TCEE續(xù)寫話題分類（16類）

主題01堅(jiān)持不懈/勇敢追夢

主題02獲得自信

第一類：與自我主題03克服恐懼

主題04選擇誠實(shí)

主題05學(xué)會合作/不再自私

主題06傳遞善意

主題07愛的表達(dá)

主題08愛的和解

第二類：與他人

主題09見義勇為

主題10認(rèn)知改觀

主題11分享趣事

主題12動物救人

主題13人救動物

第三類：與自然主題14獸口逃生

主題15家有萌寵

主題16險(xiǎn)境求生

這個合集為我在2023年秋學(xué)期任教高一時(shí)帶學(xué)生練習(xí)的題目及課件，因?yàn)橹挥?0篇，所以未包含

全部上面我列出的全部主題。但是10篇練習(xí)下來，大部分學(xué)生的表達(dá)已經(jīng)非常非常好了，所以大家

放心用吧?

PS：上課時(shí)我是要求學(xué)生把PPT上的表格全部記到筆記本上，并利用早讀時(shí)間全部背誦且默寫的?

下面的序號就是根據(jù)這個合集的序號來的。

01讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：丟戒指后續(xù)

Paulaisa55-year-oldwomanlivinginNewJersey.Shelivesahappylifewithoutconcernforfinancialor

socialproblemsandsheconstantlyshareslaughswithherfamilyandfriends.Abouttenyearsago,herhusband

Michaelgaveheragoldringwithadiamondinitontheir20thweddinganniversary.Shecherisheditvery

muchandworeiteveryday.

Havingbeenmarriedforalmost30years,Paulahadeverythingsetforherself,andknewthatherlifein

NewJerseywasathrillingone.Oneday,Paulawasinthebathroomcleaningeverythingup,fromthesinkto

thefloor.Shewantedtokeepherhousecleanandbeautiful.AssoonasPaulafinishedwashingthebathtub,she

movedontothepartshefearedmost：thetoilet.Wantingtogetitoutoftheway,shequicklycleanedthe

insideofthetoiletwithabrush,andflushed（［中走）thesoapaway.Afterfinishing,shefelttherewassomething

wrong,butshecouldn'tthinkofwhatitwas.

Paula'sheartskippedabeatwhenshenoticedthatherleftringfingerfeltabitlighter.Sheslowlylooked

downatherringfinger,hopingthathertreasuredanniversarygiftwasstillonit.Shewasfrightenedtoseethat

itwaslost.Shedidn'tnoticethatsheflusheditdownthetoilet.

Paulasaid,“Imusthaveflusheditdown.Ithadbeenalittlebigonmyfinger,becauseitwaswintertime

andmyhandsweresmaller.Ifeltsobadaboutit.Sadandembarrassed.,,

Shecouldn'tbelievethatshejustletthousandsofdollarsgodownthedrain（下水道），literally.She

searchedthebathroomandeventhehouse,hopingthatshejustdroppeditsomewhereandforgotaboutit.

Sheeventookapartthetoiletandsearchedtheinsidepipeswithaflashlight,butinvain.Paulahadnoidea

howtoexplainthistoherhusband.Tobuythering,Michaelworkedextrahardbeforetheanniversary,soto

tellhimthebadnewswasunimaginableforPaula.

Paral：Shesoftlyknockedonthedoortotheirbedroom.

Para2：Afterfinishingherexplanation,PaulawipedawayhertearsandwaitedforMichaeltosaysomething.

Paral.

（l）Michael立刻開了門。（2）走進(jìn)房間，Paula低著頭，垂下眼睛，避免和他有任何眼神接觸，她心里越

來越有負(fù)罪感。（3）看到Paula的失望，丈夫關(guān)切地問她發(fā)生了什么事。（4）Michael的體貼加重了她

的內(nèi)疚。（5）Paula鼓起勇氣告訴Michael,她不小心把戒指沖下馬桶了。（6）在解釋的過程中，悔恨

的淚水充滿了她的眼睛。

（1）Michaelansweredthedoorimmediately.（2）Steppingintotheroom,Paulahungdownherheadwith

hereyesdroppingtoavoidmakinganyeyecontact,growingguiltcreepingintohisheart.（3）Perceiving

Paula'sdisappointment,thehusbandaskedherwhathadhappenedwithconcern,（4）MichaeVsthoughtfulness

addedtoherguilt.（5）PaulapluckedupcourageandtoldMichaelthatsheflushedtheringdownthetoiletby

accident.（6）Overthecourseofexplanation,tearsofregretfilledhereyes.

Para2.

（l）Michael聽了Paula的話，走到她跟前，輕輕地拍了拍她的背。（2）Michael對她的錯誤的反應(yīng)使Paula

大吃一驚?！罚┧痤^，茫然地皺著眉頭直視著邁克爾的眼睛。（4）覺察到Paula的困惑，Michael微

笑著安慰他的妻子說:“戒指只是我們愛情的象征。最重要的是我們的愛永遠(yuǎn)存在。”（5）Paula感動得說

不出話來，她伸出手緊緊地?fù)肀Я薓ichael。

（1）HavingheardPaula'swords,Michaelwalkedovertoherandpattedhergentlyontheback,（2）Theway

MichaelrespondedtohermistakeastonishedPaula.（3）SheraisedherheadtolookdirectlyintoMichaeVs

eyeswithaconfusedfrown.（4）SensingPaula*sconfusion,Michaelsmiledandcomfortedhiswife,"Thering

isjustareminderofourlove.Whatcountsmostisthatourloveexistsforever."（5）Touchedbeyondwords,

PaulareachedouttoembraceMichaeltightly.

02續(xù)寫練習(xí)：母親的疤痕

Raju'sfamilywasthesmallestfamilyonthecoastallineofKanyakumari.Rajuwas10yearsold.Hewas

tall,darkandhandsomeandhadalotofdreams.Hehadalwaysdreamtoflivinginacity.Hewasalwayshis

dad'scharm,ashewasnotquitehappytospendtimewithhismom.Allhecouldrememberabouthismom

washerscars,redandwhitescarsonherface,neckandhands.Healwaysfeltunpleasanttoseehismom'sface.

Butwhathedidnotknowwasthathismomscratchedherbeautytosavehimfromafirewhenhewasone

yearold.Notwantingtoburdenhimwithit,R.aju*sparentskeptitasecret.

HismomKamalausedtodrophimtoschoolandpickhimupeveryday.Hefeltawkwardtoseehismom

withthatscarredfacestandinginfrontoftheschoolgate.Ashewaslaughingandchattingwithhisfellow

schoolmates,allofthembecamesilentandstartedstaringatthegate.So,Rajuturnedtowardsthegatewitha

lotofcuriosity.Hefrozewhenseeinghismom,facecoveredwithapieceofcloth.Rajufeltashamedand

rushedoutoftheschoolwithlotsofanger.

Withdayspassingby,Rajustartedtodislikehismommore.Hedidnotliketogetpickedupordropped

byhismom.Hefeltthatshewasuglyandsoabnormal.Ashegrewold,hestoppedgoingoutwithhertothe

marketoranywhereoutside.Kamalatriedherbesttomakehersonhappy,gothimeverythingthathewanted

andgavehimhisspace.Sheunderstoodwhathersonwasgoingthroughandfeltpityforherselfandsadforher

son,asshewashelpless.

WhenRajuturned15,hewassenttoacityhighschool67kilometersawayfromhiscoastalvillage.The

verythoughtofnotbeingwithhisuglymothermadehimveryhappy.

Threeyearslater,thencameRaju*sgraduationceremony.Hisparentsdidn'twanttobeabsentfromsuch

animportantoccasion,sotheymanagedtobetherewithoutinformingRaju.

Paral：Rajuwasshockedwhenseeinghisparentsarriveattheceremonyhall.

Para2：Hesitatingforamoment,Raj3sfathertoldhimeverythingthathappenedmanyyearsago.

【范文】

走到他們面前，拉朱勉強(qiáng)笑了笑，跟父親打了個招呼，完全不理睬母親，她的臉上又蒙上了一塊

布。然而，當(dāng)拉朱聽到一些學(xué)生好奇地議論他母親的臉時(shí)，他感到既尷尬又憤怒。“你毀了我的畢業(yè)

典禮!”拉朱咬著牙，憤怒地看了他母親一眼。拉朱怒不可遏，一把抓住媽媽的胳膊，使勁地推她，想

把她趕出大廳。他的媽媽努力站著不動，[低著頭，努力忍住眼淚][用手捂著臉啜泣著]。

Havingwalkeduptothem,Rajumanagedasmile/fbrcedastrainedsmileandgreetedhisfather,totally

ignoringhismother,whosefacewascoveredwithapieceofclothagain.However,whenRajuheardsome

studentswhisperingabouthismother'sfacewithcuriosity,amixtureofembarrassmentandanger

overwhelmedhim."Youhaveruinedmygraduationceremony!saidRaju,bitinghisteethandgivinghis

motherafuriouslook.Boilingwithrage,Rajuseizedhismum'sarmandpushedherhard,attemptingtodrive

heroutofthehall.Strugglingtostandstill,hismum[hungdownherhead,endeavoringtoholdback

tears][sobbed,hidingherfaceinherhands].

聽到這個意外的事實(shí)，拉朱驚呆了，說不出話來。當(dāng)傷害母親的場景浮現(xiàn)在他的腦海中，氐yu對

自己之前的行為感到非常后悔，內(nèi)疚的淚水充滿了他的眼睛。他伸出雙手，小心而溫柔地?fù)崦鴭寢?/p>

臉上的傷疤，一遍又一遍地低聲說著“對不起”。他幾乎無法想象母親因?yàn)樗谏眢w上和精神上承受

了多大的痛苦。媽媽抬起頭，直視著兒子的眼睛，慢慢露出了寬慰的微笑。看著媽媽的臉，拉朱終于

意識到媽媽為他做出的犧牲，撲進(jìn)了媽媽的懷抱。

Uponhearingtheunexpectedfact,Rajuwasnumbwithshock,utterlyspeechless.Withscenesofhurting

hismumemerginginhismind,soregretfulabouthispreviousbehaviourwasRajuthattearsofguiltfilledhis

eyes.HereachedouthishandstotouchthosescarsonMum'sfacecautiouslyandtenderly,murmuring“sorry'

againandagain.Hecouldhardlyimaginetheamountofpainhismotherhadgonethroughphysicallyand

mentallyowingtohim.Mumraisedherhead,lookedstraightintoherson'seyesandslowlyshowedarelieved

smile.Gazingatmum'sface,Rajueventuallyrealizedthesacrificeshemadeforhimandthrewhimselfinto

mum'sarms.

03續(xù)寫題目：女兒離家又回家

Lilywastheonlychildinherhome.Shehadjusthadaquarrelwithhermotherthatafternoonandhad

runangrilyoutofthehouse.Shecouldn'thelpcryingwhenshethoughtofthescoldingfromhermother.

Havingwanderedaimlesslyinthestreetforhours,shefeltahungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat.However,

thiswasnotpossibleforher,sinceshehadnomoney.Shestoodbesideastandforawhile,watchingthe

middle-agedsellerbusydoinghisbusiness.Withnomoneyinhand,shesighedanddecidedtoleave.The

sellerbehindthestandnoticedtheyounggirlandasked,“Hey,girl,doyouwanttohavesomenoodles?”"Oh,

yes...butIdon'thavemoneyonme…shereplied.

“That'snothing.I'lltreatyoutoday,“saidtheman.44Comein."Thesellerbroughtherabowlofnoodles,

whosesmellwassoappetizing.Lilythankedthemanandstartedtogobbleup（3良吞虎咽）thedeliciousfood

withsilenttearsrunningdownhercheeks."Whatisit?”askedthemankindly,"'Nothing.Iwasjustmovedby

yourkindness!saidLilyasshewipedawayhertears."Evenastrangeronthestreetwillgivemeabowlof

noodles,whilemymotherdrovemeoutofthehouse.Sheshowednocareforme.Sheissomeanandcruel!

Lilyadded.

Hearingthewords,thesellersmiledkindlyandwhispered,"Girl,doyoureallythinksso?Ionlygaveyou

abowlofnoodlesandyouthankedmealot.Butitisyourmotherwhohasraisedyousinceyouwereababy.

Canyoucountthenumberoftimesthatshehascookedforyou?Haveyouexpressedyourthankstoher?”

Lilysatthere,speechlessandnumbwithshock,rememberinghermother'sfamiliarfaceandweathered

hands."WhydidInotthinkofthat?”shethoughttoherself."Abowlofnoodlesfromastrangermademefeel

grateful,butIhaveneverthankedmymumforwhatshehasdoneforme.”

Atthatmoment,Lilyknewthatassoonasshearrivedhome,shewouldgivehermotheranapologyfor

herterriblerudeness.

Paral：Approachingthedoorway,Lilytookadeepbreath.

Para2：Hermothercamebackhome,whichcalledhermindback.

Approachingthedoorway,Lilytookadeepbreath.

準(zhǔn)備好面對媽媽，莉莉鼓起勇氣敲了敲門。然而，沒有人回答。由于把鑰匙忘在家里，莉莉別無

選擇，只好坐在房前。隨著與母親爭吵的場景浮現(xiàn)在她的腦海中，莉莉?qū)ψ约旱拇拄敻械椒浅：蠡?

她感到一種強(qiáng)烈的內(nèi)疚和不安?！拔也粦?yīng)該那樣做。如果沒有媽媽的奉獻(xiàn)和愛護(hù)，我不會有這么幸福

的生活?！币粋€內(nèi)心的聲音提醒她。

ReadytofaceuptoMom,Lilypluckedupcourageandknockedatthedoor.Nevertheless,noone

answered.Havingleftthekeyathome,Lilyhadnoalternativebuttositinfrontofthehouse.Withscenesof

quarrelingwithhermotheremerginginhermind,soregretfulaboutherterriblerudenesswasLilythatshefelt

anoverwhelmingsenseofguiltmixedwithuneasiness,<4Ishouldn'tactinthatway.Butformom'sdevotion

andcare,Iwouldn'thavehadsuchahappylife.,,aninnervoiceremindedher.

Hermothercamebackhome,whichcalledhermindback.

一看到媽媽熟悉的身影，莉莉就站起來向她走過去?！澳闳ツ膬毫?”我一直在找你!媽媽驚呼道，

她仍然上氣不接下氣，但在看到自己心愛的女兒后，她松了一口氣。媽媽疲憊的表情使莉莉更加內(nèi)疚。

莉莉忍不住撲到媽媽的懷里痛哭起來，對自己之前的行為表示真誠的歉意，對媽媽為自己所做的一切

表示感謝。聽了這話，媽媽溫柔地?fù)崦蚶虻念^發(fā)，臉上綻開了燦爛的笑容。

Uponcatchingsightofthefamiliarfigureofmom,Lilyrosetoherfeetandwalkedovertoher,"'Where

didyougo?Fvebeenlookingforyou!”exclaimedmom,whowerestilloutofbreath,butletoutasighof

reliefafterseeingherbeloveddaughter.Mom'slookofexhaustionaddedtoLily'sguilt.Lilycouldn'thelp

throwingherselfintohermother'sarmsandsobbingbitterly,expressinghersincereapologyforherprevious

behaviourandgreatgratitudeforeverythingmomhavedoneforher.Hearingthesewords,momstroked

Lily'shairtenderly,withherfaceexpandingwithabigsmile.

04續(xù)寫題目：狗狗救掉坑主人

TherewasalittleboynamedJohnson,wholivedwithhisfatherintheirattractivelittlecottage1neara

forest.Theydidn'thavemuchbutwerecontentwith2thelittletheyhad.Everydayafterhecamehome

fromschool,Johnsonwouldaccompanyhisfatherto3theforesttocollectfirewood.

Oneday,whenJohnsonwasintheforestcollectingwood,hecameacross4apuppy（幼犬）which

seemedtobeallalone.Johnsonlookedhereandthere5forhisownerbutinvain6.Sohepickedhimup,put

himunderhisshirtandcarriedhimhome.Havingreachedhome,hesaidtohisfather,“Dad,Ifoundalittle

puppyaloneintheforest!Canwekeephim,please?”FeelingJohnson^happiness,hisfathercouldn'tdecide

whethertokeepthepuppyornotatthetime.Hetoldhim,“Oh,Johnson,that'sthecutestpuppyFveever

seen!Butwedon'thavemuch.Whatwillwedoabouthisfoodandsleepingarrangement7??,Johnsonreplied,

“It'sOK.Filgivehimhalfofmymealsandlethimsleepwithmeinmybedroom.,,Hearingthis,Johnson's

fatherjustnodded.Johnsonwaswildwithjoy8,andhenamedthepuppyRigo.

Fromthatdayonwards9,JohnsonandRigobecamethebestfriends.RigofollowedJohnsonwherever

hewent.WhenJohnsonwenttoschool,Rigowouldpatientlywaitoutsidetheclassroomtilltheclassesended.

Atnight,RigosleptnexttoJohnsononhistinybedanddreamedsweetdreams.

Ononeparticularday10,Rigowassick,unabletofollowJohnsonsohestayedathome.Thatdayit

rainedheavily,andtheroadseverywhereturnedslippery（濕滑的）.Onhiswayhome,Johnsonwastryingto

reachhomeassoonaspossibleasheimaginedRigowaitingforhimandkeepinghimwarm.Unfortunately,

Johnsonmissedseeing11aholeatthesideoftheroadandfelldownthehole12!Hecriedforhelp13,

hopingtobeheardbypassers-by14.Butduetotheloudthunderingandnoiseoftheheavyrain,noone

heardhim.

Paragraph1：Johnsonwastrappedin15thehole,notknowingwhetherhecouldberescued.

Paragraph2：Rigobarkedandranaroundtheholeanxiously.

續(xù)寫題目：狗狗救掉坑主人【范文】

【版本1】

Paragraph1：Johnsonwastrappedinthehole,notknowingwhetherhecouldberescued.

（1）他下定決心要爬出洞，鼓足力氣站起來，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)自己受了傷，傷口上流著血。（2）在家里,Johnson

的父親踱來踱去，擔(dān)憂兒子的安全。（3）幾分鐘后，他的父親決定出門尋找約翰遜的蹤跡。（4）看

到父親準(zhǔn)備離開，Rig。叫著，猛烈地?fù)u著尾巴，似乎表達(dá)了加入搜索的渴望。（5）一路上，Rigo

低著頭四處嗅。隨著離洞的距離越來越近，狗顯然聞到了熟悉的東西。

（l）Determinedtocrawloutofthehole,hegatheredstrengthtorisetohisfeet,onlytofindhegotinjured

andthattherewasatrickleofbloodfromthewound.（2）Athome,Johnson'sfatherpacedupanddown,

concernedabouthisson'ssafety.（3）Minuteslater,hisfatherdecidedtoheadoutforJohnson^trace.（4）Upon

seeingfatherreadytoleave,Rigobarkedandwaggeditstailfiercely,seemingtoexpressitseagernesstojoin

thesearch.（5）Alongtheway,Rigohungdownitsheadtosniffaround.Withthedistancefromthehole

gettingcloser,thedogapparentlysmelledsomethingfamiliar.

Paragraph2：Rigobarkedandranaroundtheholeanxiously.

（l）Rig。在洞外的吠叫引起了Johnson的注意。他抬起頭，看見了那條狗，心里一陣激動。（2）“Rigo,

Rigo,我在這里！叫爸爸來救我「'Johnson用盡全力呼喊道。（3）爸爸聽到這里的聲音，立刻趕到這

個地點(diǎn)，把Johnson從洞里救了出來，Johnson的牙齒冷的直打顫。（4）Johnson無法抑制自己的喜

悅和興奮，撲進(jìn)爸爸的懷里，然后溫柔地?fù)崦鳵ig。的皮毛，喃喃地說:“Rig。救了我。”（5）爸爸

拍了拍Rig。的頭，輕聲說:“你們是彼此的英雄。是你的善良救了你?！?/p>

（l）Rigo,sbarkoutsidetheholecalledJohnson,sattention.Helookedupandcaughtsightofthedog,

feelingasurgeofthrillrunthroughhim.（2）4tRigo,Rigo,Iamhere!FetchDadtorescueme!”Johnson

shoutedwithallhismight.（3）Hearingthesoundhere,DadreachedthespotatonceandhelpedJohnsonoutof

thehole,whoseteethwaschatteringwithcold.（4）Unabletocontainhisjoyandexcitement,Johnsonthrew

himselfintoDad'sarmsandthenstrokedRigo'sfurtenderly,murmuring,“Rigosavedme??.（5）Dadpatted

Rigo'shead,sayinginasofttone,"You'reeachother'sheroes.Itisyourkindnessthatsavedyou.”

續(xù)寫題目：狗狗救掉坑主人【范文】

【版本2】

Paral：（1）他下定決心要爬出洞，用盡力氣站起來，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)自己受了傷，傷口上流著血。（2）在家

里，Rig。用后腿支撐起整個身體，盯著門，似乎在等待Johnson的到來。（3）幾分鐘后，突然，Rigo

沖出小屋，朝黑暗奔去。（4）一路上，Rig。低著頭四處嗅。隨著離洞的距離越來越近，狗顯然聞到

了熟悉的東西。

（l）Determinedtocrawloutofthehole,hegatheredstrengthtorisetohisfeet,onlytofindhegotinjured

andthattherewasatrickleofbloodfromthewound.（2）Athome,Rigoraiseditswholebodyonitshindlegs,

staringatthedoor,seemingtoawaitthearrivalofJohnson.（3）Minuteslater,therecameanotherdownpour.

Allofasudden,Rigodashedoutofthecottage,headingtowardsthedark,（4）Alongtheway,Rigohung

downitsheadtosniffaround.Withthedistancefromtheholegettingcloser,thedogapparentlysmelled

somethingfamiliar.

Para2：（l）Rigo在洞外的吠叫引起了Johnson的注意。他抬起頭，看見了那條狗，心里一陣激動。（2）

“Rigo,Rigo,我在這里！叫爸爸來救我!”Johnson用盡全力呼喊道。（3）Johnson聽到Rigo的腳步

聲漸漸消失了。（4）隨著時(shí)間的流逝，約翰遜渾身發(fā)抖，感覺自己快要崩潰了。（5）幸運(yùn)的是，爸

爸終于趕到了現(xiàn)場。Rig。成功了?。?）在爸爸的幫助下，Johnson一從洞里出來，無法抑制自己的喜

悅和興奮，他就撲到爸爸的懷里，然后溫柔地?fù)崦锔甑钠っ卣f產(chǎn)里戈救了我。”（7）爸

爸拍了拍Rig。的頭，輕聲說:“你們是彼此的英雄。是你的善良救了你。”

（l）Rigo,sbarkoutsidetheholecalledJohnson,sattention.Helookedupandcaughtsightofthedog,

feelingasurgeofthrillrunthroughhim.（2）4tRigo,Rigo,Iamhere!FetchDadtorescueme!”Johnson

shoutedwithallhismight.（3JohnsonheardthesoundofRigo'sfootstepsgraduallydieaway,（4）Withtime

tickingby,Johnsonwasshiveringallover,feelinghimselfonthevergeofbreakingdown.（5）Fortunately,Dad

reachedthesceneeventually.Rigomadeit!（6）WiththeassistanceofDad,upongettingoutofthehole,

unabletocontainhisjoyandexcitement,JohnsonthrewhimselfintoDad'sarmsandthenstrokedRigo'sfur

tenderly,murmuring,“Rigosavedme”.（7）DadpattedRigo'shead,sayinginasofttone,"You'reeachother's

heroes.Itisyourkindnessthatsavedyou.”

05續(xù)寫：打破窗戶后續(xù)

Ihavealreadyforgottenthenameofanoldladywhowasacustomeronmypaper-deliveryroutewhenI

wasatwelve-year-oldboy.YetitseemslikejustyesterdaythatshetaughtmealessoninforgivenessthatIcan

onlyhopetopassontosomeoneelsesomeday.

OnamindlessSaturdayafternoon,afriendandIwerethrowingrocksontotheroofoftheoldlady's

house.Wejustwantedtoobservehowtherockschangedtomissiles（導(dǎo)彈）astheyrolledtotheroofsedge

andshotoutintoheryard.

Ifoundmyselfaperfectlysmoothrockandsentitforaride.Thestonewastoosmooth,however,soit

slippedfrommyhandasIletitgoandheadedstraightforasmallwindowontheoldlady'sbackdoor.Atthe

soundofbrokenglass,wetookofffromtheoldlady'syardfasterthananyofourmissilesflewoffherroof.

Iwastoomuchscared!However,afewdayslater,whenIwassurethatIhadn'tbeendiscovered,Istarted

tofeelguilty.ShestillgreetedmewithasmileeachdaywhenIgaveherthepaper,butIwasnolongerableto

actcomfortableinherpresence.

ImadeupmymindthatIwouldsavemypaperdeliverymoney,andinthreeweeksIhadthetendollars

thatIthoughtwouldcoverthecostofherwindow.

Paral：Iputthemoneyinanenvelopewithaletterinit.

Para2：Thenextday,afterreceivingthepaper,shethankedmeandsaid,441havesomethingforyou.”

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Iputthemoneyinanenvelopewithaletterinit.

在信中，我對打碎她的窗戶表示誠摯的歉意，并希望十美元可以支付修理費(fèi)用。在信的最后，我

簽了我的名字。由于不知道她對這封信的反應(yīng)如何，我沒有立即前往老太太的家。相反，我一直等到

夜幕降臨。我躡手躡腳走到她家，小心翼翼地把信放在她家門前，然后離開了。雖然寄出這封信后我

的負(fù)罪感減輕了一點(diǎn)，但那天晚上我輾轉(zhuǎn)反側(cè)，不知道她會不會原諒我。

IntheletterIexpressedmysincereapologyforbreakingherwindowandmywishthattendollarscould

coverrepairbill.Andattheendoftheletter,Isignedmyname.Unsureaboutthewaysherespondedtothe

letter,Ididn'tmakemywaytotheoldlady'shouseimmediately.Instead,Iwaiteduntilthedarknessfell.

Havingtiptoedtoherhome,Iputtheletterinfrontofherdoorwithgreatcautionandleft.Thoughmysense

ofguiltwasrelievedalittleaftersendingtheletter,Ikepttossingandturningthatnight,wonderingwhether

shewouldforgivemeornot.

Thenextday,afterreceivingthepaper,shethankedmeandsaid,441havesomethingforyou.”

她把手伸進(jìn)口袋，拿出一個信封。這是我昨晚留在她家門前的東西!我驚訝極了，呆呆地望著信封，

說不出話來。她看出了我的困惑，就輕輕地拍了拍我的背，回了我一個神秘的微笑。在送報(bào)紙的時(shí)候，

我撕開了那封信。里面有十美元和一張便條，上面寫著:“我很高興你選擇了誠實(shí)和正直。態(tài)度比金錢

更重要?！备屑さ臏I水充滿了我的眼睛，我永遠(yuǎn)珍惜這10美元，作為我自己的錯誤和關(guān)于寬恕的教訓(xùn)

的提醒。

Shereachedintoherpocketandtookanenvelope.ItwaswhatIleftinfrontofherhouselastnight!So

astonishedwasIthatIgazedattheenvelope,utterlyspeechless.Sensingmyconfusion,shepattedmegentlyon

thebackandrepliedtomewithamysterioussmile.AsIproceededtodelivernewspapers,Itoreopenthe

envelope.Insidewastendollarsandashortnotewhichread'Tmdelightedthatyouchoosehonestyand

integrity.Yourattitudecountsmorethanmoney.,,Tearsofgratitudefillingmyeyes,Iwouldalwaystreasure

the10dollarsasareminderofmymistakeandalessonaboutforgiveness.

06續(xù)寫：我父親的兒子

MyFather'sSon

It'shardbeinganastronaut's(宇航員)son.Ioftenwonderhowmyfathereverhadasonlikeme.Imean

he'ssospecialandsogoodateverythinghedoes.ButI'mjustanaverageeleven-year-oldkid.

NowadaysIdreamaboutbeingafamouswriter,butIusedtodreamaboutdoingsomethingbigto

impressmyfatherandmakehimproudofme—somethinglikesavingachildfromaburningbuildingor

drivingarobberawayfromanoldlady.

Iwasdaydreaminginschoolonemorning(whichIdooften).Iwasdaydreamingaboutbeingsomekind

ofherowhenmyfriendEllenremindedmeofmyEnglishteachefsannouncementaboutaFather'sDayessay

contest.

“IhopewehaveawinnerrighthereinmyEnglishclass,"shesaid."Therearethreeprizesforeachof

you.”

WhenIgothome,Ikissedmymomquickly.ThenIwentupstairstomyroomandsatdownwithapen

andapadofpaper.IstartedtothinkaboutwhatIwouldwrite.

HowdidIseemyfather?Hmm.

Isawhimteachingmehowtouseabatandhowtothrowabaseball.

IrememberedhowhehuggedmeforhourswhenmydogSpottywashitandkilledbyacar.

AndIrememberedhowhesatandtriedtoexplaindeathtomewhenGrandpaBobdied.

ThesewerethethingsIwasgoingtowriteaboutmydad.Tome,hewasn'tjustaworld-famous

astronaut.Hewasmydad.

Iwroteaboutallthesememoriesandputtheminmyessay.Ihandeditinthenextdayandwassurprised

tofindoutthatthewinningessayswouldbereadinthehallonThursdaynight.Alltheparentsandstudents

wereinvited.

MyparentsandIwenttoschoolThursdaynight.Oneofourneighborssaid,“Ibetyou'llwinthecontest,

David.Ibetyouwrotewhatit'sliketobethesonofanastronaut,andyou5retheonlyoneintownwhocould

writeaboutthat.”

Paral：Ishruggedandthenthefirstprizewinner—Ellenwasannounced.

Para2：Thesecondprizewinnerwasannouncednext—Itwasme.

看到我的朋友走向舞臺，我勉強(qiáng)擠出了一個微笑，感到既沮喪又失望。AUen獲得第一名并不奇

怪，因?yàn)樗膶懽髂芰蛯λ赣H的生動描繪。文章的內(nèi)容是她父親作為一名警察的奉獻(xiàn)精神，以及

他逮捕罪犯時(shí)的幾次危險(xiǎn)情況。她剛讀完這篇文章，全場觀眾就站起來鼓掌。我轉(zhuǎn)向父親，從他的眼

睛里感覺到他對我朋友的欽佩，這是我渴望已久的。要是舞臺上的是我就好了！

Seeingmyfriendheadingtowardsthestage,Imanagedasmile,feelingamixtureoffrustrationand

disappointment.ItcamenosurprisethatEllenwonthefirstprize,owingtohercompetenceinwritingand

vividdescriptionofherfather.Nosoonerhadshefinishedreadingheressay,whosecontentwasabouther

fathersdedicationasapoliceandseveralriskysituationsheencounteredwhenarrestingcriminals,thanthe

wholeaudiencestoodupandclapped.Iturnedtomyfatherandsensed