寫作強(qiáng)化課程AnAdvancedCourseofGREAnalyticalWriting

主講：杜立明ByAndyDuWhoamI?Andy杜立明教齡：2003年9月至今主講：寫作線：GRE寫作/GMAT寫作（本校唯一主講）口語(yǔ)線：IBT口語(yǔ)（全國(guó)主講之一）/BEC中級(jí)口語(yǔ)（本校唯一主講）閱讀線：SAT分析性閱讀（本校唯一主講）關(guān)于GRE寫作的幾個(gè)重要概念GREAnalyticalWriting1-6AnalyticalWriting60minIssue-30min立論文Argument–30min駁論文149174所有考題均出自于官方題庫(kù)TheRevisedVS.TheOld

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45MIN30MIN1.Time

別無(wú)選擇/擴(kuò)大題目準(zhǔn)備的范圍社會(huì)類學(xué)習(xí)+教育類行為類2.Issue

TheOld2OptionsTheNew1OptionWritearesponseinwhichyoudiscusstheextenttowhichyouagreeordisagreewiththe

statementandexplainyourreasoningforthepositionyoutake.Indevelopingandsupportingyourposition,youshouldconsiderwaysinwhichthestatementmightormightnotholdtrueandexplainhowtheseconsiderationsshapeyourposition.Writearesponseinwhichyoudiscusswhatspecificevidenceisneededtoevaluatetheargumentandexplainhowtheevidencewouldweakenorstrengthenthe

argument.3.Instructions

ISSUE立論文：Issueisanunsettledmatter!沒(méi)有正確的觀點(diǎn)，只有合理的觀點(diǎn)。

30分鐘，就一段現(xiàn)成的文字中的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行肯定或否定或中立的論證。現(xiàn)在我們一起寫的GREISSUETheabsenceofachoiceisacircumstancethatisvery,veryrare.Therearetwotypesoflaws:Onetypeisjust.Anotherisunjust.Weshouldobeythejustonesandresisttheunjustones.ARGUMENT駁論文：找錯(cuò)，反駁觀點(diǎn)

30分鐘，就一篇邏輯不嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)奈恼逻M(jìn)行分析與反駁。Itissaidthatinauniversity,NewJersey,studentsofthebiologydepartmentareabsent-minded.Inthisway,wecansaythatstudentsofallbiologydepartmentsareabsent-minded.幾個(gè)同學(xué)們經(jīng)常問(wèn)到的問(wèn)題GRE寫作需要準(zhǔn)備多長(zhǎng)時(shí)間GRE寫作用模板會(huì)怎樣全用會(huì)死用一部分(ISSUE框架，ARGU)可以GRE寫作需要背范文么

不GRE分?jǐn)?shù)和字?jǐn)?shù)有關(guān)系么

有一定關(guān)系網(wǎng)上有很多GRE寫作的高頻，要看么？

這個(gè)可以有GREArgument

IntroductionTheRevisedEditionByAndyDuHowanargumentlookslike?1.總結(jié)羅列文章5.結(jié)論2.分析錯(cuò)誤一3.分析錯(cuò)誤二4.分析錯(cuò)誤三Body范文分析---開頭段范文.doc

Inthisargument,thearguerconcludes

that

sendingthemechanicsofGet-AwayAirlinestoatwo-weekQuality-CareSeminaronpropermaintenanceprocedureswillautomaticallyleadtogreatercustomersatisfactionalongwithgreaterprofitsfortheairline.Tosupporttheconclusion,thearguerpointsoutthattheperformanceofthemaintenancecrewsintheautomobileracingindustryimprovedmarkedlyaftertheircrewshadattendedtheseminar.Inaddition,thearguerreasonsthatsincethemaintenancecrewsoftheautomobileracingindustryandthemechanicsofGet-AwayAirlinesperformmanyofthesamefunctions,theairlineswillgainsimilarprofitsfromthetrainingprogram.Thisargumentsuffersfromseveralcriticalfallacies.主旨：送飛機(jī)維修工學(xué)習(xí)將提高客戶滿意度和利潤(rùn)證1：賽車維修工學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)證2：賽車盈利=航空盈利本論證有誤

Firstly,theargumentisbasedonafalseanalogy.Thearguersimplyassumesthatairplanemechanicsandautomobilemaintenancecrewsperformmanysimilarfunctions,buthedoesnotprovideanyevidencethattheirfunctionsareindeedcomparable.

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Itistruethatboththeairplaneandtheautomobileneedrefuelingandenginemaintenance,buttherestillexistsfundamentaldifferences:thestructureandthebuildingmaterialsofeachother'senginesaredifferent,soistheoiltheyuse.正文段1Therefore,eventhoughthetwo-weekQuality-CareSeminarprovedeffectiveinimprovingtheperformanceofthemaintenancecrewsintheautomobileracingindustry,thereisnoguaranteethatitwillworkjustaswellforairplanemechanics.錯(cuò)誤類比無(wú)法證明飛工和賽工的工作有可比性論證工作的同和異結(jié)論正文段2

Secondly,thearguercommitsafallacyofhastygeneralization.ThearguerassumesthatsendingitsmechanicstotheSeminarwillleadtothegreaterprofitsaswellasgreatercustomersatisfactionfortheairline.Theassumptionisproblematicbecauseitoverlooksanumberoffactors.正文段2Forinstance,customersatisfactiondependsonseveralmajorfactorsotherthangoodmaintenanceoftheairplane.Customersaregenerallyconcernedaboutthepunctuality,theon-boardservice,theticketprice,theluggagehandlingprocedureandeventhediscount,allofwhichareignoredbythearguer.正文段2

Besides,Get-AwayAirlinescangaingreaterprofitsbyincreasingitscustomersorpassengersandatthesametimecuttingdownitscosts.急于概括上課不等于提高客戶滿意度和利潤(rùn)論證如何提高客戶滿意論證如何提高利潤(rùn)結(jié)尾段Insum,thisargumentisnotconvincingasitstands.Onlywithmoreconvincingevidencecouldthisargumentbecomemorethanjustanemotionalappeal.主旨：送飛機(jī)維修工學(xué)習(xí)將提高客戶滿意度和利潤(rùn)證1：賽車維修工學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)證2：賽車盈利=航空盈利本論證有誤錯(cuò)誤類比急于概括飛工和賽工的工作有可比性論證工作的同和異課不等于滿意度和利潤(rùn)論證如何提滿意利潤(rùn)結(jié)論段一.寫作的基本要求字?jǐn)?shù):30分鐘(300-400字)

100字來(lái)自原題信息二.寫作步驟與時(shí)間分配III.寫作步驟與時(shí)間分配1.快速審題(2分鐘)抓住所給短文重要內(nèi)容；理解instructions的要求結(jié)論：Conclusion（推理的終點(diǎn)）論據(jù)：Evidence:statistics,examples,facts判斷文章中推理論證的邏輯關(guān)系（論據(jù)間的關(guān)系）前提假設(shè)：

Assumption抓住所給短文重要內(nèi)容TheBasicStructureofArguCONCLUSION

(Optional)CONCLUSION

(Optional)EVIDENCE1EVIDENCE2EVIDENCE3EVIDENCE4ASSUMPTIONAndyisaflake?Andyisaflake.Aboveall,accordingtooneofhisroommates,hereadsPlayboyeverynight.What’smore,heusedtocheathisteacherandwascriticizedbeforethewholeclass.What’sworse,hehasafriendwhosenameisFatHuang,awidelyrecognizedflake.Finally,itisreasonabletoclaimthatAndyisunreliable.Sweetfood=relievestress?Peoplesufferingfrommentalstressalwaysprefertoeatsweetfoodbecausesweetfoodcaneffectivelyrelievethestrainofyourmentaleffort.Firstofall,accordingtoaresearch,apoormanwhojustlosthisjobandwifenormallyeats10bagsofcandies.Moreover,manyofmycolleagueseatcandywhenfeelingstressful.Inaddition,thetruthisthatitisacommonsensethatsweetfoodcanhelprelievethestress.Ifyouaredown,eatcandies!推理論證的邏輯關(guān)系

（論據(jù)之間的邏輯關(guān)系）并列：1+2+3=conclusion1.美國(guó)樓很高；2.美國(guó)美女多；3.美國(guó)福利好-----美國(guó)是一個(gè)好國(guó)家遞進(jìn)：1---2---3=conclusion1.在節(jié)假日旅游的人很多；2.因此，在節(jié)假日旅游，交通一定很不便，而且可能訂不到酒店；3.國(guó)慶是全年時(shí)間最長(zhǎng)的節(jié)日，因此在那個(gè)時(shí)候出行一定會(huì)非常不便-----建議國(guó)慶最好呆在家里如何尋找前提假設(shè)Unstated/Stated我要到男廁所入廁腦白金可以讓我更加年輕題目中結(jié)論或論據(jù)所依據(jù)的事實(shí):在他們之間通常存在因果關(guān)系1.結(jié)論或論據(jù)中所包含的條件、原因、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)2.論據(jù)2基于論據(jù)1得出，論據(jù)1就是論據(jù)2的前提3.事實(shí)+hence/therefore/thus+結(jié)論（開頭）"Therearetwotypesoflaws:justandunjust.Therefore,everyindividualinasocietyhasaresponsibilitytoobeyjustlawsand,evenmoreimportantly,todisobeyandresistunjustlaws.“。。。。。。"Aslongaspeopleinasocietyarehungryoroutofworkorlackthebasicskillsneededtosurvive,theuseofpublicresourcestosupporttheart

theartsisinappropriate—and,perhaps,evencruel—whenoneconsidersallthepotentialusesofsuchmoney."“Inarecentcitywidepoll,fifteenpercentmoreresidentssaidthattheywatchtelevisionprogramsaboutthevisualartsthanwasthecaseinapollconductedfiveyearsago.Duringthesepastfiveyears,thenumberofpeoplevisitingourcity’sartmuseumshasincreasedbyasimilarpercentage.Sincethecorporatefundingthatsupportspublictelevision,wheremostofthevisualartsprogramsappear,isnowbeingthreatenedwithseverecuts,wecanexpectthatattendanceatourcity’sartmuseumswillalsostarttodecrease.Thussomeofthecity’sfundsforsupportingtheartsshouldbereallocatedtopublictelevision.”“Inarecentcitywidepoll,fifteenpercentmoreresidentssaidthattheywatchtelevisionprogramsaboutthevisualartsthanwasthecaseinapollconductedfiveyearsago.

Duringthesepastfiveyears,thenumberofpeoplevisitingourcity’sartmuseumshasincreasedbyasimilarpercentage.Sincethecorporatefundingthatsupportspublictelevision,wheremostofthevisualartsprogramsappear,isnowbeingthreatenedwithseverecuts,wecanexpectthatattendanceatourcity’sartmuseumswillalsostarttodecrease.Thussomeofthecity’sfundsforsupportingtheartsshouldbereallocatedtopublictelevision.”“Inarecentcitywidepoll,fifteenpercentmoreresidentssaidthattheywatchtelevisionprogramsaboutthevisualartsthanwasthecaseinapollconductedfiveyearsago.

Duringthesepastfiveyears,thenumberofpeoplevisitingourcity’sartmuseumshasincreasedbyasimilarpercentage.

Sincethecorporatefundingthatsupportspublictelevision,wheremostofthevisualartsprogramsappear,isnowbeingthreatenedwithseverecuts,wecanexpectthatattendanceatourcity’sartmuseumswillalsostarttodecrease.Thussomeofthecity’sfundsforsupportingtheartsshouldbereallocatedtopublictelevision.”“Inarecentcitywidepoll,fifteenpercentmoreresidentssaidthattheywatchtelevisionprogramsaboutthevisualartsthanwasthecaseinapollconductedfiveyearsago.Duringthesepastfiveyears,thenumberofpeoplevisitingourcity’sartmuseumshasincreasedbyasimilarpercentage.

Sincethecorporatefundingthatsupportspublictelevision,wheremostofthevisualartsprogramsappear,isnowbeingthreatenedwithseverecuts,wecanexpectthatattendanceatourcity’sartmuseumswillalsostarttodecrease.

Thussomeofthecity’sfundsforsupportingtheartsshouldbereallocatedtopublictelevision.”Sincethecorporatefundingthatsupportspublictelevision,wheremostofthevisualartsprogramsappear,isnowbeingthreatenedwithseverecuts,wecanexpectthatattendanceatourcity’sartmuseumswillalsostarttodecrease.支持公共電視（播放大量視覺(jué)藝術(shù)節(jié)目）的資金將被削減導(dǎo)致參觀博物館的人數(shù)將下降“Inarecentcitywidepoll,fifteenpercentmoreresidentssaidthattheywatchtelevisionprogramsaboutthevisualartsthanwasthecaseinapollconductedfiveyearsago.Duringthesepastfiveyears,thenumberofpeoplevisitingourcity’sartmuseumshasincreasedbyasimilarpercentage.Sincethecorporatefundingthatsupportspublictelevision,wheremostofthevisualartsprogramsappear,isnowbeingthreatenedwithseverecuts,wecanexpectthatattendanceatourcity’sartmuseumswillalsostarttodecrease.

Thussomeofthecity’sfundsforsupportingtheartsshouldbereallocatedtopublictelevision.”（1+2）--3=conclusionEVIDENCE1：看藝術(shù)節(jié)目的人增加EVIDENCE3EVIDENCE2：參觀博物的人數(shù)增加鑒于兩者之關(guān)系，支持電視資金削減將影響博物館參觀人數(shù)

CONCLUSION:應(yīng)該把支持藝術(shù)的錢支持電視看電視的人多了導(dǎo)致

到博物館看展覽的人增加4Conclusion:chooseAdams并列關(guān)系Evidence1:工作人數(shù)Evidence2:收入的兩倍Evidence3:平均房?jī)r(jià)Evidence4:十年與去年的銷售差別Assumption:更快更好88Conclusion:buildmorenewstoreinPlainsville并列關(guān)系Evidence1:銷售處于歷史最高點(diǎn)Evidence2:會(huì)員/滿員Evidence3:預(yù)見新生代Assumption:盈利Example"Sevenyearsago,homeownersinnearbyBrookvillecommunityadoptedasetofrestrictionsonhowthecommunity’syardsshouldbelandscapedandwhatcolorstheexteriorsofhomesshouldbepainted.Sincethen,averagepropertyvalueshavetripledinBrookville.InordertoraisepropertyvaluesinDeerhavenAcres,weshouldadoptourownsetofrestrictionsonlandscapingandhousepainting."

ExampleConclusion:restrictionsonlandscapingandhousepainting.遞進(jìn)關(guān)系Evidence1:七年前,附近的社區(qū)實(shí)施了涂色規(guī)定Evidence2:平均價(jià)格翻了三番理解instruction的要求Instructions（題目要求）的意義

寫作之時(shí)要有法可依，不可隨意發(fā)揮讓你怎么寫就怎么寫否則找死如何才能符合argument的要求呢？1.文章中的語(yǔ)言要回應(yīng)題目的要求；2.根據(jù)要求的規(guī)定明確攻擊方向。新GRE的ARGU一共有八個(gè)INSTRUCTIONS可分為四大類第一類:Assumption第二類:Evidence第三類:Questions第四類:Alternativeexplanations第一類:AssumptionWritearesponseinwhichyouexaminethestatedand/orunstatedassumptionsoftheargument.Besuretoexplainhowtheargumentdependsontheseassumptions,andwhattheimplicationsarefortheargumentiftheassumptionsprove

unwarranted.

分析：此類要求是最8中要求中最根本的，因?yàn)樗罂忌治鑫恼轮械腶ssumption的前提假設(shè)。explainhowtheargumentdependsontheseassumptions而所謂的前提假設(shè)其實(shí)就是整篇文章論證的過(guò)程，即從論據(jù)推到結(jié)論的過(guò)程。whattheimplicationsarefortheargumentiftheassumptionsprove

unwarranted.

沒(méi)有這些前提假設(shè)結(jié)論肯定是不會(huì)成立的，因此只要討論的是前提，不管是結(jié)論的前提，還是論據(jù)的前提都是符合要求的。sincethemaintenancecrewsoftheautomobileracingindustryandthemechanicsofGet-AwayAirlinesperformmanyofthesamefunctions,theairlineswillgainsimilarprofitsfromthetrainingprogram第二類:EvidenceWritearesponseinwhichyoudiscusswhatspecificevidenceisneededtoevaluatetheargumentandexplainhowtheevidencewouldweakenorstrengthenthe

argument.分析：evaluatetheargument評(píng)價(jià)論證過(guò)程論證過(guò)程包括了文章中論者如何從論據(jù)到結(jié)論的整個(gè)推理過(guò)程和前提假設(shè)。whichyoudiscusswhatspecificevidenceisneededtoevaluatetheargument評(píng)價(jià)論證過(guò)程所還需要那方面論據(jù)其實(shí)也就是說(shuō)如論證中有什么邏輯上的問(wèn)題，你就指出作者需要提出這方面的論據(jù)去避免這個(gè)問(wèn)題sincethemaintenancecrewsoftheautomobileracingindustryandthemechanicsofGet-AwayAirlinesperformmanyofthesamefunctions,theairlineswillgainsimilarprofitsfromthetrainingprogram此要求主要還是從寫作語(yǔ)言上體現(xiàn)。比如：如果文中出現(xiàn)了一個(gè)“錯(cuò)誤類比”對(duì)于“assumption”的寫作方法為：ThearguerhastilyassumesthatAandBarecomparable.Theassumptionisproblematicbecausethearguermightoverlookanumberoffactors.對(duì)于“evidence”的寫作方法為：ThearguerhastooffermoreevidencetosubstantiatetheassumptionthatAandBarecomparable.Theassumptionisproblematicbecausethearguermightoverlookanumberoffactors.第三類:QuestionsWritearesponseinwhichyoudiscusswhatquestionswouldneedtobeansweredinordertodecidewhethertherecommendationandtheargumentonwhichitisbasedarereasonable.Besuretoexplain

howtheanswerstothesequestionswouldhelptoevaluatethe

recommendation.分析：decidewhethertherecommendationandtheargumentonwhichitisbasedarereasonable為了確定XXX和它所依據(jù)的論證過(guò)程是否合理Argument=論證過(guò)程=從論據(jù)到結(jié)論的整個(gè)推理過(guò)程和前提假設(shè)whichyoudiscusswhatquestionswouldneedtobeanswered為了確定XXX和它所依據(jù)的論證過(guò)程是否合理，需要回答一些什么問(wèn)題簡(jiǎn)單點(diǎn)說(shuō)就是要討論論證過(guò)程所出現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題recommendation/advice/prediction/conclusion而它們一定是基于論證過(guò)程而成立的比如：1，男同學(xué)臟；2，男同學(xué)色；3，男同學(xué)都是吃貨。開除所有男同學(xué)。/男同以后都可能沒(méi)出息。/男人都很壞。sincethemaintenancecrewsoftheautomobileracingindustryandthemechanicsofGet-AwayAirlinesperformmanyofthesamefunctions,theairlineswillgainsimilarprofitsfromthetrainingprogram此要求同樣不必拘泥于邏輯錯(cuò)誤從何而來(lái)，注意寫作語(yǔ)言即可?！板e(cuò)誤類比”ThearguerarbitrarilyassumesthatAandBarecomparable.However,isthisthecase?

Theassumptionisproblematicbecausethearguermightoverlookanumberoffactors.Inordertosubstantiatetheconclusion,thearguerhastoanswerwhetherAandBarecomparable.Theassumptionisproblematicbecausethearguermightoverlookanumberoffactors.Writearesponseinwhichyoudiscusswhatquestionswouldneedtobeansweredinordertodecidewhethertheadviceandtheargumentonwhichitisbasedarereasonable.Besuretoexplainhowtheanswerstothesequestionswouldhelptoevaluatethe

advice.基本同上Writearesponseinwhichyoudiscusswhatquestionswouldneedtobeansweredinordertodecidewhethertherecommendationislikelytohavethepredictedresult.Besuretoexplainhowtheanswerstothesequestionswouldhelptoevaluatethe

recommendation.同上Writearesponseinwhichyoudiscusswhatquestionswouldneedtobeansweredinordertodecidewhetherthepredictionandtheargumentonwhichitisbasedarereasonable.Besuretoexplainhowtheanswerstothesequestionswouldhelptoevaluatethe

prediction.同上Writearesponseinwhichyoudiscusswhatquestionswouldneedtobeaddressedinordertodecidewhethertheconclusionandtheargumentonwhichitisbasedarereasonable.Besuretoexplainhowtheanswerstothequestionswouldhelptoevaluatethe

conclusion.同上第四類:AlternativeexplanationsWritearesponseinwhichyoudiscussoneormorealternativeexplanationsthatcouldrivaltheproposedexplanationandexplainhowyourexplanation(s)canplausiblyaccountforthefactspresentedintheargument.

分析：什么叫alternativeexplanations?杜同學(xué)每天放學(xué)后很晚才回家。這是很可能是因?yàn)樗诮淌依锟炭鄬W(xué)習(xí)。NO。更有可能的是他在外頭耍朋友。此類要求，我們主要分析文章中的事實(shí)有無(wú)其它解釋。我們同樣是去討論論證過(guò)程中的問(wèn)題，只需要在開頭段對(duì)要求作出回應(yīng)即可。二.寫作步驟與時(shí)間分配2.寫第一段(4分鐘)作用歸納所給短文的結(jié)論和論據(jù)，并指出其犯有嚴(yán)重邏輯錯(cuò)誤TEFModel

T–ThemeE–EvidenceF–Flaw

轉(zhuǎn)述結(jié)論羅列論據(jù)指出錯(cuò)誤Inthisargument,thearguerconcludes

thatbetweenthetworealestatefirms,Adamsisapparentlysuperiortotheother.Tomaintaintheconclusion,thearguerillustratesasfollows.(1)Adamshasmorerealestateagents;(2)itsrevenuelastyearwastwiceashighasthatofFitch;(3)itsaveragepriceofthehomesalesexceedsthatofFitch;(4)HomeslistedwithAdamssellsfaster.Atthefirstglance,thisopinionseemstobesomewhatconvincing,butfurtherreflectiontellsmethatIcannotagreewithitforthefollowingreasons.轉(zhuǎn)述結(jié)論Inthisargument,thearguerconcludes/recommends/suggests/claims/predictsthat…Example4Inthisargument,thearguerconcludes/recommends/suggests/claims/predictsthat…Betweenthetworealestatefirms,Adamsisapparentlysuperiortotheother.羅列證據(jù)Tomaintaintheconclusion,thearguerpointsout/illustratesasfollows.(1)(2)(3)(4)

Example(1)Adamshasmorerealestateagents;(2)itsrevenuelastyearwastwiceashighasthatofFitch;(3)itsaveragepriceofthehomesalesexceedsthatofFitch(4)HomeslistedwithAdamssellsfaster指出錯(cuò)誤Atthefirstglance,thisopinionseemstobesomewhatconvincing,butfurtherreflectiontellsmethatIcannotagreewithitforthefollowingreasons.（通用型）Assumption模型：論證錯(cuò)了，由于假設(shè)Theargumentisnotwellsupported(grounded)forsomeassumptionsremainunproven(problematic）Atthefirstglance,thisopinionseemstobesomewhatconvincing,butfurtherreflectiontellsmethattheunderlyingassumptionishardlyacceptablebecausenoneoftheevidencecanleadtoit.Theassumptionslendlittlecredibilitytothespeaker’sargument.

Evidence模型：論證錯(cuò)了，缺少論據(jù)Theargumentisinvalidforthereasonthatsomeessentialevidencehasbeentotallyneglected/nosupportingevidencehasbeenprovided.Question模型：論證錯(cuò)了，有問(wèn)題沒(méi)回答/存在很多問(wèn)題。Theconclusionisunreliableduetothefactthatmanycriticalquestionsarenotclarified.Theassumptionsandevidencescanhardlylendanycredibilitytotheargument,foranswerstoseveralquestionsshouldbefurtheranswered.AlternativeExplanations模型：論證錯(cuò)了，前提假設(shè)和論據(jù)推不出結(jié)論，存在其它的解釋。Theargumentisunwarranted,fortheassumptionsandevidencescannotguaranteetheconclusionandtherearealternativeexplanations.Theargumentisunwarranted,fortheassumptionsandevidencescannotassuretheconclusionanditcanbeexplainedinanalternativeway.二.寫作步驟與時(shí)間分配3.寫正文段(20分鐘)1)移動(dòng)光標(biāo),先寫完正文部分的段落主題句（轉(zhuǎn)述原文有問(wèn)題的內(nèi)容）2)一段一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤,小錯(cuò)誤可以合二為一3）錯(cuò)誤分析的順序要符合題目的論證順序4)段落開頭要有主題句,主題句之前要有過(guò)渡詞推薦正文段布局TYPE1大+大+大TYPE2大+大+2小正文段段落之間的語(yǔ)言銜接A–B–C=CONCLUSIONA+B+C=CONCLUSIONA–B–C=CONCLUSION如果題目的論證過(guò)程是遞進(jìn)結(jié)構(gòu)。我們?cè)谡亩蔚姆治龆温溟g的銜接語(yǔ)言上也要體現(xiàn)出這個(gè)遞進(jìn)的關(guān)系。1.在節(jié)假日旅游的人很多；2.因此，在節(jié)假日旅游，交通一定很不便，而且可能訂不到酒店；3.國(guó)慶是全年時(shí)間最長(zhǎng)的節(jié)日，因此在那個(gè)時(shí)候出行一定會(huì)非常不便-----建議國(guó)慶最好呆在家里段一：節(jié)日旅游的人多無(wú)法推出交通不便/訂不到酒店段二：即便前面一個(gè)假設(shè)是正確的，作者也不一定能推出國(guó)慶節(jié)出行就很不方便。段三：基于前面的前提和假設(shè)，作者得出結(jié)論：國(guó)慶最好呆在家里。這個(gè)結(jié)論也是同樣值得我們懷疑。A–B–C=CONCLUSION首先，作者假設(shè)_____.再者，基于這個(gè)假設(shè)，作者提出了_____.即便以上的假設(shè)是正確的，我們也不能憑此推斷出______.首先，作者假設(shè)_____.Firstofall,thearguerassumesthat______.Imply/suggest/hint/indicate/pointoutHastily/incorrectly/unfairly/unnecessarily再者，基于這個(gè)假設(shè)，作者提出了_____.Inaddition,basingontheassumptionabove,thearguerimpliesthat______.即便以上的假設(shè)是是正確的，我們也不能憑此推斷出______.Grantedthattheassumptionabovecouldbesubstantiated,wecannotensurethat_____.A+B+C=CONCLUSIONInthefirstplace,論據(jù)A的問(wèn)題Inthesecondplace,論據(jù)B的問(wèn)題Inaddition,論據(jù)C的問(wèn)題正文段的具體結(jié)構(gòu)PART1：主題句--轉(zhuǎn)述原文有問(wèn)題的內(nèi)容。PART2：指出所出現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題。PART3：論證（1）正文段主題句的寫法DifferentTStodifferentinstructionAssumption

基本模型：作者假設(shè)______Thearguerassumesthat_______Evidence基本模型：作者需要提供證明XXX的論據(jù)；證明XXX的證據(jù)是缺失的。Inordertobolstertheconclusion,thearguerneedstoprovideevidencestoprove_________.Thestatement/assumptionthat______isunjustified,foritlackscriticalevidence.Question

基本模型：把原文有問(wèn)題的內(nèi)容改成一個(gè)一般疑問(wèn)句；作者說(shuō)XXX，真的嗎？；作者需要回答。Thearguerassumesthattheshabbydecorationdirectlycausesthedeclineofprofits.Firstofall,doestheshabbydecorationreallycausethedeclineofprofits?Thearguerassumesthattheshabbydecorationdirectlycausesthedeclineofprofits.However,isitthecase/

truth/credible/convincing/trustable?Inordertosubstantiatetheconclusion,thearguerneedstoanswerwhether______.AlternativeExplanations同Assumption

（2）正文段論證的方法正文段論證的基本方式論證方法1，杜老師很胖是因?yàn)樗哂蟹逝值幕颉?，杜老師喜歡幫助女同學(xué)是因?yàn)樗撕芎谩?，杜老師傻是因?yàn)樗赣H在他小時(shí)候經(jīng)常用拖鞋打他的頭。"Duringherseventeenyearsasaprofessorofbotany,ProfessorThomashasprovedherselftobewellworthherannualsalaryof$50,000.Herclassesareamongthelargestattheuniversity,demonstratingherpopularityamongstudents.Moreover,themoneyshehasbroughttotheuniversityinresearchgrantshasexceededhersalaryineachofthelasttwoyears.Therefore,inconsiderationofProfessorThomas’demonstratedteachingandresearchabilities,werecommendthatshereceivea$10,000raiseandapromotiontoDepartmentChairperson;withoutsucharaiseandpromotion,wefearthatProfessorThomaswillleaveElmCityUniversityforanothercollege."

Inthefirstplace,thearguerassumesthatPlainvilleresidents’concernwithleadinghealthyliveshasgivenrisetotheboomingsaleofrunningshoesandexerciseclothing.Theassumptionisquestionablebecausethearguerfailstoruleoutotherpossibilities.Forexample,Plainsvilleresidentspreferwearingsportswearsimplyduetothereasonoftheweathercondition.What’smore,sportswearmightbemorecomfortableandlessexpensivecomparedtoothertypeofclothing.

Inthefirstplace,thearguerassumesthatPlainvilleresidents’concernwithleadinghealthyliveshasgivenrisetotheboomingsaleofrunningshoesandexerciseclothing.

Theassumptionisquestionablebecausethearguerfailstoruleoutotherpossibilities.Forexample,Plainsvilleresidentspreferwearingsportswearsimplyduetothereasonoftheweathercondition.What’smore,sportswearmightbemorecomfortableandlessexpensivecompared