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Hectorstood

inthefrontofhisfifth-gradeclassroomasoneofthelasttwocompetitorsintheRoomFiveGeographyBee.Hisopponenthavingmissedthelastquestion,itwasHector'sturn.Ifheansweredhisquestioncorrectly,hewouldbetheRoomFivechampion.

“WheredidIputthatsecondsheetofquestions?”Mr.Adlerwhisperedwhilesearchingthroughathickpileofpapersonhismessydesk.Mr.Adler,thoughagreatteacher,hadareputationofbeingdisorganizedwithalonghistoryofmisplacingthings.“Ohwell,Iapologizeforthedelay."saidMr.Adlerafterwhatseemedlikealongtime.“Hector,pleasetellusthecapitalcityofBrazil.”Hearingthequestion,Hectorsmiled.Then,therewastheanswer.

Laterthatdayinthecourtyard,manyclassmatescongratulatedHector.Wearingaproudsmile,hegreetedandthankedthemall.Oh,thesweettasteofvictory.

Asitwasgettinglate,thecourtyardbecamedeserted.ButHectorstilldidn'twanttoleave.ThenhesawMr.Adlercrossingthecourtyardandholdingahalf-openbagfullofpapers.Ashehurriedpast,anenvelopedroppedoutbutMr.Adlerwasunaware,turnedacorneranddisappearedoutofsight.Hectorpickeditup.Ontheenvelopewerethewords“FifthGradeGeographyBeeQuestionsandAnswers".Hectorstaredwide-eyedattheenvelope.Beforeheevenhadtimetoreflectontheconsequences,heopeneditandreadthequestions.

AssoonasHectorhaddoneit,heknewitwasthewrongchoice.He'dcheatedandwhateverhedidnow,hecouldn'tchangethefact.“WhatifMr.AdlerthoughtIstolethismorning'squestionstoo?”Hectorthought.“He'dtakeawaymyRoomFivevictoryforsure.”Littledidheknowthatoneofthebestdaysinhislifewouldbeturnedintotheworstsoquickly.Tornbyhisconscience,Hectorwastotallyatalosswhattodo.注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Beforeherealizedit,HectorfoundhimselfstandinginMr.Adler'sroom.ThenextdaytheentireschoolcametowatchtheFifthGradeGeographyBee.

I.文章基本要素分析：

故事背景:

Thestorytakesplaceinaschool,specificallyinHector'sfifth-gradeclassroom,thecourtyard,andMr.Adler'sroom.

主要人物:

Hector:Afifth-gradestudentwhoisparticipatinginthe

GeographyBee.

Mr.Adler:

Hector'steacher,whoisdisorganizedbutvalueshonestyandintegrityinhisstudents.

主題:誠(chéng)實(shí),正直和承認(rèn)自己錯(cuò)誤的重要性。

故事主要情節(jié)：

1.

Hectorhasachancetowinthe

RoomFiveGeographyBee.

2.

Mr.Adleraccidentallydropsanenvelopewiththequestionsandanswers.

3.

Hectorfindstheenvelopeandlooksatthequestions.

4.

Feelingguilty,HectorconfesseshisactionstoMr.Adler.

5.

Mr.AdlerholdsanewGeographyBeeandcommendsHectorforhishonesty.

6.

Hectorlearnsavaluablelessonabouthonestyandintegrity.

敘事結(jié)構(gòu)：故事遵循線性敘事結(jié)構(gòu)，從地理競(jìng)賽開始，按時(shí)間順序逐步展開，包括赫克托的行動(dòng)、懺悔和重新競(jìng)爭(zhēng)的過程。

故事視角：本故事采用第三人稱有限視角敘述，聚焦于赫克托的想法、感受和經(jīng)歷。

故事沖突：故事的主要沖突是一個(gè)內(nèi)部沖突，赫克托在查看地理競(jìng)賽的問題和答案后，陷入了良心的掙扎。他必須決定是坦白承認(rèn)錯(cuò)誤還是保守秘密。II.問題導(dǎo)入

可以提問以下幾個(gè)問題，看看學(xué)生是否讀懂了文章。

1.

HowisMr.Adlerdescribedinthestory,particularlyintermsofhisorganizationalskills?

2.

WhathappenswhenHector'sopponentmissestheirquestionintheGeographyBee?

3.

HowdoesHectorfeelafterthecompetition,ashereceivescongratulationsfromhisclassmates?

4.

WhatdoesHectorfindinthecourtyardafterthecompetition,andhowdoeshecomeacrossit?

5.

WhatiswrittenontheenvelopethatHectorfinds?

6.

HowdoesHectorfeelafteropeningtheenvelopeandreadingthequestionsinside?

7.

WhatconcernsdoesHectorhaveafterrealizinghehascheatedbylookingatthequestions?IV、試題解讀

1．任務(wù)解讀

Hector獲得了初賽的勝利，沉浸在勝利的喜悅，久久還不愿意離開院子。老師在匆匆經(jīng)過院子時(shí)，無意間掉落了第二天決賽的問題及答案。Hector撿了起來并看了。之后他的內(nèi)心很是矛盾。

2.續(xù)寫線索：

第一段：解決矛盾沖突“他打開了信封并且看了題目和答案是錯(cuò)誤的選擇。他還擔(dān)心老師還會(huì)懷疑他偷了早上考試的題目并取消他的決賽資格”。后來Hector主動(dòng)到老師辦公室跟老師主動(dòng)說明事情經(jīng)過，并得到老師的肯定和鼓勵(lì)。

第二段：主要寫Hector參加第二天的比賽經(jīng)過和結(jié)果。（可以寫成功和失?。魬?yīng)主題誠(chéng)信比結(jié)果更重要，或者其它正能量的人生感悟。IV.范文(范文I)Beforeherealizedit,HectorfoundhimselfstandinginMr.Adler'sroom.

Hisheartpounded

andtheenvelopewasclutchedtightlyinhishand.Theweightofhisdecisionpressedheavilyonhischest,amixtureofguiltandfearthreateningtooverwhelmhim.Hetookadeep,shakybreathandconfessedtoMr.Adler,explainingthathehadinadvertentlyfoundtheenvelopewiththeGeographyBeequestionsandanswers.Hector'svoicewaveredasheadmittedtogivingintotemptationandlookingatthecontents,andnowhewasreadytofacetheconsequences,evenifthatmeantlosingthetitlehehadsoproudlywon.Thenextday,theentireschoolgatheredtowatchtheFifthGradeGeographyBee.

Theairbuzzedwithanticipationandcuriosity.Mr.Adleraddressedtheaudience,hisvoicefilledwithprideashecommendedHectorforhishonestyandintegrity,qualitiesthatwerefarmoreimportantthanwinningacompetition.Astherenewedcompetitionbegan,Hector'sheartswelledwithanewfoundsenseofpride—notinatitleoratrophy,butinhischoicetodotherightthing.Winorlose,heknewthathehadlearnedavaluablelessonabouttheimportanceofhonestyandowninguptoone'smistakes,alessonthatwouldstaywithhimlongaftertheGeographyBeehadended.范文(II)Beforeherealizedit,HectorfoundhimselfstandinginMr.Adler'sroom.

Hisheartpoundedlikeadruminhischest,fillinghisearswithanoverwhelmingbeat.Heheldtheenvelopetightlyinhistremblinghands,theweightofhisguiltcrushinghim.Hismindracedwithconflictingemotions,tornbetweenthedesiretoprotecthisvictoryandtheneedtoconfess.Hefeltlikeaballoononthevergeofbursting,filledwithanunbearablemixofshame,dread,andregret.AsMr.Adlerlookedupfromhisdesk,Hectorswallowedthelumpinhisthroat,hisvoicebarelyawhisperashebegantospeak."Mr.Adler,IneedtotellyousomethingabouttheGeographyBee."

Thenextday,theentireschoolcametowatchtheFifthGradeGeographyBee.

Whispersfilledtheairasstudentsandteachersalikewonderedaboutthesuddenrematch.Hector'sstomachchurnedwithamixofanxietyandreliefashefacedhisopponentoncemore.Thememoryofhisconfessionlingeredinhismind,liketheghostlyechoofapainfulcry.HeknewthathewouldneverforgetthedisappointmentinMr.Adler'seyes,buthealsofeltaglimmerofhopeashisteacherpraisedhishonesty.Hectortookadeepbreath,hisheartswellingwithnewfounddetermination.Asthefirstquestionwasasked,heknewthatnomattertheoutcome,hewouldfaceitwithintegrityandtheknowledgethathehadmadetherightchoice.

V.官方范文Beforeherealizedit,HectorfoundhimselfstandinginMr.Adler‘sroom.

“Hector!Comeandhelpmelookfor…”“This？”HectorstoppedMr.Adlermidsentence,holdingouttheopenenvelope.Mr.Adler’sbrowsweresmoothedbutthenknittedagain.Beforeheformedquestions,Hectorstartedunbosominghisregrets.Ifhehadwaitedanothermoment,theywouldhavetornhimintopieces.“CanIstillbeintheBee？”askedHectortimidly.“Absolutely,