高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)童年好奇入林記，迷途方知母言重1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Undoubtedly,MotherNatureisalwaysattractivetokids.Inourchildhood,howoftendidweturnadeafeartoourparents’advice?Veryoften!Thus,welandedourselvesinasituationwherewegreatlyregrettedouractofnothavinglistenedtotheadviceofthewise.SuchanunforgettableexperienceIhadattheageof7gavemeaninvaluablelesson,afterwhichIdeeplyunderstoodwhymygentlemotherwasrepeatingtheboringsuggestionsandIwouldtrytotakehersuggestionsseriously.4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Inmychildhood,Iwassocrazyaboutnaturethatevenplayingamongthecolorfulflowersinourgardencouldmakemyday.Ourhousewasnexttothewoodswhichhadalwaysstirredup(激起)greatcuriosityinmeinwantingtofindoutwhatwaswithin.EverytimeIsawfascinatingbutterfliesdancingfromthewoods,mycuriositygrew.Butmymotherdidn’tlikemewanderingoffonmyownandalwaysensuredthatIwaswithinhersight.Evenifsheallowedmetoexplorethesurroundingareaonmyown,itwasonlytobesomewherenearthehouse.Beingascuriousasthecat,Ialwaysdesiredtoexplorethewoods.Itseemedasifmymotherhadunderstoodmydesire,soshehadwarmedmeonlotsofoccasionsnevertoenterthewoodsalone.5續(xù)寫(xiě)原文“Mom,canIgooutandplayinthegarden?”Iasked.“Sure,”shewouldreplyeachtime.“Kate,youcanplayinthegardenbutyoumustpromisemeonething—onlywhenI’mwithyoucanyougointothewoods.Therearenocasesofanimalattacksonhumans,butit’sstilldangerousforalittlekidlikeyou.It’stooeasytogetlostinthewoods.”“Sure,you’vesaidthatmanytimes!”Iansweredwithoutpatienceatherrepeatedreminders.6段首句Paragraph1：However,curiositygotthebetterofmeonemorning.Paragraph2：“Kate?”Behindthetreescoveredbytheraysofthesettingsuncamemymother’svoice.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析9大自然對(duì)孩子總是充滿吸引力，7歲的“我”便是如此?！拔摇奔遗彉?shù)林，“我”對(duì)樹(shù)林滿懷好奇，渴望探索其中。母親雖允許“我”在花園玩耍，但反復(fù)叮囑不能獨(dú)自進(jìn)入樹(shù)林，擔(dān)心有危險(xiǎn)。“我”卻對(duì)母親的多次提醒感到不耐煩，最終在好奇心的驅(qū)使下，還是做出了冒險(xiǎn)的決定。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para1:

However,curiositygotthebetterofmeonemorning.然而，一天早上，好奇心戰(zhàn)勝了我。我在花園玩耍時(shí)，一只色彩斑斕的蝴蝶翩翩從樹(shù)林中飛出，停在一朵花上。我目不轉(zhuǎn)睛地盯著它，腦海里不斷回響著母親的告誡，但那神秘的樹(shù)林實(shí)在太有吸引力了。終于，我忍不住跨過(guò)花園圍欄，躡手躡腳地走進(jìn)樹(shù)林。初入樹(shù)林，清新的草木香氣撲面而來(lái)，我看到了許多從未見(jiàn)過(guò)的野花和形狀奇特的石頭。我興奮地追逐著蝴蝶，越走越深?？蓾u漸地，周圍的景色變得陌生起來(lái)，陽(yáng)光透過(guò)茂密的枝葉灑下，形成一片片光斑，我開(kāi)始感到害怕，意識(shí)到自己可能迷路了。11續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para2：“Kate?”Behindthetreescoveredbytheraysofthesettingsuncamemymother’svoice.“凱特？”在被夕陽(yáng)余暉籠罩的樹(shù)林深處，傳來(lái)母親的聲音。我又驚又喜，大聲回應(yīng)：“媽媽，我在這兒！”聲音帶著哭腔。我朝著聲音的方向拼命跑去，樹(shù)枝劃破了我的衣服，腳下的落葉讓我差點(diǎn)摔倒。終于，我看到了母親焦急的身影。母親緊緊抱住我，眼中含著淚，說(shuō)：“寶貝，你嚇?biāo)缷寢屃??！蔽依⒕蔚氐拖骂^，向母親道歉。這次經(jīng)歷讓我深刻明白，母親的叮囑都是為了我的安全。從那以后，我再也不敢輕易違背母親的話，每當(dāng)面對(duì)誘惑時(shí)，都會(huì)想起這次在樹(shù)林里的可怕經(jīng)歷。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)However,curiositygotthebetterofmeonemorning.Whileplayinginthegarden,Isawabrightly-coloredbutterflyflutteringoutofthewoodsandalightingonaflower.Istaredatitintently,mymother'swarningsechoinginmymind.Buttheallureofthemysteriouswoodswasjusttoostrong.Eventually,Icouldn'tresistandsteppedoverthegardenfence,creepingintothewoods.AssoonasIentered,thefreshscentofplantsandearthhitme.IsawmanywildflowersIhadneverseenbeforeandoddly-shapedrocks.Excitedly,Ichasedafterthebutterfly,goingdeeperanddeeper.Gradually,thesurroundingsbecameunfamiliar.Thesunlightfilteredthroughthethickfoliage,creatingpatchesoflight.IbegantofeelscaredandrealizedthatImightbelost.14范文呈現(xiàn)“Kate?”Behindthetreescoveredbytheraysofthesettingsuncamemymother’svoice.Iwasbothsurprisedanddelighted,shouting,“Mom,I’mhere!”withacryingtone.IrantowardsthevoiceasfastasIcould.Branchesscratchedmyclothes,andthefallenleavesunderfootalmostmademefall.Finally,Isawmymother'sanxiousfigure.Shehuggedmetightly,hereyesfilledwithtears.“Honey,youscaredmetodeath,”shesaid.Ihungmyheadinshameandapologizedtoher.Thisexperiencemademedeeplyunderstandthatmymother'swarningswereallformysafety.Fromthenon,Ineverdaredtodisobeymymothereasily.WheneverIfacedtemptations,Iwouldthinkofthisterrifyingexperienceinthewoods.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)However,curiosityovercamemeonefatefulmorning.AsIwasengrossedinplayinginthegarden,aresplendently-coloredbutterflyflutteredoutfromthewoods,gracefullylandingonaflower.Mesmerized,Ifixedmygazeuponit,mymother'srepeatedwarningsreverberatinginmymind.Nevertheless,theallureoftheenigmaticwoodsprovedirresistible.Withoutfurtherhesitation,Isteppedoverthegardenfenceandstealthilymademywayintothewoods.ThemomentIentered,afresh,earthyaromaofplantsassailedmynostrils.Ibeheldnumerouswildflowershithertounseenbymeandpeculiarly-shapedrocks.Inastateofexhilaration,Igavechasetothebutterfly,venturingdeeperanddeeperintothewoods.Beforelong,thesurroundingsbecameunrecognizable.Sunlight,filteringthroughthedensefoliage,createdadappledpatternoflightandshadow.Asenseoffearcreptoverme,andIsuddenlyrealizedthatIhadlostmyway.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)“Kate?”Camemymother'svoice,faintlyechoingfrombehindthetreesbathedinthewarmglowofthesettingsun.Asurgeofsurpriseandjoycoursedthroughme,andIcriedout,“Mom,I’mhere!”myvoicetingedwithsobs.Isprintedtowardsthesourceofthevoice,heedlessofthebranchesthatscratchedmyclothesandtheslipperyfallenleavesthatthreatenedtotripmeup.Finally,Icaughtsi