/32020屆南京市鹽城市高三年級第二次模擬考試英語試題作文解析剛剛拿到作文題目，一看是親情，基本一氣呵成，因為親情的句子在漢語中俯首皆是，譬如誰言寸草心報得三春暉。在我寫完后，我心里有個疑慮的，親情應該包含兄弟姐妹之間的親情，父母和孩子之間的親情。所以我努力在其中加了一個siblings。但是寫建議的時候還是偏重父母。親情話題在江蘇高考中很少見（僅僅一年漫畫作文你能為父母做什么）。請考生注意我的思維和用詞。題12020南京鹽城二模作文題目：LateAfternoon,nominatedforbestanimatedshortfilmin2019,gainspopularityamongpeople.ThenineandahalfminuteshortfocusesonEmily,anoldladywithAlzheimer,whofindsherselflosinganyconnectiontotheworld.Afterherdaughter'stendercare,sheexplorespartofhermemoriesandrelivesdifferentmomentsfromherlife.Oneafternoon,whenshewashavingafternoonteawithbiscuits,shecalleduphercarefreechildhood.Whenshesawthepictureframe,sherememberedherromanticdating,thepleasureofraisingherdaughterandherdaughter'sname-Kate.Atlast,sherecognizedherdaughterandtheytightlyhuggedeachother.ThewarmpaintingstyleandEmily'sslowlyrecollectingexperiencearetouching.“It'ssomovingthatIcouldn'thelpholdingbacktears!Myparentslive5,000milesaway.IwannavisitthemthisLaborDay."oneviewersaid.【寫作內容】1?用約30個單詞概述上述內容；2?談談你對親情的理解（至少兩點）；3?結合自身實際，談談你會如何回報親情。說明：文章親情本來我不是翻譯為familylove，而是affectionbetweenfamilymembers，后來看范文更簡潔，采納。寫概要：2019sawashortanimatedfilmbecomeahitwithanoldwomansufferingAlzheimerwhorecoveredmemoryinherdaughter'scare.Itstheme-familylove-encouragespeopletofollowsuit.（32wds）指導：圍繞一件事和其影響來寫事情：1.電影流行；2?電影情節(jié)（老人在女兒照顧下恢復記憶）影響：人們效仿正文：要點一：看法Chinesetraditionhasitthatfamilyloveservesasthebackboneofthewholesocietyandkeepsitrunningonthetrack.Familyloveisahavenfromthenoiseandbustleofthecitywherechildrencanreceivematerialsupportandmentalsecurityfromparentsandsiblings.Familyloveisthebrightsunshinethatdispelsoldpeople'sloneliness,depressionandanxiety.說明：主題句：親情對于社會的重要性（用到了比喻backbone,track）支撐句：一分為二來分析：對孩子和對父母的意義。都用到了隱喻修辭。詞語：thebackbone脊柱keepitrunningonthetrack讓它正常運行haven避風港thenoiseandbustleofthecity城市的喧囂mentalsecurity精神安全dispel驅散要點二：建議However,itisdefinitelyanarttomaintainfamilyloveespeciallyinacommercializedsociety.Ipaymoreattentiontothepsychologicalstateofmyparentsandmakeitaroutinetocommunicatewiththem.Timepermitted,I'dliketovisitthemregularly.Inmyheart,familylovedeservescherishingjustbecausefamilymeansthatfatherandmother,Iloveyou.(全文共155words)說明：這段要求結合自己的例子，所以必須說自己的做法。這個好寫，就是：?；丶铱纯础Ｗ詈笠痪鋺撌橇咙c，其實這個說法早就有了，我記得完形中見過。官方版本：(非常值得學習)LateAfternooashortfilmaboutanoldwomanwithAlzheimerrecallingsomesweetmemoriesinherlifewithherdaughter'scare,hastouchedviewers'heartandgainedpopularity.(32words)Familyloveisthemostpreciousgiftandsupportsusthroughthickandthin.Itnotonlymeansparents'unconditionallovefortheirchildrenbutalsochildren'sfeedback.Itisthebasicpoweroflifethatwecouldn'tlivewithout.Furthermore,eachoneofusshouldbegratefulforthefamilylovewereceiveandlearntoexpressourconcernandcaretoourfamilymembersthroughwordsordeedstostrengthenthevaluablebondbetweenus.Familyloveisbynomeansemptytalk.Therefore,Ialwayscommunicatewithmyparentsandrespecttheirviewpointsaboutmychoice