TheWorldofEnglishWriting沙河中學(xué)張愛(ài)琴第1頁(yè)我的目標(biāo)我努力

PeopleintroductiontopicEmployment.Introducingpeople.ExaminationIntroduction.Application.speechmodel…SocialproblemtopicEducation.Healthcare.EmploymentEnvironmentprotection。Advertisement.Harmonioussociety.Sports.familyetc.examination說(shuō)明類.對(duì)比類.圖表類model…SchoollifetopicLearning.life.Schoolintroduction.Examination.Friendship.birthday.Experienceonthewayhome.Activity.travel.etc.examinationAletter.Notice.diary.Speech.Debating.Noteetcmodel…Openingcomposition第2頁(yè)挑戰(zhàn)自我一.說(shuō)明類1貧困地域教育引發(fā)了人們極大關(guān)注，2因?yàn)槭軅鹘y(tǒng)觀念影響,經(jīng)費(fèi)投入不足,師資短缺等很多原因制約，義務(wù)教育在這些地域開(kāi)展面臨著種種困難，3我們應(yīng)該想方法去處理當(dāng)前這種情況第3頁(yè)比比看!范文點(diǎn)評(píng)①Educationhasbecomeacommonpartofpeople’slife.②AndnineyearscompulsoryeducationhasalwaysArousedthegreatestconcern.③Whatimpressesusmostisthateducationinpoorareasisfacingmanydifficulties.④Thereasonsarevaried.Amongthevariousreasons,traditionalideaplaysanimportantpart.Forexample,peopleintheseregionsareunwillingtosendtheirdaughterstoschool.becausethecustomistoeducateboysrathergirls,⑤What’smore,investmentineducationislimitedbecauseofpoverty⑥.inaddition.mostteachersdon’twanttoworkthere.

⑦whenwetalkabouthowtosolvetheproblem⑧ontheonehand,governmentshouldprovide“complete,freeandcompulsoryprimaryeducationforallchildrenintheseregions.⑨ontheotherhand,weshouldtrytochangetheiroldideas

⑩1nbrief,reachingthetargetofnineyearscompulsoryeducationthereneedallofustoworktogether.①確定主題②縮小范圍③引出要說(shuō)明事情④闡述原因⑤原因之一⑥原因之二⑦談?wù)摲椒á喾椒ㄖ虎岱椒ㄖ獗砻饔^點(diǎn),發(fā)出倡議第4頁(yè)套用模塊演練一

①________hasbecomeacommonpartofpeople’slife.②__________hasalwaysarousedthegreatestconcern.③Whatimpressesusmostis_________.④Thereasonsarevaried.Amongthevariousreasons,___________playsanimportantpart.Forexample,___________⑤What’smore,__________⑥.inaddition___________⑦whenwetalkabout__________________⑧qntheonehand_______________________⑨ontheotherhand_____________________⑩1nbrief,_________________________依葫蘆畫(huà)瓢寫(xiě)作文：當(dāng)前，農(nóng)村醫(yī)療保健改革正在進(jìn)行，但因?yàn)楦鞣矫嬖?，一些農(nóng)村居民正忍受著疾病折磨，請(qǐng)以”HealthCare”為題，談?wù)勀憧捶āＷ⒁猓?短文應(yīng)包含文中所提供主要信息，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2詞數(shù)不少于120字。（源于SparkEnglish)第5頁(yè)套用模塊演練二二.對(duì)比類：關(guān)于”上大學(xué)是高中生唯一出路嗎”話題，我們班學(xué)生展開(kāi)了激烈討論。①Recently/atpresent/now/Asweallknow,…/asfarasIknow,______havehadaheateddiscussiononwhethersbshould…②…h(huán)oldtheviewthat…/arefor…/thinkthatFirstofall…then…inaddition,③However,inothers’opinion./othersthinkthat…should../othersareagainsttheopinion.Because…first/second/third/④Inshort/Inaword./Afterall,,Iwanttosay/Asthesayinggoes,/inmyopinion.It’sgood/badforsbtodosth/FromthismatterIcometorealize…

60%學(xué)生認(rèn)為增加學(xué)識(shí),提升素養(yǎng).利于擇業(yè)30%學(xué)生認(rèn)為成功路不只一條10%學(xué)生認(rèn)為學(xué)費(fèi)高.就業(yè)難第6頁(yè)比比看!范文點(diǎn)評(píng)

①Atpresent.we

hadadiscussionaboutwhetheritistheonlywayoutforseniorstudentstogotocollege.

②Sixtypercentofusconsideritverynecessarytogotocollege.itcanwidentheirknowledgeandimprovetheirqulitiesonlyinthiswaycantheyfindbetterjobsaftergraduation.

③thirtypercentofstudents.,holdtheviewthatitisnousegoingtocollege,becausethetuitionistohighfortheirfamilytoafford.what’smore,it’sratherhardforcollegegraduatestoseekjobs.However,

④Thirtypercentofthestudentsbelieve”AllroadsleadtoRome.”Thereforeitdoesn’tmakeanydifferencewhethertheygotocollegeornot.

⑤Inmyopinion,wecanreceiveabettereducationatcollegesothatwecanserveourmotherland.①點(diǎn)題②60%同學(xué)意見(jiàn)綜述③30%同學(xué)意見(jiàn)綜述④10%同學(xué)意見(jiàn)綜述⑤深入發(fā)表自己看法第7頁(yè)1995年1997年1999年年某城市近年每百人中手機(jī)用戶增加示意圖第8頁(yè)

感悟一.層次清楚首尾呼應(yīng)我們依據(jù)銜接詞本身在文章中起到作用，主要分為以下四類，“起”“承”“轉(zhuǎn)”“合”?！硎尽捌稹痹~/詞組：用于開(kāi)篇引出擴(kuò)展句。如：atfirst/atpresent/currently當(dāng)前/first/inthebeginning起初/tobeginwith首先,第一/generallyspeaking/itissaid(believed/reported/thought---)※相關(guān)“承”慣用詞語(yǔ)：用來(lái)承接上文。如：after/afterthat/afterwards今后/afterafewdays/also/too/atanyrate不論怎樣/atthesametime※相關(guān)“轉(zhuǎn)”慣用詞語(yǔ)：用來(lái)表示不一樣或相反意見(jiàn)。如：afterall/allthesame/anyway/atthesametime/but/bythistime此時(shí).詞語(yǔ)多樣，※相關(guān)“合”慣用詞語(yǔ)：用于小結(jié)上文或結(jié)束本段落內(nèi)容。如：aboveall最主要是/accordingly于是/asaconsequence/asaresult/ashasbeennoted/asIhavesaid/atlast/atlength/byandlarge普通說(shuō)來(lái)/bydoingso如此/briefly/inmyopinion/inbrief.第9頁(yè)

感悟二.詞語(yǔ)多樣，句式多變（見(jiàn)附頁(yè)）三.檢驗(yàn)到位主語(yǔ)WatchTVtoomuchisharmful.WatchingTVtoomuchisharmful.？/ItisharmfultowatchTVtoomuch.謂語(yǔ)IwasnotlostheartinlearningEnglishIdidn’tloseheartinlearningEnglish.ShepickedallflowersgivehisparentsShepickedallflowersandgavehisparents.Ihopehimtohelpme.Iwishhimtohelpme./Ihopehecanhelpme.Theschoolbuiltin1938.漢語(yǔ)化句子Iamverylikeit.Ilikeitverymuch.Wecantakeabusgohome.Wecantakeabustogohome./Wecangohomebybus.StudentswillonfootthepurplemountainStudentswillwalktothepurplemountain.Studentsaregoingtothepurplemountainonfoot.Ourschoolisastudygoodplace.Ourschoolisagoodplacetostudy.第10頁(yè)畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛四.利用諺語(yǔ),名言Allisnotgoldthatglitters.閃光東西并不一定都是金子Betterlatethannever遲做總比不做好Constantdrippingwearsawaythestone滴水穿石Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.蒼天不負(fù)有心人