書面達表中考熱點話題寫作：ChineseCulture中國文化Learningtargets學習目標1.Beabletomastercorrectwritingmethods

能夠掌握正確的寫作方法2.Knowhowtoimprovewritingability

了解如何提高寫作能力Composition高分演練Practicemakesperfect考題再現(xiàn)

假如你是李華，學校將接待一批國際交換生，請你為學校擬一封郵件，向交換生們推薦兩項有關(guān)中國文化的交流活動，給出理由，并提供一些建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80-120個左右（文章開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計入詞數(shù)，請根據(jù)要點提示適當發(fā)揮）2.不得透露學校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分。Dearexchangestudents,

Welcometoourschool!Tomakeyourvisitmorepleasantandmeaningful,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Wearelookingforwardtoyourarrival!Yours,LiHua審題構(gòu)思亮點詞匯亮點句式分段布局

假如你是李華，學校將接待一批國際交換生，請你為學校擬一封郵件，向交換生們推薦兩項有關(guān)中國文化的交流活動，給出理由，并提供一些建議。【審題、構(gòu)思】人稱：____________________時態(tài)：_____________

結(jié)構(gòu)：你可以這樣安排作文的布局(分段)：一般現(xiàn)在時第二人稱、第一人稱有關(guān)中國文化的交流活動recommendactivityinsideschoolrecommendactivityoutsideschool首段已給出一句半，需補充內(nèi)容過渡【亮點詞匯】1.someamazingactivities

2.topchoice3.evenmorewonderful

4.behave（表現(xiàn)，+adv./prep）

5.stronglyrecommend

6.convenientenough7.somefamouslandmarks（一些著名的地標）【亮點句式】1.這里有一些精彩的活動。_______________________________________________Herearesomeamazingactivitiesforyou.點評：這是建議類文章寫作的常用過渡句，簡單明了，直奔主題。請試著翻譯并點評2.學習中國傳統(tǒng)文化，上我們的古詩詞課是首選。______________________________________________________________________________________________點評：運用動詞不定式作前置狀語，表達富于變化。運用動名詞作主語，段落主題句鮮明有特色。TolearnaboutChinesetraditionalculture,takingourancientpoetryclassisthetopchoice.3.在閱讀詩歌時，你可能會覺得自己在與過去的人會面，體驗他們的生活。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________點評：運用了時間狀語從句和賓語從句。銜接上一句，擴展有內(nèi)涵有深度。Whilereadingthepoems,youmayfeelthatyouaremeetingpeoplefromthepastandexperiencingtheirlife.4.如果你穿一些像漢服這樣的傳統(tǒng)服裝，并試著表現(xiàn)得像他們，那就更美妙了，這有助于你更好地了解他們的生活。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________點評：運用了條件狀語從句和非限制性定語從句。語意豐富，描寫形象生動、耐人尋味。ItisevenmorewonderfulifyouwearsometraditionalclotheslikeHanfuandtrytobehavelikethem,whichhelpsyouunderstandtheirlifebetter.5.為了認識現(xiàn)代廣州，我強烈建議你沿著珠江騎共享自行車旅行。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________點評：很好的運用了副詞strongly，by+doing等表達，引出了activityoutsideschool。TomeetmodernGuangzhou,IstronglyrecommendyoutotakeatripbyridingasharedbicyclealongthePearlRiver.6.作為現(xiàn)代中國“四大發(fā)明”之一，共享單車非常方便，可以隨時隨地帶你去任何地方。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________點評：內(nèi)容擴展緊扣前一句，表達有深度，引出了與中國文化的關(guān)聯(lián)，突出了現(xiàn)代中國文化創(chuàng)新的內(nèi)涵。Asoneof“thefourgreatinventions”inmodernChina,sharedbikesareconvenientenoughtotakeyouanywhere,anytime.7.騎自行車游覽，不僅可以欣賞到沿江的自然美景，還可以欣賞到珠江新城周圍的一些著名地標。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________點評：很好的運用了動名詞作前置狀語、notonly...butalso等，內(nèi)容擴展具體形象，充滿美美的畫面感。Touringwithabike,youcanenjoynotonlythenaturalbeautyalongtheriver,butalsosomefamouslandmarksaroundZhujiangNewTown.Dearexchangestudents,

Welcometoourschool!Tomakeyourvisitmorepleasantandmeaningful,herearesomeamazingactivitiesforyou.

TolearnaboutChinesetraditionalculture,takingourancientpoetryclassisthetopchoice.Whilereadingthepoems,youmayfeelthatyouaremeetingpeoplefromthepastandexperiencingtheirlife.ItisevenmorewonderfulifyouwearsometraditionalclotheslikeHanfuandtrytobehavelikethem,whichhelpsyouunderstandtheirlifebetter.

TomeetmodernGuangzhou,IstronglyrecommendyoutotakeatripbyridingasharedbicyclealongthePearlRiver.Asoneof“thefourgreatinventions”inmodernChina,sharedbikesareconvenientenoughtotakeyouanywhere,anytime.Touringwithabike,youcanenjoynotonlythenaturalbeautyalongtheriver,butalsosomefamouslandmarksaroundZhujiangNewTown.Bytheway,remembertotakeyourmobilephone,asusingsharedbicyclesneedsscanningwithamobilephone.

Wearelookingforwardtoyourarrival!Yours,LiHua優(yōu)秀范文學習Canyoufindoutthehighlights（亮點）ofthiscomposition?Dearexchangestudents,

Welcometoourschool!Tomakeyourvisitmorepleasantandmeaningful,herearesomeamazingactivitiesforyou.

TolearnaboutChinesetraditionalculture,takingourancientpoetryclassisthetopchoice.Whilereadingthepoems,youmayfeelthatyouaremeetingpeoplefromthepastandexperiencingtheirlife.Itisevenmorewonderfulifyouwearsometraditionalclotheslikehanfuandtrytobehavelikethem,whichhelpsyouunderstandtheirlifebetter.

TomeetmodernGuangzhou,IstronglyrecommendyoutotakeatripbyridingasharedbicyclealongthePearlRiver.Asoneof“thefourgreatinventions”inmodernChina,sharedbikesareconvenientenoughtotakeyouanywhere,anytime.Touringwithabike,youcanenjoynotonlythenaturalbeautyalongtheriver,butalsosomefamouslandmarksaroundZhujiangNewTown.Bytheway,remembertotakeyourmobilephone,asusingsharedbicyclesneedsscanningwithamobilephone.

Wearelookingforwardtoyourarrival!Yours,LiHua★【亮點點撥】

文章結(jié)構(gòu)條理清晰，上下文意思連貫，句子之間邏輯通順一致；表達符合語法。

優(yōu)秀范文學習Canyoufindoutthehighlights（亮點）ofthiscomposition?Composition總結(jié)與提升Howtoimprovewritingability

如何提高寫作能力方法一:善用詞匯，

尤其是高級閃光詞匯Whichisbetter?A.Herearesomeactivitiesforyou.B.Herearesomeamazingactivitiesforyou.

學會用閃光的形容詞修飾名詞，表達更形象更具體！Whichisbetter?A.ItiswonderfulifyouwearsometraditionalclotheslikeHanfuandtrytobehavelikethem,whichhelpsyouunderstandtheirlifebetter.B.ItisevenmorewonderfulifyouwearsometraditionalclotheslikeHanfuandtrytobehavelikethem,whichhelpsyouunderstandtheirlifebetter.

遇到形容詞，加上比較級，有時表達更有內(nèi)涵。Whichisbetter?A.TomeetmodernGuangzhou,IrecommendyoutotakeatripbyridingasharedbicyclealongthePearlRiver.B.TomeetmodernGuangzhou,IstronglyrecommendyoutotakeatripbyridingasharedbicyclealongthePearlRiver.

有時候，在實義動詞前加上副詞，表達會更有氣勢。方法二:活用多種句型Whichisbetter?A.ItiswonderfulifyouwearsometraditionalclotheslikeHanfuandtrytobehavelikethem,whichhelpsyouunderstandtheirlifebetter.B.ItisevenmorewonderfulifyouwearsometraditionalclotheslikeHanfuandtrytobehavelikethem.

非限制性定語從句很好用，延伸句意、豐富表達它幫忙。Whichisbetter?A.IstronglyrecommendyoutotakeatripbyridingasharedbicyclealongthePearlRiver.B.TomeetmodernGuangzhou,IstronglyrecommendyoutotakeatripbyridingasharedbicyclealongthePearlRiver.

句子前面加上表目的的前置狀語，可以讓句式富于變化，可以讓讀者快速了解語意核心！Whichisbetter?A.Bythe