二、超級(jí)仿寫[2009江門二模]你的英國(guó)朋友向你了解廣州,請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文介紹廣州。包括上表中所有內(nèi)容。概況中國(guó)第三大城市;別稱:五羊城、花城等;廣東省省會(huì);全市面積7,434平方公里;人口1,000多萬(wàn)。歷史2,200多年歷史的文化名城,歷史上絲綢之路（海路）的始發(fā)港。地理珠江從市中心穿過(guò),溫暖濕潤(rùn)。旅游風(fēng)光旖旎,旅游資源豐富。LetmetellyousomethingaboutGuangzhou.Guangzhou,thecapitalcityofGuangdongProvinceandthethirdlargestcityinChina,isalsoknownasFive-lambCity,FlowerCityandsoon.Thiscity

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coversatotalareaof7,434squarekilometerswithapopulationofmorethantenmillion.Guangzhou,afamouscitywithahistoryofmorethan2,200years,isastartingportoftheSilkRoadontheseainhistory.With

thePearlRiverwindingitsway/runningthroughthecity,Guangzhouenjoysawarmandwetclimate.Thebeautifulcity,whichis

well-knownforitsbeautifulscenery,isalsorichintravelingresources.

IhopeyouwillhaveagoodtimeinGuangzhou.SichuanProvince,locatedinthesouth-westofChina,coversanareaofabout485,000squarekilometers,,whosecapitalisChengdu.定語(yǔ)應(yīng)盡量靠近所修飾的詞定語(yǔ)從句盡量靠近先行詞Locatedinthesouth-westofChina,SichunProvince,whosecapitalischengdu,coversanareaof…Jiuzaigouwhichisfamousforitslakesislocatedinthenorth-westofSichun,withbeautifulrivers.專有名詞（獨(dú)一無(wú)二的）如人名、地名后應(yīng)該使用非限制性定語(yǔ)從句Jiuzaigou，whichisfamousforitslakeswithbeautifulrivers，islocated…Jiuzaigou，whichislocated…,isfamousforitslakeswithbeautifulrivers.TheDujiangyanIrrigationProjecthasplayedaimportantrolenow,withalonghistoryofmorethan2,000years.TheDujiangyanIrrigationProject,withalonghistoryofmorethan2,000years,isstillplayinganimportantrolenow.Sichunisneithertoocoldnortoohot.邏輯關(guān)系TheweatherinSichunisneithertoocoldnortoohot.Jiuzhaigouiswellknownforitsbeautifullakes,whosewaterissoclearthatyoucanseethebottomofthem.AnotherattractionistheJujiangyanIrrigationProject,whichwasbuiltover2,000yearsagoandisstillplayinganimportantpart(inirrigation)today.What’smore,thenice/comfortableweather,convenienttransportationandthevarietyoffamoushotfoodcanalsomakeyourtripevenmoreenjoyable.李明一直很想實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的理想,成為一名探險(xiǎn)家。2.他的父母一直試圖說(shuō)服他放棄這個(gè)想法。3.一天，李明離家出走,并留下一封信,為自己的不辭而別向父母道歉。4.李明決定啟航去無(wú)名的島嶼,尋找刺激感。5.在海上遇上了龍卷風(fēng)(tornado),李明意識(shí)到自己陷入了困境。Limingwantedtoachievehisambitionof

beinganexplorer.Buthisparentstriedtopersuadehimtogiveuptheideaallthetime.Oneday,LiMinglefthomeandleftaletter,inordertomakeanapologytohisparentsfor

leavingwithoutsayinggoodbye.LiMingdecidedtosetsailtotheunknownisland,insearchofexcitement.5.Onthewaytotheisland,LiMingmetthetornado,whichmadeLiMingbeawareofgettingintotrouble.6.ItwasthefirsttimethatLiMinghadgoneoutaloneandheseemedtoscaredtodeath.7.Withthehelpofthekindpeople,hesurvived.beawareof+nbeaware/realizethat+句子8.Afterlivinginthehospitalfortwoweeks,he

recovered.9.Hemanagedto

getintouchwithparents,madethempickhimupfromthehospital.stayingaskingthemtopick沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤但不建議使用的句子1.LiMingwentawayfromhomewithaletterleftforthepurposeofapologysingwithoutsayinggood-byetohisparents.1.從簡(jiǎn)原則leavingaletter2.目的forthepurposeof+n(名詞)

to+do(動(dòng)詞)toapologise沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤但不建議使用的句子2.LiMingdecidedtosetsailtotheunknownisland,justforfindingthefellingofexcitement.1)表目的for+n(名詞)to+do(動(dòng)詞)2)find找到lookfor/searchfor尋找/尋求tolookfor沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤但不建議使用的句子3.Oneday,LiMinglefthomeandleftaletterwiththepurposeofmakinganapologytohisparentsforleavingwithoutsayinggood-bye.目的forthepurposeof+n(名詞)to+do(動(dòng)詞)tomake沒(méi)有考慮邏輯關(guān)系進(jìn)行的錯(cuò)誤合并2.LiMingwantedtorealizehisdreamthathewouldbecomeanexplorersothathisparentsalwaystriedtopersuadehimintogivingupthisthought.李明想實(shí)現(xiàn)當(dāng)探險(xiǎn)家的夢(mèng)想，以致于他的父母總是想勸他放棄。but為了減少句子數(shù)量而拼命堆砌信息的錯(cuò)誤合并3.Whenthefirsttimeforhimtotravelonhisown,hewasscaredtodeathashewasfacingthetornadointhesea,whichhelphimcometorealizethathewasstuckintrouble.

Since/Becauseitwasthefirsttimethathehadtraveledon…,hewasscaredtodeath.Whenhewasfacedwith…,herealizedthathewas…1.李明一直很想實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的理想,成為一名探險(xiǎn)家。LiMingalwayswantedtoachievehisambitiontobeanexplorer.2.他的父母一直試圖說(shuō)服他放棄這個(gè)想法。Hisparentshavebeenalwaystryingtopersuadehimtogiveupthisidea.4.李明決定啟航去無(wú)名的島嶼,尋找刺激感。LiMingdecidedtosetsailforunknownislands,insearchofexcitement.5.在海上遇上了龍卷風(fēng)(tornado),李明意識(shí)到自己陷入了困境。LiMingranintoatornadoonthesea,andrealizedhegotintotrouble.6.這是李明第一次獨(dú)自出行,他差點(diǎn)被嚇?biāo)懒?。ThiswasLiMing’sfirsttimethathehadtraveledonhisown,andhewasscaredtodeath.7.在好心人的幫助下,他幸免于難。Withthehelpofkind-heartedpeople,hesurvivedtheaccident.Runningintoatornadoonthesea,LiMingrealizedhegot

intotrouble,andsince

thisisLiMing’sfirsttimethathehastraveled