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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。GrandmagotGrandpaoutofbedandhelpedhimtothekitchenforbreakfast.Afterhismeal,sheledhimtohisarmchairinthelivingroomwherehewouldrestwhileshecleanedthedishes.Everysooften,shewouldchecktoseeifheneededanything.ThiswastheirdailyroutineafterGrandpa’slateststroke(中風(fēng)).Althoughonceaveryactive,strongandhealthyman,hisbadlydamagedleftarm,difficultwalkingandslurred(含混不清)speechnowkepthimhousebound.Fornearlyayearhehadn’tevenbeentochurchortovisitfamily.Grandpafilledhishourswithtelevision.HewatchedthenewsandgameshowswhileGrandmawentaboutherday.Theymadeanagreement—hewasnottoleavehischairorhisbedwithoutherassistance.Grandmawasfriendly,outgoingandunselfish;Grandpawasreservedanddevotedtohisfamily.Buthedidn’tlikegivinggifts.Heheldthebeliefthatifyoutreatedyourwifewellthroughouttheyear,presentsweren’tnecessary;soherarelyboughtgiftsforher.ItwasValentine’sDay,atypicalcoldwintermorninginNewYork.Asalways,GrandmawalkedGrandpatohischair.“I’mgoingtotakeashowernow.”Shehandedhimthetelevisionremote.“Ifyouneedanything,I’llbebackinalittlewhile.”注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答.Afterhershower,sheglancedtowardsthebackofGrandpa’schairbutnoticedthathiswalkingstickwasnotinitsusualplace.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Asshestoodaloneonthestreetdesperately,Grandpawalkedaroundthecorner.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意爺爺中風(fēng)后,日常生活需要奶奶照顧,行動(dòng)不便,幾乎一年未出門。爺爺性格內(nèi)斂,不常送奶奶禮物,他覺得平時(shí)對(duì)妻子好就行。情人節(jié)這天,奶奶像往常一樣安排好爺爺后去洗澡,洗澡后發(fā)現(xiàn)爺爺?shù)墓照炔辉谠?。故事山分析目?biāo):爺爺?shù)哪繕?biāo)可能是在情人節(jié)給奶奶一個(gè)驚喜,奶奶的目標(biāo)則是找到不見的爺爺。阻礙:爺爺行動(dòng)不便,獨(dú)自出門可能面臨危險(xiǎn);奶奶不知道爺爺去了哪里,在尋找爺爺時(shí)充滿擔(dān)憂。努力:爺爺可能克服身體困難,艱難地出門準(zhǔn)備禮物;奶奶會(huì)焦急地四處尋找爺爺。結(jié)果:爺爺成功買到禮物,奶奶找到爺爺,兩人收獲意外的溫暖和感動(dòng)。意外:爺爺打破常規(guī),在身體不便的情況下獨(dú)自出門準(zhǔn)備情人節(jié)禮物,這讓奶奶十分意外。轉(zhuǎn)折:從奶奶日常照顧爺爺?shù)钠降?,到爺爺在情人?jié)獨(dú)自出門帶來的意外與緊張,再到最終的溫暖結(jié)局,情節(jié)發(fā)生轉(zhuǎn)折。結(jié)局:爺爺和奶奶度過一個(gè)特別的情人節(jié),感情更加深厚,也讓彼此對(duì)這份陪伴有了新的感悟。伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)伏筆:爺爺中風(fēng)后行動(dòng)不便,很少出門?;貞?yīng):在續(xù)寫中體現(xiàn)爺爺為了給奶奶準(zhǔn)備禮物,克服行動(dòng)不便的困難出門,突出他的決心。伏筆:爺爺不喜歡送禮物,認(rèn)為日常對(duì)妻子好就行?;貞?yīng):爺爺在情人節(jié)打破常規(guī)出門準(zhǔn)備禮物,形成強(qiáng)烈反差,展現(xiàn)他對(duì)奶奶的愛。伏筆:奶奶日常細(xì)心照顧爺爺,兩人有約定爺爺不能獨(dú)自離開?;貞?yīng):奶奶發(fā)現(xiàn)爺爺不見后,因擔(dān)心爺爺?shù)陌踩辜睂ふ?,體現(xiàn)她對(duì)爺爺?shù)年P(guān)心。伏筆:奶奶去洗澡讓爺爺獨(dú)自在客廳。回應(yīng):爺爺趁這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)偷偷出門,推動(dòng)故事發(fā)展。伏筆:故事發(fā)生在情人節(jié)?;貞?yīng):為爺爺準(zhǔn)備情人節(jié)禮物的情節(jié)做鋪墊,使故事更具節(jié)日氛圍和浪漫色彩。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)(兩段)第一段:詳細(xì)描述奶奶發(fā)現(xiàn)爺爺拐杖不見后的反應(yīng),如焦急、擔(dān)憂,四處尋找爺爺,內(nèi)心猜測(cè)爺爺?shù)娜ハ?,可能打電話詢問家人朋友,也可能出門在附近尋找。第二段:著重描寫爺爺出現(xiàn)時(shí)的情景,他手里拿著給奶奶的禮物,解釋自己出門的原因,兩人的對(duì)話和情感交流,如奶奶的感動(dòng)、爺爺?shù)男邼?,最后在溫馨的氛圍中度過情人節(jié)。情感線起初,奶奶日常照顧爺爺,生活平淡。發(fā)現(xiàn)爺爺拐杖不見時(shí),奶奶焦急萬分,內(nèi)心充滿擔(dān)憂,害怕爺爺出意外。在尋找過程中,這種不安愈發(fā)強(qiáng)烈。當(dāng)爺爺出現(xiàn)并拿出禮物時(shí),奶奶先是驚訝,隨后被深深感動(dòng),心中滿是溫暖。爺爺雖然羞澀,但也因給奶奶帶來驚喜而感到滿足。從平淡到緊張,再到溫馨感動(dòng),情感在這個(gè)情人節(jié)發(fā)生了巨大的變化。故事線爺爺中風(fēng)后行動(dòng)不便,需要奶奶照顧,日常生活有固定安排。爺爺不喜歡送禮物,兩人有約定爺爺不能獨(dú)自離開。情人節(jié)這天,奶奶去洗澡,爺爺獨(dú)自在客廳。奶奶洗澡后發(fā)現(xiàn)爺爺拐杖不見,四處尋找。爺爺克服困難出門,為奶奶準(zhǔn)備情人節(jié)禮物。爺爺拿著禮物出現(xiàn),與奶奶溫馨交流,共度情人節(jié)。主旨升華句ThisValentine'sDayexperiencetaughtthemthatloveisnotjustaboutdailycarebutalsoaboutunexpectedsurprises,whichcanaddnewcolorstotheirlong-lastingrelationship.這個(gè)情人節(jié)的經(jīng)歷讓他們明白,愛不僅在于日常的照顧,還在于意想不到的驚喜,這些驚喜能為他們長(zhǎng)久的關(guān)系增添新的色彩。Throughthisevent,theyrealizedthateveninthefaceofdifficulties,asimpleactoflove,likeGrandpa'sefforttobuyagift,canbringwarmthandjoythatenrichestheirlives.通過這次事件,他們意識(shí)到即使面對(duì)困難,一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的愛的舉動(dòng),比如爺爺努力去買禮物,也能帶來溫暖和快樂,豐富他們的生活。Thisstoryservesasareminderthatlovecanovercomeallobstacles,andasmallgestureonaspecialdaycanstrengthenthebondbetweentwopeople,justasGrandpa'sgiftdidfortheirrelationship.這個(gè)故事提醒我們,愛可以克服一切障礙,在特殊日子里的一個(gè)小舉動(dòng)可以加強(qiáng)兩個(gè)人之間的聯(lián)系,就像爺爺?shù)亩Y物對(duì)他們的關(guān)系所起的作用一樣。Inthemidstoftheirordinarylife,thisunexpectedValentine'sDayadventureshowedthattrueloveisfullofsurprisesandthatit'snevertoolatetoexpressdeep-seatedfeelings,nomatterhowlongacouplehasbeentogether.在他們平淡的生活中,這次意外的情人節(jié)冒險(xiǎn)表明,真愛充滿驚喜,無論夫妻在一起多久,表達(dá)內(nèi)心深處的感情永遠(yuǎn)都不晚。TheirValentine'sDaystoryprovesthatloveisacombinationofdailycompanionshipandoccasionalsurprises,anditistheseelementsthatmaketheirrelationshipstrongandenduring.他們的情人節(jié)故事證明,愛是日常陪伴和偶爾驚喜的結(jié)合,正是這些元素使他們的關(guān)系牢固而持久。寫作示范一Afterhershower,sheglancedtowardsthebackofGrandpa’schairbutnoticedthathiswalkingstickwasnotinitsusualplace.Panicsurgedthroughher.Shequicklyscannedthelivingroom,thenrushedtothebedroomandotherrooms,callingoutGrandpa'sname,buttherewasnoresponse.Thoughtsofallthepossibledangershemightfaceinhisconditionfilledhermind.Sheimmediatelycalledtheirchildren,buttheyhadn'theardfromGrandpaeither.Withouthesitation,sheputonhercoatandshoesandrushedoutofthehouse,searchingtheneighborhoodanxiously.Asshestoodaloneonthestreetdesperately,Grandpawalkedaroundthecorner.Inhisrighthand,heheldasmallbouquetofflowers,hisfaceabitredfromthecoldandtheeffortofwalking.“HappyValentine'sDay,dear,”hesaid,hisvoicestillabitslurredbutfilledwithlove.Grandmawasstunnedforamoment,thentearswelledupinhereyes.Shewalkedtowardshimquickly,takinghishandandtheflowers.“Youshouldn'thavegoneoutalone,butthisisthemostpreciousgiftI'veeverreceived.”Theywalkedbackhometogether,thewarmthoflovefillingtheirheartsonthiscoldwinterday.寫作示范二Afterhershower,sheglancedtowardsthebackofGrandpa’schairbutnoticedthathiswalkingstickwasnotinitsusualplace.Herheartskippedabeat.Shecheckedeverycornerofthehouseagainandagain,butGrandpawasnowheretobefound.Feargrippedherassheimaginedtheworst-casescenarios.Shedecidedtocheckoutside.Thecoldwindhitherfaceasshesteppedout,butshedidn'tcare.SheaskedtheneighborsiftheyhadseenGrandpa,buttheyallshooktheirheads.Asshestoodaloneonthestreetdesperately,Grandpawalkedaroundthecorner.Hewasholdingaboxofchocolates.Hisstepswereunsteady,buthiseyeswerefullofdetermination.WhenhesawGrandma,asmilespreadacrosshisface.“Iwantedtosurpriseyou,”hesaid.Grandmawassotouchedthatshecouldn'tspeakforamoment.ShehuggedGrandpatightly,saying,“ThisisthebestValentine'sDayever.”Theyreturnedhome,andalthoughthedaystartedwithworry,itendedwithadeeperunderstandingoftheirloveforeachother.【答案】Afterhershower,sheglancedtowardsthebackofGrandpa’schairbutnoticedthathiswalkingstickwasnotinitsusualplace.Sensingsomethingstrange,shewalkedtowardthechair.Hewasgone.Fearrandownherspine.Grandmathrewacoatoverherbathrobeandranoutside.Smallpilesofsnowandicecoveredthesidewalks.UponthethoughtthatGrandpacouldbarelywalkonhisown,herheartwaspullingup.Wringingherhands,shehardlyfeltthefreezingairasshewatchedtrafficrushby.

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