2020中英語讀后續(xù)寫之提分秘籍讀后續(xù)寫之提分秘籍—細(xì)節(jié)描寫《試明中評分則部分規(guī)定讀續(xù)寫閱卷時按5個檔次給分參考最高檔次第五檔（21-25分）的描述并考慮作部分評分的其它因素，可以認(rèn)為一篇優(yōu)秀的讀后續(xù)寫具備以下特征：1.內(nèi)容豐富充實，與所給短文融洽連貫；2.連接成分應(yīng)用得當(dāng)，行文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊一體，與所提供各段落開頭語的銜接緊密合理；3.使用并用下劃線標(biāo)示個以短文中標(biāo)出的關(guān)鍵詞語；4.詞匯豐富高級，語法準(zhǔn)確多變（主被動句式、各類從句、特殊句式、非謂語動詞等的使用情況靈活恰當(dāng)、不拘一格、游有余5.詞數(shù)充分，150詞左右。評分則規(guī)定少于詞的，從總分中減去2分；6.拼寫準(zhǔn)確，英式或美式拼法皆可；7.標(biāo)點合理，使用得當(dāng)。讀后續(xù)寫基本是以記敘文為主，記敘文是以記人敘事為主要內(nèi)容，以敘述為主要表達方式來反映豐富多彩的現(xiàn)實生的一種文體一般來說完一篇完整的記敘文寫作需要選取合適的角度按照一定的序組織素材進行敘述其包括六個基本要素時間、地點人物事情的起因經(jīng)過和果即我們通常所說的五Wwhen,where,why）和一個“how除此外，鮮明的主題和生動的語言，也是一篇優(yōu)秀的記敘文所不可或缺的。描寫作為記敘文的一種輔助的表方式對加強文章的表現(xiàn)力發(fā)揮著重要的作用，它要求我們善于捕捉細(xì)節(jié)、刻畫細(xì)節(jié)有時還可以用上比喻、擬人、夸張等修辭手法。一篇好的作文往往因為一兩處細(xì)節(jié)描寫而彩同樣地議論抒情的表達方式對記敘文主題的展現(xiàn)也發(fā)揮著重要的作用。一情心描在寫作中，對人物情感的描寫常能使人物的形象顯得生動鮮活。人的情感可以分很多種，如喜悅、滿意、失望、悲、憎恨、憤怒、驚訝、恐懼、贊賞等等。在英語中有很多不同的詞和句式來表達這些不同情感。喜1.Heisveryhappyand又高興又甜蜜。2.Theydidn’knowwhatdothemselvesforjoy.他們高興得不知道怎么辦好。3.Hejumpedforfun.他高興得跳了起來。4.Herfacebrightenedup.她喜于色。examples:1.Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.2.Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure.3.Iwaswildwithjoy.4.Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription.5.Sheworeashiningsmileonface.17

2020中英語讀后續(xù)寫之提分秘籍6.Hersmilelitupthewholeroom.7.Sheshedtearsofjoy.8.Shewasoverflowingwithhappiness.9.Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.10.Iwasfloatingonair.

滿1.Theresultissatisfactory.果令人滿意。2.Itisdifficulttoeverybody.口難調(diào)。3.Thereisalwaysasmileofcontentmentonher她臉上總是掛著心滿意足的微笑。4.Shebelongstothosewhodifficulttosatisfy.她屬于那種極難討好的人。5.Seeingtheirtaskfinishedgivesthemsenseofsatisfaction.看到任務(wù)完成了，他們感到很滿意。

驚1.I’surprisedtofindyouhere.在里看到你我很奇怪。2.It’nothingtobesurprisedabout.不值得大驚小怪。3.Tomysurprise,he’tyesterday.我吃驚的是他昨天沒有來。4.Shelookedatmeinamazement.她驚的看著我。5.Herappearancefairlytookmybreathaway.她美貌令我神魂顛倒。6.Everyonelookedatherinastonishment.大家都驚訝地看著她。

悲1.Helookssosad.他看起很悲傷。2.Heisnostrangertosorrow.他活在悲傷中。3.Hissadstorymakesherfeelpity.他的慘經(jīng)歷使她深表同情。4.Hiswife’diseasetookawayhisappetite.子的病令他茶飯不思。5.Thenewsdepressesher.這消息讓她愁苦。examples:1.Hestoodsilently,tearsdownhischeeks.2.IfeellikeIfloatinginanoceanofsadness.3.Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedinwine.4.Sheburstintotearsandranoutoftheroom.5.Shesobbed,herfaceher6.Itriedtofightbacktears.7.Myeyeswerefilledwithtears.8.A（皺眉）nowstoodhisface.9.Thesedayshewasinlowspirits.

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2020中英語讀后續(xù)寫之提分秘籍1.Shewasburningwithanger.她怒火中燒。2.Heeasilyloseshis他容易發(fā)脾氣。3.Hewasinarage.他大發(fā)霆。4.Shewasredwithanger.她為發(fā)怒臉漲得通紅。examples:1.Iwasseizedbyanger.2.Hisangerboiledover.3.Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage.4.Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.5.Hegavemeaofburninganger.6.Heglaredatmeburningeyes.7.Hisfacecloudedwith

感1.Toucheddeeply/immensely,…2.Tearsfillinghereyes,sheofferedherheartfeltgratitude.3.Withtearsstreamingdownherface,she...

害①turnedtome,withhiseyesfullhorror.③Shestruckwithhorrorwhen...④Shechokedbyfear.⑤Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.⑥Fearfloodedoverhim.⑦Herheartbeatsoviolentlythatshenearlysuffocated（窒息.⑧Sheshookallover,feelinglikesittingonpinsandneedles.二動描動作描寫也是描寫人的重要一點適當(dāng)?shù)脑~語對表達人們的心理和性格有很大的幫助。

表達說話的動詞：speak:說，講，說話，演說。著開口發(fā)音。say:說，說話。意義非常廣泛，一般用語。著重內(nèi)容，指連貫的說話。talk:講說話著重說話的動作不著重所說的話多指兩個人或多個人在一起講話。tell:說，告訴，講。指把一件情傳達給別人或講述一個故事等。有連續(xù)敘述的意思。chat:閑談，聊天。多指非正式，輕松的，愉快的，沒有中心地、沒有特殊目的地談話或聊天。含有親熱的意味。1.gossip:只在后面說人是非閑談他人的事情。2.Canyouchildspeakyet?你的子會說話了嗎？3.Hesaidhewantedtogototown.他他想去城里。37

2020中英語讀后續(xù)寫之提分秘籍4.Iwanttotalktoyouaboutanurgentmatter.我想和你談一件緊急的事。5.Tellmewhathappened.訴我發(fā)生了什么事。6.Theydroppedinforachatlastnight.他昨晚順便來閑聊了一會兒。7.Youshouldn’listentogossip.你應(yīng)該聽流言蜚語。

表示笑的動詞：smile:“微笑通常指好意的笑，無聲的微笑，如表示親切、愉快等。laugh:“笑笑指一般笑。beam:“笑指面露喜色，帶有容的意思。1.Shesmiledwhenshesawme.看見我時露出微笑。2.Wealllaughedloudlywhenajoke.她說個笑話，我們都大聲笑起來。3.Hebeamedonhisvisitors.對著客人們微笑。

表示哭我們可以說：cry:“哭泣淚意義及法最廣泛。多強調(diào)聲音，指呼號和叫喊地哭，一般由于痛苦，悲哀，恐懼，也可能是歡呼起的。weep:“哭泣淚指不出的哭，著重在由于悲傷而流淚。sob:“哽咽盡力抑制自己的感情時發(fā)出抽泣的聲音也可以指哭訴。1.Shestartedtocrywhensheheardthesadnews.她聽到這個悲痛的消息時，她開始哭了。2.Sheweptthedeathofthechild.她悼孩子的死亡。3.Thechildsobbedloudly.這孩子大聲地哭泣。

表示走的動詞：go:“走意義范圍較廣，是一用語。表示向一定的地點運動。walk:“步行表示有目或無目的的步行、散步、游玩。pace:“走過步尤指以通的步子走。wander:“徘徊處走重?zé)o確定路線。1.Wewentbyplane.我們是飛機去的。2.Ican’walkaboutinthisheat.在種大熱天我簡直無法走動。3.Thefenceisonlytenpacesthe圍墻離屋子只有十步遠。4.Thechildrenwanderedinthe子們在森林里漫步。動描美欣1.Theactorwasdraggingthroughthewhenthesecondbeganwalkinghimtremblingwithcold.第一位演員在雪地里拖著腳步艱移動時候第二位演員朝他走去身子在寒氣中不僅顫抖。2.Istillremembertheshockthatmeflatthewall.我仍然記得當(dāng)時驚呆了，靠在墻，一動不動。3.Thepoundingindrownedouttheofthewords,onlyawordhereandtherefilteredthrough.47

2020中英語讀后續(xù)寫之提分秘籍我的耳朵里嗡嗡作響，聽不見他后來講的話，只是東一點西一點滲入的只言片語。4.Istaredathiminshockandasmallsounddismayescapedmythroat.我驚愕地盯著他，不禁發(fā)出輕輕沮喪聲。5.Standingwithallthedignitycouldmuster,Isaidnothing.帶著所有的尊嚴(yán)，我站在那里一話都沒說。6.Iclaspedmyhandsbehindsohewouldntseethemshaking.我緊握著雙手藏在背后，這樣他看不見我的手在發(fā)抖。7.Thelastwordscameoutinaneagerrush.最后幾個字是急切地蹦出來的。8.Hebacktohoeingtheweedsthatsprangupthedelicatelittlebeanplants.他又去鋤生在在青嫩的豆苗間的草了。9.Thenextday,wasaverysadandwithdrawngirlwhodraggedintotheprincipal'soffice.第二天，我沉默不語，一副十分心的小女孩的模樣，拖著腳步走近校長辦公室。10.Helookedoutofthewindow,bitinghislips,asifthinking.他一邊看著窗外，一邊咬著嘴唇仿佛在思考。三練練找下的志文動、態(tài)心描IftheDreamIsBigEnough,theFacts’tCountIusedtowatchherfrommykitchenshesosmallasshemuscledherwaythroughthecrowdofboysontheplayground.schoolwasacrossthestreetfromourhomeandIwouldoftenwatchthekidsastheyplayedduringrecess.Aseaofchildren,andyettome,shestoodall.IrememberedthefirstdayIsawherplayingbasketball.Iwatchedinwonderassherancirclesaroundtheotherkids.managedtoshootjumpshotsjustovertheirheadsandintothenet.Thealwaystriedtostopherbutnoonecould.Ibegantonoticeheratothertimes,basketballinhand,playingShewouldpracticedribblingandoverandoveragain,sometimesuntildark.OnedayIaskedherwhyshepracticedsomuch.Shelookeddirectlyinmyeyesandwithoutamomentofhesitation.She“togotoTheonlywayIcangoisifIgetascholarship.likebasketball.IdecidedthatifIweregoodenough,Iwouldgetascholarship.amgoingtocollegebasketball.Iwanttobethebest.MyDaddytoldmeifthedreamisbigenough,thefactsdon’count.”Ihadseenoverandoveragain.Well,Ihadtogiveittoshewasdetermined.Iwatchedherthroughthosejuniorhighyearsandintohighschool.Everyweek,sheledhervarsityteamtovictory.57

2020中英語讀后續(xù)寫之提分秘籍Onedayinhersenioryear,Isawhersittinginthegrass,cradledinherarms.Iacrossthestreetandsatdowninthegrassbesideher.Iaskedwhatwaswrong.“nothing,”a“amjusttooshort.”Thecoachtoldherthatat5’”shewouldprobablynevergetplayfortoprankedteam—offeredsoshedreamingaboutcollege.ShewasheartbrokenandIfeltmyownthroattightenasIsensedherdisappointment.Iaskedherifshehadtalkedtoherdadaboutityet.SheherheadfromherhandsandtoldmethatherthosecoacheswereTheyjustdidnotunderstandthepowerofaHetoldherthatshewantedtoplayforgoodcollege,ifshetrulywantedascholarship,thatnothingcouldstopherexceptone—herattitude.Hetoldheragain,“Ifthedreamisbigenough,thefacts’tcount.Thenextyear,assheandherteamwenttotheNorthernCaliforniaChampionshipgame,shewasseenbyacollegerecruiter.Shewasindeedofferedascholarship,afullride,toaDivision’basketballteam.Shewasgoingtogettheeducat