湖南省·天壹名校聯(lián)盟2026屆高三起點考試英語閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。IalmostlosthimIlovewritinginmydiary.It'showIgetallthethoughtsandworriesoutofmyheadandmakesenseofthem.TherearesomanyextramemoriesinthepagesofthisoneifIturnbacktolastSeptember.I'llneverforgetthatday.Thatweek.Itwastheworstofmylife.(給出背景信息，整體評價)Stormyasheepdoghasalwaysbeenapartofourfamily.IrememberwhenIwasoldenoughIlearnedtoplaywithhim.Heseemedtobemybrother.Nexttomydiary,he'salwaysbeenthepersonItelleverythingto.AndIgotintothehabitoftakingmybooksuptothepaddock(牧場)tostudy,leaningontheshelterandwatchingStormyherdthesheep(現(xiàn)在分詞短語做伴隨動作).Itwasasunny,coolevening.IwasjustclosingmybookswhenmyeyewasdrawntoStormy.Hewasstandinginthefarcornerofthepaddock,wherethefliesaretheworst,andlookingathisbelly.Somethingwasdifferentabouthim,butIcouldn'tworkoutwhat.Iwalkeddownthefieldtowardshimandhewanderedoffupthehill.Maybeithadjustbeentheflies?ButthenaggingfeelingI'dhadearlierjustwouldn'tgoaway.AfterdinnerIaskedMumforahamsausagefromthefridgeandwentbackupthefield.Hewaspawingatthegroundanddidn'tevenseemtonoticemeapproach.Inoticedstraightawaythathelookedquitesweaty,eveninthecooleveningbreeze,andhepletelyignoredthesausagewhenIofferedittohim.MyheartsankIknewrightthenthatsomethingwasreallywrong.Mumstillsaysshe'sneverheardmeshoutasloudasIdidthen(高潮).AllIrememberisthesoundofthegateopeningandherrushingthrough,closelyfollowedbyDad.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:MaybeI'doverreacted?Paragraph2:Overthenextweek,Stormyhadtostayintherecoveryroomofthehospital.

湖南省·天壹名校聯(lián)盟2026屆高三起點考試英語閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。IalmostlosthimIlovewritinginmydiary.It'showIgetallthethoughtsandworriesoutofmyheadandmakesenseofthem,TherearesomanyextramemoriesinthepagesofthisoneifIturnbacktolastSeptember,I'llneverforgetthatday.Thatweek,Itwastheworstofmylife.Stormyasheepdoghasalwaysbeenapartofourfamily.IrememberwhenIwasoldenoughIlearnedtoplaywithhim.Heseemedtobemybrother.Nexttomydiary,he'salwaysbeenthepersonItelleverythingto.AndIgotintothehabitoftakingmybooksuptothepaddock(牧場)tostudy,leaningontheshelterandwatchingStormyherdthesheep.evening.Isunny,coolevening.IwasjustclosingmybookswhenmyeyewasdrawntoStormy.Hewasstandinginthefarcornerofthepaddock,wherethefliesaretheworst,andlookingathisbelly(肚子).Somethingwasdifferentabouthim,butIcouldn'tworkoutwhat.1walkeddownthefieldtowardshimandhewanderedoffupthehill.Maybeithadjustbeentheflies?Butthenagging(讓人不安的)feelingI'dhadearlierjustwouldn'tgoaway.AfterdinnerIaskedMumforahamsausagefromthefridgeandwentbackupthefield.Hewaspawingatthegroundanddidn'tevenseemtonoticemeapproach.Inoticedstraightawaythathelookedquitesweaty,eveninthecooleveningbreeze,andhepletelyignoredthesausagewhenIofferedittohim.MyheartsankIknewrightthenthatsomethingwasreallywrong.Mumstillsaysshe'sneverheardmeshoutasloudasIdidthen,AllIrememberisthesoundofthegateopeningandherrushingthrough,closelyfollowedbyDad.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:MaybeI'doverreacted?Paragraph2:Overthenextweek,Stormyhadtostayintherecoveryroomofthehospital.

1.文章分類及續(xù)寫思路分析文章類型：人與動物的情感紐帶+危機事件續(xù)寫思路：情感主線：通過主人公對牧羊犬Stormy的擔(dān)憂、自責(zé)和最終康復(fù)的喜悅，強化人與動物的深厚情感。沖突解決：需圍繞Stormy的病情展開，通過獸醫(yī)診斷、家庭支持、主人公的心理成長完成故事閉環(huán)。伏筆呼應(yīng)：需回應(yīng)原文中“flies”“sweaty”“ignoredsausage”等細節(jié)，暗示Stormy的健康問題（如中暑、中毒或寄生蟲感染）。續(xù)寫布局：段落內(nèi)容框架關(guān)鍵任務(wù)第一段自我懷疑→緊急送醫(yī)銜接“shout”“parentsrushing”動作，過渡到獸醫(yī)診斷第二段康復(fù)過程→情感升華描寫Stormy的恢復(fù)和主人公的心理成長續(xù)寫注意事項：承接原文：動作鏈：父母沖進牧場→送醫(yī)→獸醫(yī)檢查（需與“pawingground”“sweaty”關(guān)聯(lián)）。心理描寫：延續(xù)“naggingfeeling”到自責(zé)（“MaybeI'doverreacted?”）。設(shè)計技巧：加入獸醫(yī)對話解釋病因（如中暑），呼應(yīng)“sunnyevening”“flies”。用環(huán)境描寫烘托情緒（如醫(yī)院冷光燈→康復(fù)后陽光）。2.故事山模式與原文分析故事山：開端：主人公與Stormy的日常（牧場學(xué)習(xí)、傾訴習(xí)慣）。發(fā)展：發(fā)現(xiàn)Stormy異常（抓地、流汗、拒食）。高潮：尖叫呼救，父母趕來。回落：送醫(yī)診斷（續(xù)寫段落1）。結(jié)局：康復(fù)與情感升華（續(xù)寫段落2）。銜接點與關(guān)鍵分析：分析角度內(nèi)容原文反應(yīng)句/細節(jié)人物刻畫主人公敏感、依賴Stormy“nexttomydiary,he'sbeenthepersonItelleverythingto”情感層次從擔(dān)憂→恐慌→自責(zé)→釋然“Myheartsank”“naggingfeeling”關(guān)鍵情節(jié)點Stormy異常行為引發(fā)危機“pawingatground”“ignoredsausage”語言特色口語化、內(nèi)心獨白“Maybeithadjustbeentheflies?”心理描寫不安感持續(xù)“thenaggingfeelingwouldn'tgoaway”動作描寫Stormy的異常動作standing...lookingstanding...lookingatbelly”“wanderedoff”環(huán)境描寫天氣暗示潛在病因（炎熱）“sunny,coolevening”“fliesaretheworst”隱含主題人與動物的無條件信任與救贖日記象征情感寄托，Stormy象征家庭紐帶伏筆/沖突點Stormy的健康危機（中暑/中毒）“flies”“sweaty”“ignoredfood”解決方案緊急送醫(yī)+專業(yè)治療續(xù)寫需通過獸醫(yī)對話明確病因續(xù)寫段落設(shè)計Paragraph1:承接“shout”：父母沖進牧場，父親抱起Stormy沖向卡車，母親安慰哭泣的“我”。獸醫(yī)檢查時，“我”自責(zé)是否反應(yīng)過度（呼應(yīng)開頭日記功能）。獸醫(yī)指出中暑癥狀（鏈接“sunny”“sweaty”），需立即輸液。Paragraph2:康復(fù)期：Stormy虛弱但尾巴輕搖，主人公每天讀日記給它聽。環(huán)境對比：醫(yī)院消毒水味→牧場青草香，Stormy重新追逐羊群。主題升華：日記最后一頁寫“Stormytaughtmetotrustmyinstincts”。3.讀后續(xù)寫動作/環(huán)境/心理描寫語料動作描寫類Hepawedatthegroundanxiously.他焦躁不安地抓著地面。Shebentdowntocheckhisbreathing.她彎下身查看它的呼吸。Stormystaggeredafewstepsandcollapsed.Stormy踉蹌幾步后倒下了。Irushedforward,barelyholdingbacktears.我沖上前去，幾乎忍不住眼淚。Heturnedhisheadawayfromthefood.它把頭轉(zhuǎn)向一邊，不理食物。Daddashedthroughthegateatmycry.聽到我喊聲，爸爸沖進了柵欄。Stormyraisedhiseyesslowly,histailstill.Stormy慢慢抬起眼睛，尾巴一動不動。Ireachedoutmytremblinghandtotouchhim.我顫抖地伸出手去觸碰他。Henudgedmyhandweaklywithhisnose.它用鼻子微弱地碰了碰我的手。Sheheldtheleashtightly,heartpounding.她緊緊抓住牽引繩，心跳加速。心理描寫類Awaveofdreadwashedoverme.一股恐懼的浪潮涌上心頭。Icouldn'tshakeoffthenaggingfeeling.我無法擺脫那種揮之不去的不安。Myheartsankatthesight.看到那一幕，我心里一沉。Athousandterrifyingthoughtscrowdedmymind.無數(shù)可怕的念頭涌上心頭。Iwastornbetweenhopeandfear.我在希望與恐懼之間掙扎。Mybreathcaughtinmythroat.我呼吸一滯，喉嚨發(fā)緊。Ifeltalumprisinginmythroat.我喉嚨哽咽，一陣哽咽涌上來。RelieffloodedmybodywhenIsawhimwaghistail.當(dāng)我看到它搖尾巴時，全身涌上一陣輕松。Ikeptblamingmyselffornotnoticingearlier.我不停地責(zé)備自己沒早點發(fā)現(xiàn)。Deepdown,Ifearedtheworst.在內(nèi)心深處，我最擔(dān)心最壞的結(jié)局。環(huán)境描寫Theeveningsundippedlowbehindthehills.夕陽緩緩落下，躲在山后。Thecoolbreezecarriedthescentofgrass.涼爽的微風(fēng)中帶著青草的味道。Ablanketofsilencefelloverthefield.牧場陷入一片寂靜。Cricketschirpedfaintlyinthedistance.遠處蟋蟀隱約叫著。Theskyturnedfromgoldtoduskygrey.天空由金色變?yōu)榘祷摇hepaddockwasbathedinfadinglight.牧場沐浴在漸漸消失的光線中。Stormystoodstillasshadowsstretched.隨著影子拉長，Stormy一動不動地站著。Thelightsfromthehouseblinkedinthedistance.遠處的屋子亮起了燈。AhushfelloverthesurroundingsasIwaited.我等著時，四周一片寂靜。Thesoftrustleofleavesechoedmyunease.樹葉輕輕的沙沙聲仿佛回應(yīng)了我的不安。高級詞替換基礎(chǔ)詞高級替換詞場景分類saddevastated,griefstricken心情低落、擔(dān)憂rundash,sprint,race緊急奔跑，情緒緊張lookgaze,glance,stare,observe情感動作、細節(jié)觀察saymurmur,whisper,cry,shout表達強度、情緒遞進walkwander,stumble,stride動作細節(jié)、情緒體現(xiàn)固定搭配與詞法解析pawatsth?意為“用爪子扒、撓”；常用于動物焦躁/本能動作?例句：Thedogkeptpawingatthedoor.anaggingfeeling?意為“揮之不去的不安感”，形容內(nèi)心預(yù)感或焦慮；常用于心理描寫?例句：Ihadanaggingfeelingthatsomethingwaswrong.heartsank?“心沉了下來”，形容失落或突然的驚恐?例句：Herheartsankwhenshesawtheemptykennel.ignoresth?“忽視”，寫動物反常行為時常用?例句：Heignoredhisfavoritetoypletely.shoutatthetopofone’slungs?“拼命地喊叫”，表達極度焦急或恐慌?例句：Ishoutedatthetopofmylungsforhelp.可積累詞匯與短語詞匯/短語詞性詞義近義詞反義詞例句1例句2staggerv.踉蹌地走stumblestrideHestaggeredback,barelyabletostand.Stormystaggeredafewsteps,thenlaydown.recoveryn.康復(fù)；恢復(fù)healing,restorationdeteriorationHisrecoverytookaweek.Stormy'srecoverywasslowbutsteady.collapsev./n.倒下；崩潰falldown,faintriseHecollapsedfromexhaustion.Thedogcollapsednearthefence.anxiouslyadv.焦急地；擔(dān)憂地nervously,uneasilycalmlyIwaitedanxiouslyfornews.ShewatchedStormyanxiously.breezen.微風(fēng)wind,guststillnessAbreezestirredthetrees.Thebreezecarriedthescentofhay.

PossibleVersion(3)Version1Paragraph1:MaybeI'doverreacted?MaybeIhadjustbeenoverlysensitiveafteralongday.ButthemomentDadtouchedStormy’sbelly,hissmilevanished.“He’snotreactingwell,”hesaidinalowvoice,glancingat(現(xiàn)在分詞短語做伴隨動作)Mumwithconcernwrittenalloverhisface(過去分詞短語做后置定語).Withoutsayinganotherword,theygrabbedablanket,wrappedStormycarefully,andrushedhimtotheanimalhospital(動作串并列),headlightscuttingthroughthedusk(獨立主格).Isatinthebackseat,grippingmydiarytightly(現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨動作),myheartpoundinglikeadrum(獨立主格刻畫人物情緒).Whenwearrived,thevetranaquickscan,thenshookhishead.“It’sstomachtorsion—weneedtooperaterightaway.”Hiswordshitmelikeacoldwave.TearswelledupinmyeyesastheytookStormyintotheoperatingroom.Minutescrawledbylikehours,theclocktickinglouderwitheachpassingsecond(獨立主格，擬人).Whenthevetfinallyemergedwithatiredbutreassuringsmile,webreathedacollectivesighofrelief.Stormyhadmadeit.Paragraph2:Overthenextweek,Stormyhadtostayintherecoveryroomofthehospital.Ivisitedhimeveryafternoon,settingmydiarybesidehiscageandsoftlyreadingaloud(現(xiàn)在分詞短語做伴隨動作),evenwhenheseemedtoosleepytonotice.Itoldhimaboutmyday,aboutschool,andeventhesheep(名詞并列)heusuallywatchedfromthefield.Onthethirdday,heliftedhisheadslightlyatthesoundofmyvoice,hisearstwitchingjustalittle(獨立主格).Thattinyresponsefilledmewithhope.Thevetsaidhisrecoverywasgoingwell,mainlybecausewehadactedsoquickly.Oncehecamehome,Imovedmystudyspotclosertowhereherested,soIcouldkeephimpanyashehealed.Slowly,hisenergyreturned.Monthslater,hewasstrongenoughtochasebutterfliesinthefieldagain.Andnow,asIsitleaningagainstthepaddockshelter(現(xiàn)在分詞短語做伴隨動作),diaryopenonmylapandStormytrottingaroundthesheeplikeoldtimes(獨立主格),Irealizethismomentisagift.Mywordsnolongercarryfear,butquietjoy—thekindthatesfromknowingwhatalmostslippedaway.亮點語言點類別表達方式示例句?現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語grippingmydiarytightly,readingaloud“Isatinthebackseat,grippingmydiarytightly…”?獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)theclocktickinglouderwitheachpassingsecond“Minutescrawledby,theclocktickinglouder…”?比喻/擬人myheartpoundinglikeadrum形象表達緊張情緒?過去完成時Stormyhadmadeit.用于事件發(fā)生先后?情緒描寫層遞concernwrittenalloverhisface,hitmelikeacoldwave情緒多層表達與升級語料與替換表達積累：原詞升級表達同義詞例句tiredexhausted/drained/wornoutsleepy,weakHiseyeslookedexhausted,butheliftedhishead.seriouscritical/lifethreateningsevereThevetsaiditwasacriticalcondition.saidmuttered/whispered/announced/respondedstatedDadmuttered,“He’snotreactingwell.”tearstearsstreamed/welledup/brimmedoversobsTearswelledupinmyeyesastheytookStormyaway.lookgaze/glance/stare/observepeerHeglancedatMumwithconcerninhiseyes.Version2Paragraph1:MaybeI'doverreacted?YetthesightofStormylyingonthecoldexaminationtable(現(xiàn)在分詞短語做后置定語)mademystomachtwistwithanxiety.Thevetgentlypressedhisbellyandfrownedslightly.“Hemayhaveeatensomethingbad,”shesaid,“We'llrunsometests,justincase.”Inodded,thoughmymindwasspinning.Icouldn’tbearthethoughtofgoinghomewithouthim.AsMumtriedtocalmmedown,Isatinsilence,clutchingthecollar(現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨動作)I'dtakenoffhisneck.Theroomsmeltofantisepticandfear(無靈主語句，主動表被動).Throughtheglasswindow,IcouldseeStormy’seyesfollowingme.Thatsinglelooksaidmorethanwordsevercould—trust,confusion,andpain(名詞并列).IfonlyIhadnoticedhissymptomsearlier(虛擬語氣).MaybeIwouldn’tbesittinghere,helpless(adj做主語補語).Theguiltgnawedatme.Forthefirsttime,IrealizedhowdeeplyresponsibleIfeltforhim.Paragraph2:Overthenextweek,Stormyhadtostayintherecoveryroomofthehospital.Everydayafterschool,Irushedtovisithim,bringing(現(xiàn)在分詞短語做伴隨動作)alonghisfavoritetoyandreadingaloudfrommydiary.Atfirst,hebarelyreacted.Butbythethirdday,heliftedhisheadweaklyandgaveatinywagofhistail.Myheartsoared.Ibegantowriteinmydiaryagain,notjusttopouroutmyworries,buttorecordeachsmallsignofhisrecovery.OnFriday,whenthevetfinallysaidhecouldehome,Iburstintotears.Standingatthepaddockthatweekend(現(xiàn)在分詞短語做伴隨動作),Stormybesidemeandsheepinthedistance(獨立主格),IfeltacalmnessIhadn’tknownindays.Ilaidoutmybooks,leaningagainsttheshelterlikebefore(現(xiàn)在分詞短語做伴隨動作).Lifereturnedtonormal—onlynow,itfeltdeeper.Ihadalmostlosthim(虛擬語氣),butIgainedsomethingmore:asenseofwhatloveandresponsibilitytrulymeant.地道搭配與替換：gnawatsb→worry,hauntburstintotears→breakdown,startcryingsuddenlymyheartsoared→Ifeltoverwhelmedwithjoyrecordsignsofhisrecovery→trackhisimprovement情緒/動作亮點詞匯：情緒：twistwithanxiety,trust,confusion,pain,guiltgnawed動作：clutch,followwithhiseyes,wagofhistailVersion3Paragraph1:MaybeI'doverreacted?ButasDadspedtowardtheanimalhospital,Stormy’slaboredbreathingandglazedeyestoldmeotherwise.MyhandstrembledasIclutchedhisfur,whispering(現(xiàn)在分詞短語做伴隨動作),“Holdon,boy.”Momsqueezedmyshoulder,hervoicesteadybutwarm(獨立主格):“We’llgethimhelp.”ThemomentthevettookStormyfromDad’sarms,mythroattightened.Thesterilesmellofantisepticfilledtheair,andfluorescentlightscastharshshadowsonthewhitewalls.Thevet,afteraquickexamination,saidgrimly,“Heatstroke.Histemperature’sdangerouslyhigh.”Mystomachtwisted—hadIignoredthesignsearlier?(had型虛擬語氣)Theflies,hisrestlessness…Ishould’veknown.Paragraph2:Overthenextweek,Stormyhadtostayintherecoveryroomofthehospital.Eachdayafterschool,Irushedtohisside,readingaloudfrommydiary(現(xiàn)在分詞短語做伴隨動作)—thesamestoriesI’doncetoldhiminthepaddock.Hisearstwitchedweaklyatmyvoice,andthoughhistailbarelywagged,thevetassuredmehewasimproving.Bythefifthday,hemanagedasmalllickonmyhand,andrelieffloodedmelikesunlightbreakingthroughstormclouds.Whenwefinallybroughthimhome,helimpedstraighttohisfavoritespotwhereheusuallystanding.Watchinghimnappeacefully(現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨動作),IrealizedhowcloseI’detolosinghim—andhowfiercelyI’dfighttokeephimsafe.官方：MaybeI'doverreacted?MaybeStormywasjusttired?But