熱點14健康健康無疑是今年的火爆熱點之一，它為我們的生活帶來很多快樂。今天，選擇的2021年中考英語寫作預測話題是：健康?！绢A測題目】（一）健康飲食一直是人們關注的問題。假如你是李華，你將在下周英語課上介紹HealthyDiet這本書，并作健康飲食的呼吁。請你根據(jù)以下提示與要求，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。健康飲食是什么每天吃不同種類的健康食物。健康飲食的目的◆養(yǎng)成良好生活習慣；◆保持生活健康愉快。建議◆少鹽少油，多吃蔬菜和水果；◆(你的兩點建議)注意：1.詞數(shù)100個左右（文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。2.不得透露學校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分。HealthyDietGoodafternooneveryone.TodayIamheretogiveyouatalkabouthealthydiet.IhavereadabooknamedHealthyDiet._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】HealthyDietGoodafternooneveryone.TodayIamheretogiveyouatalkabouthealthydiet.IhavereadabooknamedHealthyDiet.Asweallknow,healthydiethasbeenpeople’sconcern.Thisbookmainlytellsuswhathealthydietis.Healthydietisactuallyeatingvariouskindsoffoodthatdogoodtoourbody.Wechoosetoeatinahealthywaybecauseitplaysanimportantpartindevelopinggoodlivinghabits.What’smore,eatinginahealthywayalsomeanslivingahappylife.Inthisbook,itisstronglyrecommendedthatweshouldhavemorefruitandvegetablesandfoodcookedwithlesssaltandsugar.AsfarasIamconcerned,itwouldbeagoodideaifwedon’teatjunkfoodtoooften.Besides，Iadvisepeopletodosportsregularlysothatitbenefitsourhealthtoo.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇發(fā)言稿，題目要求是根據(jù)提示要點介紹“HealthyDiet”這本書，呼吁大家要健康飲食。要包含所有提示信息，可適當發(fā)揮；100詞左右；切忌透露真實校名、姓名等任何個人信息。2.寫作指導：由于本文是一篇發(fā)言稿，所以主語為第一人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作時，首先要承接開頭，引出話題。針對健康飲食這本書介紹健康飲食的定義、目的、建議，然后提出自己的建議（至少兩點）。不要僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文，一定要談談自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意要求的字數(shù)，不要太多也不要太少。（二）健康對每個人來說非常重要，但很多人不知道該如何保持健康。請根據(jù)以下圖片及提示詞語簡要介紹如何才能保持健康。（補充一兩個建議）80詞以上。提示詞：important,need,feelactive,abalanced（均衡的）diet,begoodfor,snack,junkfood,domoreexerciseAllofuswanttobehealthy.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Allofuswanttobehealthy.Itisveryimportanttoeverybody.Butdoyoureallyknowhowtostayhealthy?Herearesomeusefultips.First,weshoulddoexerciseifwehavetime.Forexample,wecangotoswiminthesummerholiday.Orwecantakeawalkaftersupper.Doingexercisemakesushealthyandstrong.Second,weshouldtakemorevegetablesandfruitandlesssnacks.Stopeatingjunkfoodanddrinkingbeers.Wehaveabalanced（均衡的）diet.Lastbutnotleast,weshouldgotobedearlyandwakeupearly.Weshouldhaveenoughsleep,orwewillgetsleepyinthedaytime.Ifwepaymoreattentiontothetipsabove,wewillhavehealthierbody.Iwisheverybodyhasastrongandhealthybody?！窘馕觥窟@是一篇給材料作文，根據(jù)圖片及提示詞語簡要介紹如何才能保持健康。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓短語，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：Itis……，weshould…….，Wehave……，Orwecan……，Iwish……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。點睛：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了健康很重要，接下來介紹如何保持健康的建議，最后希望每個人都有個強健的身體。此處forexample,takeawalk,makesb+形容詞，haveabalanceddiet,gotobed,wakeup,payattentionto等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。（一）親愛的同學們,健康是一個人的首要財富。擁有健康的身體,才能保證良好的學習狀態(tài)。有些同學由于平時不注意照顧自己的身體,而導致健康出現(xiàn)了一些問題。想要擁有健康的身體,需要大家在日常生活中多加注意。請你結合自身的經(jīng)歷談談如何保持身體健康。內(nèi)容須包含以下要點：要求:1.詞數(shù)80詞左右；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Healthisthemostprecioustreasureinourlives.Itisbasedonwhatwecando,suchasstudying,workingandsoon.Iusedtopaylittleattentiontomyhealth.Iatelotsofjunkfoodandseldomtookexercise.Asaresult,Iwasinpoorhealthandgottiredeasily.SoIdecidedtochangemylifestyle.Aftergivingupjunkfoodandplayingmoresports,Ibecomehealthierandhealthier.Thenhowcanwestayhealthy?First,doingsportsisnecessary.Wecantakepartinoutdooractivitiesinourfreetime.Second,weshouldeatmealsontime,andeatmorehealthyfood,suchasapples,vegetablesbutlessjunkfood.Besides,keepingagoodmoodandhavingenoughsleeparealsoimportant.Ihopeallofuscanbehealthy.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真說讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮。寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上，結合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時及一般過去時態(tài)進行敘述，注意主謂一致及時間狀語與時態(tài)的一致問題。語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。（二）健康對我們非常重要，但很多人不知道如何保持健康。請根據(jù)下面的表格提示，寫一篇短文倡導健康生活，并從三個方面說明如何保持健康。短文必須包含表格內(nèi)所有內(nèi)容，再適當發(fā)揮，80個詞左右。FoodExerciseHappinessKeepinghealthyagooddietvegetablesandfruitlessmeatbreakfastjunkfooddomoreexercisetakeawalksmilekeephappymakefriendshelpothersGoodWaystoKeepHealthyIt’simportantforustokeepfit.Butdoyouknowthewaystokeephealthy?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】GoodWaystoKeepHealthyItisveryimportantforustokeephealthy.Butdoyouknowthewaystokeepushealthy?First,weneedtohavehealthyeatinghabits,wecaneatalotofvegetablesandfreshfruit,butwe’dbettereatlessmeatandjunkfood.Differentkindsoffoodsarenecessary,it’salsoimportanttoeatabalanceddietandhaveagoodbreakfast.Then,playingsportseverydaycanalsohelpuskeepfit.Wecantakeawalkafterdinner,wecanwalktoschoolinsteadoftakingabus,afterschoolwecanspendhoursplayingbasketballorsoccerwithourfriends.Weshouldtrytodomoreexerciseeveryday.Happinessisanotherwaytokeephealthy.Whenwearelonelyorunhappy,trytomakefriends,itisagoodwaytokeepushappy.Ifyousmileoften,youalsofeelhappy.Don’tforgettohelpothers.So,behappytobehealthy.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題屬于說明文。寫作時要圍繞如何保持健康，第一段可以提出如何保持健康的問題；第二段介紹健康的飲食習慣有利于保持健康；第三段介紹運動對健康的重要性；第四段描述保持心情愉悅的重要性。2.寫作指導：本文應該用第一人稱來敘述內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主；介紹各種意見時，要準確地使用表示提建議的句型；表格內(nèi)的內(nèi)容需要敘述完整，保證條理清晰。（三）“幸福的基礎是健康的身體！”為此，國家提出2030健康中國計劃，某英語報社舉行“健康中國與我”的征文活動，請你寫一篇英語短文投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.健康的重要性；2.談談當今中學生健康現(xiàn)狀及原因；3.作為中學生，如何為建設健康中國做出自己的努力。提示：1.短文應包括圖表中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫，段落分明；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名；3.詞數(shù)不少于80，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Theimportanceofhealth1.Happylife2.Studybetter...Theconditionofstudents’healthnow1.Getover-weighted2.Pooreyesight...Thereasonfortheproblems1.Lessexercise2.Eattoomuchorwithoutregularity(規(guī)律)3.ElectronicproductsHowtodealwiththeproblems1.Balanceddiet...Asweallknow,keepinghealthyisimportantforourlife.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Asweallknow,keepinghealthyisimportantforourlife.Goodhealthcanhelpusdowhatwewantinourlife.Studentscanstudybetter.Withoutgoodhealth,it'simpossibletohaveahappylife.Nowthousandsofstudentsareinpoorhealth.Manystudentsgetover-weighted.Moreandmorestudentshavepooreyesight.Someofthemevengetilleasily.Whatcausesthecondition?Somestudentshardlyexerciseafterschool.Someofthemeattoomuchortheycan'thavemealsregularly.What'sworse，manystudentsuseelectronicproductstoomuchafterschool.Asstudents,weshouldhaveabalanceddiet.We'dbettereatmorefruitandvegetablesinsteadofmeat.Havinggoodlivinghabitsisimportanttous.We'dbetterexerciseforanhoureveryday.Let'stryourbesttobuildahealthyChina.【詳解】1.題目解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，以表格的形式給出文章需要包括的內(nèi)容——健康的重要性、現(xiàn)在學生的健康狀況和原因、建議，這就是文章的大綱。注意短文中，包括表格的所有信息，并且需要自由發(fā)揮，分段需合理，才能使短文條理清晰。2.例文點評：本文分成三段，第一段總領全文，第二段介紹健康的重要性、現(xiàn)在學生的健康狀況和原因，第三段提出自己的建議。題材是議論文，時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。本文應用高分短語和高分句型，如賓語從句，特殊疑問句以及祈使句，提升文章檔次。要點包括齊全，并且觀點明確且合理。3.高分亮點：短語：thousandsof；inpoorhealth；moreandmore；getill；insteadof；tryone’sbesttodosth。句型：賓語從句Goodhealthcanhelpusdowhatwewantinourlife.；固定句型Withoutgoodhealth,it'simpossibletohaveahappylife.；特殊疑問句Whatcausesthecondition?；We'dbettereatmorefruitandvegetablesinsteadofmeat.；祈使句Let'stryourbesttobuildahealthyChina.（四）健康是成長的基石。假如你是張利，在疫情返校后，你由于不好的習慣導致了困倦、焦慮等問題。在即將到來的暑假中，你打算如何養(yǎng)成良好習慣，塑造健康體魄呢?請以"GoodHabits,StrongBodies"為題寫一篇英語短文。提示：1.至少寫出3個影響你健康的問題，可適度添加；2.至少寫出4個有利于健康的好習慣，可適度添加；3.號召更多的同學養(yǎng)成好習慣，塑造健康體魄。要求：1.緊扣主題，語言連貫，書寫規(guī)范；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名與人名，詞數(shù)在60—80詞左右。參考詞匯：exercisemore,haveabalanceddiet(平衡飲食),sleepearly,keephappyGoodHabits,StrongBodies____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】GoodHabits,StrongBodiesHello,IamZhangLi.Inthepast,Iusedtofeelunhealthybecauseofmybadhabits.Ialsofeltworriedbecauseofsomanyexams.SometimesIstayedupsolatethatIwassleepyinclass.AndIdidn'thavemuchfreetimetotakemuchexercise,asaresult,Iwasveryheavy.Tosolvetheseproblems,duringthecomingsummerholiday,Iwillgetintothehabitofgettingupearly.Sleepingearlyisalsonecessary.Iwillexercisemoreandhaveabalanceddiet.It'sgoodtoeatmorevegetablesandfruitinsteadoftoomuchjunkfood.What'smore,whateverhappens,Iwilltrytokeephappy.IfIkeepdoingthese,Iwillcertainlykeephealthyeveryday.Socomeon,everyone.Formyourownhealthyhabits,andactquickly!Goodhabitsmustbringyoustrongbodies.【詳解】1、題干解讀：這篇作文要求學生們以GoodHabits,StrongBodies為題，介紹一下如何養(yǎng)成良好習慣，塑造健康體魄。題干中給出了提示，主要從以下幾個方面介紹：寫出至少3個影響你健康的問題；寫出至少4個有利于健康的好習慣；號召更多的同學養(yǎng)成好習慣，塑造健康體魄。2、寫作指導：這篇短文應用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱是第一人稱。寫作時注意英語句式的結構，簡單句、復合句穿插使用，同時注意上下文語句的銜接。使用一些高級詞匯和句型，使文意連貫，表達流暢。（一）隨著“健康中國”活動不斷地深入，徐州市許多中小學也開展了“健康校園”的建設，努力讓每一個孩子健康生活。假如Jim是你們學校健康俱樂部的一員，也是你的好朋友，請你根據(jù)提示介紹一下他的健康生活吧！具體內(nèi)容如下：健康中國WhatJimeatsHowhelives早餐：一個雞蛋、一杯牛奶和一些包子午餐：蔬菜、牛肉和米飯晚餐：魚肉、面條和水果起得早，常運動一周游泳兩次幾乎不玩電腦游戲原因……注意：1.詞數(shù)60左右（短文的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)），可適當發(fā)揮。2.不得透露學校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分。Ihaveafriend.HeisJim.HeisamemberofHealthClub.Hehasahealthylife.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IhopeeveryonecanhaveahealthylifelikeJim’s.【答案】Ihaveafriend.HeisJim.HeisamemberofHealthClub.Hehasahealthylife.Forbreakfast,healwayshasanegg.Healsoeatssomebaozianddrinksaglassofmilk.Forlunch,hehasrice,vegetablesandbeef.Fordinner,hehasfish,noodlesandfruit.Hegetsupearlyeveryday.Heoftenexercisesinthemorning.Healsogoesswimmingtwiceaweek.Heseldomplayscomputergamesbecauseitisbadforhiseyes.IhopeeveryonecanhaveahealthylifelikeJim’s.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，介紹Jim的健康生活，注意要點要齊全，可適當發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導：寫作時要以第三人稱來介紹，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時。收尾兩段題干已給出，注意連貫性；兩段分別介紹Jim的飲食習慣和生活習慣，要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。（二）如今人們越來越重視健康飲食，21世紀英語報向中學生發(fā)起征文活動，主題是健康飲食習慣，請結合下列內(nèi)容要求和表格，寫一篇文章進行投稿。內(nèi)容要求：1.你父母的飲食習慣是否健康，請簡述理由。2.你的飲食習慣是否健康，請簡述理由。3.請你提出健康飲食的建議。FamilymembersEatinghabits（飲食習慣）Healthy/UnhealthyReason（理由）Youradvice（你的建議）MyfatherHelikes……Eatlotsoffruitandvegetables.Mymother……I……注意：（1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名校名；（2）詞數(shù)：不少于60詞；（3）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數(shù)。Therearethreepeopleinmyfamily.Wehavedifferenteatinghabits.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Therearethreepeopleinmyfamily.Wehavedifferenteatinghabits.Myparentshavehealthyeatinghabits.Myfatherlikeseatingvegetablesbecausetheyarehealthy.Mymotherwantstoloseweighttokeepfit,sosheeatsalotofchickenandfruit.Theynevereatjunkfood,becauseit’sbadforhealth.MyeatinghabitisnothealthybecauseIdon’tliketoeatvegetables.Ialwayseatalotofmeat.SometimesIeatjunkfood.SoIneedtochangemyeatinghabits.Iwanttosharesomeideasabouthowtoeatinahealthyway.First,don’teatfriedfoodorfoodwithlotsofsugar,becausetheyarebadforourhealth.Second,trytoeatlotsoffruitandvegetablesbecausetheycanmakeusbecomehealthy.Ihopeeveryonecanliveinahealthywayanddevelopsomegoodeatinghabits.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，要求按照題目中的要點闡述家人的飲食習慣；內(nèi)容包括：父母的飲食習慣及是否健康、自己的飲食習慣及是否健康、給出健康飲食的建議，以上三點缺一不可。2.寫作指導：本文時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，以第一人稱和第三人稱為主，注意主謂一致問題；寫作時應注意分段敘述，第一段開門見山，點明主題；第二段介紹父母及自己的飲食習慣；第三段介紹關于健康飲食的建議；最后一段總結全文。寫作時注意要點齊全，語句通順有條理。（三）衛(wèi)生健康飲食:健康一直是人們關注的問題我校要舉行以“關愛健康”為題的主題班會,請根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容談談你的看法,寫一篇80字左右的演講稿。保持健康的重要性;保持健康的方法;保持健康的結論.（你的看法?）1．多吃水果蔬菜保持飲食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2．多鍛煉健身強體;3．鄙棄不良習慣（你的看法?Howtostayourhealth/fit?Dearboysandgirls：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I'mtalkingabout/Hereismyadviceabouthowtokeephealth/fit?Asamiddleschoolstudent，firstyou'dbetterdomoreexercisesuchasplayingballgames,running,swimmingandjumpingropes（繩子）．Thenyoushouldpayattentiontoyourdietormeals．Don'teattoomuchmeatandsugarbutmorevegetablesandfruits．Third,youneedenoughsleeporrest．Next,keepyourselfhappy．Aspeopleoftensaysmilingmakesyounger．Lastyoumustn'tdrinkwineorsmoke．Theyarebadforyourhealth．Thatismyadvice．Ihopeyouarehealthyandenjoyyourlife．Thankyou,bye!【解析】試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者介紹怎樣保持我們的健康，小作者首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。寫作亮點：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如Aspeopleoftensaysmilingmakesyounger．Lastyoumustn'tdrinkwineorsmoke．Theyarebadfor