Unit8Naturaldisasters單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度記敘文：災(zāi)害發(fā)生的當(dāng)天情況說(shuō)明文：災(zāi)害防范措施本單元的話題是“自然災(zāi)害與防范”，主要介紹自然災(zāi)害的發(fā)生和防范措施，包括介紹自然災(zāi)害發(fā)生時(shí)的情況、防范措施等相關(guān)內(nèi)容。在具體的寫作中，學(xué)生應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1.能夠正確拼寫描自然災(zāi)害的相關(guān)詞匯；2.能夠恰當(dāng)使用相關(guān)短語(yǔ)和句型表達(dá)；3.能夠正確使用過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)進(jìn)行描述當(dāng)時(shí)的狀況。【詞匯積累】1.一個(gè)像雷聲的很大的聲音2.開始晃動(dòng)3.害怕的尖叫4跑出樓房5.盡某人最大的能力做某事6.四面八方7.玻璃塊8.倒塌9.黑暗安靜10.根本不11.覺得緊張12.快速跳動(dòng)13.被困住14.自言自語(yǔ)15.片刻的恐懼16.穿過(guò)17.冷靜下來(lái)18.喊救命19.慢慢爬過(guò)黑暗20.足夠的空間更我移動(dòng)21.試圖找到出路22.移走23.明亮的日光24.拖干凈水25.輸?shù)魶Q賽26.上千的27.撞上28.沖走29.引火30.從樹上掉下來(lái)31.有雷電的風(fēng)暴32.著火33.受傷34.壞掉35.摔倒36.盡快37.用某物蓋住某物38.保護(hù)自己免遭危險(xiǎn)39.著火的建筑40.從洪水中過(guò)去41.保持某人安全免遭危險(xiǎn)【句型積累】42. Soontherealnoisecame,likebombsundertheground. 很快，像地下的炸彈一樣的聲音傳來(lái)。43. Outside,peoplewererunninginalldirectionswhilepiecesofglassandbrickswerefallingdown. 外面，碎玻璃和碎磚紛紛掉落下來(lái)，人們四處逃散。44. Icouldnotseeanythingatall,andIdidnotknowifanyoneelsewasnearme. 我什么也看不見，也不知道是否有人在我附近。45. Ifeltnervousandmyheartwasbeatingfast. 我感到緊張，我的心跳得很快。46. AmomentoffearwentthroughmymindbutItoldmyselftocalmdownsinceIwasstillalive.我的腦中掠過(guò)一陣恐懼，但我告訴我自己要鎮(zhèn)定下來(lái)，既然我仍然活著。47. Istartedtopullmyselfslowlythroughthedark. 我開始在黑暗中慢慢地向前移動(dòng)身體。48. AsIwastryingtofindmywayout.Isuddenlyheardsomenoiseaboveme. 當(dāng)我嘗試著找到出路，我突然聽到了上面的噪聲。49. Timmywassleeping/asleepwhentheearthquakestarted. 當(dāng)?shù)卣痖_始的時(shí)候蒂姆在睡覺。50. Mydad’scarbrokedownbecauseofthecoldweather. 由于糟糕的天氣我爸爸的汽車出故障了。51. Staylowtotheground. 貼著地面。52. Thesnowkeptfallingaroundus. 雪不停地在我們周圍落下。53. IwasdoingmyhomeworkintheclassroomwhenMr.Wucameinandtoldustogohomeearly. 當(dāng)吳老師進(jìn)來(lái)告訴我們?cè)琰c(diǎn)回家時(shí)，我正在教室里做家庭作業(yè)。54. WelostourumbrellainthewindandInearlyfellover. 我們?cè)陲L(fēng)中丟了雨傘，我差點(diǎn)兒摔倒。55. Suddenly,astrongwindcamefrombehind. 突然，一陣大風(fēng)從后面刮來(lái)【諺語(yǔ)積累】1.Natureiskindofalovingmother,butalsoabutcherincoldblood. 自然不僅是位慈愛的母親，還是個(gè)冷血的屠夫。2.Fishjumpoutofthewaterandraincomes. 魚兒出水跳，風(fēng)雨就來(lái)到。3. Allofthedisaster,butbecauseoflove. 所有的災(zāi)難，不過(guò)是因?yàn)榫鞈?。?zāi)時(shí)狀況【萬(wàn)能寫作模板】災(zāi)時(shí)狀況Anearthquake/Aflood/Asnowstorm/...hit....Iwasdoing...when......becauseoftheheavyrain/snow....Wecouldonlyhear/see.......keptfalling.Suddenly,..防范措施...hadtowalkslowly/pulloneselfthrough....防范措施If...,don’t...災(zāi)后感受...wasreallyterrible.災(zāi)后感受Wewereallsave.2022年6月10日，李華的家鄉(xiāng)四川雅安市蘆山縣發(fā)生了一場(chǎng)地震，地震造成了巨大的損毀，但幸運(yùn)的是，李華一家安然無(wú)恙。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你描述一下地震發(fā)生時(shí)家里人的活動(dòng)情景及感受：1.李華在浴室里洗澡；2.爸爸在電腦旁工作；3.媽媽在廚房里做晚餐；4.爺爺奶奶在客廳看電視。要求：1．結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)通順，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，書寫清晰；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)的人名，學(xué)校名等信息；3．80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

MynameisLiHua.Therewasanearthquakeatabout5:00p.m.onJune1st.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MynameisLiHua.Therewasanearthquakeatabout5:00p.m.onJune1st.Atthattime,allmyfamilywereathome.Iwastakingashowerinthebathroom.Myfatherwasworkingonthecomputer.Mymotherwascookinginthekitchen.MygrandparentswerewatchingTVinthelivingroom.Wewereallscared.

Theearthquakemadeourneighborhoodinamess.Thereweresomefallentrees,brokenwindowsandrubbish.Butluckily,itwasn’ttooheavyanditdidn’tlastfortoolong.Wewereallsafe.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，屬于材料作文寫作；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”和“過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)”；③提示：文章開頭以及要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，按照提示的要點(diǎn)逐點(diǎn)闡述，不要遺漏提示中的“家里人的感受”這一要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接短文開頭，引出話題；第二步，接著按照要點(diǎn)敘述當(dāng)時(shí)家里人各自正在做的事情，以及家人們的感受；第三步，介紹地震給周邊生活環(huán)境帶來(lái)的破壞，抒發(fā)作者的感受并書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①bescared感到害怕②inamess亂七八糟[高分句型]Thereweresomefallentrees,brokenwindowsandrubbish.（and連接三個(gè)并列的名詞，therebe句型，就近原則，過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)）英漢互譯（一）BencouldhearstrongwindsoutsidehishomeinAlabama.Blackcloudsweremakingtheskyverydark.Withnolightoutside,itfeltlikemidnight.（1）ThenewsonTVreportedthataheavyrainstormwasinthearea.Everyoneintheneighborhoodwasbusy.Ben’sdadwasputtingpiecesofwoodoverthewindowswhilehismomwasmakingsuretheflashlightsandradiowereworking.（2）她也放了一些蠟燭和火柴在桌子上.Benwashelpinghismommakedinnerwhentherainbegantobeatheavilyagainstthewindows（3）晚餐后，他們?cè)囍ネ嬗螒?，butitwashardtohavefunwithaseriousstormhappeningoutside.Bencouldnotsleepatfirst.Hefinallyfellasleepwhenthewindwasdyingdownataround3:00a.m.Whenhewokethesumwasrising.Hewentoutsidewithhisfamilyandfoundtheneighborhoodinamess.（4）Fallentrees,brokenwindowsandrubbishwereeverywhere.Theyjoinedtheneighborstohelpcleanuptheneighborhoodtogether.（5）Althoughthestormbrokemanythingsapartitbroughtfamiliesandneighborsclosertogether.將文中劃線部分譯成漢語(yǔ)或者英語(yǔ).1．2．3．4．5．（二）Inmanycountries,therearesomestormsinsummerorautumn.Whenastormcomes,itisoftenwiththunderandlightening(雷電).Soit'susuallydangerousduringastorm._Themostimportantthingyoucandoistogetyourself,yourfamilyandyourhomeprepared._有時(shí),盡管你在室內(nèi),也是不安全的。Thelighteningcangothroughelectricalwires(電線)andoverphonelines._Sometimesitkillspeoplebysettingtheirhouseonfire._Ifyoustayoutside,youwill-alsobeindanger._Whenyoustandinanopenplaceorunderabigtree,thelighteningmayhityou.Whenyouseeastormcoming,goindoors.Don'tstayoutside._在室內(nèi),最好不要用手機(jī)或電腦。Keepawayfromoutsidedoorsandwindowsanddonotlieon.thefloor.Inordertoprotectourselves,it'snecessaryforustoknowthedosanddon'tinastorm.6．7．8．9．10．（三）

WhenSamwasan11-year-oldboy,arainstormhithishometownonadarknight.71.Whenthestormcame,hewasdoinghishomework.

Hissisterwasasleepandhismotherwasbusycookinginthekitchen.72.他爸爸正在看電視.Suddenly,allthelightswentoff.73.Thentherainbeatagainstthedoorsandwindowsheavily.Thewindblewstrongly,sohissisterwokeup.Shewasscaredandstartedtocry.74.這家人什么也做不了。Sam’sfathertookouttheflashlight,butthebatteries（電池）weredead.75.Sohismotherfoundsomecandlesandaboxofmatches.Thenextmorning,aftertheylistenedtothenewsontheradio,theyrealizedthataheavyrainstormhadhappened.11．12．13．14．15．【參考答案】（一）【答案】1．電視新聞報(bào)道該地區(qū)有一場(chǎng)大暴風(fēng)雨。2．Shealsoputsomecandlesandmatchesonthetable.3．Afterdinnertheytriedtoplaygames.4．到處都有倒下的樹壞了的窗戶和垃圾。5．盡管暴風(fēng)雨破壞了很多的東西但是它使家人和鄰居們更相近了。（二）【答案】6．你能做的最重要的事情就是讓你自己、你的家人和家準(zhǔn)備好。7．Sometimesitisn’tsafeevenifyouareinthehouse.8．有時(shí)它通過(guò)讓人們的房子著火來(lái)殺死人們。9．當(dāng)你站在開闊的地方或大樹下時(shí)，閃電可能會(huì)擊中你。10．Inthehouse,youhadbetternotusethephoneorcomputer.（三）【答案】11．暴風(fēng)雨來(lái)臨的時(shí)候，他正在做作業(yè)。12．HisfatherwaswatchingTV.13．然后雨重重地敲打著門窗。14．Thefamilycouldn’tdoanything.15．因此他的媽媽找到了一些蠟燭和一盒火柴。（一）地震是一種自然現(xiàn)象，雖然目前我們還無(wú)法預(yù)測(cè)，但我們可以了解一些自救知識(shí)，減少地震帶來(lái)的傷害。假如你是你學(xué)校校報(bào)英文版的編輯，請(qǐng)你寫一篇題為“WhattoDoDuringanEarthquakeatSchool”短文，刊登在校報(bào)上。提示：◆在高樓里，不要從樓上跳出去。遠(yuǎn)離窗戶和黑板。遠(yuǎn)離火源。藏在課桌下面。當(dāng)?shù)孛嫱Ｖ箵u晃時(shí)，快速離開大樓，然后去操場(chǎng)?！粼诓賵?chǎng)上上體育課，待在那里。不要返回到教室去。不要站在高樓和高樹附近，因?yàn)樗鼈兛赡苈涞侥愕纳砩??？傊?，按照在學(xué)校所學(xué)的知識(shí)去做。保持鎮(zhèn)定，要勇敢且樂(lè)于助人。要求：1.時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)

人稱：第二人稱2.包含信息提示中的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)80左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。WhattoDoDuringanEarthquakeatSchoolYouhavenoideawhentheearthquakewillhappen,butyoushouldknowwhattododuringanearthquakeatschool.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（二）Writeapassageofatleast40wordsonthetopic“Whatshallwedowhenthereisatyphoon?”(以“臺(tái)風(fēng)來(lái)時(shí)我們?cè)撛趺醋?？”為題寫一篇不少于40個(gè)詞的短文)Usethefollowingpointsasareference(以下內(nèi)容僅供參考)1.Whatcanweseewhenthereisatyphoon?2.Whatmayhappenwhenthereisatyphoon?3.Whatshallwedowhenthereisatyphoon?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（三）2020年7月17日，恩施州因持續(xù)暴雨爆發(fā)特大洪水，恩施人民團(tuán)結(jié)一致抗擊洪水。請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示并結(jié)合你的所見所聞寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹恩施人民如何互幫互助共渡難關(guān)。要點(diǎn)提示：1.簡(jiǎn)要描述受災(zāi)情況；2.齊心協(xié)力抗洪救災(zāi)（如：轉(zhuǎn)移群眾、提供住宿、捐贈(zèng)物品、清掃街道……）3.談?wù)勛约旱母惺堋懽饕螅?.要點(diǎn)齊全，并根據(jù)內(nèi)容適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.條理清晰，字跡工整，詞數(shù)不少于80詞；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名等相關(guān)信息。參考詞匯：洪水flood

捐贈(zèng)donate___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（四）請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示，以“Alandslide（山崩）”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。提示：1.上周一早上，在連續(xù)下了兩天大雨之后發(fā)生了山崩；2.我和媽媽在家，爸爸下午回來(lái)，雨很大，他叫我和媽媽趕快帶傘離開；3.就在那時(shí)，房子開始搖晃，我們非常害怕，迅速跑開了；4.第二天上午回家時(shí)，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)房子沒有了，到處是碎玻璃和磚塊，我們感到很傷心。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（五）假如你是Lucy，昨天下午你所居住的地方遭遇了一場(chǎng)暴風(fēng)雨。請(qǐng)給你的好友Lily寫一封電子郵件。向她描述一下暴風(fēng)雨來(lái)臨時(shí)，你的家人（爸爸、媽媽、你、妹妹）都在干什么，暴風(fēng)雨的影響是什么？要求：1.須包括所有要點(diǎn)提示，并適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫；2.詞數(shù)：80詞左右；開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)個(gè)人真實(shí)姓名和校名。DearLily,Letmetellyousomethingabouttherainstormyesterdayafternoon.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Lucy

參考答案：1.【答案】例文：WhattoDoDuringanEarthquakeatSchoolYouhavenoideawhentheearthquakewillhappen,butyoushouldknowwhattododuringanearthquakeatschool.Whenyou’reinahighbuilding,don’tjumpoutofit.Stayawayfromwindowsandblackboardsandfire.Hideunderthedesk.Whenthegroundstopsshaking,leavethebuildingquicklyandthengototheplayground.Ifyou’rehavingaPEclassintheplayground,pleasestaythere.Don’tgobacktotheclassroom.Don’tstandneartallbuildingsortalltrees,becausetheymayfalldown.Ifyoufollowtheserules,youcanbesafeduringanearthquake.Keepcalm,bebraveandhelpful.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說(shuō)明文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，可適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)，以第二人稱為主。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出主題——發(fā)生地震時(shí)該做什么；第二步，介紹如何在地震中自救；第三步，叮囑注意事項(xiàng)并做總結(jié)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①stayawayfrom遠(yuǎn)離②falldown掉落③keepcalm保持鎮(zhèn)定[高分句型]①Whenthegroundstopsshaking,leavethebuildingquicklyandthengototheplayground.(When引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)②Ifyou’rehavingaPEclassintheplayground,pleasestaythere.(If引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句)2.【答案】例文Whatshallwedowhenthereisatyphoon?Atyphoonisakindofverystrongwind.Whenthereisatyphoon,wecanseethecloudsmovingquicklyinthesky.Peopleholdtheirraincoatstightlywhentheyarewalkinginthestreets.Thestrongwindmaybreakthewindowsanditmayalsoblowawaytheflowerpotsoutsideourflat,soweshouldclosethewindowsandmovetheflowerpotsintotheflat.Weshouldstayathomeandlistentothenewsaboutthetyphoon.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容寫一篇關(guān)于“臺(tái)風(fēng)來(lái)時(shí)我們?cè)撛趺醋?？”的短文，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫，表述完整。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹臺(tái)風(fēng)來(lái)臨時(shí)，我們會(huì)看見什么；第二步，介紹臺(tái)風(fēng)來(lái)臨時(shí)，會(huì)發(fā)生什么；第三步，介紹臺(tái)風(fēng)來(lái)臨時(shí)，我們應(yīng)該怎么做。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①akindof一種②blowaway吹走③stayathome待在家[高分句型]①Peopleholdtheirraincoatstightlywhentheyarewalkinginthestreets.（when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）②Thestrongwindmaybreakthewindowsanditmayalsoblowawaytheflowerpotsoutsideourflat,soweshouldclosethewindowsandmovetheflowerpotsintotheflat.（so連接并列句）3.【答案】例文：Inmanyareasofthecity,therewasseriouswaterlogging,vehicleswereflooded,houseswereirrigated,anditwasdifficultforpeopletotravel.Inaddition,thedisastercausedalargeareaofpowerfailure,people’sproductionandlifewereseriouslyaffected.Inordertofightfloodsandprovidedisasterrelief,peopleworkedtogether.Withthegovernment’spositiveresponse,groupsandorganizationstransferredpeople,andlocalcharitiesraisedmoneytoprovidepeoplewithaccommodationanddonatedgoods.Aftertheflood,manyvolunteersvolunteeredtocleanthestreetsandresumedtheconstructionofthecity.Afterthis,Ithinkunityisstrength.Chinesepeoplecanovercomeanydifficultybyuniting.Inaddition,weshouldlearntotakeprecautionsandtryourbesttominimizethelosses.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，按照要點(diǎn)提示介紹恩施州因暴雨引發(fā)的洪澇災(zāi)害；內(nèi)容包括：恩施州的受災(zāi)情況、人們救災(zāi)的措施行動(dòng)、自己的感受。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以第三人稱、一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題；寫作時(shí)注意按要點(diǎn)分段敘述，保證文章條理清晰，語(yǔ)句通順。4.【答案】AlandslideLastMondaymorning,aftertwodays’heavyrain,alandslidehappened.Iwasathomewithmymotherandthenmyfathercamebackintheafternoon.Itwasrainingheavily.Heaskedmetoleavequicklywithumbrellas.Justthen,thehousestartedtoshake.Wewereveryafraidandranawayquickly.Thenextmorning,wewentbackhome.Wefoundthattherewasnohouseatall.Therewereonlypiecesofglassandbrickseverywhere.Wefeltverysad.【詳解】這是一篇要求寫自己經(jīng)歷的一次自然災(zāi)害——山崩。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。5.【答案】DearLily,Letmetellyousomethingabouttherainstormyesterdayafternoon.Athalfpastsixyesterdayafternoon,therainstormcame.Itfeltlikemidnight.Atthattime,myfamilyweredoingdifferentthings.Myfatherwaslookingthroughthenewspaperinthelivingroom.Mymotherwascookingdinnerinthekitchen.Mysisterwasreadingastorybook.IwasdoingmyEnglishhomeworkonline.Aftertherainstorm,ourneighborshelpedeachotherinneed.Therainstormwassostrongthatitbrokemanythingsapart,butitbroughtfamiliesandneighborscloserthanbefore.Yours,Lucy【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)題干要求，具體介紹昨天暴風(fēng)雨來(lái)臨時(shí)，你的家人在做什么以及暴風(fēng)雨的影響，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖（已給出）；第二步，具體介紹暴風(fēng)雨來(lái)臨時(shí)，你的家人正在做的事情以及暴風(fēng)雨的影響。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①feellike感覺像②lookthrough瀏覽③inneed在困難中④so...that...如此……以至于……[高分句型]Therainstormwassostrongthatitbrokemanythingsapart,butitbroughtfamiliesandneighborscloserthanbefore.(so...that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句；比較級(jí)句型)

Unit8Naturaldisasters單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度記敘文：災(zāi)害發(fā)生的當(dāng)天情況說(shuō)明文：災(zāi)害防范措施本單元的話題是“自然災(zāi)害與防范”，主要介紹自然災(zāi)害的發(fā)生和防范措施，包括介紹自然災(zāi)害發(fā)生時(shí)的情況、防范措施等相關(guān)內(nèi)容。在具體的寫作中，學(xué)生應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1.能夠正確拼寫描自然災(zāi)害的相關(guān)詞匯；2.能夠恰當(dāng)使用相關(guān)短語(yǔ)和句型表達(dá)；3.能夠正確使用過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)進(jìn)行描述當(dāng)時(shí)的狀況?！驹~匯積累】1.aloudnoiselikethunder一個(gè)像雷聲的很大的聲音2. starttoshake 開始晃動(dòng)3. screaminfear 害怕的尖叫4. runoutofthebuilding跑出樓房5. do/tryone’sbesttodosth 盡某人最大的能力做某事6. inalldirections 四面八方7. piecesofglass 玻璃塊8. comedown 倒塌9. darkandquiet 黑暗安靜10. not...atall 根本不11. feelnervous 覺得緊張12. beatfast 快速跳動(dòng)13. betrapped 被困住14. Saytooneself 自言自語(yǔ)15. Amomentoffear 片刻的恐懼16. Gothrough 穿過(guò)17. Calmdown 冷靜下來(lái)18. Shoutforhelp 喊救命19. Pulloneselfslowlythroughthedark慢慢爬過(guò)黑暗20. Enoughspaceformetomove 足夠的空間更我移動(dòng)21. Trytofindone’swayout 試圖找到出路22. Moveaway 移走23. Brightdaylight 明亮的日光24. mopupthewater 拖干凈水25. losethegame 輸?shù)魶Q賽26. thousandsof 上千的27. crashinto 撞上28. washaway 沖走29. startafire 引火30. fallfromthetree 從樹上掉下來(lái)31. astormwiththunderandlightning 有雷電的風(fēng)暴32. catchfire 著火33. get/behurt 受傷34. breakdown 壞掉35. fallover 摔倒36. assoonaspossible 盡快37. coversthwithsth 用某物蓋住某物38. protectoneselffromdanger 保護(hù)自己免遭危險(xiǎn)39. thebuildingonfire 著火的建筑40. gothroughthefloodwater 從洪水中過(guò)去41. keepsbsafefromdanger 保持某人安全免遭危險(xiǎn)【句型積累】42. Soontherealnoisecame,likebombsundertheground. 很快，像地下的炸彈一樣的聲音傳來(lái)。43. Outside,peoplewererunninginalldirectionswhilepiecesofglassandbrickswerefallingdown. 外面，碎玻璃和碎磚紛紛掉落下來(lái)，人們四處逃散。44. Icouldnotseeanythingatall,andIdidnotknowifanyoneelsewasnearme. 我什么也看不見，也不知道是否有人在我附近。45. Ifeltnervousandmyheartwasbeatingfast. 我感到緊張，我的心跳得很快。46. AmomentoffearwentthroughmymindbutItoldmyselftocalmdownsinceIwasstillalive.我的腦中掠過(guò)一陣恐懼，但我告訴我自己要鎮(zhèn)定下來(lái)，既然我仍然活著。47. Istartedtopullmyselfslowlythroughthedark. 我開始在黑暗中慢慢地向前移動(dòng)身體。48. AsIwastryingtofindmywayout.Isuddenlyheardsomenoiseaboveme. 當(dāng)我嘗試著找到出路，我突然聽到了上面的噪聲。49. Timmywassleeping/asleepwhentheearthquakestarted. 當(dāng)?shù)卣痖_始的時(shí)候蒂姆在睡覺。50. Mydad’scarbrokedownbecauseofthecoldweather. 由于糟糕的天氣我爸爸的汽車出故障了。51. Staylowtotheground. 貼著地面。52. Thesnowkeptfallingaroundus. 雪不停地在我們周圍落下。53. IwasdoingmyhomeworkintheclassroomwhenMr.Wucameinandtoldustogohomeearly. 當(dāng)吳老師進(jìn)來(lái)告訴我們?cè)琰c(diǎn)回家時(shí)，我正在教室里做家庭作業(yè)。54. WelostourumbrellainthewindandInearlyfellover. 我們?cè)陲L(fēng)中丟了雨傘，我差點(diǎn)兒摔倒。55. Suddenly,astrongwindcamefrombehind. 突然，一陣大風(fēng)從后面刮來(lái)【諺語(yǔ)積累】1.Natureiskindofalovingmother,butalsoabutcherincoldblood. 自然不僅是位慈愛的母親，還是個(gè)冷血的屠夫。2.Fishjumpoutofthewaterandraincomes. 魚兒出水跳，風(fēng)雨就來(lái)到。3. Allofthedisaster,butbecauseoflove. 所有的災(zāi)難，不過(guò)是因?yàn)榫鞈?。?zāi)時(shí)狀況【萬(wàn)能寫作模板】災(zāi)時(shí)狀況Anearthquake/Aflood/Asnowstorm/...hit....Iwasdoing...when......becauseoftheheavyrain/snow....Wecouldonlyhear/see.......keptfalling.Suddenly,..防范措施...hadtowalkslowly/pulloneselfthrough....防范措施If...,don’t...災(zāi)后感受...wasreallyterrible.災(zāi)后感受Wewereallsave.2022年6月10日，李華的家鄉(xiāng)四川雅安市蘆山縣發(fā)生了一場(chǎng)地震，地震造成了巨大的損毀，但幸運(yùn)的是，李華一家安然無(wú)恙。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你描述一下地震發(fā)生時(shí)家里人的活動(dòng)情景及感受：1.李華在浴室里洗澡；2.爸爸在電腦旁工作；3.媽媽在廚房里做晚餐；4.爺爺奶奶在客廳看電視。要求：1．結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)通順，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，書寫清晰；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)的人名，學(xué)校名等信息；3．80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

MynameisLiHua.Therewasanearthquakeatabout5:00p.m.onJune1st.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MynameisLiHua.Therewasanearthquakeatabout5:00p.m.onJune1st.Atthattime,allmyfamilywereathome.Iwastakingashowerinthebathroom.Myfatherwasworkingonthecomputer.Mymotherwascookinginthekitchen.MygrandparentswerewatchingTVinthelivingroom.Wewereallscared.

Theearthquakemadeourneighborhoodinamess.Thereweresomefallentrees,brokenwindowsandrubbish.Butluckily,itwasn’ttooheavyanditdidn’tlastfortoolong.Wewereallsafe.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，屬于材料作文寫作；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”和“過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)”；③提示：文章開頭以及要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，按照提示的要點(diǎn)逐點(diǎn)闡述，不要遺漏提示中的“家里人的感受”這一要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接短文開頭，引出話題；第二步，接著按照要點(diǎn)敘述當(dāng)時(shí)家里人各自正在做的事情，以及家人們的感受；第三步，介紹地震給周邊生活環(huán)境帶來(lái)的破壞，抒發(fā)作者的感受并書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①bescared感到害怕②inamess亂七八糟[高分句型]Thereweresomefallentrees,brokenwindowsandrubbish.（and連接三個(gè)并列的名詞，therebe句型，就近原則，過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)）英漢互譯（一）BencouldhearstrongwindsoutsidehishomeinAlabama.Blackcloudsweremakingtheskyverydark.Withnolightoutside,itfeltlikemidnight.（1）ThenewsonTVreportedthataheavyrainstormwasinthearea.Everyoneintheneighborhoodwasbusy.Ben’sdadwasputtingpiecesofwoodoverthewindowswhilehismomwasmakingsuretheflashlightsandradiowereworking.（2）她也放了一些蠟燭和火柴在桌子上.Benwashelpinghismommakedinnerwhentherainbegantobeatheavilyagainstthewindows（3）晚餐后，他們?cè)囍ネ嬗螒?，butitwashardtohavefunwithaseriousstormhappeningoutside.Bencouldnotsleepatfirst.Hefinallyfellasleepwhenthewindwasdyingdownataround3:00a.m.Whenhewokethesumwasrising.Hewentoutsidewithhisfamilyandfoundtheneighborhoodinamess.（4）Fallentrees,brokenwindowsandrubbishwereeverywhere.Theyjoinedtheneighborstohelpcleanuptheneighborhoodtogether.（5）Althoughthestormbrokemanythingsapartitbroughtfamiliesandneighborsclosertogether.將文中劃線部分譯成漢語(yǔ)或者英語(yǔ).1．2．3．4．5．（二）Inmanycountries,therearesomestormsinsummerorautumn.Whenastormcomes,itisoftenwiththunderandlightening(雷電).Soit'susuallydangerousduringastorm._Themostimportantthingyoucandoistogetyourself,yourfamilyandyourhomeprepared._有時(shí),盡管你在室內(nèi),也是不安全的。Thelighteningcangothroughelectricalwires(電線)andoverphonelines._Sometimesitkillspeoplebysettingtheirhouseonfire._Ifyoustayoutside,youwill-alsobeindanger._Whenyoustandinanopenplaceorunderabigtree,thelighteningmayhityou.Whenyouseeastormcoming,goindoors.Don'tstayoutside._在室內(nèi),最好不要用手機(jī)或電腦。Keepawayfromoutsidedoorsandwindowsanddonotlieon.thefloor.Inordertoprotectourselves,it'snecessaryforustoknowthedosanddon'tinastorm.6．7．8．9．10．（三）

WhenSamwasan11-year-oldboy,arainstormhithishometownonadarknight.71.Whenthestormcame,hewasdoinghishomework.

Hissisterwasasleepandhismotherwasbusycookinginthekitchen.72.他爸爸正在看電視.Suddenly,allthelightswentoff.73.Thentherainbeatagainstthedoorsandwindowsheavily.Thewindblewstrongly,sohissisterwokeup.Shewasscaredandstartedtocry.74.這家人什么也做不了。Sam’sfathertookouttheflashlight,butthebatteries（電池）weredead.75.Sohismotherfoundsomecandlesandaboxofmatches.Thenextmorning,aftertheylistenedtothenewsontheradio,theyrealizedthataheavyrainstormhadhappened.11．12．13．14．15．【參考答案】（一）【答案】1．電視新聞報(bào)道該地區(qū)有一場(chǎng)大暴風(fēng)雨。2．Shealsoputsomecandlesandmatchesonthetable.3．Afterdinnertheytriedtoplaygames.4．到處都有倒下的樹壞了的窗戶和垃圾。5．盡管暴風(fēng)雨破壞了很多的東西但是它使家人和鄰居們更相近了?！痉治觥课恼轮v述了Ben住的社區(qū)經(jīng)歷了一場(chǎng)嚴(yán)重的暴風(fēng)雨，雖然暴風(fēng)雨過(guò)后一片混亂，但它使得鄰居們走得更近了。1．ThenewsonTV“電視新聞”；report“報(bào)道”；that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句，無(wú)實(shí)際意義；aheavyrainstorm“一場(chǎng)大暴風(fēng)雨”；inthearea“在這個(gè)地區(qū)”，故填：電視新聞報(bào)道該地區(qū)有一場(chǎng)大暴風(fēng)雨。2．she“她”，人稱代詞主格作主語(yǔ)；also“也”，位于實(shí)義動(dòng)詞前；put…on“把……放在……上”；somecandles“一些蠟燭”；matches“火柴”，故填Shealsoputsomecandlesandmatchesonthetable.3．a(chǎn)fterdinner“晚飯后”；they“他們”，人稱代詞主格作主語(yǔ)；trytodosth“試著做某事”；playgames“玩游戲”，故填A(yù)fterdinner,theytriedtoplaygames.4．Fallen“倒下的”，過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)；trees“樹”；broken“破壞的”；windows“窗戶”；and“和”；rubbish“垃圾”；everywhere“到處”，故填：到處都有倒下的樹壞了的窗戶和垃圾．5．Although“盡管”；the