比賽體現(xiàn)運(yùn)動(dòng)精神，助人彰顯人文價(jià)值。賽場(chǎng)上并不是只有獲勝才能得到大家的交口稱贊，人性的光輝更值得大書(shū)特書(shū)。比賽助人的情節(jié)在前幾日寫(xiě)到的讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)：二人比賽

提到了一篇，今天在新高考I卷的完形填空中遇到了相同的話題。積累一下寫(xiě)作素材，建立此類話題的語(yǔ)料庫(kù)。OnOct.11,hundredsofrunnerscompetedinacross-countryraceinMinnesota.MelanieBailey

shouldhave

finished

thecourseearlierthanshedid.Herdelay

camebecauseshewascarryinga

competitor

acrossthefinishline.（交代了故事發(fā)生的背景。簡(jiǎn)要介紹了事件。本段中的虛擬語(yǔ)氣也可以用在文章末尾。虛擬語(yǔ)氣是讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)的座上賓，萬(wàn)金油，很多時(shí)候都能派上用場(chǎng)，也不顯low）Asreportedbyalocalnewspaper,Baileywas

morethantwo-thirdsofthewaythroughherrace

（跑了三分之二的賽程）whenarunnerinfrontofher

begancryinginpain.She

stopped

to

help

herfellowrunner,DanielleLenoue.Bailey

tookherarm

toseeifshecouldwalkforwardwithaid.Shecouldn’t.Baileythenbentdown

to

letLenoueclimbontoherbackand

carriedher

allthewaytothefinishline,thenanother300feettowhereLenouecouldget

medical

attention.（本段交代了救助過(guò)程。先講了事情何時(shí)發(fā)生的，然后主人公的一系列動(dòng)作，首先總寫(xiě)stoptohelp，然后具體描述。tookherarms，

bentdown,let...climbeontoherback,carryheralltheway.文中還提到了一個(gè)小波折，傷者無(wú)法自己行走，才有了后面背起傷者前行。故事更加可信。）(文中的fellowrunner是第一段competitor的同義詞，getmedicalattention得到治療也是救人場(chǎng)景中的?？?。)Oncethere,Lenouewasassessed

andlatertakentoahospital,whereshelearnedthatshehadseriousinjuriesinoneofherknees.She

wouldhavestruggled

withextremepain

tomakeittothataidcheckpointwithoutBailey’shelp.(得到救助，送往醫(yī)院。被救者的心理。本段也用到了虛擬語(yǔ)氣)AsforBailey,sheismoreconfused

aboutwhyheractisconsideredabigdeal.“Shewasjustcrying.Icouldn’tleave

her,”Baileytoldthereporter.“IfeellikeIwasjustdoingtherightthing.”（救人者的心理。語(yǔ)言質(zhì)樸。）Althoughthetwoyoungwomenwerestrangersbeforethemeet

,they’vesincebecomefriends.Neitherwontherace,butthedisplay

ofhumankindnesswontheday.（neither

but

與notbut相似，兩人都沒(méi)有贏得比賽，但人類的善良贏得了勝利。wintheday可以追溯到古英語(yǔ)，得到廣泛應(yīng)用歸功于足球運(yùn)動(dòng)的火熱教練們希望他們的球員取得更好的成績(jī)，給球員設(shè)定特殊榮譽(yù)日，球員勝出就會(huì)被稱贊wintheday指獲勝。）描寫(xiě)受傷場(chǎng)景的短語(yǔ)：Bloodgushedfromthewound.Thepain

shot

throughhis/herbody.He/Shewincedinagony.Theinjurylefthim/herwrithinginpain.Thewoundwasdeepandoozingblood.描寫(xiě)助人場(chǎng)景的短語(yǔ)：He/Sherushedtotheiraid.Withouthesitation,he/sheofferedahelpinghand.He/Sheselflesslycametotheirrescue.Intheirtimeofneed,he/sheprovidedassistance.He/She

wentaboveandbeyondto

lendahelpinghand.評(píng)價(jià)類的英語(yǔ)短語(yǔ)：He/Shedidanoutstandingjob.His/Hereffortswerecommendable.He/Sheshowedgreatcompassionandempathy.He/Shedemonstratedexemplarybehavior.He/Shedeservesrecognitionfortheirselflessness.以下是3篇賽場(chǎng)助人的英語(yǔ)文章：Title:AHeroicActattheFootballMatchDuringathrillingfootballmatch,

disasterstruck

when

aplayerfromtheopposingteam

collapsed

onthefield.Thecrowdwatched

inshock

ashelay

motionless,

clutchinghischestinpain.（把兩方的反應(yīng)放在一個(gè)句子中寫(xiě)）Amidstthechaos,ayoungspectatornamedAlex

sprangintoaction.

Withoutasecondthought,hejumpedoverthebarrierandrushedtotheplayer'sside.（此處有傷者，觀眾和救人者的反應(yīng)。一幀幀畫(huà)面的切換就像在看現(xiàn)場(chǎng)直播一樣。）Withthehelpofthemedicalstaff,Alex

performedCPR

untiltheplayer

regainedconsciousness.

Hisquickthinkingandcalmdemeanorsavedalifethatday.Thecrowd

eruptedintoapplause,acknowledgingAlex'sheroicact.Hisselflessnessandbravery

remindedeveryoneofthepowerof

compassionandtheimportanceofhelpingothersintimesofneed.（三方的反應(yīng)，以及最后的評(píng)價(jià)）Title:ADaringRescueattheSwimmingCompetitionAstheswimmersracedtowardsthefinishline,ayounggirlsuddenly

foundherselfindistress（處于痛苦之中）.She

struggled（常用單詞）

tostayafloat,hercriesforhelpdrownedbythecheeringcrowd.（對(duì)比，cries與cheering，此處獨(dú)立主格，drown也預(yù)示著主人公即將被drowned）Butamidstthecommotion,alifeguardnamedSarahnoticed

thedesperatesituationunfolding.Withouthesitation,Sarahdoveintothewaterandswiftlyreachedthestrugglinggirl.Withherstrongswimmingskillsand

quickthinking,

she

managedto

bringthegirltosafety.Thespectators

watchedinawe

asSarahemergedfromthewater,cradlingtherescuedgirlinherarms.Herheroicact

remindedeveryoneoftheimportanceof

watersafetyandthecourageittakestohelpothersinperiloussituations.Title:AKindGestureattheMarathonAsthemarathonrunnerspushedthemselvestotheirlimits,oneparticipantnamedMarkbeganto

falter（搖晃）.

Exhaustedand

dehydrated（脫水）,he

stumbled（跌跌撞撞地走）

andfelltotheground.Fellowrunnersrushedpasthim,focusedontheirowngoals.ButonerunnernamedEmilycouldn'tignoreMark's

plight（困境）.Emily

sloweddown

and

offeredMarkahelpinghand.Together,they

managedto

gethimbackonhisfeet.Despitethesetback,Markwasdeterminedtofinishtherace.Emilystayedbyhisside,e