【2023年】陜西省榆林市大學(xué)英語6級大

學(xué)英語六級真題（含答案）

學(xué)校:班級:姓名:考號:

一、l.Writing（10題）

1.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledTheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet.Youshouldwriteat

least150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.隨著社會(huì)和經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展.網(wǎng)絡(luò)成為了每個(gè)人必不可少的獲取信息的工具

2.但是，在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上也出現(xiàn)了一些不健康的因素，如垃圾信息、黃色網(wǎng)

站、虛假新聞、網(wǎng)絡(luò)炒作等

3.我們應(yīng)采取措施制止這些，并建立一個(gè)健康的網(wǎng)絡(luò)環(huán)境

TheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet

2.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitled

"TheFirstImpressionofMyRoommate"Youshouldwriteatleast150words

followingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.這是我在大學(xué)的第一天。

2.他（她）就是我的同學(xué)。

3-我仔細(xì)打量了他（她），發(fā)現(xiàn)……

3.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteashort

essayentitledHowtoDealwithDisobedientBehaviorsofTeenagersYou

shouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbellow.

1.青少年有叛逆行為；

2.家長對孩子表現(xiàn)出的一系列反應(yīng)；

3.如何對待孩子的逆反心理

HowtoDealwithDisobedientBehaviorsofTeenagers

4.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

onthetopic:IsCitytheOnlyWorkingPlaceforCollegeGraduates?You

shouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.目前，大學(xué)畢業(yè)生仍把城市作為就業(yè)的第一選擇

2.造成這和現(xiàn)象的原因

3.其實(shí)，家村和落后地區(qū)對于大學(xué)生的發(fā)展更有優(yōu)勢

IsCitytheOnlyWorkingPlaceforCollegeGraduates?

5.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledSmokinginPublicPlacesShould(Not)BeBanned.Youshouldwrite

atleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.提出你的立場和理由

2.提出可能的反對理由

3.給予相應(yīng)的反駁，或提出合理的建議

6.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteaposter

recruitingvolunteers.YoushouldwriteatLeast120wordsfollowingthe

outlinegivenbelow:

1.校學(xué)生會(huì)將組織一次暑假志愿者活動(dòng)，現(xiàn)招募志愿者

2.本次志愿者活動(dòng)的目的、活動(dòng)安排等

3,報(bào)名條件及聯(lián)系方式

7.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthe

topicTestforNationalCivilServants.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

accordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.近幾年興起了一股國家公務(wù)員考試(TestforNationalCivilServants)熱

2.產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因

3.我的看法

TestforNationalCivilServants

8.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

onthetopicSay"Thanks"toParents.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

followingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.很多大學(xué)生從未對父母的養(yǎng)育之恩道過謝

2.請?jiān)敿?xì)說明其中的原因

3.你的算法Say"Thanks"toParents

9.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

withthetitleofAnEye-witnessAccountofaTrafficAccident.Youshould

writeatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.

假設(shè)你在某日某時(shí)某地目擊一起車禍，就此寫一份見證書。見證書須包

括以下幾點(diǎn)：

1.車禍發(fā)生的時(shí)間及地點(diǎn)

2.你所見到的車禍情況

3.你對車禍原因的分析

10.Directions:Inthissectionyouarerequiredtowriteacompositiononthe

topic"ReduceWasteonCampus".Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsand

baseyourcompositionontheoutlinegiveninChinesebelow.

1.目前有些校園內(nèi)浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象嚴(yán)重；

2.浪費(fèi)的危害；

3.從我做起，杜絕浪費(fèi)。

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10題)

11.TrustMe,I'maRobot

Withrobotsnowemergingfromtheirindustrialcagesandmovingintohomes

andworkplaces,roboticistsareconcernedaboutthesafetyimplications

beyondthefactoryfloor.Toaddresstheseconcerns,leadingrobotexperts

havecometogethertotrytofindwaystopreventrobotsfromharmingpeople.

InspiredbythePugwashConferences-aninternationalgroupofscientists,

academiesandactivistsfoundedin1957tocampaignforthenon-proliferation

ofnuclearweaponsthenewgroupofrobo-ethicistsmetearlierthisyearin

Genoa,Italy,andannouncedtheirinitialfindingsinMarchattheEuropean

RoboticsSymposiuminPalermo,Sicily.

"Securityandsafetyarethebigconcerns,"saysHenrikChristensen,chairman

oftheEuropeanRoboticsNetworkattheSwedishRoyalInstituteof

TechnologyinStockholm.Shouldrobotsthatarestrongenoughorheavy

enoughtocrushpeoplebeallowedintohomes?Is"systemmalfunction"a

justifiabledefenceforaroboticfighterplanethatcontravenes（違反）the

GenevaConventionandmistakenlyfiresoninnocentcivilians?

"Thesequestionsmayseemhardtounderstandbutinthenextfewyearsthey

willbecomeincreasinglyrelevant,"saysDr.Christensen.Accordingtothe

UnitedNationsEconomicCommissionforEurope'sWorldRoboticsSurvey,

in2002thenumberofdomesticandservicerobotsmorethantripled,nearly

surpassingtheirindustrialcounterparts.Bytheendof2003thereweremore

than600,000robotvacuumcleanersandlawnmowers——afigurepredictedto

risetomorethan4mbytheendofnextyear.Japaneseindustrialfirmsare

racingtobuildhumanoidrobotstoactasdomestichelpersfortheelderly,and

SouthKoreahassetagoalthat100%ofhouseholdsshouldhavedomestic

robotsby2020.Inlightofallthis,itiscrucialthatwestarttothinkabout

safetyguidelinesnow,saysDr.Christensen.

Stoprightthere

Sowhatexactlyisbeingdonetoprotectusfromthesemechanicalmenaces?

"Notenough,"saysBlayWhitby.Thisishardlysurprisinggiventhatthefield

of"safety-criticalcomputing"isbarelyadecadeold,hesays.Butthingsare

changing,andresearchersareincreasinglytakinganinterestintryingtomake

robotssafer.Oneapproach,which.soundssimpleenough,istrytoprogram

themtoavoidcontactwithpeoplealtogether.Butthisismuchharderthanit

sounds.Gettingarobottonavigateacrossaclutteredroomisdifficultenough

withouthavingtotakeintoaccountwhatitsvariouslimbsorappendages

mightbumpintoalongtheway.

"Regulatingthebehaviourofrobotsisgoingtobecomemoredifficultinthe

future,sincetheywillincreasinglyhaveself-learningmechanismsbuiltinto

them,"saysGianmarcoVeruggio."Asaresult,theirbehaviourwillbecome

impossibletopredictfully,"hesays,"sincetheywillnotbebehavingin

predefinedwaysbutwilllearnnewbehaviourastheygo."

Thenthereisthequestionofunpredictablefailures.Whathappensifarobot's

motorsstopworking,oritsuffersasystemfailurejustasitisperformingheart

surgeryorhandingyouacupofhotcoffee?Youcan,ofcourse,buildin

redundancybyaddingbackupsystems,saysHirochikaInoue.Butthis

guaranteesnothing,hesays."Onehundredpercentsafetyisimpossible

throughtechnology,"saysDr.Inoue.Thisisbecauseultimatelynomatterhow

thoroughyouare,youcannotanticipatetheunpredictablenatureofhuman

behaviour,hesays.Ortoputitanotherway,nomatterhowsophisticatedyour

robotisatavoidingpeople,peoplemightnotalwaysmanagetoavoidit,and

couldenduptrippingoveritandfallingdownthestairs.

Legalproblems

Inanycase,saysDr.Inoue,thelawsreallyjustsummarizecommonsense

principlesthatarealreadyappliedtothedesignofmostmodernappliances,

bothdomesticandindustr

A.Thenon-proliferationofnuclearweapons.

B.Saferobotsinallaspectsoflife.

C.Robot-ethicsinthenewcentury.

D.Restrie6onontheuseofrobotsasaweapon.

12.

Besideslowbirthrate,isanotherfactorthatfuelsthetrendofrural

populationinpartsofEurope.

13.PartIIReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)

Directions:Inthispartyouwillhave15minutestogooverthepassage

quicklyandanswerthequestionsonAnswerSheet1.Forquestions1-7,

choosethebestanswerfromthefourchoicesmarkedA),B),C)andD).For

questions8-10,completethesentenceswiththeinformationgiveninthe

passage.

ProtectYourNest

It'snevertooearlytoprotectyourfamily'sfinancialwell-being.Yetbecause

mostofusaresobusyjugglingworkandfamilycommitments,wetendto

neglectthethingsthatdon'trequireimmediateattention.Someday,wethink,

we'lltakecareofthethreeessentials-retirementsavings,insurancecoverage

andestateplanning.Unfortunately,emergenciescanstrikeandthenit'stoo

late."Failuretoplanisahugemistake,"BarbaraRaasch,managingdirector

atWealthandTaxAdvisoryServices,Inc.,toldus.

Howcanyouavoidthe"shouldhave,couldhave,wouldhave"scenario?By

puttingthesethreeitemsatthetopofyour"todo"list-protectyourfuture,

protectyourfamilyandprotectyourlegacy(遺產(chǎn)).

ProtectYourFuture

Thenationalsavingsrateaveragedaround0.4%forthefirsthalfofthisyear,

accordingtotheU.S.DepartmentofCommerce,meaningAmericansspenta

shopping99.6%oftheirafter-taxearnings.Evenmorefrightening,inJulythe

savingsratedroppedbelowzero.Weallknowweshouldsavemore.Butwith

somanygoalstosavefor-ahouse,thekids'collegetuition,yourretirement,

occasionalvacationsandasmallemergencyfund-it'seasytofeelthere'sjust

notenoughmoneytodoitall.

Budget.Thefirststepistocreateabudget.Onceyouknowwhatyou're

spendingyourmoneyon,youcanfigureoutWhatyoudon'tneedtospendit

on-andstockthosesavingsaway."Everymonthyouhavetopayyourself

first,"saysJoeMoglia,CEOofAmeritrade."Takealittleoutofyour

paycheck."Itdoesn'thavetobemuch-itcouldbeforegoing（放棄）thatextra

latticeorgettingtheDVDfreeatthelibrary.

Retirement.JustabouteverysurveyofAmericaninvestorsthesedaysshows

thatretirementisamainreasonforsaving.Yetanastoundingnumberof

peopleignoretheopportunitiesofferedbyemployment-basedretirement

plans.AccordingtoarecentsurveybyAonConsulting,morethan20%of

thoseeligiblefora401kplandonotparticipateatall,whileanother53%do

notsaveataratehighenoughtotakefulladvantageoftheiremployers'

matchingcontribution-theclosestthingtofreemoneyintheretirement

savingsuniverse.Consideritmoneythatgrowswithoutbeingtaxed.

Emergencyreserves.Manyfinancialplannersrecommendthatyouhave

enoughmoneyinasavingsormoney-marketaccountforat,leastsixtonine

monthsofessentialexpenses,includingyourmortgageorrent,insurance

premiums,creditcardpayments,utilityandgrocerybillsandotherfixed

expenses,suchascarpaymentsorstudentloans.Andit'salwaysagoodidea

tohavecashonhandonceyouareconfrontedwithemergencysituations.For

example,iftheATMsinyourneighborhoodareout,youcanhaveenoughto

coveryourimmediateneedsforaweekorso.

ProtectYourFamily

Amajorillness,anextendeddisability（殘疾）orthelossofajobcouldwipe

outyourfinancialreservesandanyprospectofbeingabletosaveenoughto

achieveyourotherlifegoals.Here'swhatyouneedtoprotectyoursavings:

Healthinsurance.Arecentstudyofcourtrecordsanddirectinterviews

indicatedthatabouthalfofpersonalbankruptciesintheU.S.arecausedin

partbymedicaldebts.Onlypeopleover65areentitledtothemedicare.So

peopleunderthatagefaceenormousbillsandmanyofthemlackinsurance.

Ifyourcompanypro

A.Becausewedon'tknowwhatfamilyfinancialwell-beingis.

B.Becausewefocustoomuchondevelopingfamilyrelationships.

C.Becausewethinkworkismuchmoreimportant.

D.Becausewethinkitneedn'tbedealtwithimmediately.

14.

Thenutritionalqualityoffoodproductvariesinaccordancewith.

15.

Todayleisuremeansthetimeinwhichwehavenothingtodo.

A.YB.NC.NG

16.Theauthor'sexperienceinBangkokshowsthat.

A.therestoftheworldprovestobeextremelyrisky

B.peopleshouldnotbeafraidofvisitingothercountries

C.thelocalsareunawareofthesecretpoliticalprotests

D.thenewshelpspeoplestayawayfromdangerousplaces

17.

Contrarytoindividualsportswhichcallforagreatersenseofautonomy,team

sportslayemphasison.

18.

WritersofMarkTwain'stimedoesnetseehimashighlyasthelaterwriters

do.

A.YB.NC.NG

19.Whatdoestheauthorsayaboutsomeexperts?

A.Theyareauthoritiesonlyintheirownfields.

B.Theyaren'teasilyfooledbythetrickytests.

C.Themistakesthey'vemadeareinevitable.

D.Theysometimesfailtodowellasclaimed.

20.

Americanhighschoolstudentssinkalmosttothebottominasurveyofmath

andscienceliteracybecausetoomanyofthehighschoolinAmerica

arenotqualified.

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10題)

21.(25)

A.Shehascutherfingers.

B.Shehasbrokenherlegs.

C.Herfeetarebadlyhurt.

D.Herfalseteetharen'tfit.

22.(34)

Altwasadinnerparty.

B.Itwasaneighborhoodparty.

C.Itwasabirthdayparty.

D.Itwasabankparty.

23.

[B8]

24.

[B6]

25.(36)

A.Physics.

B.Mathematics.

C.Environmentalscience.

D.Lifescience.

26.(19)

A.AskDr.Smithtocallthelibrary.

B.AskDr.Smithtoalterhisdecision.

C.GetDr.Smith'swrittenpermission.

D.GetthebookdirectlyfromDr.Smith.

27.聽力原文:M:CouldyouhelpmetodecidewhatIshouldbuyformy

brother'sbirthday?

W:Remember,youtookapictureofhimathislastbirthdayparty?whynot

buyhimaframe,sothathecanfixthepictureinit?

Q:Whatdidthemandolastyearforhisbrother'sbirthday?

(14)

A.Tookaphotoofhim.

B.Boughthimapicture.

C.Heldabirthdayparty.

D.Boughthimaframe,forhispicture.

28.

[B2]

29.[Bll]

30.(35)

A.AirlinepilotsmuststarttolearnEnglishin21stcentury.

B.AsabankclerkheshouldlearnspecialEnglishtomeettheneedsofhis

work.

C.PeoplecanbenefitfromintermediatelevelofEnglishintheirownfield.

D.TeacherswithintermediatelevelofEnglishcanteachtheirstudentswell.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3題)

31.TOFOREIGNERS,fewthingsseemaspeculiarlyBritishasthehabitof

sendingyoungchildrenawayfromhometoschool.Atfirstglance,boarding

schoolsarethriving,withalmost70,000childrenwithintheir

walls.Independenteducation(bothdayandboarding)producesbetter-than-

averageacademicresults:theyteachonly7%ofEnglishpupilsbutsupply38%

ofthosegainingthreeormoreAgradesintheA-levelexamstakenenage18.

Yetsomeboardingschoolsarestruggling.Whilethedemandforprivate

schoolshasincreasedoverthepast20years,thenumberofchildrenat

boardingschoolshasdroppedsharply—from112,135in1985to68,255in

2005.Thedeclineleveledofffouryearsago,thanks,saysome,tothe

popularityoftheHarryPotterbooks.

Onereasonwhyboardingschoolshavelostsomeoftheirappealishighfees

—theaverageisaroundPounds18,830($35,470)ayear.Luridstoriesof

childrenwhoharmthemselvesortakedrags,farfromparentaleyes,havenot

helped.Someschoolsareintroublefinancially:threemergershavetaken

placethisyear;oneschoolinBuckinghamshirewillcloseinAugust;and

another,inSussex,wasrecentlyrescuedbyparents.

YetAdrianUnderwood,nationaldirectoroftheBoardingSchools'

Association,describesthefutureas"rosy".Hisoptimismstemspartlyfrom

renewedpoliticalinterestintakingchildrenfromfostercareandchildren's

homesandsendingthemtoboardingschoolsinstead.Only6%ofthosein

carein2004gotfivegodgradesintheirGCSEexams(takenatabout16years

ofage),comparedwith53%ofchildrenoverall.Boardingschoolscanoffer

smallclassesandgooddiscipline,helpingpupilstocounterthelow

expectationsthatpreventthemfromachievingalltheycould.

AworkingpartyintheDepartmentforEducationandSkillshasspentmonths

lookingatwaystoexpandtheprogramme.Pilotprojectsareduetostartin

September2007.Amongthe80orsoschoolsthatareinterestedare

Wellington,anindependentseniorschoolinSomerset,andtheDragonSchool,

apreparatoryschoolinOxford.JohnWalker,speakingforBritain'sprep

schools(whicheducatechildrenfromages7to13),saystheycouldtake

pupilsasyoungasfiveyearsold.Localauthoritiesarelessenthusiastic.

Schoolswantfullresponsibilityforthechildrentheyaccept,whilecouncils

andsocialworkerswanttobeabletocheckuponthem.Somethinkthat

removingchildrenfromanyversionofparentingcouldhavedamaginglong-

termeffects.Holidaysarealsoproblematic:theFosteringNetwork,which

representsfoster-carets,saysthatmanyfosterparentsareunwillingtohave

childrenonlyfortheholidays.

Forboardingschools,boththosewithanidealisticstreakandthefinancially

strapped,theappealofincreasingnumbersisclear,aslongasotherparents

don'tsquawk.Theyhaveanotherreasontobekeen.Newlawswillsoon

requirecharitiestojustifytheirtaxbreaksbyprovingthattheybenefitsociety

atlarge.Independentschools,80%ofwhichhavecharitablestatus,reaped

pounds88mintaxrebatesin2004.Acceptingafewneedychildrenalight

wellsafeguardthatstatus.

Intheopeningparagraph,theauthorintroduceshistopicby.

A.posingacontrast

B.justifyinganassumption

C.makingacomparison

D.explainingaphenomenon

32.SectionB

Directions:Thereare2passagesinthissection.Eachpassageisfollowedby

somequestionsorunfinishedstatements.Foreachofthemtherearefour

choicesmarkedA,B,CandD.Youshoulddecideonthebestchoice.

Intheatmosphere,carbondioxideactsratherlikeaone-waymirrortheglass

intheroofofagreenhousewhichallowsthesun'sraystoenterbutprevents

theheatfromescaping.Accordingtoaweatherexpert'sprediction,the

atmospherewillbe3℃warmerintheyear2050thanitistoday,ifman

continuesto'burnfuelsatthepresentrate.Ifthiswanninguptookplace,the

icecapsinthepoleswouldbegintomelt,thusraisingsealevelseveralmeters

andseverelyfloodingcoastalcities.Also,theincreaseinatmospheric

temperaturewouldleadtogreatchangesintheclimateofthenorthern

hemisphere,possiblyresultinginanalterationofearth'schieffood-growing

zones.

Inthepast,concernaboutamanmadewarmingoftheearthhasconcentrated

ontheArcticbecausetheAntarcticismuchcolderandhasamuchthickerice

sheet.ButtheweatherexpertsarenowpayingmoreattentiontoWest

Antarctic,whichmaybeaffectedbyonlyafewdegreesofwarming,inother

words,byawarmingonthescalethatwillpossiblytakeplaceinthenextfifty

yearsfromtheburningoffuels.

SatellitepicturesshowthatlargeareasofAntarcticicearealready

disappearing.Theevidenceavailablesuggeststhatawarminghastakenplace.

Thisfitsthetheorythatcarbondioxidewarmstheearth.

However,mostofthefuelisburntinthenorthernhemisphere,where

temperaturesseemtobefalling.Scientistsconclude,therefore,thatuptonow

naturalinfluencesontheweatherhaveexceededthosecausedbyman.The

questionis,whichnaturalcausehasmosteffectontheweather?

Onepossibilityisthevariablebehavior,ofthesun.Astronomersatone

researchstationhavestudiedthehotspotsand"cold"spots(thatis,the

relativelylesshotspots)onthesun.Asthesunrotatesevery27.5days,it

presentshotteror"colder"facestotheearth,anddifferentaspectstodifferent

partsoftheearth.Thisseemstohaveaconsiderableeffectonthedistribution

oftheearth'satmosphericpressure,andconsequentlyonwindcirculation.

Thesunisalsovariableoveralongterm:itsheatoutputgoesupanddownin

cycles,thelatesttrendbeingdownward.

Scientistsarenowfindingmutualrelationsbetweenmodelsofsolar-weather

interactionsandtheactualclimateovermanythousandsofyears,including

thelastIceAge.Theproblemisthatthemodelsarepredictingthattheworld

shouldbeenteringanewIceAgeanditisnot.Onewayofsolvingthis

theoreticaldifficultyistoassumeadelayofthousandsofyearswhilethesolar

effectsovercometheinenia(慣性)oftheearth'sclimate.Ifthisisright,the

warmingeffectofcarbondioxidemightthusbeservingasausefulcounter-

balancetothesun'sdiminishingheat.

Aconcentrationofcarbondioxideintheatmospherewould.

A.preventthesun'sraysfromreachingtheearth'ssurface

B.meanawarmingupintheArctic

C.accountforgreatchangesintheclimateinthenorthernhemisphere

D.raisethetemperatureoftheearth'ssurface

33.

TheexperimentatJohnHopkinsUniversityshowsthat.

A.babiescanrecognizeoddwordsinstinctively

B.byaboutninemonths,babiesbeginrecognizingfrequentpatternsin

language

C.babiesinthecontrolgrouparenotinterestedinthestoriestheyheard

D.repetitionhelpsbabiesunderstandthemeaningsofthewords

五、5.ErrorCorrection?題）

34.

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35.

[S4]

36.

[S9]

六、6.ErrorCorrection?題）

37.TheproblemswhichfacewithlearnersofEnglishcanSI.

bedividedintothreecategories:psychological,culture,S2.

andlinguistic.Thelargestcategoryseemstobelinguistic.

Whenforeignlearnersfirsthavetheopportunitytospeakto

anativespeakerofEnglish,theymayhaveashock:they

oftenhavelittledifficultyinunderstandingspokenEnglishS3.

ofnativespeakers.Thereareanumberofreasonstothis.S4.

First,itseemstostudentsthatEnglishpeoplespeakveryS5.

quickly.Secondly,theysaywithavarietyofaccents.

Thirdly,differentstylesofspeechareusedindifferent

situations,forexample,everydayspokenEnglish,whichis

colloquialandidiomatic,aredifferentfromtheEnglishS6.

usedforacademicpurposes.Forallofthesereasons

studentswillhavedifficulty,mainlybecausewelackS7.

practiceinlisteningtoEnglishpeoplespeakingEnglish.

Whatcanastudentdethentoovercomethese

difficulties?Well,obviously,hecanbenefitinattendingS8.

Englishclassesandheshouldtakeeveryopportunity

availabletospeakwithnativespeakersofEnglish.He

shouldbeawareof,however,thatEnglishpeopleare,byS9.

temperament,oftenreservedandmaybewillingtostartaS10.

conversation.Soheshouldhavethecouragetotakethe

initiative（主動(dòng)）.

[SI]

38.

[S5]

39.

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參考答案

l.TheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet[1]Withthedevelopmentof

oursocietyandeconomytheInternetbecomesanecessarytoolforeveryone

toobtaininformation.[2]Howevertherearealsosomeunhealthycontentsin

tTheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet[1]Withthedevelopmentof

oursocietyandeconomy,theInternetbecomesanecessarytoolforeveryone

toobtaininformation.[2]However,therearealsosomeunhealthycontentsin

t解析：作文標(biāo)題是“創(chuàng)建健康網(wǎng)絡(luò)環(huán)境的重要性”，這已經(jīng)表明，寫作

的重點(diǎn)是說明“為什么要?jiǎng)?chuàng)建健康的網(wǎng)絡(luò)環(huán)境”。但所給出的outline沒有

體現(xiàn)這一點(diǎn)。僅僅根據(jù)outline動(dòng)筆，恐怕寫不出好作文來。

提綱的第1點(diǎn)和第2點(diǎn)都址說背景，是為我們要論述的論點(diǎn)服務(wù)的；第

3點(diǎn)指向“措施”，也與論點(diǎn)有關(guān)。但是，以這三點(diǎn)中的任何一條為中心，

都有可能偏題。

那么該如何做這篇文章呢?不僅要把提綱中的內(nèi)容納入，而且還要特別

淪述“創(chuàng)建健康網(wǎng)絡(luò)環(huán)境的重要性”。要思考那么兒條“重要性”出來，才

能有話可說，切合中心主旨。洲練從不同的角度考慮健康網(wǎng)絡(luò)的重要忤，

培養(yǎng)良好的思維能力，是寫好此類作文的關(guān)鍵。

Analysis

[1]對應(yīng)outline的第1條

[2]對應(yīng)outline的第2條。如果不知道怎么用英潔表達(dá)“炒

作”(drumbeating),不說就是。反正僅僅是不良現(xiàn)象中的一個(gè)例子而已。

[3]主題句，對應(yīng)作文標(biāo)題。

[4][5][6]三條理由。健康的網(wǎng)絡(luò)可以：預(yù)防網(wǎng)絡(luò)犯罪：保護(hù)兒童不受

不良信息的影響；方便我們更好地利用網(wǎng)絡(luò)資源。(這部分可以八仙過海,

各顯神通)

⑺總結(jié)全文.照應(yīng)outline的第3條。

2.TheFirstImpressionofMyRoommateItwasmyfirstdayattheinstitute.I

gotintothebuildingwhereIwasgoingtoliveandlookeddoorafterdoorfor

myname.AtlastIfoundit.IntheroomtherewasalreadyastudentTheFirst

ImpressionofMyRoommateItwasmyfirstdayattheinstitute.Igotintothe

buildingwhereIwasgoingtolive,andlookeddoorafterdoorformyname.

AtlastIfoundit.Intheroom,therewasalreadyastudent

3.HowtoDealwithDisobedientBehaviorsofTeenagersManyteenagersact

againsttheirparentswishes.Iftheparentsvalueneatnesstheywillbeuntidy

theirroomsmessyandtheirclothesdirty.Iftheparentsinsistongoodmanners

theywillinterruptconversations.Iftheparentsenjoygracefullanguagethey

willspeakslang.Iftheparentstreasurepeacetheywillquarrelwiththe

neighborsandbullytheirchildren.Iftheparentsareconcernedabouthealth

theywillwearsummerclothesinfreezingweather.Parentsusuallyrespond

inthefollowingway.Firsttheygettough.Whenthisfailstheyswitchto

kindness.Whennoresultsfollowtheytryreasoning.Whengentlepersuasion

fallsondeafearstheyreturntothreatsandpunishment.Expertsadvise

relaxationinfaceofsuchasituation.Fightingateenagerlikefightingatide

isboundtofail.Whencaughtinacrosscurrentexperiencedswimmersfloat

andletthetidecarrytheminsteadofstrugglinguntiltheyfindafirmfooting.

Likewiseparentsofteenagersmustfolwwithlifeadaptingtothem.Howto

DealwithDisobedientBehaviorsofTeenagersManyteenagersactagainst

theirparentswishes.Iftheparentsvalueneatness,theywillbeuntidy,their

roomsmessy,andtheirclothesdirty.Iftheparentsinsistongoodmanners,

theywillinterruptconversations.Iftheparentsenjoygracefullanguage,they

willspeakslang.Iftheparentstreasurepeace,theywillquarrelwiththe

neighbors,andbullytheirchildren.Iftheparentsareconcernedabouthealth,

theywillwearsummerclothesinfreezingweather.Parentsusuallyrespond

inthefollowingway.First,theygettough.Whenthisfails,theyswitchto

kindness.Whennoresultsfollow,theytryreasoning.Whengentlepersuasion

fallsondeafears,theyreturntothreatsandpunishment.Expertsadvise

relaxationinfaceofsuchasituation.Fightingateenager,likefightingatide,

isboundtofail.Whencaughtinacrosscurrent,experiencedswimmersfloat

andletthetidecarrytheminsteadofstruggling,untiltheyfindafirmfooting.

Likewise,parentsofteenagersmustfolwwithlife,adaptingtothem.

4.1sCitytheOnlyWorkingPlaceforCollegeGraduates?Nowadaysmany

collegegraduatesstillviewcityastheironlychoiceintheirjob-hunting.

Manyofthempreferstayingincitywithlittleincometoworkinginthe

countrysidewithasteadyincome.Someevenarewillingtoabandontheir

specialtyforajobthathasnothingtodowiththeirmajorinordertostayin

city.Thisphenomenonoccursfordifferentreasons.Onereasonisthatmany

collegestudentsarcquiteawareofthefactthatthecitypossessesfarmore

conveniencesandfacilitiesthanthecountryside.Inthesecondplacethey

believethattherearemoreopportunitiesfortheirdevelopmentincity.

Furthermoresomecollegestudentstiredoftheirparents'livingstyleinthe

countrysidewouldliketoliveinadifferentwayincity.Theseideasseem

correctbutcanneverdenytheadvantagesofthecountrysideforcollege

graduates.Firstlytheyhavemorechoicesindecidingontheirjobsandmany

ofthemcanusetheirknowledgeinthefieldoftheirspecialties.Thenthere

aremoreopportunitiesinthecountrysideforthecollegestudentstodevelop

notonlyacademicallybutalsosocially.What'smorethevalueoflifeliesmore

inaperson'scontributiontosocietyth