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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasseven,mysisterLucy,whowasfour,andIwereeagertobeindependentandearnsomemoneytoshowourparentsthatwewerecapablebeyondouryears.TheonlyideaIcouldcomeupwithwastoofferourservicesasgardeners,goingdoortodoortoproposeweedingneighbors’gardensfor2dollarseach.Ourproposalwasfair,yetunexpectedly,onlyMrs.White,livingthreeblocksfromourhouse,acceptedtheoffer.Maybethatwasbecausenoonewouldtakechildren’swordsseriously.Weagreedontheweedingat8:00thenextmorning.Havingthefirstclient,LucyandIcouldn’tcontainourselvesandfeltasifwehadachievedamonumentaltask,heartsswellingwithpride.Weweregoingtobegardeners!Buttheexcitementofthemomentwasfleeting,andthenextday,theattractionofplayandtheforgetfulnessofchildhoodovertookus.Weforgotaboutourcommitment.Concernedaboutourabsence,Mrs.Whitecontactedourmother.Aswewalkedintothekitchenthroughthebackdoorat11:00a.m.,Momhadjusthungupthephone.Sheaskedaboutourlittlegardeningbusiness.Surprisingly,shewasn’tangry,instead,shefoundourinitiativeamusing.SheexplainedthatMrs.Whitehadcalledher,expressingdisappointmentoverourbrokenpromise.Facedwiththemistake,weadmittedouroversightandpromisedtomakeasincereapologysometime.Insteadofcriticizingus,Mombusiedherselfwithlunchpreparationsasifnothinghadhappened.Wedidfeelatouchofguilt,butitwasquicklyovershadowedbywhatMomsaidnext.Aswemouthedonsandwiches,Momcasuallyasked,“WouldyouwasliketogotoDisneylandthisafternoon?”Wesprangintoaction,bathinganddressing,whichwaslikegettingreadyforabirthdayparty.Werushedoutside,notwantingtomissthebusthatwouldtakeusdowntown.Thesunwashighintheskyaswestoodoutside,ourbagspackedandheartsfullofanticipation.注意:1.續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Onthelanding,Momsaid,“Girls,wearenotgoingtoDisneylandtoday.”____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WeknockedgentlyonMrs.White’sdoor,headsdownandheartsheavy.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意文章講述了七歲的“我”和四歲的妹妹Lucy渴望獨(dú)立掙錢,向鄰居提議以兩美元的價(jià)格為他們除草。只有住在三個(gè)街區(qū)外的懷特夫人接受了這個(gè)提議,約定第二天早上8點(diǎn)開始除草。然而,孩子們因貪玩和健忘忘記了承諾。懷特夫人聯(lián)系了母親,母親得知后沒有生氣,而是告訴我們懷特夫人的失望。我們承認(rèn)錯(cuò)誤并承諾道歉。之后母親問我們下午是否想去迪士尼樂園,我們興奮準(zhǔn)備,滿心期待。故事山分析開端:“我”和妹妹Lucy想獨(dú)立掙錢,向鄰居推銷除草服務(wù),只有懷特夫人接受。發(fā)展:我們忘記了和懷特夫人的約定,懷特夫人聯(lián)系母親,母親告知我們情況,我們承認(rèn)錯(cuò)誤。高潮:母親提議去迪士尼樂園,我們興奮準(zhǔn)備,卻在即將出發(fā)時(shí)被告知不去。結(jié)局:我們?nèi)烟胤蛉思业狼?,在道歉過程中得到教育和成長(zhǎng)。伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)伏筆:我們承諾會(huì)向懷特夫人道歉。回應(yīng):在續(xù)寫中,我們前往懷特夫人家道歉,踐行承諾,推動(dòng)故事發(fā)展。伏筆:母親沒有批評(píng)我們,而是忙于準(zhǔn)備午餐?;貞?yīng):母親看似不在意,實(shí)則是為了后面引導(dǎo)我們認(rèn)識(shí)錯(cuò)誤做鋪墊,讓我們?cè)谄诖サ鲜磕針穲@落空后,更加深刻地意識(shí)到自己的錯(cuò)誤。伏筆:我們因貪玩忘記約定。回應(yīng):在道歉過程中,我們會(huì)提及自己的貪玩和錯(cuò)誤,反思自己的行為。伏筆:母親提議去迪士尼樂園?;貞?yīng):在第一段續(xù)寫中,母親告知不去迪士尼樂園,轉(zhuǎn)折后引出我們?nèi)サ狼福纬汕楣?jié)起伏。伏筆:懷特夫人對(duì)我們的失約表示失望?;貞?yīng):我們道歉時(shí),懷特夫人會(huì)表達(dá)對(duì)我們改正錯(cuò)誤的態(tài)度,如原諒我們并給予鼓勵(lì),讓我們感受到誠(chéng)信的重要性。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)(兩段)第一段:主要描寫我們聽到母親說不去迪士尼樂園時(shí)的反應(yīng),如驚訝、失落、不解等。然后母親解釋原因,強(qiáng)調(diào)誠(chéng)信的重要性,讓我們明白失約是不對(duì)的,應(yīng)該先去履行承諾。第二段:描述我們?nèi)烟胤蛉思业狼傅倪^程,包括敲門時(shí)的緊張心情,見到懷特夫人后的表情、動(dòng)作和語(yǔ)言。懷特夫人可能會(huì)對(duì)我們的道歉做出回應(yīng),如原諒我們、教導(dǎo)我們等,最后我們從這次經(jīng)歷中得到成長(zhǎng)。情感線起初,我們因有了第一個(gè)客戶而滿心自豪,接著因貪玩失約產(chǎn)生一絲愧疚,但很快被去迪士尼樂園的期待所掩蓋。當(dāng)聽到母親說不去迪士尼樂園時(shí),我們感到震驚、失落和困惑。去懷特夫人家道歉的路上,我們心情沉重、緊張不安。在道歉后,得到懷特夫人的原諒和教導(dǎo),我們感到釋然,同時(shí)也從這次經(jīng)歷中深刻認(rèn)識(shí)到誠(chéng)信的重要性,內(nèi)心得到成長(zhǎng)。故事線“我”和Lucy向鄰居推銷除草服務(wù),懷特夫人接受。我們忘記約定,懷特夫人聯(lián)系母親,母親告知我們情況,我們承認(rèn)錯(cuò)誤。母親提議去迪士尼樂園,我們興奮準(zhǔn)備。母親告知不去迪士尼樂園,解釋原因,強(qiáng)調(diào)誠(chéng)信重要性。我們?nèi)烟胤蛉思业狼?,心情緊張。懷特夫人原諒我們并給予教導(dǎo),我們得到成長(zhǎng)。主旨升華句Thisexperiencetaughtusthatintegrityisthecornerstoneofeveryrelationship,andkeepingourpromisesisessentialforearningthetrustofothers.(這次經(jīng)歷教會(huì)我們,誠(chéng)信是每段關(guān)系的基石,遵守承諾是贏得他人信任的關(guān)鍵。)Throughthisincident,welearnedthatevenaschildren,ourwordsandactionscarryweight,andbeingresponsibleforourcommitmentsisavirtuethatwillserveuswellinlife.(通過這次事件,我們明白即使作為孩子,我們的言行也有分量,對(duì)自己的承諾負(fù)責(zé)是一種美德,將對(duì)我們的人生大有裨益。)OurjourneytoMrs.White'shousetoapologizewasnotjustanactofmakingamends;itwasavaluablelessoninhumilityandtheimportanceofowninguptoourmistakes.(我們?nèi)烟胤蛉思业狼傅倪^程,不僅僅是彌補(bǔ)過錯(cuò)的行為,更是一次關(guān)于謙遜和勇于承認(rèn)錯(cuò)誤重要性的寶貴教訓(xùn)。)Thiseventservedasawake-upcall,remindingusthatthepursuitoffunshouldneverovershadowourresponsibilities,andthatbeingtruetoourwordisamarkofcharacter.(這次事件給我們敲響了警鐘,提醒我們對(duì)樂趣的追求絕不能掩蓋我們的責(zé)任,信守諾言是品格的標(biāo)志。)Fromthisexperience,werealizedthatthepathtogrowingupispavedwithlearningfromourerrors,andthatunderstandingthevalueofintegrityisanimportantsteptowardsbecomingresponsibleindividuals.(從這次經(jīng)歷中,我們意識(shí)到成長(zhǎng)的道路是由從錯(cuò)誤中學(xué)習(xí)鋪就的,理解誠(chéng)信的價(jià)值是成為有責(zé)任感的人的重要一步。)寫作示范一Onthelanding,Momsaid,“Girls,wearenotgoingtoDisneylandtoday.”Wefrozeinourtracks,oursmilesfadinginstantly.Shockanddisappointmentfilledoureyes.Momlookedatusseriouslyandsaid,“YoumadeapromisetoMrs.White,andbreakingitisnotright.Weneedtogoandmakethingsrightfirst.”Herwordshithome,andwerealizedtheimportanceofkeepingourword.Withheavyhearts,weputdownourbagsandpreparedtofacethemusic.WeknockedgentlyonMrs.White’sdoor,headsdownandheartsheavy.Whenthedooropened,Mrs.Whitelookedatuswithaquestioninggaze.Istammered,“Mrs.White,we'resosorryfornotshowingup.Weknowwewerewrong.”Lucychimedinwithtearsinhereyes.Mrs.Whitesmiledwarmlyandsaid,“I'mgladyoucametoapologize.Everyonemakesmistakes,butwhatmattersistolearnfromthem.”Wenodded,feelingasenseofreliefandanewunderstandingofresponsibility.寫作示范二Onthelanding,Momsaid,“Girls,wearenotgoingtoDisneylandtoday.”O(jiān)urexcitementvanishedinaninstant,replacedbyconfusionandfrustration.WestaredatMom,waitingforanexplanation.Momsatusdownandsaid,“RememberyourpromisetoMrs.White?Youcan'tjustignoreit.Weneedtofixthisbeforewedoanythingelse.”Hercalmbutfirmwordsmadeusrealizeourcarelessness.WereluctantlychangedourclothesandpreparedtogotoMrs.White's.WeknockedgentlyonMrs.White’sdoor,headsdownandheartsheavy.Whensheopenedthedoor,webothblurtedoutourapologies.Mrs.Whitelistenedpatientlyandthensaid,“Iappreciateyourhonesty.Ittakescouragetoadmityourmistakes.”Sheinvitedusinandgaveussomecookies.Asweate,shetalkedtousabouttheimportanceofresponsibility.Weleftherhousewithanew-foundsenseofintegrity,knowingthatwehadlearnedavaluablelesson.【答案】Onthelanding,Momsaid,“Girls,wearenotgoingtoDisneylandtoday.”Lucy’seyeswidenedindisbelief.Ourexcitementgavewaytodisappointment.“ButMom,youjustpromised!”Iexclaimed,confusioncloudingmythoughts.Shelookedatusseriouslyandexplained,“Ididn’tkeepmypromiseeither,andnowyouknowhowithurts.Youneedtolearnthatactionshaveconsequences.Disneylandcanawait,butlearningtoberesponsibleandtrustw
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