新東方－StevenAttackonIELTSmodationmodationWhereareyouliving,inaflatorahouse?Whatdoyouusuallydoinyourhouse/flat/room?Isthereanythingyoudislikeabouttheplacewhereyoulive?Whatcanyouseefromthewindowsofyourflat?Whatkindofdecorationsdoesithave?Whichroomdoyoulovemostinyourflat?Howdoyouthinkthisroomcouldbeimproved?Doyouliketheenvironmentwhereyoulive?Inthefuture,whattypeofplacewouldyouliketolivein?Whatkindofneighborhood/environment/surroundingswouldyouliketolivein?OutsideInsideDetached-houseEuropean-styledesignHigh-riseFlat20-storyhighPanoramicviewPeacefulenvironmentLawnsandflowerbedOpen-airswimmingpoolCreativelylaidoutFashionablydesignedWell-furnishedSpaciouslivingroomFrenchwindow/chandelierSea-facingbedroomWell-equippedkitchenCozyandcomfortablemodationWhereareyouliving,inaflatorahouse?Iamlivinginaflat,Ihavebeendreaming(擴展時態(tài))tobuyahousenow,butsofar,itisjustadreamhasn’tcometrue,mainlybecausethehousepricesinChinaaresoaringatanextremelyfastspeed,whichistotallyoutofmypricerange…Canyoudescribetheplaceyoulive?modationWhatcanyouseefromthewindowsofyourflat?Myflatisonthe30thfloor,soIcangetapanoramicviewofthewholecommunity:thefountains,statues,trees,flowersandgreengrass.(平行舉例)Andwhennightfalls,withallthelightson,theviewisbreathtaking!(重點突出)…modationWhichroomdoyoulovemostinyourhouse/flat?Ilovemybalconymost.(突出特征)Thebiggestfeatureisthattherearesomeoversizedarmchairsandanumbrella-shadedtableoutthere.(事物舉例)ItisexactlywhatIloveaboutit.whenitcomestoasunnyafternoon.(事件舉例)Ilovetotakeaseatoutside,soakingupthesun,enjoythefantasticview,listeningtothemusicwhilesippingacupofteaandhavesomefingersnacks.(細節(jié)描寫)Itissupernice.modationDescribeyourfavoriteroominyourhome.Youshouldsay:Whatitis?Whatitlookslike?Whatyouoftendointheroom?Andexplainwhyyoulikeit.modation(開門見山:點題)Forme,ifaskingwhatmyfavoriteroomis,Iwouldchoose(虛擬語氣)

aplacethatIfeelisaplaceofmyownworld.Andthatismyreadingroom,becausethatistheplaceIcanhavefullrelaxation,andseparatemyselffromtheouterworld.(原因舉例)Readingismyhobby,youknow,andonceIhavetimeIwouldfindaquietplacetoenjoymyreading.modation(點題:活動)Usually,whenIaminthereadingroom,Iamseldominterruptedbyothers.Andintheroom,therearealotofbooks,andacomfortablesofa.(點題:描寫)Ilikereadingmyfavoritebooksinthemostleisureway.Forme,booksaremybestfriends,becausetheynevertellliestome,buttellquitealotofknowledgeofsociety,andhumanbeings.(活動原因擴展)modationSointheroomIfeelIamembracedbymykindandloyalfriends,andthatmakesmecomfortable.(點題:喜愛之因)(繼續(xù)擴展)Butitisnotaperfectplaceinanotherway.Itisnotabigroom.Itisverynarrowinfact.Sothereisnotenoughroomtoaddonemorebookshelftoputallmybookson.(原因)Rightnow,theyarestillpackedinthecornerofthereadingroom.(現(xiàn)象)SoIfIhadenoughmoney,Iwouldbuyanewhouse,muchbiggerthanwhatIhaverightnow.(展望)modation(擴展愿景)Ipreferabigreadingroom,sothatIcansetaseriesofbookshelves,andtreatmydearfriendsbetter.I’dliketheroomfacingthesun,andonabrightday,therewouldbeenoughsunlightintheroom,andwhat’smore,Ilikeabeautifulglasswall,andanewsofa.Thatisthebestplaceformetoenjoymyreading,andseparatemyselffromthemassworld.Thisisapeacefulworldofown.modationHometownHometownWheredoyoucomefrom?Whattouristattractionsarethereinyourhometown?Wouldaforeignvisitorenjoythem?Didyoulearnmuchaboutthehistoryofyourhometowninschool?Whatdoyouthinkneedstochangeinyourhometown?Whatplace(s)inyourhometowndoyougotoinyoursparetime?Whydidyouchoosetolivehere/there?Whatdoyoulikeaboutyourhometown?Whatdoyouthinkneedstobedonetomakeyourhometownabetterplacetolivein?Foryou,whatbenefitsaretheretoliveinabigcity?Whatfacilitiesdoesyourhometownhave?Whatsortsofbuildingsarethereinyourhometown?What'sthemostattractivepartofyourhometown?Whatformsoftransportdovisitorsusetocometoyourhometown?Howcouldyourhometownattractmorevisitors?Hastheweatherinyourhometownchangedmuchinrecentyears?HometowninlandcitypoliticalcenterpeacefulatmosphereancientcapitalculturalrelicsauthentictraditioncoastalcityeconomicpowerhousevibrantambiencemodernmetropolistoweringbuildingsdiversecultureenormouscitylargepopulationinternationalmetropolistouristdestinationhighcostoflivingHometownEnvironmentTransportTouristAttractionFacilityHistoryLocalPeopleWheredoyoucomefrom?I’mfromWuxicity,whichisavibrant,moderncitywithprofoundculturalandhistoricalbackground,andIreallyhavetotalkabout…(自行擴展)HometownWhat’saretheadvantagesanddisadvantagesoflivinginyourhometown?(觀點1:經(jīng)濟)Businessisboomingandtherearesomanyshoppingmallsanddepartmentstores(舉例).

Youcanbuyvariousthingseasily.(觀點2)Moreover,Thetransportsystemofmyhometowniswell-developed.(擴展)Youcangoanywhereinthecitybybus,taxioryourowncarorscooter.HometownWhat’saretheadvantagesanddisadvantagesoflivinginyourhometown?(觀點3:教育)However,therearenotsomanyuniversitiesorcollegesinWuxi,whichmeansmostyouthhavetobefarawayfromhomeforfurtherstudy.HometownWhat’sthemostwell-knownplaceinyourhometown?TherearemanyrenownedplacesinWuxi.(緩沖+過渡)Speakingofthemostwell-knownplace,IwouldsaytheLingshanWonderland,(解釋:特征)whichisagrand-scaleanddistinctiveBuddhismculturethemeparklocatedinWuxi.(擴展:地位)NowitesahighlightofEastChina’stravellingrouteandawell-knowntouristresortofBuddhismculture.HometownDoyouthinkyourhometownissuitableforyoung/oldpeopletolivein?why?(觀點1:適合青年)Toyoungpeople,itis.(解釋)Theeconomyofmyhometownisbooming.(舉例:工作)Tonsofjobopportunitiesareprovidedduetotheindustrialandcommercialdevelopmentthere.(結(jié)果)Youngpeoplecaneasilyfindtheirpositionsinthiscity.(舉例:娛樂)Furthermore,therearealsomanyplacesforentertainmentlikethepubs,cinemas,theatersandthingslikethat…HometownDoyouthinkyourhometownissuitableforyoung/oldpeopletolivein?why?(觀點2:不適合老年)Havingsaidthat,Idon‘tthinkit’sanidealplaceforthesenior.Withthedevelopmentofthelocalindustries,(解釋)environmentalpollutionhasemoreandmoresevereinrecentyears.(結(jié)果)I’mafraidit’sreallybadforoldpeople’shealth,especiallytothosesickones.(擴展)Andthecity’shustleandbustlemayalsodisappointsomeoldpeoplewhoexpectaq