廚房里，紛紛稱贊餅干美味可口。安娜咧嘴笑了，心中滿是自豪。她明白了，成長意味著要有耐心、做事細心，而不僅僅是獨立。?故事線?九歲的安娜渴望證明自己，請求獨自做餅干，卻遭到哥哥卡爾的嘲笑和父母的懷疑。?父母最終同意，安娜滿懷信心地進入廚房，憑借記憶制作餅干，過程中因操作不當導(dǎo)致黃油飛濺，廚房一片狼藉，但她重新調(diào)整后繼續(xù)制作，并將餅干放入烤箱。?安娜滿心期待地取出烤好的餅干，卡爾這時走進廚房，對餅干進行嘲諷，安娜發(fā)現(xiàn)餅干確實存在外硬內(nèi)軟的問題，信心受挫，眼淚在眼眶打轉(zhuǎn)。?安娜決定再次嘗試，這次她嚴格按照食譜，精確稱量食材、規(guī)范操作，仔細觀察烤制過程。?安娜成功烤出形狀完美、色澤誘人的餅干，得到全家人的稱贊，她也從中領(lǐng)悟到成長不僅是獨立，還需要耐心和細心。?短語?peeroverone'sshoulder從某人肩頭探看?beamwithpride驕傲地微笑?shatterone'sjoy擊碎某人的喜悅?crumble崩潰；瓦解?wellup涌出；流出?measureprecisely精確測量?setatimer設(shè)置定時器?feelproud感到自豪?主旨升華句?JustasAnna'sjourneyofbakingcookiestaughther,truegrowthisnotasuddenleapbutaseriesofcarefulsteps,blendingindependencewithpatienceandattentiontodetail.?正如安娜烤餅干的經(jīng)歷教會她的那樣，真正的成長不是一蹴而就的飛躍，而是一系列謹慎的腳步，將獨立與耐心、細致融合在一起。?Inthekitchenoflife,therecipeformaturityisn'tjustabouttakingonchallengesalone;it'saboutlearningfromfailuresandapproachingtaskswithcarefulconsideration,justlikeAnnadidwithhercookies.?在生活的廚房里，成熟的秘訣不僅僅是獨自接受挑戰(zhàn)，更是從失敗中學習，認真對待每一項任務(wù)，就像安娜重新制作餅干時那樣。?Anna'sbakingadventureremindsusthatthepathtoselfdiscoveryispavedwithbothattemptsandsetbacks,andit'sintheprocessofcorrectingmistakesthatwetrulygrowup.?安娜的烘焙之旅提醒我們，自我發(fā)現(xiàn)的道路上布滿了嘗試與挫折，正是在糾正錯誤的過程中，我們才真正長大。?Likethetransformationofrawingredientsintodeliciouscookies,ourgrowthfromchildhoodtomaturityrequirestime,patience,andthewillingnesstoadjustourapproachwhenthingsgowrong.?就像將原材料變成美味的餅干一樣，我們從童年到成熟的成長需要時間、耐心，以及在事情出錯時調(diào)整方法的意愿。?Anna'sstoryshowsthatthegreatestlessonsingrowingupenotfromeffortlesssuccessbutfromtheperseveranceandselfreflectioninspiredbyinitialfailures,justashersecondattemptatbakingcookiesledtobothskillimprovementandadeeperunderstandingofherself.?安娜的故事表明，成長中最寶貴的經(jīng)驗并非來自輕易的成功，而是源于最初失敗所激發(fā)的毅力和自我反思，正如她第二次嘗試烤餅干，不僅提升了技能，也讓她對自己有了更深刻的認識。?寫作示范?示范一?ThemomentAnnapulledthepanoutoftheoven,Carlsteppedintothekitchen.“Didyoureallythinkyoucouldbake?”hescoffed,pokingatacookie.Anna’ssmilefadedasshesawcracksformingonthesurface.Shetookabite,onlytotasteburntbitterness.Humiliationwashedoverher,andsheranoutofthekitchen,tearsstreamingdownherface.?Nowshedecidedtohaveanothertry,carefullyfollowingthecookbook.Shewatchedcookingvideos,tooknotes,andpracticedeachsteponpaperfirst.Inthekitchen,sheworkedwithutmostconcentration.Whenthecookiescameout,theysmelledheavenly.Thefamilywasamazed.Annarealizedthatgrowingupmeantfacingfailuresbravelyandusingthemassteppingstonestosuccess.?示范二?ThemomentAnnapulledthepanoutoftheoven,Carlsteppedintothekitchen.“Theselooklikeexperimentsgonewrong,”hesnickered.Anna’shandstrembledassheexaminedthemisshapencookies.Onebiterevealedagrittytexture.Embarrassed,shehidthepanbehindherback.Butasparkofdeterminationremainedinhereyes.?Nowshedecidedtohaveanothertry,carefullyfollowingthecookbook.ShesoughtadvicefromMom,whotaughtherthesecretsofbaking.Annameasuredwithprecisionandbakedwithcare.Whenthenewbatchemerged,theywerepictureperfect.Asthefamilyenjoyedthecookies,Annaunderstoodthatgrowingupwasaboutlearning,improving,andnevergivingupononeself.?參考答案Paragraph1：ThemomentAnnapulledthepanoutoftheoven,Carlsteppedintothekitchen.Therewasasmuggrinonhisface.“Well,well,well,Anna,itseemsyourcookingadventureendedindisaster,justasIpredicted,”heteasedhistomedrippingwithsuperiority.Anna’sheartsankasshesurveyedthemisshapen,burntcookiesonthetray.Shehadunderestimatedtheimportanceofmeasuringingredientsaccurately,resultinginanunappetizi