SectionⅤWriting建議信寫作指導(dǎo)eq\a\vs4\al()文體感知建議信是向收信人就某事提出自己的建議或忠告的一種文體。寫信時要寫明寫信的原因、建議的內(nèi)容、提出建議的理由，提出的理由要合情合理，語氣一定要委婉和緩。eq\a\vs4\al()增分佳句1．常用的開頭語①Iknowyouarenowhavingtroublecommunicatingwithothers，andyoumayoftenfeellonely．我知道你現(xiàn)在在與人交流方面有些麻煩，你也可能經(jīng)常感到孤獨(dú)。②I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell．很高興收到你的來信，詢問我關(guān)于學(xué)好漢語的意見。③Turntomewheneveryoufeelpuzzled，andIammorethanwillingtogiveyousomemoreadvice．當(dāng)你困惑的時候就來找我吧，我很樂意給你一些更多的建議。④Herearesometipstohelpyou．/Hereareafewsuggestionstohelpyou．這里有能幫助你的一些建議。2．主體部分常用表達(dá)①First(ly)，whynotjoinaclub？Ifyoudothis，youcanmakefriends．首先，為什么不參加一個俱樂部？如果你這樣做的話，就會交到朋友。②Second(ly)，youshould/cantrytotalkwithothers．Then/Thatway，youwillfeelbetter．其次，你應(yīng)該盡力與人交談。這樣，你會感覺好點(diǎn)。③Third(ly)，itwouldbeagoodideaifyoureadabookorlistentomusic．Bydoingthis，youwillcalmyourselfdown．第三，如果你看書或聽音樂將會是個不錯的主意。通過這樣做，你會使自己平靜下來。④Lastbutnotleast，youshouldtalkwithherfirst．最后但同樣重要的是，你應(yīng)該先和她談一談。3．常用的結(jié)束語①Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful．希望你會發(fā)現(xiàn)這些辦法有用。②Astimegoeson，peoplewillknowyoubetterandwillliketomakefriendswithyouifyoucanfollowthesesuggestionsabove．如果你遵從以上建議，隨著時間的推移，人們會更加理解你，會愿意和你交朋友的。③Ibelieveyoucantrytoovercomethesedifficultiesonlybyworkinghard．我相信，通過努力，你會克服這些困難的。eq\a\vs4\al()寫作模板Dear________，I’mgladtoknowthatyouaskmeforsomeadviceon________．(引出問題)Herearesomeusefultips．First，learntocalmyourselfdownwhenfacing________．Youdon’thaveto________．Second，itisveryimportantto________．Then，italsohelpsto________．Besides，itshouldbeagoodideato________．Youcanalso________．(此三句用不同句式提出建議)Onlyinthiswaycanyoudoitbetter．(倒裝句提升句式)Asto________，Isuggest________(有時根據(jù)需要具體到某一方面)．Inaddition，________(其他建議)．I’msure________(預(yù)測可能的結(jié)果，給對方以行動的信心)．Ihopeyouwillfindmyadvicehelpful．________(祈使句)，andyouwillbe________(好的結(jié)果)．Bestwishes!Yours，LiMing經(jīng)典例題eq\a\vs4\al()寫作要求假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Jim所在的學(xué)校要組織學(xué)生來中國旅行，有兩條路線可以選擇：“長江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim來信希望你能給些建議。請你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：1．你建議的路線；2．你的理由；3．你的祝愿。注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearJim，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHuaeq\a\vs4\al()審題謀篇eq\a\vs4\al()詞匯推敲1．推薦 recommend2．此外 moreover3．景色 scenery4．令人驚異的 amazing5．選擇 choiceeq\a\vs4\al()遣詞造句1．完成句子①長江是中國最長的河流，并且是中華文明的母親河之一。The_Yangtze_River_is_the_longest_river_and_one_of_the_mother_rivers_of_the_Chinese_civilization．②我更喜歡沿著長江旅行。I_prefer_the_tour_along_the_Yangtze_River．③沿江景色令人驚嘆。The_scenery_along_the_river_is_amazing．④沿江有很多著名景點(diǎn)。There_are_many_well-known_sightseeing_spots_along_the_river．2．句式升級⑤用同位語結(jié)構(gòu)連接①②句I_prefer_the_tour_along_the_Yangtze_River，the_longest_river_and_one_of_the_mother_rivers_of_the_Chinese_civilization．⑥用with結(jié)構(gòu)連接③④句The_scenery_along_the_river_is_amazing，with_many_well-known_sightseeing_spots．eq\a\vs4\al()妙筆成篇________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion：Dear_Jim，I’mhappytoreceiveyourletterandknowyou’recomingtoChina．OfthetwotripstotheYangtzeRiverandMountTai，botharehighlyrecommended．Personally，IpreferthetouralongtheYangtzeRiver，thelongestriverandoneofthemotherriversoftheChinesecivilization．YoucanlearnalotaboutthehistoryofChinaandChinesepeople．Moreover，thesceneryalongtheriverisamazing，withmanywell-knownsightseeingspots．That’swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzeRiverisabetterchoice．Hopeyou’llhaveagoodtimeinChina．Yours，Li_Hua訓(xùn)練假設(shè)你是李華，最近你的英國筆友杰克剛剛轉(zhuǎn)入一所新學(xué)校。由于他性格內(nèi)向，不擅長交朋友，所以他感到非常孤獨(dú)，寫信向你求助。請你給他回一封信。注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJack，I’msorrytohearthatyouarelonelyinyournewschool．________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear_Jack，I’m_sorry_to_hear_that_you_are_lonely_in_your_new_school．However，thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice．Firstofall，don’tbetooworried．Everyonemayhavesuchbadtimeswhentheymovetoanewenvironment．Second，youshouldgreetyourteachersandclassmateswhenmeetingthemoncampus．Itisalwayseasiertomakenewfriendswhenyous