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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Havingalreadyobtainedmanymedalssincestartingtoplaygolfattheageoften,Larry,atsixteen,haddevelopedintooneofthebestyounggolfprospectsinthecountry.Andhewaselectedthemostvaluableplayerofhishighschoolteam.Followinghisjunioryear,Larrymatchedhimselfagainstseventy-fourofthenation’sbestjuniorgolfersinnationalcompetitions,andheperformedbetterthanthemajorityofthem.Larry’sperformancedrewtheinterestofcoachesfromsomeofthebestcollegegolfteamsinthecountry.Wantingtostayclosetohome,heacceptedascholarshiptotheUniversityofHouston.“Justthink,everythingwillbetakencareof,andI’llbeclosetohome.Anditwon’tcostusanything,”Larrytoldhismother,Missy.“AndI’llbeplayingforoneofthebestcollegeteamsinthecountry.”Fightingbacktears,Missyhuggedherson,knowinghehadworkedsohardtowinascholarshiptomakethingseasierforher.Thatsummer,Larryworkedevenharderthaneveronhisgolfgame,hittinghundredsofballsdailyandtakingapart-timejobinagolfclubatnighttoprepareforcollege.Latethatsummer,unfortunately,Larryhadaterriblecaraccident.“I’msorry,butwehavetocutoffyourson’sarmbelowtheelbow(肘),”onedoctortoldLarry’sparents.“Ishegoingtobeallright?”Missyasked.“Wedon’tknow,”thedoctoranswered.Upset,Larry’sfatherwonderedabouthisson’sreactiontothelossofhisleftarm.“HowwillLarryevergetalongwithoutgolf?”hethought.Healsorealizedtherewasafarmorepressingmatterthananuncleargolfcareer.“They’vegottosaveLarry’slife,”hesaidtohimself.“That’sallthatmattersnow.”Afteralmostninetydays,Larry’sconditionfinallyimprovedandhewasnolongerindanger.OnenightLarryawakened,foundhislefthandmissing,andcriedhelplessly.Hisfatherracedtothehospital.“Dad,howamIevergoingtoplaygolf?”heasked.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡相應(yīng)位置作答?!癏oney,youstillhaveonearmleft,”hisfatherreplied.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Larry’sfatherreachedouttovariouscompaniesandaskediftheycoulddesignanartificialhandforLarry.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:十六歲的拉里是極具潛力的高爾夫球手,獲得眾多獎(jiǎng)牌且被評(píng)為高中校隊(duì)最有價(jià)值球員,還贏得了休斯頓大學(xué)的獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金。然而暑假時(shí)他遭遇嚴(yán)重車禍,左臂肘部以下被截肢。他醒來(lái)后因無(wú)法再打高爾夫而痛苦哭泣,父親趕到醫(yī)院安慰他。

伏筆與回應(yīng):伏筆:拉里在高爾夫上取得諸多成就,為后文他因失去左臂而極度痛苦失去人生方向埋下伏筆。續(xù)寫中他經(jīng)歷掙扎后重新振作,再次追求高爾夫夢(mèng)想。伏筆:拉里為上大學(xué)努力訓(xùn)練且打工,暗示他是個(gè)堅(jiān)毅努力的人,這使他在遭遇挫折后有重新站起的可能。續(xù)寫中他憑借毅力適應(yīng)單手打球。伏筆:父親擔(dān)心拉里對(duì)失去左臂的反應(yīng),為后文他安慰鼓勵(lì)拉里并積極想辦法幫助他做鋪墊。續(xù)寫中父親持續(xù)支持拉里,如聯(lián)系公司制作假手。伏筆:提到醫(yī)生對(duì)拉里能否恢復(fù)不確定,預(yù)示他將面臨重重困難,也凸顯他后續(xù)克服困難的不易。續(xù)寫中他克服身體和心理的雙重挑戰(zhàn)。伏筆:拉里因失去左臂在醫(yī)院無(wú)助哭泣,與后文他重新燃起希望形成對(duì)比,體現(xiàn)其心理變化過程。續(xù)寫中他在父親幫助下從絕望走向希望,努力康復(fù)訓(xùn)練。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn):第一段:描寫父親安慰拉里,鼓勵(lì)他用僅存的右臂也能繼續(xù)生活和打球,提及一些用單臂成功的案例或講述勵(lì)志故事,讓拉里重拾信心。第二段:講述父親為拉里聯(lián)系公司設(shè)計(jì)假手的過程,可簡(jiǎn)單描述假手的功能以及拉里得到假手后的反應(yīng),如對(duì)恢復(fù)高爾夫生涯充滿期待等。情感線:從拉里獲獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金時(shí)的喜悅,到車禍后的絕望無(wú)助,再到父親安慰后的燃起希望,以及對(duì)未來(lái)借助假手恢復(fù)高爾夫生涯的期待。故事線:拉里是優(yōu)秀高爾夫球手,獲大學(xué)獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金后遇車禍截肢,父親安慰他并為其聯(lián)系制作假手以助其重回高爾夫球場(chǎng)。主旨升華句:“Adversityrevealsgenius;prosperityconcealsit.”(逆境揭示天才,順境遮蔽天才。)“Thegreatestgloryinlivingliesnotinneverfalling,butinrisingeverytimewefall.”(人生最大的榮耀不在于從不跌倒,而在于每次跌倒后都能站起來(lái)。)“Whenlifegivesyoulemons,makelemonade.”(當(dāng)生活給你檸檬時(shí),就把它做成檸檬水。)“Strengthdoesnotcomefromphysicalcapacity.Itcomesfromanindomitablewill.”(力量并非來(lái)自體能,而是來(lái)自不屈不撓的意志。)“Hardshipsoftenprepareordinarypeopleforanextraordinarydestiny.”(艱難困苦常常使普通人成就非凡的命運(yùn)。)寫作示范一:

“Honey,youstillhaveonearmleft,”hisfatherreplied.“You’vealwaysbeenafighter.Rememberthatone-armedgolferwhostillmadeamazingshots?Youcantoo.Yourtalentanddeterminationarenotdefinedbyonearm.Withyourrightarmandyourstrongheart,youcanovercomethis.Golfisnotjustabouttwoarms,it’saboutyourspirit.”Larrylistened,tearsinhiseyesbutaglimmerofhopestartingtoshine.

Larry’sfatherreachedouttovariouscompaniesandaskediftheycoulddesignanartificialhandforLarry.Aftermanyinquiriesanddiscussions,hefinallyfoundacompanywillingtotakeonthechallenge.Theartificialhandtheydesignedwaslightweightandflexible,withspecialfeaturestohelpLarrygripagolfclub.WhenLarrysawtheartificialhand,hefeltanewsurgeofconfidence.Heknewitwouldbealongroadtorecovery,buthewasdeterminedtogetbackonthegolfcourseandprovethathecouldstillbeagreatgolfer.寫作示范二:

“Honey,youstillhaveonearmleft,”hisfatherreplied.“Youaremorethanjustyourarms.Youhavetheskillsandthepassionforgolfthatnoaccidentcantakeaway.Thereareathleteswhohaveachievedgreatthingswithdisabilities.Youcanlearntoadaptanduseyourrightarmtocreateanewstyleofplay.Yourjourneymaybedifferentnow,butitdoesn’thavetoend.”Larrywipedhistearsandnodded,startingtobelieveinhimselfagain.

Larry’sfatherreachedouttovariouscompaniesandaskediftheycoulddesignanartificialhandforLarry.Itwasadifficultprocess,buthedidn’tgiveup.Eventually,acompanydesignedahigh-techartificialhand.ItcouldsenseLarry’smusclemovementsandadjustthegripaccordingly.WhenLarrytriediton,hewasamazed.Heimmediatelystartedpracticingsimplemovementswithit.Hewasexcitedaboutthepossibilityofusingittoholdagolfclubagainandwaseagertostarthisrehabilitationtraining,withafirmbeliefthathecouldreturntothegolffield.參考答案“Honey,youstillhaveonearmleft,”hisfatherreplied.“Andyou’vegottheheartofachampion.We’llfiguresomethingout.”Larrylookedathisfather,tearsstreamingdownhisface,buttherewasaflickerofdeterminationinhiseyes.Hisfathercontinued,“You’veovercomesomuchalread

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