XB4U1ScienceFictionContentsReviewPredictionApossiblesampleCriticalthinkingSatisfactionGuaranteedWritingskillsEvaluationConclusionContinuationwritingHomeworkGladysClaffernTask1ReviewI.Basedonthefollowingrelationshipsbetweenthecharacters,canyouretellthestory?LarryBelmontClaireacouplefriendsworkforacompanytestoutTonyahouseholdrobotTask2PredictionI.Findoutthestoryline.Part1(para1-2)tobetestedoutStorylineWhatistobecontinued?ClimaxPara.1:AfterTonydisappearedfromsight,Clairewalkedslowlytoopenthedoor.Para.2:Thenextmorning,acardroveupandtookTonyaway.developmentPart2(para3-8)offeringhelpPart3(para9)doorbellringingprediction

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Paragraph2:Task2PredictionAfterTonydisappearedfromsight,Clairewalkedslowlytoopenthedoor.Thenextmorning,acardroveupandtookTonyaway.1.Whowouldcome?2.Whatwouldhappen?1.WherewouldTonybetakenaway?2.Whydidhegothere?Tips1:Learntoraisequestions.Gladys?Larry?Party?Company?Testresult?Task2PredictionII.Findouttheemotionline.ClimaxStorylineEmotionlineC:embarrassedC:alarmedPart1(para1-2)tobetestedoutPart2(para3-8)offeringhelpPart3(para9)doorbellringingC:unwillingC:admiredPara.1:AfterTonydisappearedfromsight,Clairewalkedslowlytoopenthedoor.Para.2:Thenextmorning,acardroveupandtookTonyaway.HowwouldClaire’sfeelingchange?Task2PredictionTips1:Learntoraisequestions.HowwouldClaire’sfeelingchange?Howwouldshefeelabouttheparty?AboutTony’sleavingHappy?Satisfied?Sad?

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Paragraph2:Task2PredictionIII.Predictthetime&placecluesAfterTonydisappearedfromsight,Clairewalkedslowlytoopenthedoor.Thenextmorning,acardroveupandtookTonyaway.Thenightofthepartyarrived.AtClaire’shome.ThenextmorningThecompanyTips2:Learntofindclues

I.Appreciate&analyzesomeofyourwritingsII.Discuss&tellwhetheryourstoryislogical&givereasons.GroupworkTask3EvaluationAnexcellentwritingTask3EvaluationIII.Whatdoyouthinkanexcellentwritingshouldbelike?LanguageThemeLogic

Logicalplots:1.Noextracharacters2.Noadditionalplot2.Usecorrectandvividlanguage3.PositiveandeducationalthemeTask4WritingskillsI.Howtomakeyourplotslogical?knownunknownClaire’sproblemsContinuationPara.1Tony’shelp1.notclever2.homenotelegant3.envyGladys1.makeherbeautiful2.makeherhomeelegant3.inviteGladystothepartyGladysenviedClaire:herbeautyher

eleganthousedeliciouscuisineherhandsomeTony

…Task4WritingskillsI.Howtomakeyourplotslogical?Tony’sproblemsContinuationPara.21.acompany2.ahouseholdrobot3.beingtestedout4.toleavethenextday5.title:satisfactionguaranteed1.Tony__________________thecompanyand_____________abouthisthreeweekswithClaire.2.Thecompany

was

very________with

Tony’swork.knownunknownwastakentogaveareportsatisfiedImitationActionTask4WritingskillsExample:Shescreamed,pushedhimaway,andrantoherroom.(Para.8)She________“l(fā)eavemealone”,_____toherbed,and_______allnight.仿寫：她大叫“別管我”，沖到床上，哭了整晚。II.Howtomakeyourlanguagevivid?三連動---動作鏈：情節(jié)緊湊，更具畫面感shoutedrancriedImitationFeelingExample:Howawfultobediscoveredbyher,Clairethought.(Para.6)Whatasweetvictory(Howamazing)tobeenviedbythosewomen!仿寫：被那些女人羨慕是多么甜蜜的勝利！Task4WritingskillsII.Howtomakeyourlanguagevivid?Action+FeelingExample:想到Tony只是機器人，Claire把自己關(guān)在房間，悲痛欲絕,哭得死去活來。RememberingthatTonywasjustamachine,Claire_______________,tears_________________herface.Task4WritingskillsII.Howtomakeyourlanguagevivid?shutherselfinstreamingdownClaire_______________,_________________inherhands.sobbedsadlyClaire雙手捂著臉悲傷地抽泣。coveringherfaceClaire_____________________,andcouldn’thelp___________.feltseizedbyaburstofsadnessClaire悲傷得忍不住哭泣。cryingbitterlyTask4WritingskillsThreerulesforcontinuationwritingAction--Response

Conflict--SolutionNegative--PositiveTheprocessofcontinuationwriting

Step1:ThoroughreadingStep2:LogicalplottingStep3:VividwritingSummary:Howtowriteanexcellentwriting?ClaireTonyTask5Apossiblesample

AfterTonydisappearedfromsight,Clairewalkedslowlytoopenthedoor.

Itwasthenthat

ClairerealizedthatTonyhadopenedthecurtainsofthefrontwindow.Herguestshadseeneverything!

Thewomenwere

impressedbyClaire,thehouseandthedeliciouscuisine.Justbeforetheyleft,ClaireheardGladys

whisperingtoanotherwomanthatshehadneverseenanyonesohandsomeasTony.Whatasweetvictorytobe

enviedbythosewomen!Shemightnotbeasbeautifulasthem,butnoneofthemhadsuchahandsomelover.

Thenshe

remembered—

Tonywasjustamachine.She

shouted"Leave

me

alone"andrantoherbed.Shecriedallnight.

Task5Apossiblesample

ThenextmorningacardroveupandtookTonyaway.

Thecompany

was

very

pleasedwith

Tony'sreportonhisthreeweekswithClaire.Tonyhad

protectedahumanbeing

from

harmwhenhe

preventedClairefromfallingoffaladder.Hehadalsoopenedthecurtainsthatnightsot