Unit1AnewstartReadingandWritingopportunitydealwithchallengefailworkhardwithbutterfliesinone’sstomachkeepanopenminddisappointedeagernesscurious挑戰(zhàn)失敗，未能做成失望的機(jī)會(huì)應(yīng)付，處理努力好奇的愿聽(tīng)取別人的意見(jiàn)，思維開(kāi)闊渴望情緒緊張，心里發(fā)慌Revision:What’sajournalentry?

Ajournalentrycanbeatimelineofyourdailyactivities,asummaryofyourthoughts,orsimplyawaytokeepyourselfontrackwhileyoucompleteanassignment.DateTheauthor’sfeeling.Theauthor’sphysicalclass.Theauthormadeafriendduringafter-classactivities.Theauthor’simpressionofthefirstweek.IntroductionMainbodyEndingReadandsummarizethemainideaofeachparagraph.layoutActivity1What’sthepassageabout?It’sabouttheauthor’s__________duringthefirstweekatseniorhigh.2.Whathappenedinherphysicsclass?

Shecouldn’t__________________andthephysicsteachersaidthat________wasmoreimportantthannote-takingandmemorising.3.Whatdidshedoafterclass?

Shehurriedtotheschoolskateboardingclub,andbumpedintoagirlontheway.Thenshetriedskateboardingatthecluband____________withthegirl.

experiences

takeeverythingdown

thinkingReadthejournalentryandanswerthequestions.

madefriendsActivity3LayoutTense

OrderLanguage

ExcellentchoicesofwordsDifferentsentencepatterns

Itriedtoturnonmybrainbuttheenginewouldn’tstart.Withbutterfliesinmystomach…Wellbegun,halfdone.FigureofspeechMetaphor

Howtowriteajournal?高考應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作--日記Writeajournalentryaboutyourfirst-dayexperiencesatseniorhigh.要點(diǎn)如下：

1.校園環(huán)境；

2.對(duì)老師和同學(xué)們的印象；

3.自己的感受。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

第一步：認(rèn)真審題謀篇布局體裁人稱時(shí)態(tài)要點(diǎn)結(jié)構(gòu)圖開(kāi)頭點(diǎn)題(說(shuō)明感受)說(shuō)明在校第一天的感受日記第一人稱一般過(guò)去時(shí)具體描述情況(條理清晰)1．校園環(huán)境2．對(duì)老師和同學(xué)們的印象3．再次說(shuō)明自己的感受第二步，由詞及句，準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)1．今天是我高中開(kāi)學(xué)的第一天，它給我留下了深刻的印象。Todayisthefirstdayofmyseniorhigh,andithas______________________________me.2．校園特別漂亮，我迫不及待地去探索。Thecampuswas___________beautifulandI____________.3在教學(xué)樓前是個(gè)美麗的花園，空氣里充滿花香，這讓我很放松。Infrontoftheteachingbuildingwasabeautifulgardenandtheair____________thesmellofflowers,which________.madeadeepimpressiononparticularly

couldnotwaittoexploreitwasfilledwithmademerelaxed4．我感到很幸運(yùn)，新老師們都全力以赴使他們的課有條理。Ifeltluckythatallmyteachers____________maketheirclassorganized.

5．我所有的同學(xué)都很友好，我渴望和他們交朋友。Allmyclassmatesareveryfriendly,soI’m____________tomakefriendswiththem.wentalloutto

intheeagerness

第三步，句式升級(jí)，創(chuàng)造亮點(diǎn)利用so…that…句式升級(jí)句式Allmyclassmatesare_____________I’mintheeagernesstomakefriendswiththem.sofriendlythat

第四步，合理過(guò)渡，完美卷面1．今天是我高中開(kāi)學(xué)的第一天，它給我留下了深刻的印象。2．校園特別漂亮，我迫不及待地去探索。3．在教學(xué)樓前是個(gè)美麗的花園，空氣里充滿花香，這讓我很放松。4．我感到很幸運(yùn)，新老師們都全力以赴使他們的課有條理。5．我所有的同學(xué)都很友好，我渴望和他們交朋友。September1stSunnyTodayisthefirstdayofmyseniorhigh,andithasmadeadeepimpressiononme.ThecampuswasparticularlybeautifulandIcouldnotwaittoexploreit.Infrontoftheteachingbuildingwasabeautifulgardenandtheairwasfilledwiththesmellofflowers,whichmademerelaxed.Besides,Ifeltluckythatallmynewteacherswentallouttomaketheirclassesorganized.Inaddition,allmyclassmatesaresofriendlythatI’mintheeagernesstomakefriendswiththem.Howniceadayitwas!EvaluationEvaluationform

Tense

simplepresent,simplepast,pastcontinuous,simplefuture…

Order

Timeorder

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Introduction

MyimpressionofthefirstweekMainbodyEnjoyableclass&afterschoolactivities&HowImadenewfriendsEndingMyplanandfeelingsDate…

LanguageExcellentchoicesofwords…Fig