四六級寫作Whichoneisbetter?Itmakesmefeelpainfultothinkthatshehastowork12hoursadayandsevendaysaweek.Itpainsmetothinkthatshehastowork12hoursadayandsevendaysaweek.ItwillbeouraimtoensureproperhealthcareforeachandeveryoneoftheChinesepeople.OuraimistoensureproperhealthcareforallChinese.Whichoneisbetter?Thesearchoftheforestthattheyconductedwasentirelycomplete.Thesearchoftheforestwascomplete.Theyconductedacompletesearchoftheforest.Hehasnosenseofprinciples,whetherheisinpublicorinprivate.Hehasnoprinciples,publicorprivate.Whichoneisbetter?Wheneveranyonetelephonedhertoaskherforhelpwiththeirhomeworkshealwaysobligedrightaway.Sheimmediatelyobligedanyonewhotelephonedforhelpwithhomework.Whichoneisbetter?Anotherimportantaspectisgoodhealth.Itisoneofourgreatblessings.Itmaybeachievedthroughproperdietandexercise.Restisalsodesirable.Thegreatblessingofgoodhealthmaybehadthroughproperdiet,exercise,andrest.寫作技巧--簡潔才是美策略之一：用介詞短語替代從句。Wordy:Whiletheywereplayingtennis,shestartedanargumentthatlastedallmorning.Better:Duringtennisshestartedanargumentthatlastedallmorning.Wordy:Whenyoucometothesecondtrafficlight,turnright.Better:Atthesecondtrafficlightturnleft.寫作技巧--簡潔才是美策略之二：刪除諸如"whois”或"thatis"之類的關(guān)系代詞，變從句為短語。Wordy:Thenovel,whichiswritteninthreeparts,toldastorythattookplaceintheMiddleAges.Better:Thethree-partnoveltoldastorysetintheMiddleAges.寫作技巧--簡潔才是美策略之三：剔除你不需要的單詞Twojointpartnerswillpresenttheirviewsoveralong-distancetelephonecall.寫完這樣的句子后，你自己再讀一遍，挑出單詞joint和telephone，注意刪去不必要的詞。寫作技巧--簡潔才是美策略之四：表達(dá)否定意義時(shí)，盡量避免使用否定詞。英語中很多詞不用no或者not也能表達(dá)否定含義的詞匯。Thuscollegestudentswhodonothavesufficientfinancialbacking,也就是collegestudentswholackssufficientfinancialbacking。Whichoneisbetter?TheArtofStrategywaswrittenbySunTzu.Itisafifty-six-hundred-wordChineseclassicalwork.Thewriterputforthasetofprinciplesinaverytightlycompressedmanner.Theydealwithhowtodefeatoppositionsandwinbattles.Inhisfifty-six-hundredwordclassic,TheArtofStrategy,SunTzuputforthatightlycompressedsetofprinciplesforachievingtriumphoveropposition.Whichoneisbetter?Ofcourse,theweaponsatSunTzu'stimewerequiteprimitive.Thearmieswereverylarge.TheywerenearlyaslargeasthoseinWorldWarTwo.ThedevastationandhumansufferingswerejustasprofoundasinWorldWarTwo.ComparedwithWorldWarTwo,theweaponsatSunTzu'stimewerequiteprimitive,butthearmieswerenearlyaslargeandthedevastationandhumansufferingjustasprofound.Whichoneisbetter?Proverbsareshortsayings.Theyaredrawnfromlongexperience.Proverbsareshortsayingsdrawnfromlongexperience.Whichoneisbetter?Thisisawreck.ItwasformerlythestatelyImperialGarden.Itispreserveddeliberatelyasareminderandsymbol.Thiswreck,formerlythestatelyImperialGarden,ispreserveddeliberatelyasareminderandsymbol.Whichoneisbetter?Beijingstreetsarecrowdedwithtaxis,companycarsandprivatevehiclesownedbythenewlyaffluent.Thenumberhasbeenrisingrapidlyinthelastfewyears.Thelateststatisticsshowtherearenow1.2millionvehiclesinBeijingalone.Taxis,companycarsandprivatevehiclesownedbythenewlyaffluenthavecrammedBeijingstreetsinrisingnumbersinthelastfewyears-1.2millionvehiclesatlastcount.寫作技巧--變化才是真LuHaograduatedlastsummer.HejoinedtheFirstAutoWorksinChangchunsoonaftergraduation.Hereceivedanengineeringdegreefromhiscollege.Aftergraduatinglastsummerwithanengineeringdegree,LuHaosoonjoinedtheFirstAutoWorksinChangchun.寫作技巧--變化才是真LuHaograduatedlastsummer.HejoinedtheFirstAutoWorksinChangchunsoonaftergraduation.Hereceivedanengineeringdegreefromhiscollege.Anengineeringdegree-holder,LuHaojoinedtheFirstAutoWorksinhangchunlastsummersoonaftergraduation.寫作技巧--變化才是真LuHaograduatedlastsummer.HejoinedtheFirstAutoWorksinChangchunsoonaftergraduation.Hereceivedanengineeringdegreefromhiscollege.Havinggraduatedwithanengineeringdegree,LuHaojoinedtheFirstAutoWorksinChangchunlastsummer.切忌過于依賴從句妙用倒裝平行結(jié)構(gòu)少用關(guān)系代詞語態(tài)同位結(jié)構(gòu)獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)規(guī)范使用標(biāo)點(diǎn)真題演練--提綱式（現(xiàn)象型）Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicAttendYourClassesRegularly.youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinebelow:1.現(xiàn)在大學(xué)校園里遲到、早退、曠課是常見現(xiàn)象2.如何避免這種現(xiàn)象發(fā)生3.作為一個(gè)大學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎么做

真題演練Nowadaysitisaverycommonphenomenonthatsomeuniversitystudentsarelatefororevenabsentfromclasses.Andstilltherearesomestudentswhoslipoutoftheclassroombeforetheclassisover.Classattendancehasbecomeathornyproblemtoboththestudentsandteachers.真題演練Itisurgentimmediatemeasuresshouldbetakentostopthesituation.firstofall,thewholeuniversitystaffshouldcommitthemselvestoestablishingabetterlearningenvironmentandsafercampusforthestudents.Furthmore,theteachersshouldincreasepunishmentsformisbehavior.Lastbutnotleast,othermeanstosolvetheproblemaretoreduceclasssizeto真題演練improvetheattendance.Actually,thewaystotackletheproblemarecountless.AsfarasI'mconcerned,itisveryimportantforthestudentstoattendtheirclassesregularly.Foronething,itwillensureyoutocatchupwiththeteachersinyourlearning.Thatisveryhelpfultoyouifyouwanttodoagoodjobinyourstudy.Foranother,attendingclasses真題演練regularlyisawayofshowingrespecttoyourteachers,too.Meanwhile,attendingclassesregularlywillhelptoformagoodhabitofpunctuality,whichisofgreatimportanceforthestudentstodoagoodjobinthefuture.真題演練Directions:You'reallowed30minutestowriteashortessaybycommentingonthehumoroussaying,“Quitingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.I'vedoneithundredsoftimes.”You'dwriteatleast120wordsbutmorethan180words.真題演練--諺語警句型Thehumoroussaying,"Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.I'vedoneithundredsoftimes."canbenaturallyassociatedwiththesignificanceofastrongwill.Justas“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.”,ifyouarereallyresolvedtodosomething,nomatterhowdifficultitmightbe,nevergiveup.Itakethisopinionquitereasonable.真題演練

Thereasonscanbelistedasfollows.TakeThomasEdisonasayupicalexample.Hecouldnothavefoundtheidealmaterialforelectricbulbsifhehadgivenupafterthousandsotrials.Foranotherexample,ifwithoutthestrongwilltosaveChinesepeoplefromheavydisasterandbuildaprosperous,democraticandcivilizednewcountry,howcouldChairmanMaodriveJapaneseinvadersoutofChinaandbecomesuchafamousleaderintheworld?真題演練

Judgingfromtheevidencesoffered,wemightsurelydrawtheconclusionthatnothingsucceedswithoutastrongwill.Besides,weshouldmakefullpreparation,thoughastrongwillwillhelpusovercomedifficulties,itisnotforapersonwhohasnopreparation.Toconclude,westudentsshouldhavestrongwillsorwewillnotsucceedifgoodopportunitiesareoffered.真題演練--應(yīng)用文（書信）Directions:Forthispart,you'reallowed30minutestowritealettertotheeditorofanewspapercomplainingaboutthepoorserviceofabookstore.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutmorethan180words.1.事情的起因2.與書店交涉的經(jīng)過3.呼吁服務(wù)行業(yè)必須提高服務(wù)質(zhì)量真題演練DearEditor,IamZhangFang,asophomorefromHarbinUniversityofCommerce.NowI'mwritingtoinformyouthatIfoundthequalityofsomepublicationnotverysatisfactory,andIwouldliketodrawyourattentiontotheproblemofsomepoorservicesoftheserviceindustry.ThecauseofmycomplaintisadictionaryIboughtafewdaysago.AfterIboughtit,Ifoundtwopagesifit