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中文Annapouredcoffeefromthetinpotastheeveningsunlightflickeredontheprairie.ShehatedbeingstuckhelpingRufus,thecook.WhatAnnalovedbestwasriding.Attwelveyearsold,shewasanablecowhand---Papajustnevergaveherthechancetoproveit.安娜從錫壺里倒咖啡，夕陽在草原上閃爍。她討厭被困在廚師Rufus身邊幫忙。安娜最喜歡的是騎馬。十二歲的她是個能干的“放牛娃/牧牛工”——只是爸爸從來沒給她證明自己的機會。AfterAnnawashedthetincupsandunrolledherbed,shelistenedtothecowboystalkaboutthenextday’schallenges.“Andastorm’scoming，too.”Lukeadded.“Thehorseswillbenervousbeforeweevenstart."安娜洗完錫杯并鋪好床后，聽到其他牧牛工們談?wù)摰诙斓奶魬?zhàn)?！斑€有一場暴風(fēng)雨要來了?！盠uke補充道?！拔覀冞€沒開始，馬兒就已經(jīng)很緊張了?！盇nnaclosedhereyesandtriedtosleep,butcouldn’t.“Themenwillneedmyhelp!"shethought.ButwhenPapaslippedintohisbedroll,hewhispered,“Anna,youstaynearRufustomorrow.It'llbedangerous.”“But,Papa,I’magoodhand!”“No,Anna.I'dbewatchingyouinsteadoftheherd.It’ssettled.Now,offtosleep,darling."安娜閉上眼睛試圖入睡，但是睡不著。“那些牧牛工們會需要我的幫助！”她想。但是當(dāng)爸爸鉆進(jìn)睡袋時，他低聲說：“安娜，明天你待在Rufus身邊。明天會很危險。”“但是爸爸，我也能去幫忙！”“不，安娜。我會一直在看著你而不是牛群。就這么定了。現(xiàn)在去睡覺，親愛的?！盇nnacrossedherarmsandstaredatthesky.Thestarsdisappearedunderablanketofclouds.Thewindwhistledandbenttheprairiegrass.

Restless,thecattlewailedandstampedtheground.

Thecampslept---everyonebutAnna.

Tearsrolleddownherface.Whycouldn’tPapaunderstand?(Papa后來會理解女兒的)Eversince

Mama’sdeath,he’dtriedtoprotectAnnafromeverything.Hewas

killingthefun

rightoutofherlife.安娜雙臂交叉，凝視著天空。星星消失在一片云彩下。風(fēng)呼嘯著，吹拂著草原上的草。牛群焦躁不安，哀鳴著，拍打著地面。整個營地都在睡覺——除了安娜。淚水順著她的臉頰滾落。為什么爸爸不能理解呢？自從媽媽去世以來，他一直試圖保護(hù)安娜免受一切傷害。他把她生活中的樂趣都扼殺了。Annafeltafewdropsofrain.Shegotup,grabbedherhatand

tiptoed

towardherhorse,Copper.Shewantedtobealone.AloudcrackofthundershookAnnafromherthoughts.Coppermovedforwardnervously.Aslightninglitthelandscape,Annasawtheherdandsensedthesamefear.“Whoa!”Annagasped,tryingtokeepCopperfromdancing.“Ifthisnoisekeepsup,thosecattlewillpanic!”Asshespoke,abiggerblazeoflightningcrashed.Fromthedirectionoftheherd,therecameasuddenlowrumbling."Stampede!”Annacried.“Andit’scomingthisway!"續(xù)寫第一段：ThesleepingmenlaybetweenAnnaandthecattlestampede.

續(xù)寫第二段：Afterward,Annapouredcoffeetowarmthecowboys.安娜感受到幾滴雨水。她站起來，抓起帽子，踮著腳走向她的馬Copper。她想一個人待著。一聲巨大的雷聲把安娜從思緒中驚醒。Copper緊張地向前移動。當(dāng)閃電照亮四周時，安娜看到了牛群，感受到了同樣的恐懼?！拔梗　卑材却鴼?，試圖讓Copper不要跳躍?！叭绻@噪音繼續(xù)下去(電閃雷鳴)，那些牛會驚慌失措的！”說著，更大的閃電劈下。從牛群的方向，傳來一陣突如其來的低沉隆隆聲?！靶笕禾痈Z！”安娜喊道?！岸宜@邊來了！”續(xù)寫第一段：睡著的男人們就躺在安娜和奔騰的牛群之間。續(xù)寫第二段：事后，安娜為牛仔們倒咖啡，讓他們暖和。故事分析文本大意：安娜的媽媽去世后，爸爸把她保護(hù)得非常周全，不愿意看到她有一絲危險。營地的人都睡著了，因為電閃雷鳴，牛群變得驚慌失措，隨著一聲聲低沉轟隆隆的雷聲，畜群逃串了，朝著營地熟睡的人們奔來。五要素分析：Who:安娜；dad;牛copper,廚師RufusWhen:onenightWhere:onthefarmWhat:Becauseofthunderingandlightening,thecowsfellintopanicandbegantorumbletowardsthesleepingpeople.Why:Thunderingandlighteningcausedthecowstobeoutofcontrol.How:Thecowcouldn’tstandthenoiseofthethundering.續(xù)寫情節(jié)：Para1:意識到危險----安娜騎上copper---飛奔到營地---呼喊快起來，奔騰的牛群來了---牛仔們趕忙起床---他們拿起繩套---安娜明白牛群會聽領(lǐng)頭的牛---她充當(dāng)起了領(lǐng)頭牛的角色---精確指導(dǎo)copper帶領(lǐng)牛群繞過營地---安娜和牛仔們成功了---又累又喜，他們癱倒在地。Para2:牛仔們喝著咖啡---贊揚了安娜的勇敢和機智---爸爸走向她---眼里滿是驕傲和關(guān)心---爸爸承認(rèn)過于管束安娜---承諾以后會讓安娜想做自己喜歡的事情---安娜學(xué)會了很多東西---大家都很喜歡并感恩安娜。

試水作文續(xù)寫第一段：ThesleepingmenlaybetweenAnnaandthecattlestampede.

Realizingtheimminent/upcoming

danger,Annaknewshehadtoactfasttosaveeveryone.

Shequicklyjumpedonto

Copperandracedtowardsthecamp.

“Stampede!”sheyelled

atthetopofherlungs.Hearingtheyell,thecowboysandPapascrambledfromtheirbedrolls,grabbinglariats

inaflash.Asthecattlethunderedcloser,themenracedtointerceptthem.

AnnarodeonCopperandgallopedtowardsthegroupofcattle.

Knowingthattheherdwouldfollowtheirleader,shetookontheroleoftheleadinghorse.

(Anna確實懂畜牧知識的，以此證明自己)Withherheartpoundingwildlyinherchest,AnnadirectedCopperwithprecision,guidingtheherdawayfromthecamp.ThankstothejointeffortofAnnaandthecowboys,theywereabletomanageandsoothetheagitatedherdsuccessfully.

Exhaustedbutelated,theyallcollapsedontotheground,gratefultobealive.續(xù)寫第二段：Afterward,Annapouredcoffeetowarmthecowboy.

Astheysippedtheircoffee,thecowboyspraisedAnnaforherbraveryandskill.Papaapproachedher,hiseyesfilledwithamixtureofprideandconcern."Anna,yousavedallofus

tonight,"hesaid,hisvoicequiveringwithemotion."I'vebeentooprotective,andI'msorry.You'veproventhatyou'remorethancapableofhandlingyourselfouthereontheprairie."

Annabeamedwithpride,feelinganewfoundsenseofpurposeandrespect.Fromthenon,PapaallowedAnnatoworkalongsidethecowboys,nolongertreatingherasafragilechildbutasaskilledcowhandandvaluablememberoftheirteam.

WithMamagone,theranchanditscommunitywereallAnnahad.Now,shefeltshetrulybelonged.Shewassurroundedbypeoplewhoappreciatedherforwhoshewas.附：官方參考范文ThesleepingmenlaybetweenAnnaandthecattlestampede.SheswungCopperaroundand

racedback,yellingwarningsofthedanger.Thelightningflashingbrightasdaylight,shesawthe

cowboysfranticallytryingtogetoutoftheway.Atfullspeed,AnnaguidedCoppertowardthe

stampedingcattle.Copperrespondedtoherurgencyandracedforward.Annapulledalongsidethe

youngcattleinthelead,shakingherhatandwhoopingatthem,desperatetochangetheirdirect