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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Myfamilyhadonlyrecentlymovedintoanewneighborhood.Allofmyneighborshavebeenveryfriendlyandhelpfulsincewemovedin.However,MrsDavis,anelderlyladylivinginthelasthouseontheothersideoftheroad,escapedassociatingwithus,oranyoneelse.WhenIaskedaroundtheneighborhoodwhy,theywarnedmenottogoafterherbecausetheythoughtshewasinsane(精神失常的)andpreferredstayingaloneafterlosingherhusbandandonlydaughterinanaircraftcrash.Afterthat,shestayedisolated(孤立的)fromalltheneighbors,refusingallthecareandhelp.Ioftensawheronthestreetsduringtheevening,butshewasalwaysbyherself.SheappearedweakandIalwayswantedtohelpher,butafterhearingwhatmyneighborshadsaidabouther,Iwasn’tsurewhetherIshould.Oneday,whenIwasonmywaytothesupermarket,ourpathscrossed.Iwaswalkingpastherandoverheardhersingingatune.Itimmediatelydrewmyattentionbecausemyparentsusedtosingthesamesongwithme.Ibegantosingalongwithher,andshesmiledatmeforthefirsttime.ButwhenIsmiledback,shequicklyhurriedherpaceandwenthome.Sheseemedverydifferenttomethatday.Irefusedtotrustmyneighbors’claimsthatshehadcutherselfofffromtherestofsocietybecauseshewasinsane,sothenextday,Iknockedonherdoor.MrsDaviswashome,andinsteadoflettingmein,shejustlookedatmesilentlythroughthewindow.Inoticedherstaringatmeandwasabouttowalktothewindowwhenshequicklyclosedthecurtains.Thenextday,Irevisitedherhouse.“Hello,Ibroughtyousomething,”Icalledouttoher.“It’stherecordofthemusicyouweresingingyesterday.”注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。ThedooropenedandMrsDavis’eyeswidenedinsurpriseatthesightofmestandingthere.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Severaldayslaterinthemorning,thedoorbellrangatmyhouse._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、文章大意作者一家新搬到一個街區(qū),鄰居們都很友好,但戴維斯夫人在飛機失事中失去丈夫和女兒后,變得孤立,鄰居們認為她精神失常且不愿與人交往。作者??吹剿氉孕凶?,一次偶然聽到她唱自己父母常唱的歌,便想接近她。作者第一次敲門時她只透過窗戶默默看,第二次去送她唱的歌的唱片。二、伏筆及續(xù)寫回應(一)伏筆戴維斯夫人的孤立:她在失去家人后與鄰居隔絕,為后續(xù)故事發(fā)展中作者努力打破這種孤立狀態(tài)做鋪墊,續(xù)寫需圍繞作者如何進一步走進她的生活展開。作者的好奇與善意:作者聽到鄰居對戴維斯夫人的評價后仍想幫助她,且因歌曲產生共鳴,這推動了情節(jié)發(fā)展,續(xù)寫要體現(xiàn)作者的善意如何影響戴維斯夫人。戴維斯夫人的反應:她對作者的微笑后又匆忙離開,以及看到作者敲門時的沉默和關窗簾,表明她內心的矛盾和對他人接近的復雜態(tài)度,在續(xù)寫中她的態(tài)度可能會有所轉變。(二)續(xù)寫回應第一段:描述戴維斯夫人看到作者帶著唱片來時的驚訝及后續(xù)反應,可能包括她逐漸放下戒備,與作者有初步的交流等,回應作者的善意和努力。第二段:寫幾天后有人按作者家門鈴,猜測是戴維斯夫人并描述見面場景及兩人關系的進一步發(fā)展,體現(xiàn)故事的溫暖結局和鄰里關系的改善。三、續(xù)寫要點(一)第一段戴維斯夫人驚訝的表情和可能說的話,如對作者到來的疑問或對唱片的好奇。作者的解釋和友好的態(tài)度,試圖緩解她的緊張和戒備。他們之間可能的簡短交流,以及戴維斯夫人對作者態(tài)度的初步轉變,比如邀請作者進屋或至少開始愿意交談。(二)第二段作者開門看到戴維斯夫人時的驚喜,以及戴維斯夫人的狀態(tài)和她來的目的描述。兩人可能的互動和對話,體現(xiàn)關系的進一步融洽,如戴維斯夫人表達感謝或分享一些感受。對鄰里關系改善的展望,以及作者內心的感受,強調溫暖和友好在鄰里間的傳遞。四、故事線以作者一家搬到新街區(qū)為背景,聚焦作者與戴維斯夫人的接觸過程,從作者對戴維斯夫人的好奇和善意,到兩次主動接近,再到可能的關系改善,故事線圍繞打破鄰里隔閡展開。五、情感線作者從最初的好奇、猶豫到堅定的善意,戴維斯夫人從戒備、矛盾到可能的逐漸接受,情感線體現(xiàn)了人與人之間從陌生到建立聯(lián)系的變化,充滿溫暖與希望。六、主旨升華句(5句英文)Compassionandperseverancecanbreakdownthewallsoflonelinessandbuildbridgesofconnectioninacommunity.
(同情和堅持可以打破孤獨的墻壁,在社區(qū)中建立聯(lián)系的橋梁。)Smallactsofkindnesscanopentheheartsofthosewhohavebeenclosedoff,leadingtobeautifulfriendshipsandasenseofbelonging.
(小小的善舉可以打開那些封閉心靈的大門,帶來美好的友誼和歸屬感。)Inaneighborhood,understandingandreachingoutcantransformastrangerintoafriend,fillingourliveswithwarmthandlove.
(在一個街區(qū)里,理解和主動接觸可以將一個陌生人變成朋友,讓我們的生活充滿溫暖和愛。)Eveninthefaceoflossandisolation,thepowerofhumanconnectioncanhealandbringbackthelightofhopeandfriendship.
(即使面對失去和孤立,人與人之間的聯(lián)系的力量可以治愈并帶回希望和友誼的光芒。)Asimplegestureofkindnesscanstartachainreactionofpositivechange,makinganeighborhoodamoreharmoniousandcaringplace.
(一個簡單的善意姿態(tài)可以引發(fā)積極變化的連鎖反應,使一個街區(qū)成為一個更和諧和關愛的地方。)七、寫作示范(一)ThedooropenedandMrsDavis’eyeswidenedinsurpriseatthesightofmestandingthere.“Whatareyoudoinghere?”sheaskedhesitantly.Ihelduptherecordandsaidwithasmile,“Ithoughtyoumightlikethis.Youseemedtoenjoysingingthatsong.”Shestaredattherecordforamoment,thenasmallsmiletuggedatthecornersofhermouth.“Comein,”shesaidsoftly.Iwalkedintoherhouse,whichwassimplebutclean.Wesatdownandstartedtalkingaboutthesong.Shetoldmeitwasherhusbandanddaughter’sfavoritesong.Aswetalked,Icouldseethepaininhereyes,butalsoaglimmerofgratitudeformycompany.Thatday,wespentapleasantafternoontogether,andIcouldfeeltheicebetweenusstartingtomelt.Severaldayslaterinthemorning,thedoorbellrangatmyhouse.IopenedthedoorandwasdelightedtoseeMrsDavisstandingtherewithaplateofcookies.“Thankyoufortherecordandforbeingsokind,”shesaid.Iinvitedherinandwesatinthelivingroom,chattinglikeoldfriends.Fromthenon,MrsDavisgraduallyopeneduptotheneighborhood.Shestartedattendingcommunityeventsandbecameapartofourlives.Oursimpleactofkindnesshadnotonlychangedherlifebutalsomadeourneighborhoodamoreinclusiveandwarmplace.Welearnedthatsometimes,allittakesisalittlepatienceandunderstandingtobringpeopletogetherandcreatebeautifulmemoriesinacommunity.(二)ThedooropenedandMrsDavis’eyeswidenedinsurpriseatthesightofmestandingthere.Sheseemedabitflusteredbutdidn'tclosethedoorthistime.“Ibroughtyouthis,”Isaid,handinghertherecord.Shetookitslowly,herfingersbrushingagainstminebriefly.“Thankyou,”shemurmured.Itooktheopportunitytosay,“Ijustwantedtosharesomethingyoulike.Iunderstandyoumightlikeyoursolitude,butIalsothoughtitwouldbenicetohaveachatsometimes.”Shenoddedslightlyandinvitedmein.Herhousewasfilledwitholdmemoriesandphotos.Wesatdownandshestartedtalkingaboutherpast,hervoicefilledwithbothsadnessandnostalgia.AsIlistened,Irealizedhowmuchsheneededsomeonetolisten.Thatday,aconnectionwasmade,andIcouldseeachangeinherdemeanor.Severaldayslaterinthemorning,thedoorbellrangatmyhouse.IopenedittofindMrsDaviswithabouquetofflowers.“Theseareforyou,”shesaidwithashysmile.Wetalkedforawhile,andshetoldmeshehadstartedtofeelmoreateasewiththeneighborhood.Overtime,shebecamemoreinvolvedwiththecommunity.Ourinteractionhadnotonlybroughtheroutofherisolationbutalsostrengthenedthebondamongtheneighbors.Itshowedthatasmallgestureofkindnesscanhaveaprofoundimpact,andthatinaneighborhood,wecansupportandunderstandeachother,creatingamoreharmoniousandfriendlyenvironmentwhereeveryonefeelsincludedandcaredfor.參考范文:ThedooropenedandMrsDavis’eyeswidenedinsurpriseatthesightofmestandingthere.Iheldouttherecord,“Ithoughtyoumightenjoythis.”MrsDavisslowlytookitfrommyhands,staringatit.Foramoment,sheseemedlostinmemories.“Thankyou,”shewhispered.ThenIwasinvitedintoherhouse,feelingasenseofconnectionblossomingbe
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