高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習暫別手機三十天：重拾生活本真1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文MyiPhonewasmissing.Oneday,itwasgluedtomypalm,andthenext…poof!Itwasgone.Itookallthenecessarystepstofindmyphone.Icheckedjacketpockets,searchedourapartment,andIstoppedbackintoWholeFoodsandgym.Desperately,Icalledandtextedthephone,andIdownloadedaphone-finderapp.Badluck.Itwasgone.Iwasreflectingonwhatitwouldmeannottohaveasmartphone—maybenotforever,butpossiblyforlongerthanacoupleofdays.AsIheardmyhusbandabouttobindmeintoanothertwo-yearcontract,Ifoundmyselfscreaming,“No!”Idecidedtoconductasocialexperiment.Iwouldnotuseasmartphoneforthirtydays.IknewthatonceIhadareplacementinhand,itwouldnotbesoeasytogetridofthescreen.4續(xù)寫原文Earlyon,Ireachedforaphantom(虛幻的)phonemoretimesthanIcancount.Finally,tohavesomethingformyhandstodo,Iboughtabookthathadbeenrecommendedbymorethanonefriend.Iwasn’tabletotakephotos.Thiswasalossforme.MyInstagramwastypicallyupdatedeveryweekorso,andIusedthecamerafeaturetorecordplacesIwantedtorevisit,itemsformyshoppinglist,andthebehaviorsofmyfourchildren.AsanenthusiasticuseroftheiPhonenotepadfeature,Iendedupbuyingaphysicalnotebook,whichledtomoremeaningfulnotetaking.5續(xù)寫原文Ihadmoretimetotrulylisten.Ihadbeenprogrammedtoignoreeverythingexceptwhatwasdirectlyinfrontofmeonthefascinatingscreen.Withoutthedistraction,Iwasmorepresent.Moresleep,lessactivity…thethirty-daybreakwasacompleteresetonthebasics.ItalsoleftmewithaheightenedawarenessofhowcarelesslyIhadbeenmanagingadultlife.Gettingawayfromthephone,Iopeneduptoanewwayofbeing.Finally,Imanagedtostoptheconstantrushofdoingthings.6段首句Paragraph1：IbegantoreturntothelifethatIhadabandonedyearsago.Paragraph2：Soonaftertheexperiment,anewiPhonearrived.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9作者的iPhone丟失后，多方尋找無果。因不想與丈夫簽訂新的兩年合約，決定開展為期30天不用智能手機的社會實驗。實驗初期，她常下意識找手機，后通過看書、買筆記本替代手機功能。沒有手機干擾，她能更專注地傾聽、享受生活，意識到之前被手機分散了太多精力。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：IbegantoreturntothelifethatIhadabandonedyearsago.我開始重新回歸到多年前曾拋棄的生活。曾經(jīng)，閱讀紙質(zhì)書是我最大的愛好，可智能手機的出現(xiàn)讓我漸漸遺忘了那種沉浸在文字海洋中的快樂。如今，我又重新捧起一本本經(jīng)典著作，在午后的陽光下，慢慢翻動書頁，感受作者筆下細膩的情感與深刻的思想。我還恢復了晨跑的習慣，沿著河邊的小路奔跑，呼吸著清新的空氣，欣賞著沿途的風景，看著朝陽一點點升起，心中充滿了對生活的熱愛。與家人相處的時光也變得更加珍貴，晚上我們會一起玩桌游，歡聲笑語回蕩在房間里，增進了彼此之間的感情。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Soonaftertheexperiment,anewiPhonearrived.在實驗結(jié)束后不久，一部新的iPhone送到了我手中。當我拆開包裝，看到那熟悉的屏幕時，心中既興奮又有些擔憂。興奮的是它能再次為我?guī)肀憬莸纳詈拓S富的信息，擔憂的是我會再次陷入對手機過度依賴的怪圈。于是，我給自己制定了嚴格的使用規(guī)則。我卸載了一些容易讓人沉迷的娛樂軟件，只保留了必要的社交和工作應(yīng)用。我規(guī)定自己每天使用手機的時間不超過兩小時，并且在和家人相處、閱讀、運動的時候，將手機調(diào)至靜音狀態(tài)。通過這些措施，我希望能更好地掌控手機，而不是被它掌控我的生活。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)IbegantoreturntothelifethatIhadabandonedyearsago.Readingphysicalbooksusedtobeoneofmygreatestpleasures,buttheadventofsmartphonesmademegraduallyforgetthejoyofbeingimmersedintheoceanofwords.Now,Ipickedupclassicworksagain.Intheafternoonsun,Islowlyturnedthepages,feelingthedelicateemotionsandprofoundthoughtsdescribedbytheauthors.Ialsoresumedmymorningrunningroutine.Runningalongtheriversidepath,Ibreathedinthefreshairandadmiredthesceneryalongtheway.Watchingthesunrisebitbybit,myheartwasfilledwithloveforlife.Thetimespentwithmyfamilybecamemoreprecious.Intheevenings,weplayedboardgamestogether.Thelaughterechoedintheroom,strengtheningourbond.14范文呈現(xiàn)Soonaftertheexperiment,anewiPhonearrived.WhenIunpackeditandsawthefamiliarscreen,Ifeltbothexcitedandabitworried.Iwasexcitedbecauseitcouldbringmeconvenienceandaccesstoabundantinformationagain.However,IwasworriedthatIwouldfallbackintothetrapofover-relyingonthephone.Therefore,Isetstrictrulesformyself.Iuninstalledsomeentertainmentappsthatwereeasytogetaddictedtoandonlykeptessentialsocialandworkapplications.Ilimitedmydailyphone-usingtimetonomorethantwohours.Also,whenIwaswithmyfamily,reading,orexercising,Iwouldturnmyphonetosilentmode.Throughthesemeasures,Ihopedtobettercontrolmyphoneuseinsteadofbeingcontrolledbyit.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)IembarkedonajourneybacktothelifeIhadforsakenyearsago.Once,delvingintophysicalbookswasoneofmymostcherishedpastimes,yettheemergenceofsmartphonesgraduallyluredmeawayfromtheenchantmentoflosingmyselfinaseaofwords.Now,Ionceagaincradledclassicvolumesinmyhands.Bathedinthewarmglowofafternoonsunlight,Ileisurelyturnedeachpage,savoringeveryemotionandprofoundinsightpennedbytheauthors.Additionally,Ireinstatedmymorningjoggingroutine.AsItrottedalongtheriversidetrail,thecrisp,freshairfilledmylungs,andthecaptivatingsceneryunfoldedbeforemyeyes.Witnessingthesun'sgradualascent,myheartswelledwithanoverwhelmingsenseofloveforlife.Moreover,thetimespentinthecompanyofmyfamilytookonanewfoundsignificance.Intheevenings,weengagedinboard-gamesessions,ourlaughterreverberatingthroughouttheroom,forginganevenstrongerfamilybond.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Shortlyaftertheexperiment'sconclusion,anewiPhonefounditswayintomyhands.Uponunwrappingitandlayingeyesonthefamiliarscreen,acomplexmixofexcitementandtrepidationcoursedthroughme.Theexcitementstemmedfromtheanticipationoftheconvenienceandvastreservoirofinformationitpromised,whilethetrepidationarosefromthefearofslippingbackintothequagmireofexcessivephonedependence.Thus,Ii