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在我們國(guó)家，野生動(dòng)物的數(shù)量在不斷減少。其中一些甚至瀕臨滅絕。原因如下：人們?yōu)E伐樹木以修建房屋，導(dǎo)致一些動(dòng)物沒有了棲息地；而且，農(nóng)民濫用農(nóng)藥，威脅一些動(dòng)物的生命。除此之外，為了賺錢，人們?yōu)E殺珍惜野生動(dòng)物。依我看，該是時(shí)候我們采取措施改變現(xiàn)狀了。我們不能濫砍濫伐，而應(yīng)多種植樹木以保護(hù)動(dòng)物的生活環(huán)境。同時(shí)，應(yīng)該建立更多的自然保護(hù)區(qū)。我相信只要我們立即采取行動(dòng)，我們就可以跟動(dòng)物和諧并存。生活會(huì)更加美好。在我們國(guó)家，野生動(dòng)物的數(shù)量在不斷減少。其中一些甚至瀕Construction結(jié)構(gòu)Paragraph1.野生動(dòng)物的現(xiàn)狀Paragraph2.導(dǎo)致野生動(dòng)物的目前處境的原因Paragraph3.個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)及采取的措施Construction結(jié)構(gòu)Paragraph1.野Paraone:Thepresentsituation

Inourcountry,thenumberofwildanimalsisbecomingsmallerandsmaller.Someofthemareevendyingout.一二段之間的過渡句：??Thereasonsareasfollows.Manyfactors

contributeto/leadto/resultin

theproblem.Paraone:Thepresentsituatiopara.onethenumberofwildanimals

bedyingoutInourcountry,thenumberofwildanimalsisbecomingsmallerandsmaller.Someofthemareevendyingout.Thereasonsareasfollows:

或者M(jìn)anyfactorscontributeto/leadto/resultin

theproblem.過渡句：reasons

或factorspara.onethenumberofwParaTwo：reasonsforthephenomenon砍樹以修房屋：

導(dǎo)致沒有棲息地Sentences:◎◎cutdowntrees★tobuildhouses或treesarecutdown●lead/causesb/sthtodo●leadto/resultindoing

manytrees

havebeencutdownbypeopletobuildhouses/forbuilding.Thiscausesmanyanimalstolose

theirhabitats.▲havenoplacetolivein▲loseone’shabitatsManytrees

havebeencutdownbypeopletobuildhouses,

causingmanyanimals

tolose

theirhabitats

causingmanyanimalstohave

noplaceto

livein.WhichcausesParaTwo：reasonsforthepheno濫用農(nóng)藥

害死一些動(dòng)物

??Sentences：◎usetoomuchpesticidev.◎theabuseofpesticiden.Farmersusetoomuchpesticideandthiscausessomeanimalstodie./andthisendangersthelivesofsomeanimals.☆killsomeanimals☆causesomeanimalstodie☆endangerthelivesofsomeanimals

Farmersusetoomuchpesticide,◆whichendangersthelivesofsomeanimals.causingsomeanimalstodie.Thefarmers’abuseofpesticide

causessomeanimalstodie.

endangersthelivesofsomeanimals.??Whichcauses濫用農(nóng)藥◎usetoomuchpesticide濫殺珍稀野生動(dòng)物為了賺錢Sentences:killrarewildanimalstomakemoneymakeafortunemakehugeprofitsSomepeoplehavebeenkillingrarewildanimalstomakehugeprofits.濫殺珍稀野生動(dòng)物killrarewildanimals保護(hù)環(huán)境，愛護(hù)動(dòng)物，不去傷害它們：建立更多的自然保護(hù)區(qū)Sentences:???protectanimalsandtheenvironmenttheyliveinsetupmorenature

/naturalreservesPara.3measuresandconclusionoranappeal不要亂砍濫伐：stopcuttingdowntreeswithoutpermissionWeshouldstopcuttingdowntrees.Weshouldprotectanimalsandtheenvironmenttheylivein.Weshouldsetupmorenaturereserves保護(hù)環(huán)境，愛護(hù)動(dòng)物，不去傷害它們：protectanima組句成文：

Weshouldn’tcutdowntreeswithoutpermission.Instead,wearesupposedtoplantmoretreestoprotecttheanimals’livingconditions.Atthesametime,morenaturereservesareexpectedtobesetup.組句成文：羅列觀點(diǎn)常用詞：＠＠＠＠＠Tobeginwith,then,furthermore,finallyTostartwith,next,inaddition/additionally,finallyMostimportantofall,moreover,lastbutnotleastForonething,foranotherOntheonehand,ontheotherhandFirstly第一第二secondly第三thirdly羅列觀點(diǎn)常用詞：Tobeginwith,then,fpara.2reasonscutdowntrees★tobuildhouses★forbuilding●lead/causesb/sthtodo

●leadto/resultindoing▲havenoplacetolivein▲loseone’shabitats◎usetoomuchpesticide◎theabuseofpesticide

☆killsomeanimals☆causesomeanimalstodie☆endangerthelivesofsomeanimalskillrarewildanimalstomakehugeprofitsmakemoneypara.2reasonscutdowntrTostartwith,peoplehavebeencuttingdowntreesforbuilding,leadingtosomeanimalslosingtheirhabitats.Besides,farmersusetoomuchpesticide,whichendangersthelivesofsomeanimals.Inaddition,tomakemoney,somepeoplehavebeenkillingrarewildanimals.Tostartwith,peoplehavanappeal??Ibelieveaslongaswetakeactionimmediately,wewillliveinharmonywithanimalsandourlifewillbecomebetter.Inthiswaywecanmakeourplanetabetterplaceforbothhumanbeingsandanimals.anappealIbelieveaslongas二三段過渡句：

?

?Therefore,it’stimewetookmeasurestochangethesituation.Thus,immediatemeasuresmustbetakentochangethesituation.二三段過渡句：Therefore,it’stimeweprotectanimalsandtheenvironmenttheyliveinsetupmorenature/naturalreserve

stopcuttingdowntreeswithoutpermissionPara.3measuresand

conclusionoranappeal過渡句inmyopinion

take

measures/steps/action

todosth.呼吁aslongasinharmonywithlifeprotectanimalsandtheenviroInmyopinion,it’stimewetookimmediatemeasurestochangethesituation.Weshouldn’tcutdowntreeswithoutpermission.Instead,wearesupposedtoplantmoretreestoprotecttheanimals’livingconditions.Atthesametime,morenaturereservesareexpectedtobesetup.Ibelieveaslongaswetakeactionimmediately,wewillliveinharmonywithanimalsandlifewillbecomebetter.Inmyopinion,it’stimeDeareditor,Inourcountry,thenumberofwildanimalsisbecomingsmallerandsmaller.Someofthemareevendyingout.Thereasonsareasfollows:

Tostartwith,peoplehavebeencuttingdowntreesforbuilding,causingsomeanimalstolosetheirhabitats.Besides,farmersusetoomuchpesticide,whichendangersthelivesofsomeanimals.Inaddition,tomakemoney,somepeoplehavebeenkillingrarewildanimals.

Inmyopinion,it’stimewetookimmediatemeasurestochangethesituation.Weshouldn’tcutdowntreeswithoutpermission.Instead,wearesupposedtoplantmoretreestoprotecttheanimals’livingconditions.Atthesametime,morenaturereservesareexpectedtobesetup.Ibelieveaslongaswetakeactionimmediately,wewillliveinharmonywithanimalsandlifewillbecomebetter.Deareditor,DearMr.Brown,Nicemeetingyou!I’mLiHua,astudentofClassThree,GradeOnefromXingGuangmiddleschool.Thankyouverymuchforhelpingourschoolin