高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)新同學(xué)的到來：驅(qū)散體育課上的自卑陰霾1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Peoplealwayssaythatwithexercise,puttingonyourshoesisthehardestpart.ButforEmma,thiswasalie.Therealpainalwaysstartedwhenallthestudentsweregatheredonthetrack,readytorun.Itwasn’tthefatiguesheminded,itwasthelooksothersgaveher.Emmawasbiggerthanothersofherage.Backinprimaryschool,sheremembersherclassmatesaskingherwhyherthighs（大腿）weresobigandherchestsowide.Ontheoutside,shelookedbig,butontheinside,shefeltassmallasapea.AndPEclasswaswhenshefeltathersmallest.Notallherclassmatesmadeherfeeluncomfortable,though.Itwasmainlyagroupofgirlsandboys—theloud,outspoken,popularkids.AlthoughtheycouldrunfasterthanEmma,theypreferredtojogabitbehindher,burstingoutinlaughtereverynowandthen,commentingonhowEmmajogged.4續(xù)寫原文Justonemoreyear,Emmakepttellingherself.OnemoreyearandI’llhavegraduatedandwon’thavetotakethisstupidPEclassanymore.Shejustwantedtosurviveit.ButeverythingchangedwhenanewgirlcalledKitjoinedtheclass.Shehadshort,jet-blackhair,brighteyes,andalongscaracrosstheleftsideofherface.Herentranceintotheclassroomthatdaywasmetbydozensofcuriouseyes.Althoughtheirteacher,MsHardy,didn’taskKitforapersonalintroduction,uponputtingherbagdownonherdesk,Kitrose,saying,“Hi,everyone,nicetomeetyou,I’mKit.Iloveboxing,animationandfashion.Youmightbewonderingaboutmyscar.IgotitwhenIwasyoungwhenIfelloffmybike.Luckily,Ididn’tgethurtmoreseriously.It’snowlikeacooltrademarkofalltheadventuresIhadasakid.”AfterKit’sintroduction,Emmasimplysatthere,herheartpoundingandmouthwideopen.Howcouldsomeonebesoconfident?Eventhepopularkidsweresittingthereinshock.5段首句Paragraph1:Atlunchtime,EmmawassittingatherusualtablewithafewotherclassmateswhenKitwalkedovertothem.Paragraph2:OnFriday,itwastimeforthefearfulPEclass,butthistime,Kitwaswithher.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8艾瑪在體育課上總是充滿痛苦，不是因為跑步的疲憊，而是受不了同學(xué)們異樣的目光。她體型比同齡人偏大，小學(xué)起就飽受嘲笑，那些受歡迎的同學(xué)尤其喜歡在體育課上跟在她身后對她的慢跑姿態(tài)指指點點，肆意嘲笑。艾瑪滿心自卑，只能在心里不斷安慰自己，再熬一年畢業(yè)就能擺脫這討厭的體育課。直到新同學(xué)基特的到來，一切都發(fā)生了改變?；亓糁鵀鹾诙贪l(fā)，眼睛明亮，左臉有一道長長的疤痕。她進入教室時，吸引了眾多好奇的目光。盡管老師沒有要求自我介紹，但基特主動起身，大方地向同學(xué)們介紹自己，還坦誠地分享了疤痕的由來，言語間充滿自信，這讓艾瑪大為震驚，就連那些平時愛嘲笑人的受歡迎同學(xué)也驚訝不已。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:Atlunchtime,EmmawassittingatherusualtablewithafewotherclassmateswhenKitwalkedovertothem.午餐時間，艾瑪像往常一樣和幾個同學(xué)坐在餐桌旁。她低著頭，默默地吃著飯，周圍同學(xué)的歡聲笑語似乎與她無關(guān)。就在這時，基特端著餐盤朝她們走來。艾瑪有些驚訝，她沒想到基特會主動過來?；赜押玫卮蛄藗€招呼，然后在艾瑪旁邊坐下?！班?，艾瑪，介意我坐這兒嗎？”基特笑著問道。艾瑪連忙搖搖頭，小聲說：“不介意?！被匾贿叧燥垼贿吅桶斄钠鹛靵?，她分享著自己以前學(xué)校的趣事，還說起了自己對新學(xué)校的期待。艾瑪漸漸被基特的熱情所感染，也開始主動說起自己的愛好?；卣J真地聽著，不時點頭表示贊同。不一會兒，兩人就像老朋友一樣聊得熱火朝天。周圍的同學(xué)看到這一幕，都有些驚訝，他們沒想到一向沉默寡言的艾瑪能和新同學(xué)聊得這么開心。午餐結(jié)束后，基特和艾瑪一起走出食堂，基特拍了拍艾瑪?shù)募绨蛘f：“以后有什么事都可以找我哦，我們是朋友啦！”艾瑪心里暖暖的，臉上露出了久違的笑容。10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:OnFriday,itwastimeforthefearfulPEclass,butthistime,Kitwaswithher.周五，令人害怕的體育課又到了。艾瑪站在跑道上，心里有些忐忑不安。這時，基特跑了過來，站在艾瑪身邊?！皠e怕，有我呢！”基特笑著說。隨著老師的一聲哨響，同學(xué)們開始跑步。那些曾經(jīng)嘲笑艾瑪?shù)耐瑢W(xué)又跟在她后面，準備像往常一樣嘲笑她。但基特沒有給他們機會，她大聲說：“你們能不能別這么無聊，總是盯著別人的缺點看，有這時間還不如多關(guān)注自己的進步?！蹦切┩瑢W(xué)被基特的話噎住了，一時不知道該說什么?；乩?shù)氖?，鼓勵她：“艾瑪，別管他們，我們按照自己的節(jié)奏跑，你一定可以的?！卑敻惺艿交厥中牡臏嘏?，心中涌起一股勇氣。她深吸一口氣，和基特一起向前跑去。在跑步的過程中，基特不斷地給艾瑪加油打氣。艾瑪越跑越有信心，腳步也越來越輕快。當(dāng)她們沖過終點線時，艾瑪激動地抱住了基特。從那以后，艾瑪不再害怕體育課，因為她知道，無論遇到什么困難，都有基特這個好朋友在身邊支持她。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Atlunchtime,EmmawassittingatherusualtablewithafewotherclassmateswhenKitwalkedovertothem.Emmawasabitsurprised.Shedidn'texpectKittocomeoveronherowninitiative.KitgreetedthemfriendlyandthensatdownnexttoEmma."Hi,Emma,doyoumindifIsithere?"Kitaskedwithasmile.Emmaquicklyshookherheadandsaidinalowvoice,"Notatall."Whileeating,KitstartedchattingwithEmma.Shesharedsomeinterestingstoriesaboutherpreviousschoolandalsotalkedaboutherexpectationsforthenewschool.EmmawasgraduallyinfectedbyKit'senthusiasmandbegantotalkaboutherownhobbies.Kitlistenedattentivelyandnoddedinagreementfromtimetotime.Beforelong,thetwowerechattinghappilylikeoldfriends.Thesurroundingclassmateswerequitesurprisedwhentheysawthisscene.Theydidn'texpectthatEmma,whowasalwaysquietandreserved,couldchatsohappilywiththenewclassmate.Afterlunch,KitandEmmawalkedoutofthecafeteriatogether.KitpattedEmmaontheshoulderandsaid,"Youcancometomeforanythinginthefuture.We'refriendsnow!"Emmafeltwarminherheartandalong-lostsmileappearedonherface.13范文呈現(xiàn)Afewweekslater,Allyrecoveredcompletely.Shewaslikeacheerfullittlebird,runningaroundinthegardenwithabrightsmileonherface.Oneday,sheandherfatherweresittingonabenchinthegarden,enjoyingthewarmsunshine.Suddenly,Allythoughtofthemiraculousleaf,andthedoubtsinherheartwelledupagain.Sheturnedherheadandlookedatherfatherseriously."Dad,whydidn'tthatleafeverfall?It'sreallyamazing,asifithasalifeofitsown,"sheasked.HerfatherlookedatAllywithasmile,hiseyesfulloflove.HetookAlly'shand,stoodup,andledherbacktotheroom,thenwalkedtothewindow.Pointingattheivyvineoutsidethewindow,herfathersaidtoAlly,"Mychild,actuallythatleafwaspaintedbyme.Thatnight,whenIsawtherewasonlythelastleafleft,andyouweresodesperate,Iwasafraidthatyouwouldreallygiveupyourlifebecauseofthefallingofthisleaf.So,Iclimbeduptheladderinthedarkandinthewindandrain,andpaintedaleafonthewallwithpaint.Ihopedthisleafcouldbringyouhopeandrekindleyourdesireforlife."Afterhearingthis,tearsofgratitudeglistenedinAlly'seyes.Shehuggedherfathertightlyandchokedout,"Dad,thankyou.Yougavemeasecondlife."HerfathergentlystrokedAlly'sheadandsaid,"Sillychild,aslongasyoucangrowuphealthyandhappy,everythingDaddoesisworthit."Fromthenon,Allycherishedlifeevenmoreandlivedhard,becausesheknewthatbehindher,therewasherfather'sdeeplovealwaysprotectingher.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Atlunchtime,EmmawassittingatherusualtablewithafewotherclassmateswhenKitwalkedovertothem.Emmawastakenaback;shehadneveranticipatedthatKitwouldapproachhersowillingly.KitgreetedtheminafriendlymannerandthentookaseatrightnexttoEmma."Hi,Emma,wouldyoumindifIjoinedyouhere?"Kitinquiredwithawarmsmile.Emmaquicklyshookherheadandrepliedinasoftvoice,"Notatall."Astheyate,KitengagedEmmainalivelyconversation,sharingfascinatingstoriesaboutherpreviousschoolandexpressingherhighhopesforthenewone.EmmawasgraduallydrawninbyKit'sexuberanceandbegantoopenupaboutherownhobbies.Kitlistenedintently,noddinginapprovalfromtimetotime.Beforelong,thetwowerechattingawaymerrily,justlikeoldfriends.Theotherclassmatesatthetablewerequiteastonishedatthesight;theyhadneverexpectedthattheusuallyreservedEmmacouldconversesofreelywiththenewarrival.Afterlunch,KitandEmmamadetheirwayoutofthecafeteriatogether.KitgentlypattedEmmaontheshoulderandsaid,"Youcanalwayscometomewheneveryouneedanything.We'refriendsnow!"Emmafeltawarmthspreadingthroughherheart,andalong-lostsmilegracedherface.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)OnFriday,itwastimeforthedreadedPEclass,butthistime,Kitwasrightbyherside.Emmastoodonthetrack,herheartpoundingwithnervousness.Justthen,KitsprintedoverandpositionedherselfnexttoEmma."Don'tbescared.I'mherewithyou!"Kitreassuredherwithabrightsmile.Astheteacherblewthewhistle,thestudentssetoffrunning.TheclassmateswhohadalwaysmockedEmmafellinbehindheronceagain,readytoresumetheirtaunting.However,Kitwashavingnoneofit.Sheraisedhervoiceandexclaimed,"Canyouallstopbeingsopetty?You'realwaysfixat