高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習意外的溫暖：困境中那份飽含善意的雞肉1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文I’masinglemomandhavetoworkhardtopaymybills,raisemyfive-year-oldandgetenoughfoodformyfamily.Evenworse,myfatherissufferingfromhearttroubleandmyfamilyisburdenedwithhugemedicalexpenses.TherewasatimeIlivedonatightbudgetandhadtocounteverysinglepennyIspentasIhadbeenoutofworkformonths.IevenhatedtogoshoppinginfearofspendingmorethanIcould.WhenIhadto,Iwouldstandthereandaddthingsupoverandoveragain.Duringtherecentholidayseason,IwasshoppingatTraderJoe’s.IcarefullychosethingsatthestorethatIthoughtIneededmost,andthenaddedeverythingup.4續(xù)寫原文Tomydisappointment,thetotalwastoohigh—itwasmorethanIhad.Icouldn’tbuyallthatIhadchosen,soIhadnochoicebuttolookthrougheverythingtryingtofigureoutwhattoputback.Itwashardtomakethedecision,becausethethingsthatIhadputintothebasketallseemedabsolutelynecessary.IntheendIkeptthethingsthateveryoneelsewouldhaveloved,butputbacktheonethingthatIloved.Itwasasimplefrozenpackageofchicken.Butthatpackagewaswhatputthetotaloverbudget.Ihatedthefeelingofnotbeingabletoaffordthatpackageofchicken.ButthatwaslifeandImovedonandtriedtoforgetaboutit.ItwaswhatIhadtodo.5段首句Paragraph1：Thatnightourdoorbellrang.Paragraph2:Istillhavenoideawhoputthepackageofchickenatourdoorandhavebeenwonderingaboutit.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8“我”是一位單親媽媽，不僅要努力工作支付賬單、撫養(yǎng)五歲的孩子，還要負擔父親治療心臟病的高額費用，家庭經(jīng)濟十分拮據(jù)。有段時間“我”失業(yè)數(shù)月，生活捉襟見肘，每一分錢都要精打細算，甚至害怕購物，擔心花費超出預算。在最近的節(jié)假日期間，“我”去喬氏超市購物，精心挑選了自認為最需要的東西并仔細計算總價。然而，最終的總價超出了“我”的預算，“我”不得不仔細查看挑選的物品，決定放回一些。經(jīng)過艱難的抉擇，“我”放回了自己很喜歡的一包冷凍雞肉，因為它讓總價超出了預算?！拔摇彪m然很無奈，但也只能接受這個現(xiàn)實，努力不去想這件事。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1：Thatnightourdoorbellrang.那天晚上門鈴響了。我放下手中正在做的家務(wù)，心里有些疑惑，這么晚了會是誰呢？我走到門口，透過貓眼向外看，卻沒有看到任何人。我小心翼翼地打開門，低頭一看，一個熟悉的包裝映入眼簾——正是那包我白天在超市因為預算超支而無奈放下的冷凍雞肉。我驚訝得張大了嘴巴，一時間不知所措。我拿起雞肉，環(huán)顧四周，試圖尋找送雞肉的人，可周圍空無一人，只有寂靜的夜色。我捧著這包雞肉，心里涌起一股暖流，眼眶也漸漸濕潤了。我回到屋里，把雞肉放在桌子上，孩子好奇地跑過來問：“媽媽，這是什么呀？”我笑著對孩子說：“寶貝，這是一份充滿愛心的禮物?！蔽蚁?，一定是有好心人看到了我在超市的窘境，默默地幫助了我。這份突如其來的善意讓我感受到了這個世界的溫暖，也讓我對生活重新充滿了希望。我決定，等以后有能力了，也要像這位好心人一樣，去幫助那些身處困境的人。10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:Istillhavenoideawhoputthepackageofchickenatourdoorandhavebeenwonderingaboutit.我至今都不知道是誰把那包雞肉放在了我們家門口，也一直在猜測。我想，也許是超市里的某位顧客，看到我因為預算問題而無奈放棄那包雞肉，心生憐憫，于是買下它并送到了我家；也許是超市的工作人員，在我離開后注意到了我的情況，出于善良，決定幫助我；又或許是一位一直默默關(guān)注著我們家的鄰居，知道我們的生活困難，想要伸出援手。無論送雞肉的人是誰，這份善意都深深地印在了我的心里。從那以后，每當我遇到困難想要放棄的時候，我都會想起這份溫暖的禮物，它給了我堅持下去的勇氣和力量。我更加努力地工作，希望能夠改善我們家的生活條件。同時，我也教育孩子要懂得感恩，要珍惜這份來之不易的溫暖。我相信，只要我們心懷善意，這個世界就會變得更加美好。而這份意外的禮物，將永遠成為我心中最珍貴的回憶。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Thatnightourdoorbellrang.IputdownthehouseworkIwasdoingandfeltabitpuzzled.Whocoulditbesolateatnight?Iwalkedtothedoorandlookedoutthroughthepeephole,butIdidn'tseeanyone.Iopenedthedoorcautiously.Lookingdown,afamiliarpackagecaughtmyeye-itwasthefrozenpackageofchickenthatIhadreluctantlyputbackinthesupermarketduringthedaybecauseofthebudgetoverrun.Iopenedmymouthinsurpriseandwasatalossforamoment.Ipickedupthechickenandlookedaround,tryingtofindthepersonwhohadsentit,buttherewasnoonearound,onlythesilentnight.Iheldthechickeninmyhands,awarmcurrentwelledupinmyheart,andmyeyesgraduallyfilledwithtears.Iwentbackintothehouseandputthechickenonthetable.Mychildranovercuriouslyandasked,"Mom,what'sthis?"Ismiledatmychildandsaid,"Honey,thisisagiftfulloflove."Ithoughtthattheremustbeakind-heartedpersonwhosawmydilemmainthesupermarketandsilentlyhelpedme.Thisunexpectedkindnessmademefeelthewarmthoftheworldandfilledmewithnewhopeforlife.IdecidedthatwhenIhadtheabilityinthefuture,Iwouldalsohelpthoseintroublelikethiskind-heartedperson.13范文呈現(xiàn)Istillhavenoideawhoputthepackageofchickenatourdoorandhavebeenwonderingaboutit.Ithinkmaybeitwasacustomerinthesupermarketwhosawmereluctantlygiveupthepackageofchickenduetobudgetproblemsandfeltpityforme,soheboughtitandsentittomyhouse;maybeitwasasupermarketstaffmemberwhonoticedmysituationafterIleftanddecidedtohelpmeoutofkindness;ormaybeitwasaneighborwhohadbeensilentlypayingattentiontoourfamilyandknewthatourlifewasdifficultandwantedtolendahand.Whoeverthepersonwhosentthechickenwas,thiskindnesswasdeeplyengravedinmyheart.Sincethen,wheneverIencounterdifficultiesandwanttogiveup,Iwillthinkofthiswarmgift.Itgivesmethecourageandstrengthtopersevere.Iworkhardertoimproveourfamily'slivingconditions.Atthesametime,Ialsoeducatemychildtobegratefulandcherishthishard-wonwarmth.Ibelievethataslongaswehavekindnessinourhearts,theworldwillbecomeabetterplace.Andthisunexpectedgiftwillalwaysbethemostpreciousmemoryinmyheart.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Istillhavenoclueastowholeftthepackageofchickenatourdoorstep,andIoftenfindmyselfponderingoverit.Itcouldhavebeenafellowshopperatthesupermarketwho,uponseeingmereluctantlyabandonthechickenduetofinancialconstraints,feltapangofcompassionanddecidedtopurchaseitanddeliverittomyhome.Perhapsitwasasupermarketemployeewho,afterIleft,tooknoteofmysituationand,outofthegoodnessoftheirheart,chosetoassistme.Ormaybeitwasaneighborwhohadbeenquietlyobservingourstrugglesandwantedtoofferahelpinghand.Regardlessoftheidentityofthepersonbehindthisactofkindness,ithasleftanindeliblemarkonmyheart.Eversincethen,wheneverIfacedifficultiesandfeellikegivingup,Ithinkofthisheartwarminggift.Itservesasaconstantsourceofcourageandstrength,inspiringmetopersevere.Ihaveredoubledmyeffortsatwork,strivingtoimproveourfamily'slivingstandards.Moreover,Ihavetakenituponmyselftoteachmychildtheimportanceofgratitudeandtocherishthispreciousactofkindness.Ifirmlybelievethataslongasweallcarrykindnessinourhearts,theworldwillundoubtedlybecomeabetterplace.Andthisunexpectedgiftwillforeverremainoneofthemostcherishedmemoriesinmylife.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Withouthesitation,IaccepthisinvitationtoplayintheupcomingLeagueCup.Fromthatmomenton,JackandIbecomeregularsatthebasketballcourt.Wemeeteveryday,dedicatingourselvestorigoroustrainingforthetournament.Wepracticepassing,shooting,anddefensetechniques,constantlypushingeachothertoimprove.Alongtheway,wemeetmorebasketballenthusiasts,andtogether,weformaformidableteam.AstheLeagueCupdrawsnearer,theintensityofourtrainingrampsup.Butnotasingleoneofuscomplains;instead,ouranticipationforthegamegrowsstronger.Onthedayofthegame,wearriveatthestadiumbrightandearly.Gazingatthetoughopponentssurroundingus,awaveofnervousnesswashesoverme.Jack,sensingmyunease,givesmeareassuringpatontheshoulder."Don'tworry,we'