WritingTeacher:WingTeenagers’colorfullifeWestudy.Welikelisteningtomusic.Weplaycomputergamesforlong.Welikereadingbooks.Weoftenplaysports.WegotoKFC.Sometimeswetravel.Sometimeswestayupstudying.Teenagers’healthy

lifeWestudyallday.Welikelisteningtomusic.Weplaycomputergamesforlong.Welikereadingbooks.WeoftenplaySports.WegotoKFC.Sometimeswetravel.Sometimeswestayupstudying.colorfulhealthy認(rèn)真審題，找出文章要表達(dá)的中心。寫作第一步審健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會休息的人才會有健康的身體。人們是如何度過假期的呢？國際健康組織對此作了一次調(diào)查，右圖是他們此次的調(diào)查結(jié)果。根據(jù)你所得的信息，請為國際健康組織寫一篇完整的調(diào)查報告,并提倡大家進(jìn)行假日休閑。審travelstayathomevisitfriendsorparentswork用簡單的句子或短語列出文章要點(diǎn)。列寫作第二步

根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表用簡單的句子列出文章的要點(diǎn)如何度假調(diào)查報告倡議假日休閑stayathomeworkvisitfriendsorparentstravel

Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Enjoyyourvacation.列Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxandworkwell.aniceheadanicetailanicebody

加加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整?？梢圆扇】偡挚偨Y(jié)構(gòu)或者總分結(jié)構(gòu)，開頭或結(jié)尾的句子應(yīng)注意簡潔，漂亮。寫作第三步：Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Thepeoplewhorelaxandworkwell.

連恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞句，使得文章層次清晰，各個部分銜接自然。寫作第四步：1.表示并列或遞進(jìn):and,aswellas,both…and,notonly…butalso,neither…nor;2.表示選擇:or,either…or;3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折:but,however（然而）,although,though,afterall,4.表示因果:because,so,therefore（因此，所以）5.表示條件:if,unless，aslongas6.表示對比:instead,not…but,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand;7.表示解釋:forexample,suchas,thatistosay（換句話說）,inotherwords;8.表示順序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend;9.表示強(qiáng)調(diào):also,besides,what’smore（此外）,actually,infact,10.表示結(jié)論:allinall（總的來說）,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,關(guān)聯(lián)詞Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxandworkwell.連Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisoursurveyreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

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afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxandworkwell.美

美選好詞句，美化文章。在有把握的情況下展示自己的語言功底。寫作第五步：SkillOneMakeyoursentencescorrectGoodgoodstudy,daydayup.Weshoulddosportsaweekonce.Savetheenvironmentisourduty.Thereisgoingtohaveameetingtoday.IhopeIcancometruemydream.onceaweekSavingbeachieveSkillTwoExpressindifferentwaysOurparentsreallywishustoworkhard.Ourparentsreallywishustoputourheartintostudy.Theteenagerslikethecomputers.Theteenagers

arefondof

thecomputers.Weshouldn’teatjunkfood.Weshouldstayawayfromthejunkfood.

Whenhespoke,hegotmoreexcited.

Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhegot.

WeshouldlearnEnglishgrammar.

It’simportanttolearnEnglishgrammar.書面表達(dá)寫作技巧審

列加連美中考作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第一檔（9-10分）信息完整，表達(dá)流暢，無語言錯誤或基本無語言錯誤。第二檔（7-8分）信息基本完整，表達(dá)較流暢，有少量語言錯誤，但不影響意思表達(dá)。第三檔（5-6分）能傳達(dá)部分信息，表達(dá)不夠流暢，語言錯誤較多，但句子基本可讀。第四檔（3-4分）只能傳達(dá)少量信息，表達(dá)不流暢，語言錯誤多，只有少量句子可讀。第五檔（0-2分）只能傳達(dá)個別信息，表達(dá)不清楚，只有個別句子可讀。

書面表達(dá)以“Ihaveadream”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。Sentencepatternsforreference(以下句型供參考）Mydreamistobe…/todo…/togo…Ienjoy/like/prefer…Tomakemydreamcometrue,I…Ifmydreamcomestrue…IhaveadreamHaveyoueverwatchedabikeracing?Theridersarecool!Yeah,it’smydreamtobeaprofessionalbikerider.IfellinlovewithbikeriderforthefirsttimeIrode.Sincethat,I’vebeenridingfor5years.Somepeoplethinkit’sdangerous,Idon’tthinkso.Duringabikeriding,youwillbeinahighspeedandfeelthewindrushesquickly.Exciting?Thatis!Tomakemydreamcometrue,I’llpracticemoreaftermiddleschool.Also,I’llwatchmorebikeracingtolearnfromtheriders.Ihopemydreamwillcometrue,ifso,IcanenjoythelifeIlikebest.PassageOneIhaveadreamAnybodyhasadream.Butdifferentpeoplehavedifferentdreams.Mostpeoplealwaysdreamtobepopularorrich.Butmydreamisveryspecial,Ijustwanttobeabird.WhydoIhavesuchadream?JustbecauseIadmirethey’refree,theycandoeverythingtheywant.Whenthey’reflyinginthesky,theylookbeautiful,eventhey’rethemostbeautifulanimals.Ireallywanttoenjoythefeelingofflyinginthesky.However,Iknowitwon’tbeachievedanymore.It’sjustadream,inmyheart.PassageTwoPassageThreeIhaveadreamMydreamistobeabasketballplayer.IlikeitbecauseIthinkitveryinteresting.Itcanmakemebecome