高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習新城市的籃球緣：從陌生到融入的成長之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Wemovedhereafewdaysago,andIdon’tknowanyone,notoneperson,atthenewplace.Dadsaysthingswillgetbetter.HesaysI’lltaketocitylivingjustlikeItooktoclimbingtreesandplayingball.Ilookoutthewindowofournewapartment.“Thiswasagoodmoveforus,Sonny,”Dadsays,“You’llsee.”“Imisstheguys,”Isay.“ImissMichigan.Imiss”—Igazeupanddownthestreet—“trees.”“LosAngelesisn’tabadplace,”hesays.Thenhetellsmeaboutaparkhesawdownthestreet.“Ithasacoupleofbasketballcourts.Getoutthereandsweattoday.You’vekeptyourselfinsidetoolong.”Inod.Thatafternoon,Igrabmybasketballandheaddownthestreettofindthecourts.Dadwasrightaboutbeingkeptinsidetoolong.It’sabouttimetoshakethecobwebs(蜘蛛網(wǎng))offmybasketballlegs,seeifIcanstilldribble(運球)withbothhands,andremainagoodshooter.Iwalkpastalltheshopswithbarsontheirwindows.Thisishome?4續(xù)寫原文WhenIgettothecourts,Iseethreeguysshootingaround.They’replayingsomekindofone-on-one,takingturnswiththethirdguyin.Twoofthemaretallerthanme,butoneisaboutmysize.Icantellthattheshortkidknowshowtoplaybythewayhehandlestheball,dribblingwellwitheitherhand.Buttheotherguysaretootallforhim.One-on-oneisn’thisgame.Heneedssomeonetopassto.Igodowntotheotherbaskettoshootaround.I’mprettycoldatfirst.ButafterIwarmup,theoldfeelingscomeback—theproperkneebend,thefeelofreleasingtheballjustright.5段首句Paragraph1：Istopandturnaround,catchingsightoftheshortkid.Paragraph2:WithouthesitationIaccepthisinvitationtoplayintheupcomingLeagueCup.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8“我”一家?guī)滋烨鞍岬搅诵碌胤?，“我”在這兒一個人都不認識。爸爸說情況會變好，還說“我”會像喜歡爬樹和打球一樣適應(yīng)城市生活?！拔摇眳s很懷念密歇根的朋友們，懷念那里的樹木，對新環(huán)境感到不適應(yīng)。爸爸提到街上有個公園，里面有籃球場，建議“我”出去活動活動。于是，當天下午“我”拿著籃球前往籃球場。在路上，“我”看到店鋪窗戶都裝著防護欄，對這個新地方感到疑惑。到了籃球場，“我”看到三個男孩在打球，其中一個小個子男孩運球技術(shù)很好，但因?qū)κ痔撸粚σ槐荣悓λ焕??！拔摇痹诹硪粋€籃筐熱身投籃，找回了一些手感。這時，有人向“我”打招呼。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:Istopandturnaround,catchingsightoftheshortkid.我停下手中的動作，轉(zhuǎn)過身，看到了那個小個子男孩。他臉上掛著友善的笑容，手里拿著籃球，向我走來。“嘿，你打得不錯?。　彼f道，“我看你投籃很準?！蔽矣行┎缓靡馑嫉匦α诵?，回答道：“謝謝，我也只是好久沒打，才剛開始找感覺?！彼又f：“我叫杰克，你呢？”“我叫桑尼?！蔽一卮鸬馈＝芸伺d奮地說：“桑尼，你來得正好，我們正缺人呢。你愿意和我們一起打球嗎？”我猶豫了一下，想到自己剛來這里，一個朋友都沒有，這或許是個交朋友的好機會。于是，我點點頭說：“好啊，我很樂意?！敝螅覀兘M隊開始打球。杰克和我配合默契，他運球突破吸引對方防守，然后巧妙地把球傳給我，我抓住機會投籃得分。我們的配合讓其他兩個高個子男孩有些措手不及。在打球的過程中，我們一邊打球一邊聊天，我得知杰克就住在附近，他也非常熱愛籃球。打完球后，杰克邀請我去他家喝飲料，我欣然答應(yīng)了。在杰克家，我們聊了很多關(guān)于籃球的話題，分享了各自的籃球夢想，我感覺和他越來越投緣。10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:WithouthesitationIaccepthisinvitationtoplayintheupcomingLeagueCup.我毫不猶豫地接受了他參加即將到來的聯(lián)賽杯的邀請。從那以后，我和杰克每天都會在籃球場碰面，一起訓練，為聯(lián)賽杯做準備。我們一起練習傳球、投籃、防守等技巧，互相鼓勵，共同進步。在訓練的過程中，我們也結(jié)識了更多熱愛籃球的小伙伴，大家組成了一支籃球隊。隨著聯(lián)賽杯的臨近，我們的訓練也越來越緊張。但大家都沒有絲毫怨言，都對比賽充滿了期待。比賽那天，我們早早地來到了賽場。看著周圍強大的對手，我心里有些緊張。杰克似乎看出了我的心思，他拍了拍我的肩膀說：“別緊張，我們是一個團隊，只要發(fā)揮出我們的水平，就一定能取得好成績?！甭犃怂脑?，我深吸一口氣，點了點頭。比賽開始了，我們?nèi)σ愿埃恳粋€球都拼盡全力去爭奪。在比賽中，我們配合默契，打出了很多精彩的配合。最終，經(jīng)過激烈的角逐，我們的球隊取得了不錯的成績。比賽結(jié)束后，大家歡呼雀躍，慶祝著勝利。通過這次比賽，我不僅收獲了榮譽，還收獲了一群志同道合的朋友。我也漸漸喜歡上了這個新城市，因為這里有熱愛籃球的伙伴們，有充滿活力的生活。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Istopandturnaround,catchingsightoftheshortkid.Hehasafriendlysmileonhisfaceandisholdingabasketballinhishand.Hewalkstowardsme."Hey,you'reprettygood!"hesays."Isawyoushoot.You'rereallyaccurate."Ismileshylyandreply,"Thanks.Ihaven'tplayedforalongtime,andI'mjuststartingtogetbackintotherhythm."Hethensays,"MynameisJack.What'syours?""I'mSonny,"Ianswer.Jacksaysexcitedly,"Sonny,youcamejustintime.We'reshortofaplayer.Wouldyouliketoplaywithus?"Ihesitateforamoment.ThinkingthatI'mnewhereanddon'thaveanyfriends,thismightbeagreatopportunitytomakesome.SoInodandsay,"Sure,I'dloveto."Afterthat,weformateamandstartplaying.JackandIcooperateverywell.Hedribblesthroughtoattracttheopponent'sdefenseandthenskillfullypassestheballtome.Iseizetheopportunitytoshootandscore.Ourcooperationmakestheothertwotallboysabitcaughtoffguard.Duringthegame,wetalkwhileplaying.IlearnthatJacklivesnearbyandhealsolovesbasketballverymuch.Afterthegame,Jackinvitesmetohishouseforadrink,andIhappilyaccept.AtJack'shouse,wetalkalotaboutbasketball,sharingourbasketballdreams.Ifeelmoreandmorecompatiblewithhim.13范文呈現(xiàn)WithouthesitationIaccepthisinvitationtoplayintheupcomingLeagueCup.Fromthenon,JackandImeetatthebasketballcourteverydayandtraintogethertopreparefortheLeagueCup.Wepracticepassing,shooting,defenseandotherskillstogether,encouragingeachotherandmakingprogresstogether.Duringthetraining,wealsogettoknowmorebasketball-lovingfriends,andweformabasketballteam.AstheLeagueCupapproaches,ourtrainingbecomesmoreandmoreintense.Butnoonecomplains,andeveryoneislookingforwardtothegame.Onthedayofthegame,wearriveatthestadiumearly.Lookingatthestrongopponentsaround,Ifeelabitnervous.Jackseemstoseemythoughts.Hepatsmeontheshoulderandsays,"Don'tbenervous.We'reateam.Aslongasweplaytoourlevel,wewilldefinitelyachievegoodresults."Afterhearinghiswords,Itakeadeepbreathandnod.Thegamestarts,andwegoallout,fightingforeveryball.Inthegame,wecooperatetacitlyandmakemanywonderfulcombinations.Finally,afterafiercecompetition,ourteamachievesgoodresults.Afterthegame,everyonecheersandcelebratesthevictory.Throughthisgame,Inotonlygainhonorsbutalsogainagroupoflike-mindedfriends.Igraduallyfallinlovewiththisnewcitybecausetherearebasketball-lovingfriendshereandavibrantlife.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Istopandturnaround,catchingsightoftheshortkid.Withafriendlysmileplasteredacrosshisfaceandabasketballfirmlyinhisgrasp,hemakeshiswaytowardsme."Hey,you'rereallygood!"heexclaims."I'vebeenwatchingyoushoot.You'vegotsomeseriousskills."Iblushslightly,offeringashysmileinreturn."Thanks.Ihaven'tplayedinages,andI'mjuststartingtofindmyrhythmagain,"Ireply.Hethenextendshishand,introducinghimself."I'mJack.What'syourname?""I'mSonny,"Irespond,shakinghishand.Jack'seyeslightupwithexcitement."Sonny,you'rejustthepersonweneed!We'reshortoneplayer.Wannajoinus?"Ipauseforamoment,contemplatingtheoffer.ConsideringI'mnewintownandhaven'tmadeanyfriendsyet,thisseemslikeagoldenopportunity.So,Inodandsay,"Sure,I'dbehappyto."Onceweteamup,JackandIclickinstantly.Hedribblespastdefenderswithease,drawingtheirattentionbeforeexpertlypassingtheballtome.Itaketheshot,sinkingitintothebasket.Ourseamlessteamworkcatchestheothertwotallerboysoffguard.Asweplay,wechatnon-stop.IlearnthatJacklivesnearbyandsharesmypassionforbasketball.Afterthegame,Jackinvitesmetohisplaceforadrink,andIreadilyaccept.Athishouse,wedelvedeepintodiscussionsaboutbasketball,sharingourdreamsandaspirations.Ifeelaninstantconnectionwithhim.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Withouthesitation,IaccepthisinvitationtoplayintheupcomingLeagueCup.Fromthatmomenton,JackandIbecomeregularsatthebasketballcourt.Wemeeteveryday,dedicatingourselvestorigoroustrainingforthetournament.Wepracticepassing,shooting,anddefensetechniques,constantlypushingeachothertoimprove.Alongtheway,wemeetmorebasketballenthusiasts,andtogether,weformaformidableteam.AstheLeagueCupdrawsnearer,theintensityofourtrainingrampsup.Butnotasingleoneofuscomplains;instead,ouranticipationforthegamegrowsstronger.Onthedayofthegame,wearriveatthestadiumbrightandearly.Gazingatthetoughopponentssurroundingus,awaveofnervousnesswashesoverme.Jac