讀后續(xù)寫講評試題呈現(xiàn)：第二節(jié):讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。

MyveryfirstfurbabywasawhitecatnamedRebel,IgothimfromtheAnimalscenter,andhequicklytookoverthehouseandmyheart.Hewasalmostsixmonthsoldwhenhedisappeared,andIwasheartbroken.

Isearchedforhimeverywhere,talkingtotheneighbours,puttingupposters,andevenofferingareward.Icheckedtheshelterandtheemergencyvetclinictoseeifhehadbeeninjuredorpickedup.Noonehadseenhim,soIkeptsearching.

Ilivedinthecity,closetohightrafficroad,andRebeldidn'thave“streetsmarts”becausehewasanindoorcatIalsohadanideathatifhegotlost,

hewouldn’tbeabletofindhiswayhome.EverytimeIwentout,IwouldsearchforhimasIdrovedowntheroad.Nothing.

Weekswentbywithnosignofmycat.EveryonesaidIhadtoaccepttheresultthatwascertaintohappen--eitherhewasdead,orsomeoneelsehadhimandwasgivinghimagoodhome.Ididn'tacceptthat.Ijustcouldn't.Aftertwoweekswithnosignofhim,Iputhisbed,toys,food,bowls,andlitterboxintostoragesoIwouldn’thavetowalkbythesadreminderseveryday.ButIstillwasn'treadytogiveup.Onemorning,Ileftforworkafewminutesearlyandstartedwalkingtothebusstopablockaway.Itwasaniceautumnday,pleasantlycoldandsunnyagooddayforawalk.Iarrivedatthebusstopandcheckedtoseeifthebuswascoming,butalittleearly.Somethingtoldmetokeepgoing,soIdecidedtowalktothenextbusstop.Igotthereandsawthebuscoming,butIjustkeptwalkingandwatchingthebusswiftlypassby,knowingIwasgoingtobelateforwork.Butsomethingtoldmetokeepgoing.主要問題1.書面2.時態(tài)3.主題

heartbrokensadhopefulhappy/delighted/overjoyed

MycatgotlostikeptIkeptsearchingformycateverywhereforweeksbutinvain.Iputhisthingsintostoragetokeepmyselffrombeingremindedofhim.Onaniceautumnmorning,Mysubconsciousness(潛意識)toldmetokeepwalkingdespitethepossiblityofbeinglateforwork.Inferredinformation:Drownedinthesadnessoflosingmycat,Ididn'tgiveupmyhopeoffindinghim.Inferredinformation:Goodweatherpromisesahappyending.AnalyzethestorylineandemotionallineReadthecharacters

Knowthemaincharacters

(明確主要人物)lovedmycatfeltheart-borken,sadatthedisappearanceofmycatkeptsearchingforitlookedforwardtofindingit.awhitefurcatlovedandtakengoodcareofbymeindoorcat,nothaving“streetsmarts”“I”catImpliedinformation:Lackingstreetsmartswasthereasonwhyhegotlostandcouldn'tfindthewayhome.Prediction:HowwouldImakesurehewouldn'tgetlostagainIfIfoundhim?(也可以在續(xù)寫中使用)Para.1Icontinuedtowalkforanothertwentyminutes.___________1.WhatdidIsee/hear?

DesigntheplotIcaughtsightofawhitecat.Acatcameintosight.Afaint（微弱的）meowofacatcameintomyears.

2.Whatwasthecatlike?

wasverydirty,nolongerwhitelookedragged(亂蓬蓬的)withfurinamesssmeltawfullybadDesigntheplot3.WhatdidIdo?

walkedobservedcheckedcalledhernamepetted/stroked（撫摸）her

miaowedjumpedintomyarmspushedhisfaceintomine4.Howdidthecatreact?

feltrelievedthathewasfine.awaveofwildjoysweptoverme.

burstintotearsofjoy.

5.HowdidIfeel?Para.2Iturnedaroundandcarriedhimhome

_________1.Howdidthecatreactwhenarrivingathome?feltatease(自在的)andsecure(安心的)inmyarmsenjoyedeverythingIdidforhimcanhardlywaittoexploreeverycornerofthehouse2.Whatdidwedo?fedthecatgaveahotbathtohim.layonthesofatogether3.HowdidIfeelhavingthecatbackhome?washappyandgrateful1.自然式結尾：Exhausted,Rebelquicklyclosedhiseyesandfellfastsleepinhisbed.Isatbyhisside,feelinggratefultohavehimhomeagain.Concludethewritinginvariousways2.情景交融結尾：

Rebelwaslyingonthesofaashealwayslikedtodo.Withsunlightfallingontheground,everythinglookedsowonderful.“Itisaniceday,isn'tit?”Isaidtomyself,smiling.3.首尾呼應：IthitmethatRebeldidn’thavestreetsmarts.ImadeanimportantdecisionthatIwouldbuyhimacollar(脖圈)withmyphonenumbermarkedonitonline,forIcouldn’tbeheartbrokenagain.Concludethewritinginvariousways

4.回憶式結尾

WithRebellyinginmyarmscomfortably,Icouldn’thelprecallinghowsadIfeltwithlosinghim.Iwassohappytohavehimback,determinedtotakegoodcareofhim.

Concludethewritinginvariousways

5.展望式結尾Rebelquicklytookoverthehouseandmyheartagain,convincingmethatabrandnewlifewaswaitingforustoexplore.Icontinuedtowalkforanothertwentyminutes.Allofasudden,awhitecatcameintosight.Itwasbusysearchingforfoodinagreendustbin.Thedelightfulthoughtthatitmightbemycaturgedmetowalkcloser.Theskinnycatlookedraggedwithitsfurinamess/dottedwithdirt.What'sworse,ithadanextremelyawfulsmell.However,Iwasquitesureitwasmycat---Rebel.IcalledhisnameandhemiaowedatmeandthenquicklyjumpintomyarmswithdelightasIkneltbyhisside.AwaveofhappinesssweptovermebecauseIhadfinallyfoundhim.Iturnedaroundandcarriedhimhome.Hefeltateaseandsecureinmyarmsalltheway.ThemomentIsteppedintothehouse,heletoutamewofdelightasiftotellmehepreviouslylivedhere.Ifedhimsomefoodandwaterandthengavehimahotbath.HelookedabitrefreshedandenjoyedeverythingIdidforhim.Havingdecidedtokeephimcompany,Iphonedmybosstomakeanapologyandaskadayleave.

Rebelwaslyingonthesofaashealwayslikedtodo.Withsunlightfallingontheground,everythinglookedsowonderful.“Itisaniceday,isn'tit?”Isaidtomyself,smiling（情景交融式結尾）.LanguageaccumlationAcatSomeofadultcatswillbekeentocuddleup（蜷縮著睡）onthesofaorlounge（懶洋洋地躺著）aroundatyourfeet.Shewasskinnyandstarving,withcrinkled(皺巴巴的),dirty-spottedfur.Shegazedup（抬頭看）attheAldenswithgoldengreeneyes.Hearinghisname,Rebelmeowedwithdelight.Hestretchedhimselfatfulllengthuponthebranch,andwriggledhisbody（扭動身體）cautiouslyalong.Then,itrandownthetreelikelightning.(awildcat)Describeacatoradog

Dog:Mydog,Daisy,followedmeintotheroom,jumpedonthebed,andstartedlickingmeallovermyface.“Hewasonyourholidaycard!”Isaid,lettingthedogsniffmyhand.WhenIstartedpettingher,shebasicallyjustrolledoverontoherback（翻滾）.AssoonassheheardAuggie'svoice,thedogstartedwagginghertailandwentovertohim.Auggiewassayingasshelickedhimovertheface.Isaidtothedog,whorolledontoherbackagainformetorubhertummy.------以上句子均選自《奇跡男孩》Theinteractionbetweenownersandapet.IkeptlookingatDaisy,kissingheronthenoseandrubbingherearuntilherbacklegdidthatlittleflea-scrathshake.Daisywaspanting(vi.氣喘吁吁)alot,likeshe'dbeenrunninginthepark.Momwaskneelingbesideher,strokingthetopofherhead(撫摸著她的頭).DaddypickedherupinhisarmswithherlegsstraightupintheairandheandMomkissedhergoodbyoverandoveragainandwhisperedtoherwhilethevetputaneedleintoherleg.-----Wonder