高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)神奇的臭鼬：媽媽的善舉換來的特別重逢1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文WheneverIspreadmarmalade(橘子醬),Iamremindedofmymother,afive-foot-tallangelwhoevenbefriendedaskunk(臭鼬).Oneday,whileshewasbusypickingbeansinthebackyard,shecameacrossaskunknomorethanameteraway.Theskunk’sembarrassmentwasevidentashehadundoubtedlybeenrummaging(亂翻)throughthegarbage.Hestillhadamarmaladejarstuckonhisnose.Momtookpityonhim.Insteadofworryingthecreaturewouldspraysomethingsmellyalloverherandthebeans,shesmiledcompassionatelyatthelittlethingandextendedahelpinghand.Kneelingontheground,sheinchedacrossthegrass,reachedout,andtwistedthejar—verycarefully.4續(xù)寫原文Thejarslippedoff.Theskunknoddedathank-youbeforeslippingawayintothewoodsatthebackofthegarden.Obviously,therewasnosprayingincident,thankstomyremarkablemother.Sherepeatedthistalenumeroustimes,alwayscallingtheskunkMarmalade.However,thatwasnottheendofthestory.Threesummerslater,whenIwasabouttwelve,anotherencounteroccurred.Itwasarainymorning,andbothmymotherandfatherhadgonetowork.MyfriendRobcameovertoplay,andwedecidedtoruntheelectrictraininmyroom.Suddenly,ascratchingsoundemergedfromtheattic(閣樓).Robassumedthatitmightbesomekindofanimal.Curiositygotthebetterofus,andweventuredtowardsthesourceofthesound.5續(xù)寫原文Icautiouslyopenedtheatticdoorinthehall.Thenoiseceasedabruptly.Iclimbedupthestairs,Robfollowingmylead.Therebehindthetoyboxnearthechimneystoodtheanimal—blackwithadistinctwhitestripedownhisback.Washescaredandtrembling?Ibelieveso,atleastthat’swhatIremember.Instinctively,Iretreated,fearingthepotentialsprayorbitesfromthecreature.“Hey,Rob,”Iwhisperedurgently,“It’saskunk.Let’sgotothekitchenandfigureoutawaytogethimoutofhere.”6段首句Paragraph1:Inthecupboard,severalpapercupsandajarofmarmaladecaughtoursight.Paragraph2:RobandIfollowedtheskunkasheatehiswaydownthestairs.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9“我”每次涂抹橘子醬，就會想起媽媽。媽媽身材嬌小卻十分善良，她曾與一只臭鼬結(jié)下奇妙緣分。一天，媽媽在后院摘豆子時，發(fā)現(xiàn)一只鼻子上套著橘子醬罐子的臭鼬，它當(dāng)時正在翻找垃圾，顯得十分窘迫。媽媽沒有因害怕臭鼬噴臭氣而驅(qū)趕它，反而心生憐憫，小心翼翼地幫它取下了罐子。臭鼬離開前還點頭致謝，媽媽之后常提起這個故事，還把這只臭鼬叫做“橘子醬”。三年后的一個夏天，在一個下雨天，“我”和朋友羅布在家玩電動火車，突然聽到閣樓傳來抓撓聲。出于好奇，我們前往查看，發(fā)現(xiàn)一只背上有白色條紋的臭鼬躲在煙囪附近的玩具箱后面?！拔摇睋?dān)心它會攻擊我們，便拉著羅布退回到廚房，想著如何把它弄出去。這時，櫥柜里的幾個紙杯和一罐橘子醬映入我們眼簾。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:Inthecupboard,severalpapercupsandajarofmarmaladecaughtoursight.在櫥柜里，幾個紙杯和一罐橘子醬映入我們的眼簾。我腦海中瞬間閃過媽媽和那只臭鼬的故事，一個念頭油然而生：或許這只臭鼬就是媽媽曾經(jīng)幫助過的那只“橘子醬”，而且橘子醬說不定能成為我們引導(dǎo)它離開的關(guān)鍵。我興奮地把這個想法告訴了羅布，他也覺得這是個不錯的主意。我們迅速打開橘子醬罐子，濃郁的果香彌漫在空氣中。我們用勺子舀了一些橘子醬放進紙杯中，將紙杯擺成一條從閣樓樓梯口一直延伸到屋外的路線。每放一個紙杯，我們都輕聲呼喚著，希望能吸引臭鼬的注意。做完這些后，我們躲在樓梯轉(zhuǎn)角處，緊張地等待著。不一會兒，閣樓里又傳來了輕微的動靜，我們知道臭鼬開始行動了。只見它小心翼翼地探出腦袋，鼻子不停地嗅著空氣中的橘子醬香味。它順著香味慢慢地走下樓梯，每走一步都顯得十分謹(jǐn)慎。當(dāng)它走到第一個紙杯前時，它停了下來，低頭嗅了嗅，然后開始津津有味地吃起橘子醬來。11續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:RobandIfollowedtheskunkasheatehiswaydownthestairs.羅布和我跟在臭鼬后面，看著它順著紙杯的路線一路吃下去。它吃得很專注，完全沒有注意到我們的存在。我們既緊張又興奮，緊張的是擔(dān)心它突然受到驚嚇而噴出臭氣或者攻擊我們，興奮的是我們的計劃似乎正在順利進行。隨著臭鼬不斷地吃著橘子醬，它離屋外越來越近。當(dāng)它走到最后一個紙杯前時，它已經(jīng)來到了門口。這時，它似乎意識到了自己已經(jīng)走到了屋外，抬起頭四處張望了一下。然后，它轉(zhuǎn)過身，看了我們一眼，像是在向我們表示感謝。接著，它邁著輕快的步伐，走進了院子里的草叢中，漸漸消失在我們的視線里?？粗赭踩x開，我和羅布長舒了一口氣。我們知道，這次多虧了媽媽和那只臭鼬的故事，還有這罐橘子醬，才讓我們順利地解決了這個難題。等爸爸媽媽回來后，我們迫不及待地把這件事告訴了他們，媽媽聽后，臉上露出了欣慰的笑容，她感慨地說：“善良總會有回報的，這只臭鼬一定是記得我們的好。”12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Inthecupboard,severalpapercupsandajarofmarmaladecaughtoursight.Suddenly,thestoryofmymotherandthatskunkflashedthroughmymind.Anideaoccurredtome:maybethisskunkwasthe"Marmalade"thatmymotherhadhelpedbefore,andthemarmalademightbethekeytoguidingitout.IexcitedlytoldRobthisidea,andhealsothoughtitwasagoodone.Wequicklyopenedthejarofmarmalade,andtherichfruityaromafilledtheair.Wescoopedsomemarmaladeintothepapercupswithaspoonandarrangedthecupsinalinefromtheatticstairsallthewaytotheoutsideofthehouse.Everytimeweplacedacup,wecalledoutsoftly,hopingtoattracttheskunk'sattention.Afterwefinished,wehidaroundthecornerofthestairs,waitingnervously.Soon,therewasaslightmovementintheatticagain.Weknewtheskunkwasonthemove.Itcautiouslystuckitsheadout,itsnosesniffingthesmellofmarmaladeintheair.Itwalkeddownthestairsslowlyalongthesmell,andeverystepittookwasverycautious.Whenitreachedthefirstpapercup,itstopped,sniffedit,andthenbegantoeatthemarmaladewithrelish.14范文呈現(xiàn)RobandIfollowedtheskunkasheatehiswaydownthestairs.Itwassofocusedoneatingthatitdidn'tnoticeourpresenceatall.Wewerebothnervousandexcited.Wewerenervousbecausewewereafraidthatitmightsuddenlygetscaredandsprayorattackus,andwewereexcitedbecauseourplanseemedtobegoingsmoothly.Astheskunkkepteatingthemarmalade,itgotcloserandclosertotheoutside.Whenitreachedthelastpapercup,itwasalreadyatthedoor.Atthistime,itseemedtorealizethatithadcomeoutside.Itraiseditsheadandlookedaround.Then,itturnedaroundandlookedatus,asifthankingus.Afterthat,itwalkedbrisklyintothegrassintheyardandgraduallydisappearedfromoursight.Seeingtheskunkleavesafely,RobandIbreathedasighofrelief.Weknewthatthistime,thankstothestoryofmymotherandtheskunk,andthisjarofmarmalade,wehadsuccessfullysolvedtheproblem.Whenmyparentscameback,wecouldn'twaittotellthemaboutit.Mymotherlistenedandagratifiedsmileappearedonherface.Shesaidwithemotion,"Kindnessalwayspaysoff.Thisskunkmustrememberourkindness."15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Inthecupboard,severalpapercupsandajarofmarmaladecaughtoursight.Allofasudden,thestoryofmymother'sencounterwiththatskunkflashedvividlythroughmymind.Anideastruckmelikeaboltoflightning:perhapsthisskunkwasnoneotherthanthe"Marmalade"mymotherhadoncehelped,andthemarmaladecouldverywellserveasthekeytocoaxingitout.IexcitedlysharedthisthoughtwithRob,andhe,too,deemeditabrilliantplan.Swiftly,wepriedopenthejarofmarmalade,andinaninstant,therich,fruityfragrancepermeatedtheair.Usingaspoon,wecarefullyscoopedsomemarmaladeintothepapercupsandthenarrangedtheminatrailthatledfromtheatticstairsallthewaytotheoutdoors.Witheachcupweplaced,wecalledoutinhushedtones,hopingtodrawtheskunk'sattention.Onceweweredone,weconcealedourselvesaroundthecornerofthestairs,ourheartspoundingwithnervousanticipation.Beforelong,afaintrustlingsoundemergedfromtheattic.Weknewtheskunkwasonthemove.Ittentativelypokeditsheadout,itsnosetwitchingasitsniffedthealluringscentofthemarmalade.Itthendescendedthestairsslowly,followingthearoma,eachsteptakenwithutmostcaution.Whenitreachedthefirstpapercup,itpaused,gaveitagoodsniff,andthenbegandevouringthemarmaladewithgusto.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)RobandItrailedbehindtheskunkasitmadeitswaydownthestairs,gobblingupthemarmaladealongtheway.Soengrossedwasitinitsfeastthatitremainedcompletelyoblivioustoourpresence.Wewereabundleofnerves,yetalsofilledwithexcitement.Wewereonedge,fearingthatatanymomentitmightgetspookedandsprayitspungentodororevenlaunchanattack.However,wewerealsothrilledasourplanseemedtobeunfoldingflawlessly.Astheskunkcontinuedtomunchonthemarmalade,itsteadilydrewnearertotheoutside.Whenitfinallyreachedthelastpapercup,ithadalreadyarrivedatthedoor.Atthat