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讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完成的短文。Rubywassoproudofhernewskates!Sheputthemonrightawayandwassoonrushingalongthesidewalk.HerlittlebrotherMaxcouldonlywatchinenvy.“IwishIhadapair!”hetoldhismum.“Well,you’renearlybigenoughtowearRuby’soldskates,”shereplied.ButwhenMaxtriedonRuby’soldskatestheyweretoobig.Hestuffednewspaperintotheboots.Muchtohisdisappointment,hefellovereachtimehetriedtostandupinthem.Finally,hegaveup,onlywatchingRubyskatingaroundhim.“Ishouldputonaskatingdisplay!”Rubydecided.“Allouraunts,unclesandcousinswille.You’llwatchme,Max?”Maxsighed.Hedidn’twanttowatchtheshow.Hewantedtobeinit!“PoorMax!”saidhismum.Then,shetookoutapairofthickredsockstoletMaxpullthemonwiththehopeoffittingbetter.Maxeyedtheredsocksskeptically,saying,“Mum,theselookjustlikemyredsoccersocks,butsmaller.”Hismumsmiled,“Ah,yourredsoccersocksaretoothinandmeantforrunning,butthesearemagicsocksthathavethepowertoexpandandstretchtofitmostfeet...”Magic?WhenMumlefttheroom,Maxtookthewand(魔杖)fromhismagicsetandwaveditaroundafewtimes,“Magicsocks,youaresogreat!Useyourmagictohelpmeskate”Maxslippedthesocksonandtriedskatinginhisbedroom.Hedidn’tfullover!Hetriedagain.Hestilldidn’tfall.Hecouldnowskate—thankstohismagicsocks!Hooray!Thenextmorning,whenheskateduptoRubyononefoot,shestaredinamazement.“Max,youaremagic!”Thrilled,Rubyinvitedhimtojoinintheshow.Topreparewellfortheshow,Maxpracticedhappilywiththemagicsocksoneveryday.Maxeventriedtrickslikejumps,believingthesockswouldhelphim.注意:(1)續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;(2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Theshowtimecameandtheirfamilygatheredinthegarden._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“Butyou’renotwearingmagicsocks!”saidMum._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ruby和Max的滑冰故事續(xù)寫(xiě)續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)第一段:重點(diǎn)描繪表演時(shí)的場(chǎng)景。詳細(xì)描述Max和Ruby在花園中面對(duì)家人展示滑冰技巧的過(guò)程,包括他們的動(dòng)作細(xì)節(jié),如Max的跳躍、Ruby的旋轉(zhuǎn)等,以及家人的反應(yīng),如歡呼、鼓掌等,突出表演的精彩與歡樂(lè)氛圍。第二段:主要圍繞“魔法襪子”的秘密展開(kāi)。母親指出Max沒(méi)穿“魔法襪子”,引發(fā)眾人關(guān)注。Max此時(shí)意識(shí)到自己不再依賴襪子,而是通過(guò)不斷練習(xí)獲得了真正的滑冰能力。最后闡述Max在這次經(jīng)歷中的成長(zhǎng)感悟,以及對(duì)未來(lái)的積極展望。情感線起初,Max因不能滑冰而沮喪,穿上“魔法襪子”能滑冰后興奮不已。表演時(shí),Max滿懷自信,盡情享受展示技能的喜悅。母親指出沒(méi)穿“魔法襪子”時(shí),Max先是驚訝,隨后為自己的成長(zhǎng)感到自豪。最終,Max從依賴“魔法”到相信努力的力量,實(shí)現(xiàn)了心態(tài)的重大轉(zhuǎn)變,內(nèi)心充滿對(duì)未來(lái)的堅(jiān)定與期待。故事線Max因Ruby的新滑冰鞋而羨慕,嘗試穿舊鞋失敗。母親拿出“魔法襪子”,Max借助它學(xué)會(huì)滑冰,并受邀參加表演。表演當(dāng)天,Max和Ruby在花園中為家人展示滑冰技巧,動(dòng)作精彩,家人反應(yīng)熱烈。母親發(fā)現(xiàn)Max沒(méi)穿“魔法襪子”,引發(fā)眾人注意。Max意識(shí)到自己已不再依賴“魔法襪子”,通過(guò)練習(xí)獲得了真正的滑冰能力。Max從這次經(jīng)歷中成長(zhǎng),對(duì)未來(lái)充滿信心,決定繼續(xù)挑戰(zhàn)新的滑冰目標(biāo)。主旨升華句ThisexperiencetaughtMaxthathardworkandpractice,notmagic,arethekeystoachievingone'sgoals.(這次經(jīng)歷讓Max明白,努力和練習(xí),而非魔法,才是實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)的關(guān)鍵。)Fromthatdayon,Maxunderstoodthattherealmagicliesinone'sowndeterminationandtheeffortsputintomakingprogress.(從那天起,Max懂得了真正的魔法在于個(gè)人的決心以及為取得進(jìn)步所付出的努力。)Max'sjourneyfromrelyingon"magicsocks"tomasteringskatingthroughpracticeshowsthatwithperseverance,wecanovereanyinitialdifficulties.(Max從依賴“魔法襪子”到通過(guò)練習(xí)掌握滑冰的歷程表明,只要有毅力,我們就能克服任何最初的困難。)TheshownotonlyshowcasedMaxandRuby'sskatingskillsbutalsorevealedthepowerofselfimprovementandthediscoveryofone'struepotential.(這場(chǎng)表演不僅展示了Max和Ruby的滑冰技巧,還揭示了自我提升的力量以及發(fā)現(xiàn)個(gè)人真正潛力的重要性。)Maxrealizedthathisgrowthwasnotaresultofamagicalitembuthisownconsistentefforts,inspiringhimtofacefuturechallengeswithcourageanddetermination.(Max意識(shí)到他的成長(zhǎng)并非源于某件神奇物品,而是自己持續(xù)的努力,這激勵(lì)著他以勇氣和決心面對(duì)未來(lái)的挑戰(zhàn)。)寫(xiě)作示范示范一Theshowtimecameandtheirfamilygatheredinthegarden.Max,hisfacebeamingwithexcitement,glidedontothemakeshiftrinkgracefully.Ruby,rightbesidehim,addedatouchofelegancewithhersmoothmovements.Maxstartedwithasimpleforwardglide,thenbuiltuphisconfidenceandattemptedasmalljump.Thefamilygaspedindelightashelandedsafely.Rubyfollowedwithaseriesoftwirls,herhairflowingbehindher.Theirsynchronizedmoveswereasighttobehold,andthefamilycheeredandclappedloudly.“Butyou’renotwearingmagicsocks!”saidMum.Maxlookeddownathisfeetinsurprise.Hethensmiledbroadly,realizingthathenolongerneededthesocalledmagicsocks.“IpracticedsomuchthatIcanskatewellnow!”heexclaimed.Everyonelaughedandnoddedinapproval.Fromthatdayon,Maxknewthathishardworkhadpaidoff,andhewaseagertotakeonmoreskatingchallengesinthefuture.示范二Theshowtimecameandtheirfamilygatheredinthegarden.Maxskatedoutfirst,hiseyesshiningwithdetermination.Heexecutedaflawlessspin,hisbodymovinginharmonywiththerhythmhehadcreatedinhismind.Rubyjoinedhim,andtogethertheycreatedabeautifulpatternonthegrass.Maxthentookadeepbreathandmadeadaringjump,soaringthroughtheairforabriefmomentbeforelandingsteadily.Thefamilyeruptedintoapplause.Rubydidaquickslideandabackwardglide,impressingeveryonewithherskills.“Butyou’renotwearingmagicsocks!”saidMum.Maxwasstartledatfirstbutthenbrokeintoahugegrin.“IguessIdon'tneedthemanymore.Allthepracticemademeabetterskater!”hesaid.Thefamilywasproudofhisgrowth.Maxlearnedthattrueabilityesfromdedication,andhewasexcitedtoseehowfarhecouldgoinskatingfromthenon.參考答案Theshowtimecameandtheirfamilygatheredinthegarden.Maxwasnervous,afraidthathewouldfalloveragain.However,everythingwentperfectly!Theaudienceheldtheirbreathasthetwosiblingsdidtheirspecialskatingtricks,turnsandju
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