PAGEPAGE1第五講建議信[技巧點(diǎn)撥]建議信是作者就有關(guān)問題進(jìn)行分析并針對(duì)這些問題提出自己的看法和建議，以便讓對(duì)方接受自己的想法、主見并解決有關(guān)問題。建議信可以寫給個(gè)人，就其遇到的某個(gè)問題提出自己的看法或觀點(diǎn)；也可以寫給某個(gè)組織或者機(jī)構(gòu)，就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)等提出建議或忠告。[寫作模板][經(jīng)典考題](2024·天津卷)假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的機(jī)器人愛好小組組長李津，你的美國摯友Chris就讀于天津某國際學(xué)校，他曾在機(jī)器人技能競(jìng)賽中獲獎(jiǎng)。你準(zhǔn)備邀請(qǐng)他加入你的團(tuán)隊(duì)，參與即將于7月底在天津?qū)嵭械氖澜缜嗌倌隀C(jī)器人技能競(jìng)賽。請(qǐng)依據(jù)以下提示代表愛好小組給他寫一封電子郵件。1．競(jìng)賽的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；2．邀請(qǐng)他的緣由；3．訓(xùn)練安排將發(fā)送其郵箱，請(qǐng)他提出建議。留意：1.詞數(shù)不少于100；2．可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充溢、行文連貫；3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：世界青少年機(jī)器人技能競(jìng)賽theWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionDearChris，Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，LiJin[滿分范文]Dear_Chris，①I_have_good_news_to_tell_you.②TherewillbeamonthbeforetheendofJuly,whentheWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionisscheduledtobeheldinmycity,Tianjin.③Withmygreatenthusiasmaboutroboticsandmyprogress,I'mmadeheadofateamdevotedtothecompetition.④Whenwe'remakingpreparationsfortheevent,itoccurredtomethatyouoncetookaprizeinasimilarcompetition.⑤Therefore,itcan'tbebetterifyoucanjoinmyteamandshowyourtalent.⑥Meanwhile,attachedtothise－mailisatrainingplanIhaveworkedoutformyteam,whichIhopeyou'llreadandmakesomesuggestions.⑦Afterall,youhavelotsofpracticaltrickswhichwillbeofgreatusetous.I'm_looking_forward_to_your_reply.Yours，Li_Jin[閱卷評(píng)析]①開篇點(diǎn)題。③enthusiasm是高級(jí)詞匯，體現(xiàn)了作者扎實(shí)的語言功底。⑥句中運(yùn)用了非限制性定語，大大提高了表達(dá)難度和寫作檔次。⑦高級(jí)短語afterall和beofgreatusetosb.的正確運(yùn)用為文章錦上添花。[增分靚句]1．文章開頭佳句集錦①Youhaveaskedformyadviceabout...andIwilltrytomakesomeusefulsuggestionshere.關(guān)于……你向我征求看法，在此，我盡量提出一些有用的建議。②I'msorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroublewith/indoing...atthemoment.得知此刻你遇到……麻煩我深感缺憾。③I'mverygladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhow...特別興奮收到你的來信，在信中，關(guān)于如何……你向我征求看法。2．表達(dá)建議部分佳句集錦①Herearesometips/advice/suggestions.這里有一些建議。②Youmay/mightaswelldo...你不防做……③Iwouldliketosuggestthat...我想建議3．文章結(jié)尾佳句集錦①Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/considerationseriously.我信任你會(huì)仔細(xì)考慮我的建議的。②Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful/helpful.我希望這些建議/看法對(duì)你來說有用/有幫助。③Inmyopinion/Personally/AsfarasI'mconcerned,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.在我看來，實(shí)行如下行動(dòng)是明智的。[熱點(diǎn)押題](2024·江西南昌月考)假定你是李華。你的筆友曉東是某學(xué)校一名高一學(xué)生。最近他來信說不知道如何學(xué)好中學(xué)英語，感到苦惱。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封回信，提出你的建議。建議內(nèi)容如下：1．盡力用英語溝通，不要怕犯錯(cuò)誤。2．堅(jiān)持每天早晚朗讀英語。3．多讀英文報(bào)紙，看英文電影。留意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，使行文連貫；3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearXiaoDong，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Yours，LiHua[答案]Dear_Xiao_Dong，I'msorryyouarehavingtroubleinlearningEnglishinseniorhighschool.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.Firstly,whynottrytocommunicatewithothersinEnglish?Ifyoudoso,youwillfeelconfidentgradually.Also,don'tbeafraidofmakingmistakesbecauseeveryonemakesmistakes.Secondly,youshouldkeeponreadingaloudEnglishsentenceseverymorningandevening.Thatway,you'lllearnmanyim