ENVIRONMENTALPROTECTION寫(xiě)作ReadingforWriting寫(xiě)作Bytheendoftheclass,youwillbeableto:analyzethestructureandwritingmethodsofanenvironmentalproblemreport;comprehendandsummarizethecausesandsolutionsofwaterpollution;integratetheinformationinthetext(includingthetextstructure,languagefeatures,andwritingmethods)andapplyitintowriting.LearningObjectivesWarm-upPart1GuessinggameWhereisit?LiRiverWhatdoyouknowaboutLiRiver?IknowthatLiRiverisoneofthemostbeautifulandpopularriverlandscapesinChina.Itisover100mileslongandissurroundedbythefamousKarstmountainformations.Li

RiverTheLiRiver(漓江Líjiāng),situatedinGuangxiProvince,isoneofthemostspectacular(令人驚奇的)destinationsinChina.Spanning(跨度)roughly80kilometers(50miles),theLiRiverrunsthroughtheheartofGuangxi,connectingbeautifuldowntownGuilinwiththeriversidetownofYangshuo.TheLiRiverwasfirstrecognizedforitsculturalsignificancein1982,whenChina’sStateCouncildeemedtheLijiangRiverScenicZoneaplaceofscenicandhistoricimportance.TensofthousandsofkarstmountainssurroundtheLiRiveranditsconnectedcities.Thebyproductofmillionsofyearsofwatererosion(侵蝕)andweathering(風(fēng)化),thesekarsthillsareamongtheoldestandmostbeautifulnaturalwondersinChina.WaterpollutionHow

do

you

describe

this

picture?polluted/contaminatedwaterwastewaterfromsewage,shops,factoriesandagriculture

Pre-writingPart2WritingpracticeTask:Writeareportonairpollution.當(dāng)今，我們周?chē)目諝猸h(huán)境變得越來(lái)越差，為了加強(qiáng)學(xué)生們的環(huán)保意識(shí)，學(xué)校打算開(kāi)展以“為家鄉(xiāng)空氣污染問(wèn)題出謀獻(xiàn)策”為主題的征文活動(dòng)，警示人們要保護(hù)環(huán)境。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)告，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.寫(xiě)明家鄉(xiāng)空氣污染的原因；2.建設(shè)綠色家鄉(xiāng)，建議采取什么措施（至少3點(diǎn)）；3.倡議大家行動(dòng)起來(lái)。其他要求：120詞左右；注意使用本單元所學(xué)的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)和寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)。TextstructurePara.1introduction/problemPara.2causesPara.3solutionsPara.4furthersolution/planActivity1:ReadforthegenreReadpara.1andtrytoclarifythegenreofthistext.ThebeautifulLiRiveranditsamazingsurroundingsceneryisoneofthemostwell-knowntouristdestinationsinChina’sGuangxiZhuangAutonomousRegion.Itattractsmillionsofdomesticandforeignvisitorseachyear.However,itsreputationasatopdestinationhashadnegativeeffectsontheriver’swaterquality.Thisreportlooksattheproblemofwaterpollutionandsomeactionsthathavebeentakentodealwithit.TopicSentencemainideaActivity3:ReadforthecontentReadpara.2anddrawamindmaptoshowthefactors

thatcausedthepollution.IncreasingnumberoftouristsTouriststhrowingrubbishinwaterTourboatsthrowingcookingoilinwaterRiseinnumberofcommercialandindustrialenterprises=morewasteMorechemicalsforcropproductiongoingintowaterLocalpopulationrisetomeettourismdemand=morehouseholdwasteCausesofLiRiverPollutionTopicSentenceActivity3:ReadforthecontentReadpara.2forthe

topic

sentence.Activity3:ReadforthecontentReadpara.3-4anddrawamindmaptoshowthemeasurestakentodealwithit.

TopicSentenceActivity3:ReadforthecontentReadpara.3-4anddrawamindmaptoshowthemeasurestakentodealwithit.

TopicSentenceActivity3:ReadforthecontentReadpara.3-4anddrawamindmaptoshowthemeasurestakentodealwithit.

Measures2settingupstrictregulations3

regularinspectionsandfinesforabuses4WaterTenPlan5

RiverChiefSystem6

newrules7

media8

collectionandtransportofhousehold9

constructionofwastewatertreatmentfacilities1

closureofpollutingenterprisesActivity4:ReadforwritingmethodsReadthetextagainandsummarizetheproperexpressionsfromthetext.item

relatedexpressions

causeandeffecthavenegativeeffectsonsufferfromendupcontributetoinordertoleadtocause…Activity4:ReadforwritingmethodsReadthetextagainandsummarizetheproperexpressionsfromthetext.itemrelatedexpressionsproblemsandsolutionsUrgentstepsshouldbetakentorestore...Acomprehensiveinitiativewasstarted,withanumberofmeasuresthataddressedtheissues.Withsuchcampaignsineffect,...areheadingtowardsacleanandsustainablefuture.Withtheseissues,...Activity4:Readforwritingmethods佳句仿寫(xiě)原句Previously,waterqualityintheLiRiverhadsufferedgreatlyfromanincreasingvolumeoftourists,manyofwhomfrequentlythrewgarbageintotheriver.(Para.2)仿寫(xiě)因私家車(chē)尾氣排放增多，北京空氣污染問(wèn)題嚴(yán)重。（sufferfrom,anincreasingvolume）AirqualityinBeijingsufferedgreatlyfromanincreasingvolumeof

private

cars

which

releasedexcessivecarexhaust

into

the

air.亮點(diǎn)1:

物作主語(yǔ)，生動(dòng)形象；亮點(diǎn)2:

which引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句暗含因果關(guān)系，信息量豐富原句Local

officialswereconcernedthatthepollutionwasdamagingthenaturalenvironmentandfeltthaturgentstepsshouldbetakentorestoretheriver’soriginalbeauty.(para.2)仿寫(xiě)毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，為了恢復(fù)家鄉(xiāng)的空氣質(zhì)量，一些緊急措施亟待采取。（被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)；restore）There’s

no

doubt

thaturgentstepsshouldbetakentorestorethehometown’sairquality.Activity4:Readforwritingmethods佳句仿寫(xiě)原句Acomprehensiveinitiativewasstarted,withanumberofmeasuresthataddressedtheissues.(para.3)仿寫(xiě)我們應(yīng)該掌握主動(dòng)權(quán)，采取一系列政策和措施來(lái)減少空氣污染。（seize

the

initiative,policy）Weshouldseizetheinitiativeandadoptaseriesofpoliciesandmeasurestoreduceairpollution.Activity4:Readforwritingmethods佳句仿寫(xiě)原句…thelocalauthoritiesbegantousethemediatospreadenvironmentalawarenessandencouragegreateruseofcleanenergy.Atthesametime,theystartedtocarryoutinspectionsregularlyand…(para.3)仿寫(xiě)除了定期檢查工廠之外，政府還可以利用社交媒體提高公眾的環(huán)保意識(shí)。（inspection,socialmedia,awareness）Apart

from/Besidescarrying

out

regular

inspections,thegovernmentcouldtakeadvantageofsocialmediatospreadenvironmentalawareness.亮點(diǎn):

linking

words的使用增加邏輯銜接感Activity4:Readforwritingmethods佳句仿寫(xiě)原句With

thesemeasures,itisbelievedthatthebeautyoftheLiRiverwillbepreservedforgenerationstocome.(para.3)仿寫(xiě)有了這些措施，相信北京清澈的天空能萬(wàn)世長(zhǎng)存。（形式主語(yǔ)；preserve）Withthesemeasures,itisbelievedthattheblueskyinBeijingwillbepreservedforgenerationstoenjoy.亮點(diǎn)1:

linking

words的使用增加邏輯銜接感；亮點(diǎn)2:

形式主語(yǔ)的使用增加句式豐富性Activity4:Readforwritingmethods佳句仿寫(xiě)While-writingPart3WritingpracticeTask:Writeareportonairpollution.當(dāng)今，我們周?chē)目諝猸h(huán)境變得越來(lái)越差，為了加強(qiáng)學(xué)生們的環(huán)保意識(shí)，學(xué)校打算開(kāi)展以“為家鄉(xiāng)空氣污染問(wèn)題出謀獻(xiàn)策”為主題的征文活動(dòng)，警示人們要保護(hù)環(huán)境。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)告，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.寫(xiě)明家鄉(xiāng)空氣污染的原因；2.建設(shè)綠色家鄉(xiāng)，建議采取什么措施（至少3點(diǎn)）；3.倡議大家行動(dòng)起來(lái)。其他要求：120詞左右；注意使用本單元所學(xué)的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)和寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)。Structure

problem-solution

patternGroupwork:Drawamindmapofthekeypointsofyourwriting.Para.1problemPara.2causesPara.3measuresStructure

(problem-solution)Readforwritingmethodsitemrelatedexpressionscauseandeffectthedevelopmentoftheeconomy;urbanization;morecarsareneeded-carexhaust;inappropriateuseoffossilfuels;…Expressionsusedtorelatecausesandeffects.WritingmethodsExpressionsaboutproblemsandsolutions.itemrelatedexpressionsproblemsandsolutionsWith…(cause),…h(huán)aswitnessed…(problem)forseveralyears.(problem)alarmsusof…Urgent

steps

shouldbetakentoalleviatetheissue.Initially,industrialcompaniesshould…Also,governmentscan…Asforindividuals,theyshould…Draft句式一點(diǎn)通Myhometown’sairpollutionisveryseriousbecauseofeconomicdevelopment.錯(cuò)誤1:所屬關(guān)系邏輯有誤錯(cuò)誤2:表意不明——空氣污染是因?yàn)榻?jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展？Withthedevelopmentoftheeconomy,myhometownhaswitnessedsevereairpollutionforseveralyears.DraftWeshouldprotecttheenvironmentofourhometownandherearesometipsforyou.錯(cuò)誤1:未注意文體要求（report），for

you的口吻不對(duì)；錯(cuò)誤2:表述過(guò)于寬泛（環(huán)保），不符合文章要求（空氣污染）Therefore,urgent

steps

shouldbetakentoalleviatethisissue.句式一點(diǎn)通DraftLet’sdoit!Toprotectourearth!Tohelpourhometown!錯(cuò)誤1:呼吁過(guò)于簡(jiǎn)單粗暴，缺乏美感；錯(cuò)誤2:表述過(guò)于寬泛（環(huán)保），不符合文章要求（空氣污染）Let’ssparenoefforttomakecontributionstoalleviatingairpollutionproblemofourhometown!句式一點(diǎn)通WritingmethodsTransitionalexpressions.transitionalexpressionsalso,aswellas,too,furthermore,atthesametime,inaddition…Transitionalexpressionsarelikebridgesbetweenpartsofyouressay.Theyarecuesthathelpthereaderinterprettheirideas.Sample

writingWiththedevelopmentoftheeconomy,myhometownhaswitnessedsevereairpollutionforseveralyears.Thisreportlooksatthecausesofairpollutionandsomeactionsthatcouldbetakentodealwithit.ThesevereairpollutionalarmsusoftheheavyloadwehaveexertedonEarthbyourinappropriateusageoffuelwastes.However,withthedeepeningofurbanization,morecarsareneeded,whichmadeairpollutionworse.Therefore,urgent

steps

shouldbetakentoalleviatethisissue.

Initially,industrialcompaniesshouldapplythemostcutting-edgetechnologiesinordertoadoptnewformsofenergyassubstitutesforfossilfuels.Also,governmentscancarryoutinspectionsregularlyandfineindustrialfactoriesforabuses.Asfor

individuals,theyshouldraiseenvironmentalawareness

trymoreenvironmental-friendlytransportationmeanssuchasbusesinsteadofprivatecars.Withthesemeasures,itisbelievedthatthefreshairofourhometownwillbepreservedforgenerationstoenjoy.Let’ssparenoefforttomakecontributionstoalleviatingairpollutionproblemofourhometown!Sample

writingSummaryPost-writingPart4Evaluation內(nèi)容互評(píng)表：兩兩/同桌互評(píng)作業(yè)問(wèn)題是否改正次數(shù)有至少一個(gè)名詞性從句（名詞、代詞、動(dòng)名詞、主語(yǔ)、表語(yǔ)從句...）

非謂語(yǔ)的主語(yǔ)和主句的主語(yǔ)一致

時(shí)態(tài)一致

所有單詞拼寫(xiě)正確

正確使用邏輯連接詞連接上下文

Evaluation卷面互評(píng)表：兩兩/同桌互評(píng)作業(yè)問(wèn)題是否改正次數(shù)長(zhǎng)句短句錯(cuò)落有致

正確使用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)

逗號(hào)句號(hào)書(shū)寫(xiě)區(qū)分明顯

卷面整潔：不亂點(diǎn)

字跡清晰：不連筆

HomeworkPart5Task2.Writing:

假定你是某重點(diǎn)高中學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，你市正在迎接創(chuàng)建全國(guó)文明城市檢查，請(qǐng)你以學(xué)生會(huì)名義寫(xiě)一篇倡議書(shū)，倡議大家積極為創(chuàng)建文明城市做準(zhǔn)備，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1)發(fā)出倡議的原因。