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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Whenthesunroseonesummermorning,Mark,ahighschoolstudent,wasridinghisbikeonthewaytoschoolasusual.Headmiredtheattractivesightsalongtheroadwithcolorfulflowersonbothsides,andfreshairfullofpleasantsmell.Itseemedtobeagreatday.Markwaspassingaparkwhenhenoticedanelderlywomanwalkingabout100metersaheadslowlyfallingdownontotheground.Hefelthisheartstandingstillwithgreatconcern.Withnobodyelsearoundtoturntoforhelp,Markdecidedtorideovertoseewhatwaswrongwithherforhimself.Asheapproachedtheoldlady,hefoundherlyingonthegroundandlookingpaleandweak.Judgingfromheruntidyclothesandmessyhair,shemighthavebeenoutformorethanoneday.“Areyouallright,Granny?”Shakingherarm,Markaskedanxiously.Theoldladyopenedhereyes,aconfusedandlostexpressiononherface.Shehesitatedandthentookacloserlook.Immediatelyabigsmileappearedonherface.GraspingMark’shand,shesaidwithshiningeyes,“John,thereyouareatlast!Myson,I’mhungry...hungry...Givemefood...”Sherepeated,pattingherselfonthestomach.Notknowingwhattodo,Markanxiouslyaskedher,“Granny,whereisyourhome?Canyoutellmewhoyoursonis?”Buttheoldladydidn’trespond,onlymumbling(嘟囔),“I’mhungry.Givemefood,John.”O(jiān)bviously,shemistookMarkforherson.Allofasudden,MarkrealizedtheoldladymightbeapatientwithAlzheimer’s(癡呆癥)diseasebecausehisownlategrandpausedtosufferfromsuchacondition.“Shemighthavegoneoutwithoutbeingnoticedbyherfamily.Theymusthavebeenworriedabouther.Maybethey’researchinglikecrazyforhereverywhere.”Markthoughttohimself,“Butsheissostarved.ImustgivehersomefoodbeforeIgetintouchwithherfamily.”注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Lookingaround,MarksawBilly’sHamburgersnearby.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Justthentheoldladyreachedintoherpocket,anotedroppingout._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

文章大意:夏日清晨,高中生馬克騎車上學途中,看到一位老婦人摔倒在地。他上前查看,老婦人錯把他認成自己兒子約翰,還喊著餓。馬克猜測老婦人可能患有老年癡呆癥且已離家多日,家人肯定在焦急尋找,于是決定先給她找些食物。

伏筆與回應:伏筆:馬克看到老婦人摔倒且無人求助,為他獨自上前關心并決定幫忙埋下伏筆。續(xù)寫中他一直積極想辦法照顧老婦人并聯(lián)系其家人。伏筆:老婦人把馬克認成兒子,這一誤解推動后續(xù)馬克以“兒子”身份照顧她的情節(jié)。續(xù)寫中馬克繼續(xù)順著老婦人的誤解給她買食物、照顧她。伏筆:馬克從老婦人的外貌判斷她已在外多日,暗示老婦人身體虛弱需要食物和照顧,這促使馬克去買漢堡。續(xù)寫中馬克買到漢堡并喂老婦人吃,緩解了她的饑餓。伏筆:馬克因爺爺曾患老年癡呆癥而認出老婦人的病癥,這使他能理解老婦人的行為并更有耐心地幫助她。續(xù)寫中他繼續(xù)以同情和耐心對待老婦人,如陪她等家人。伏筆:提到馬克要聯(lián)系老婦人家人,為后文發(fā)現(xiàn)紙條上有家人電話做鋪墊。續(xù)寫中馬克根據(jù)紙條順利聯(lián)系到家人,使故事有圓滿結局。續(xù)寫要點:第一段:描寫馬克去漢堡店買食物的過程,如他快速進店、購買合適的食物、返回老婦人身邊并喂她吃,展現(xiàn)馬克的善良和細心。第二段:講述老婦人從口袋里掉出紙條,上面有家人電話,馬克聯(lián)系家人后,家人趕來,表達對馬克的感激,突出善有善報的主題。情感線:從馬克看到老婦人摔倒時的擔憂,到老婦人錯認他時的驚訝與無奈,再到?jīng)Q定幫助時的堅定,以及最后聯(lián)系到家人時的欣慰。故事線:馬克上學途中遇摔倒老婦人,老婦人錯認他,他判斷老婦人患老年癡呆癥且離家多日,先去買食物,后發(fā)現(xiàn)紙條聯(lián)系家人。主旨升華句:“Kindnessisthelanguagewhichthedeafcanhearandtheblindcansee.”(善良是一種聾人能聽見、盲人能看見的語言。)“Inaworldwhereyoucanbeanything,bekind.”(在這個你可以成為任何人的世界里,做個善良的人。)“Thebestwaytofindyourselfistoloseyourselfintheserviceofothers.”(找到自我的最佳方式是在服務他人中迷失自我。)“Noactofkindness,nomatterhowsmall,iseverwasted.”(任何善舉,無論多么微小,都不會被浪費。)“Asingleactofkindnessthrowsoutrootsinalldirections,andtherootsspringupandmakenewtrees.”(一個單一的善舉向四面八方播撒種子,這些種子發(fā)芽并長成新的樹木。)寫作示范一:

Lookingaround,MarksawBilly’sHamburgersnearby.Hequicklyparkedhisbikeandrushedintotheshop.Heboughtacoupleofhamburgersandabottleofwater.Thenhehurriedbacktotheoldlady.“Granny,here’ssomefoodforyou.”Marksaidgentlyashehelpedhersitup.Hecarefullyunwrappedthehamburgerandfedittoherbitbybit.Theoldladyatewithrelish,asatisfiedlookonherface.Markwatchedher,relievedthatshewasgettingsomenourishment.

Justthentheoldladyreachedintoherpocket,anotedroppingout.Markpickeditupandsawaphonenumberwrittenonit.Heguesseditmightbeherfamily’snumber.Heimmediatelydialedthenumber.Afewminuteslater,afranticvoiceanswered.Itwastheoldlady’sson.Hesaidtheyhadbeensearchingforhereverywhere.Soon,thesonarrivedandhuggedtheoldladytightly.HethankedMarkprofusely,sayinghewasarealhero.Marksmiled,happythathecouldhelp.寫作示范二:

Lookingaround,MarksawBilly’sHamburgersnearby.Withouthesitation,helockedhisbikeandsprintedtothestore.Heorderedawarmhamburgerandsomefries.Ashecarriedthefoodback,hethoughtabouthowscaredtheoldladymustbe.“Granny,I’vegotyousomethingtoeat.”Marksaidsoftly.Hesatbesideherandpatientlyfedher.Theoldlady’seyeslitupasshetastedthefood.Markwipedthecrumbsfromhermouth,likeadutifulson.

Justthentheoldladyreachedintoherpocket,anotedroppingout.Markopeneditandfoundthecontactnumber.Hecalledrightaway.Thevoiceontheotherendwasfilledwithworryandrelief.Thefamilymembersrushedover.WhentheysawMarktakingcareoftheirmother,theyweredeeplygrateful.Theoldlady’sdaughter-in-lawsaid,“Youareanangel.Yourkindnesswillberemembered.”Markfeltawarmglowinhisheart,knowinghehaddonetherightthing.參考答案Lookingaround,MarksawBilly’sHamburgersnearby.Markwalksintotheburgerbarandstartspickingoutsomeburgers.Hepicksoutthemostexpensiveburgersintherestaurant.Seeingthelargequantityofexpensivebread,thecashieraskedpuzzled,“Arethesehamburgersforyoutoeat?”Markreplied,“Ididn’teatit,Iboughtitforanoldlady.”Thenhetoldthewholestory.Atthistime,theburgerrestaurantownerjustheardwhatMarksaid,andthentoldthecashiertogiveMark’shamburgerfree,saying,thisismylittletoken,pleasehelpmeconvey.Weshouldalltryourbesttohelpthoseinneed.Markthanked

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